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Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners

Mystery pov why is my mind going to Carlisle .......

Disturbing as it seems I most likely wrong bu just as I finished reading the chapter I thought maybe it's carlisle or he knows something about it

 

Cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: k8ln713 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

oh my goddddd!!!!! seth said da-da!!!!!! so cute!!! & that is what edward wanted!!! i can't twait till next ch to read his reaction & if bella returns to see seth sayin da-da again.

PS: carlisle is a douchenozzle.

Reviewer: sportswritergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

President Cullen deserves the title Da-da. Nice chapter

Reviewer: GigiAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I jus t found this story and read it all the way throiugh. It's so enjoyable to read a story on this subject, without an excess of angst. The characters are lovely and fun. Thanks for your writing. Many blessings.

Reviewer: Mandita Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

aw that is so sweet! i'm sure that made edward's day. can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I loved it, especially Edward giving Carlisle a piece of his mind.  Now what is Carlisle gonna do??  I do hope that Bella heard that from Seth and welcomes it. I love the fact that Esme gets along with Bella and Seth as it should be.  Its hard to read a story where Carlisle or Esme is a bad parent or mean to Bella... can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

Hope esme castrated him. What an arse

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

Way to go Prezward!! Nice job putting daddy dearest in his place.  Hopefully the Senator will gain some perspective soon.  Loved that Esme want to be part of their lives and Edward is just so swoony in daddy mode.  Loved the last line!!!

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

This was a great chapter!  Carlisle has some nerve treating Bella like trash but she got him back good.  Seth calling Edward dada was priceless.

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I'm glad bella put Carlisle in his place and Edward did good to do so also. I dont know why but I thought Carlisle was going to join them in Seths room wishful thinking on my part I suppose, he seems a stubborn man and Im still figuring who the hell could be watching them its creepy and all sorts of fun at the same time can't wait for the next chapter.

How cute is the interaction between Edward and Seth sooooo cute loved this chapter 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

Well glad that Bella stood up for herself with Carlisle.  Good for her. Good for Edward and Esme.   Dada... well well. Seth needs that.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

:)

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

:)

Reviewer: mkanhnh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I just started this story today. I've read every chapter and I love it!   I love the relationship between Edward and Bella in the story. I like that Seth is a major part of the story. My kids are older (10 & 16) but they both have special medical/educational needs. I know about doctors and hospitals and medicines. So, great big mommy hugs to you for all those times we spend sitting up/lying awake, etc. worrying about our kids and wondering what comes next! Anyway, lol, I don't expect an answer, because it's a major plot point, but my guess to anonymous is Seth's dad. I thought it could be Carlisle, but after reading this last chapter, I don't think he'd wait so long to confront Edward. At any rate, I can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing style is wonderful!

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

So appropriate for fathers day. Senator Cullen is a pompous ass and definitely represent what is wrong with many of our congressional and presidential candidates. Love Seth. I want to reach out and eat him up. What a sweetie.

Reviewer: TG100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

I say Go Bella. Shut him up good. Loved the whole chapter.

 

  Congratulations on your grade. It sounds like you have a lot on your plate and to pull that off is amazing. :)

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

happy father's day edward.  i am in love with seth.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

Da da!! Lol :) super cute!

Reviewer: aurowanfinn Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

 i would love to see an Esme POV outtake.  Seth and Presward are so cute and i love that he stood up to his dad.

Reviewer: parash Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Ok, I am a new fan of yours, I found you through this whole fan Fic mess and I am mesmerised!!! Love love low this story and I think it is bella's ex aka Mike and Seth's daddy that is harassing her????  Am I right? Go one tell me and I won't tell a soul!

My son doesn't have food allergies but he does have. Mild form of cerebral palsy and I love hearing how your one is doing. Tyler is 5 now and we are in the process of choosing a school for him. So daunting. Keep up the good work and I am amazed that you write as well. But then again, you did say you want let the diagnosis run your life and that is exactly what we do!! Stay strong and updat soon.

Newly hooked fan Ash

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 35 Dinner Times Two

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: glo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

That's going to be one interesting dinner.  Glad we now know about the show fetish.  I can't say enough how much I enjoy this story.

Reviewer: Obsessive_Behaviours Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

So we know why Bella was in the upstairs closet, but why did Edward venture into the same room?

 

Jasper in woman’s clothing?  I have a younger brother who lived with 4 sisters (me included).  We did the same to him as a child, and he grew to become a very intuitive husband.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

So sorry to hear you suffer from hormone induced migraines.
Glad to hear your little is progressing in weight and stature.

Poor Jasper growing up as the mannequin for his sisters apparel. Wouldn't it have been easier for Bella to ask Jasper if he has a shoe and foot fetish? Lol.

Dinner with the girls and guys. Should be interesting. Dinner with his patents scary!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

I really enjoyed the chapter even if it was just filler! :)   Looking forward to the dinner party, that should be very interesting and, well, dinner with the parents should be very eyeopening!!  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Congrats, great chapter BTW.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Awesome test score! Thanks for another great chapter!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: allrain Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Really enjoy your story.great job . Can't wait toll the next chapter.Glad you didn't bomb your final thanks for writing 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

:)

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

Update soon please

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

omg i was so scared for bella

i thought it was the bad person in there. man what a way to scare me

so things seem to be moving along with bella and edward and seth seems very happy about things

love it

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 34 Dinners, Doctors, and Shoes

lol for hiding.   

Reviewer: glo Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Very hot desk sex, loved it!!!  The only drawback to reviewing on here is that when I do it on my phone I can only leave coffee cup ratings and not type something, weird huh.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

I am glad that Rose has changed her attitude and is friends with Bella and being so good to Seth. I love the date Bella planned. I am glad they mystery POV didn't have the camera to the office. I still don't know who that is. I can't wait to figure this all out. Great job...thanks~!!!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Loved the chapter. So glad thy Bella and rose are getting along. I'm definately worried about that mystery POV.

Good luck on the exam.

Reviewer: FanOfFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

What a great story!!!  I am lovin' Prezward. He has my vote and I don't even know what party he is with. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

So, I'm still not clear how mystery person is going to profit from Bella & Edward having an adult relationship.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Great update and it is nice that Rose is being supportive & Esme but what the hecks with Carlisle. It seems unbelievable that he would take all the credit for Edward being President, what a fool.

On another note I cringe every time I read about Seth being put to bed with a bottle of formula. All I can picture is all the kids & pictures of kids I have seen with bottle rot syndrome. If you're not familiar with it I highly recommend you look it up. It seems like playing Russian roulette with your kids teeth putting them down with a bottle that's anything but water.

Thanks for the update;-)



Author's Response:

I do know about bottle rot syndrome and I know that it is a risk that I take with my son. However, I have a lot more serious issues that I face with him, such as his food allergies, and he was recently diagnosed with eosinophilic esophagitis, which is a lifelong issue he will face having to permanently avoid the foods that trigger it or risk choking on food and having his throat begin to close up on him. Some people with EE have it so severe that they have to be tube fed and we don't luckily.

With the bottle at bedtime, my son (who is the real life Seth for the story) gets his bottle, finishes it, and then lays in his crib for about 30 minutes before going to sleep. Then, in the middle of the night he wakes up screaming for a bottle and he gets one then. When he's done with it, he will push it to the side, grab his pacifier, and go back to sleep. He is very small for his age, only 32 inches tall and just finally hit 25 pounds. He can wear the same clothes he wore when he was 12 months old and he will be 2 in 2 months. Because of his small size and the very little amount of food he can actually eat, he is mainly bottle fed. His formula is a prescription only one that I have to get through the pharmacy because it is actually a medical food supplement.

I know that bottle rot syndrome is more so caused by juices and sweetened water in the bottle, but can be caused by milk, breast milk, or formula. However, the major causes of it are juice and sweetened water. My son does not get these as we don't know if he's allergic to the juices (which he can be and he doesn't need them so why have them in the first place?) and sweetened water is something that I never give to a child because it's wrong in my opinion.

But, with him, I have to pick and choose my battles based on the level of risk, and bottle rot syndrome is at the bottom right now because my main worries are keeping him able to eat foods, increasing his safe food list, keeping him growing, and keeping him from ending up in the hospital due to his allergies. Everything else comes in way behind.

 

Reviewer: littleblueduck Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

I wish you could have gotten more graphic too!! :-D Great chapter like always.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Guess we all noticed the change of tone of the lemon. Well right it is sort of second to the story.  And, a Really good story it is.

Thanks for the update.  Hope you Aced your test.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

:)

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Oh, that was so mean to leave us wondering who said the ILY!!  Loved the chapter. Esme was great going all mama bear on Carlisle and I loved when Seth called him "bad".

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

wow, hot sexin'! glad to see things falling into place

i had two theories now, 1-the mystery pov is the father of our dear seth, out for revenge or something stupid like that

2-someone edward wronged in the past

keep it coming, good luck in school, study hard!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Yummy. Buh bye skankren. Ah our mystery scum is heard from again..

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Yummy. Lol for rose. Ugh for the stalker releasing pics. carlisle is a wanker. Yea for esme. Awww for I love u.

Reviewer: pamcamcris23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

so, theory about who the mustery POV... possibly Seth's sperm donor? or...one of Edward's past "meetups"? doubt it's the latter since they were always professionally screened. i'm still going for Seth's biological creator.

and how is having consensual sex within a relationship "salacious"? i mean, he's not a married president having a dalliance with an intern. Bella's his girlfriend who he eventually wants more with--to marry and be Seth's father--in his very own words!! awwwwww

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

You still have me stumped as to whom the mystery POV belongs to.
Happy that Rose is finally getting to know Bella and Seth.
Was Lauren the one to give access to our mystery person? If so now that she is gone will it affect his spying on the president?

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

:)  Good luck with your exam and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: SmillaGW Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Looooved it.  The Mystery persona.....hmmmm.  Maybe it's Lauren? Naw, don't really think so. On another note, I have to say I don't understand why it should be a problem for E as president to be with Bella, as they are both single.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

please update soon!! <3

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Who is the mystery pov! They are running my happiness bubble for those two with the promise of angst lol! 

 

Loving rose loving Seth! So sweet! Sue is a godsent! 

 

All the upcoming events sound very interesting and woot for desk sex! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Obsessive_Behaviours Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Rest assured you’re not the only person who suffers from “Test Anxiety”.  Beefing the GPA is a good buffer – but not really a solution.  With two Bachelors and a Masters degree, I’ve suffered along with you on more than one occasion.

 

My guess on the mystery observer….the VP.  He has the most the gain from the Prez being impeached.  The Oval Office desk sex was “hot” and very satisfying.  I’m really loving the devotion of your Edward towards Bella and Seth.

 

May I suggest a plot twist?  Bella and Edward elope one Saturday (very soon) at Martha’s Vineyard or Camp David.  Maybe have a few Heads of State present as a cover for an off campus summit.  Then, when it “hits the fan” this Prez may reveal that he was having “appropriate affections” towards his bride/wife.  (The undercover First Lady.)

 

Rose as maid of honor and Emmett the best man, with lots of photos to share with John Q. Public.  Mom and Dad, front and center.  Rose moves in as VP – with Carlisle’s help.  (He’s got some make-up points to score.)

Reviewer: Tenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

great story. Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Well I think they are not careful enough.  It seems someone has planned a lot to take them down.

Reviewer: Thefatcatsmeow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Me thinks the Mystery POV is Seths real dad!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

I was shocked by Senator Cullen.  As for Rose well I just think she is getting her love from Emmett so she is nicer to people now.  At least that is what I hope.  I love that Seth is really taking to Edward and I think it was Edward that said "I Love You."

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

:)

Reviewer: Firefly0228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Love your story and can't wait for the next installment!

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

I thought seth's dad died protrcting edward or am I confused.



Author's Response:

Seth's biological dad didn't die. The guy who wanted to be Seth's father, Brady Collins, did die. He was Bella's best friend and worked on the police force with Charlie.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

First, all the luck for your exams! That was hot in that Oval office! Why do I have the feeling that on the State Dinner for the Queen of England is when that Mystery Pov will get out w/ the plan he/she have. Will it be that time?



Author's Response:

First, I ended getting an 89% on my final so YAY!!! And as for your other remark......maybe................ :D

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

He finally got his wish. What a sweet Bella. I think the mystery guy is Seths daddy.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

First, good luck on the exam.  No bombing.  Second, I want Mystery POV drawn and quartered.  Soon please.

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Great chapter. I'm glad you didn't have th mysterious person be able to see them in the office. I think that person is Seth's father only Bella hasn't seen him yet. Can't wait to see if  I'm right. Love this story.  Will you be writing any more about Jasper and Alice?  I'm courious to here more about Jasper and Alice's shoes.

Thanks, Maria

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Why does the mystery POV have such a grudge?

Fantastic smexy times

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Love it

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

There must be something about the Oval Office.  Maybe we should start calling it the Oral Office.  Prezward got to live out a fantasy, thanks to Bella's date night.  I'm starting to wonder if the Mystery person could be Seth's dad?  I so probably wrong, but you never know. Good luck on the exams and looking forward to Monday's update (ecullensgurl on ffn)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

Great chapter, and thanks for the lemony office time. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: LIZZIED1211 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Wow, that was great!!!  I'm so glad that Esme found some "gumption" to take up for Bella & Seth for Edward's sake.  Will be interesting to see if his Dad comes around.

I'm not sure what to think about Rose, not sure if she'a friend or foe.  I still have no idea who the mystery guy/girl might be!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Maybe they said it at the same time.
Bella just coming to that conclusion and Edward struggling with it for a while now.
His father is taking far more liberties than he should be allowed. Just because he is a family member doesn't mean he gas the freedom to march into the White House anywhere he pleases. Esme seems to be trying to support her son. Let's hope she is successfull in turning this situation into a positive family moment.

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

I really hate his dad. What a jerk. Glad mom stood up to him. Bella loves Edward. This is going to get even more complicated not to mention the outside threats. Great ride

Reviewer: hayleyhoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

I love this and i reckon it might have been Bella saying I Love you but i can't wait to see who it is hehe :D and i love Seth in this story he is so adorable ^_^

Reviewer: bozbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Hmm, I think they both said it at the same time. 

 

As far as who the Mystery POV is I have to wonder if it isn't Esme.  She has been known to be evil in other fics, and would be the perfect bad guy in this one.  If it is her I think her motivation is either jealousy or revenge: bottom line for both theories is that hubby didn't get elected President, but may be attempting to find a way in for Carlisle.  She just has a side kink for Rosalie.  I don't put anything past any of these fics these days.  ;-)  There are a few other theories as to whom the Mystery POV belongs to (Emmett, Jake, Aro, VP Cheney), but for now I'll stick with Esme.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

looking forwrad to the next chapter 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

I love has Seth has taken to Edward. I sure they will have a great relationship! The way Esme handled Carlisle was awesome!!!! I can't wait to see who said I love you first. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

:)  Thank you for a great chapter, good luck with your finals.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

oh.my.god ! <3 I LOOVVEEE this! <3 Please update soon! 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

:)

Reviewer: Maliciouspixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip

I have been where she is with my daughter.  She has CVS (Cyclic Vomiting Syndrome).  I had to find out what she had via the web because after dozens of visits with the same damn symptoms the doctors still would just tell me it was nothing but a routine stomach virus.  And to this day they still look at me with a smirk on their faces, pricks!   



Author's Response:

I just went and looked up CVS as I hadn't ever heard of it before. OMG I feel for you and your daughter. I know what you have gone through with the misdiagnoses. That happened with my son too. It took 3 allergists, a gastroenterologist, and 2 pediatricians to finally figure out that he had FPIES. One allergist said it was mild IgE allergies (the ones that are normal and cause anaphylactic shock). The second allergist told us that he had no issues to milk even though he slipped into a slight shock state after an office trial of milk. And our GI doc was referred by that allergist suggesting a protein intolerance and the second allergist told us it wasn't food allergies. The GI doc scoffed at the second allergist, told us what FPIES was, said that Cayden was a prime example of it and had been misdiagnosed with reflux by himself and his first pediatrician as it can mimic reflux. He sent us to our third allergist who is amazing! Our new pediatrician is also wonderful and has taken it upon himself to learn about FPIES so he can help with the treatment and management of Cayden's symptoms and reactions.

How is your daughter now? Is she on medications to help control the cycles? Have you found new doctors so you don't have to see the idiots who don't believe you? I'm keeping you and your daughter in my thoughts and I hope her life does or has drastically improved now that you know what she has.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Awe.  They both said "I love you" simultaneously.  And, wow Rose 360 whip-lash.

Pass that test and get back to us.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: loveLambLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Wow, I think this is the best chapter so far... so much cuteness... and kink!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Well Carlisle dug hisself a hole, good thing Esme and Edward stopped before he jumped in too deep to get out.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 32 Outed

Omg!

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Oh, I just love prezward!! Loved the date, it was perfect

 

Reviewer: Rosaliek Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Cute chapter very eager for wednesday now lol

Reviewer: NyxKey Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Hmm....I think I know who the mystery POV is, but I'm not positive....So I'm just going to patiently wait (well at least try too LoL) & see what happens.

I love how Edward is starting to interact with Seth more. So cute!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 22 PJs and Ringing Phones

Was Jasper a model? Or something to do with when Alice still worked in fashion? That's what I just realized. Maybe that's why he knows designers, because the only other option would be he's probably gay. Because gay men know designers, straight men don't. OH YA! ALSO... was that thing about answering a toddler's phone Katt Williams? lol. Because I know I've heard it before, and I think that's where it's from. Or else it was a meme. : I'm not 100% on either.

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Sounds like a great date to me. He got very creative. I think it was sweet that he drove his car like he did. Great job...thanks!!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 14 Demands

I'm gonna call it right now and say that she hates him because he either was the reason Seth's dad isn't around, or he IS Seth's dad and doesn't remember Bella being one of the girls he slept with... lol. CRAZINESS!!! I KNOW! But, those are my guesses, and I hope the latter of the two is correct. ;D

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

I am glad Edward is home. I love that he brought Seth a couple of surprises. The storage room was hot, but I can't wait to find out who is watching. I just hope they can't cost Edward the next election. Great job...thanks!!!

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

That was great!!!  Can't wait for the "next" chapter!!!  Looking forward to them getting intimate.  Seems like they've waited a long time for it.

I'm having an issue here at TWCS and not getting alerts.  I've even changed account names and email addresses, etc.  Hoping it will get better.

Reviewer: littleblueduck Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Love, love, love it. Keep up the great work!

 

Sarah

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Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

awww wonderful first date

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

That was a great first date!  I love that he drove her, even if they never left the grounds.  Looking forward to Wed!!  Actually, I'm looking forward to tonight when you post Hear Me!!  Thanks for the update!

~allidel  :)

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