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Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Finally, they're getting it together. I loved that he drove around the whitehouse grounds to take her on date, that was great.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Okay, so my very pervy mind kicked in when Bella said "Totally head to head, and you're going down."  Yep my mind went directly there.  Because that's where we all want Edward to be.

Love the date, and the update.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Loved it!  Prezward all flustered!  Got me squirming!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

loved the chapter

that was one hell of a date

congrats edward, you outdid yourself

bella seems to be ready for more they both do

he is a man after all with one hell of a title that is it. he is still a man with needs and dreams all the same

good for both of them

Reviewer: Daisy Mae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Well, it's a shame what a few bullies can accomplish and ruin things for the majority, isn't it? I've always read stories hear at TWCS and will continue to follow my favorite stories that travel here. Not only am I appaulled by authors being threatened, I , as a reader, am also tired of being bullied and having my choices taken away. Elitist censorship is despicable and tyrannical.

This was a sweet date that Edward put together. I'm still so curious who Seth's biological father is and if that has something to do with Bella being targeted. A bit of a mystery.

Till next time! ~ Daze

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Great chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

The Presidential Treatment is one of my fav's!! So glad they are moving forward.  Any teasers before Wednesday??? ;-).    Please ....

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Very good chapter, thank you

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

So glad to hear you and several of my favorite authors have backed up their works here at TWCS. It may become my primary location for fanfiction.
The date was perfect. Adored his driving from one side of the White House to the other. So sweet a gesture. How bold of Bella to insinuate their will be a follow up date where they will warn a movie and make-out on the couch like horny teenagers. Lol.
The bowling was an innocent move yet became the sexy trigger that sparked the heat. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

Love it! <3 Can't wait to read what happens when their realationship becomes public! Will Bella ever be the first lady? ;) 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 31 Date Night

yay prezward is getting his Bella of woohoo can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: KeshaLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1 Fly Jimmy Fly

I love this story. I love all of your stories. You are an amazing writer. And I live how you don't make up random stuff like, in this case, flies. You didn't make up some random disease like I've seen some people do. Your writing is real, and I like that.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Okay, creepy perv in the lurch ...

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Why isn't the White House routinely swept for electronic devices not registered with secret service?
Obviously this person is hoping to get their hands on material worthy of blackmail status.
I'm sure Prezward's staff is aware of just how happy Bella is keeping him. The question is, do they like her enough to keep things quiet for the time being?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Sounds like someone wants to record the two of them together and then release the tape. Maybe they are actually after Edward. They noticed he had a soft spot toward Bella and Seth. Sex scandal don't play out well on capital hill.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

LOVE LOVE LOVE!  <3<3

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Love the way Edward and Bella are progressing.. now the mystery person needs to be revealed and taken care of...

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Great chapter

Reviewer: Obsessive_Behaviours Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

My guess is the VP wants the "head job"?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

:)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

i do not know who this dirty prick is who is the mystery point of view but i do not like him. 

 

I do however love prezward and he is the highlight of my week.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

:)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Yay ! You made me hungry by the way :) tomatoe soup and grilled chs sandwich yummy!

Reviewer: Deblovestwilight72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

This story is great - I am forever on the site waiting for the next installment, please don't make me wait too long.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

:)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

Damn, damn, damn.  You sure you're not carrying over some of 'Master My I', with this slow torture.

Storage room sexing - hot hot hot. Damn Prez licking your fingers-naughty.

Love the update.  I 've been rec'ing this on Pinterest, along w/ 'Hear Me'. I think I have at least 3 other people reading.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again

sue is so great.   yummy practicing time for our kiddies.   Grrr who is the mystery POV... Ack

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

I agree with Seth, Prezward is good-good!
Such an endearing moment between the boys in Bella's life.
Wondering how he will find a way to take Ms Swan on a real date.
So that third persons pov that is monitoring the halls and had Bella's place trashed, are they happy about Edward being involved with his shoe throwing attacker?
How did Bella's meeting with her father turn out?

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

Edward is getting more and more attached to Bella and Seth. these pilot better get their act together so he can get home.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

;-)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

loved seth and edward's convo-very cute. brownie points for edward

so the first date didn't go the way it should have. it will get better

love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

awww cute little mini date

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

hey

great chapter!

oh he will take her out properly... great!

they would make such a nice couple!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

Loved the chapter.  I'm glad your son is putting some weight.  Like I said before, you are one determined woman. Good for you Thanx for updating. See ya soon 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

Well I am glad they got a little time together. Seth is so cute. I love the good-good comment. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

LOVE!! It was so sweet when Edward talked to Set, I hope that one day he will look at him as his son.. <3 adorable! 

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

oh prezward the way to a single mom's heart is through her children you better be careful you don't crush them both.

 

As always i can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: karencullen2007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29 Dinner and a Kiss

Oh that was good, however way too short! A longer one next time???

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

I do not trust Rosalie, but Edward and Bella were so.........................

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

aww for tucking in.  Sue seems really sweet.  hmm we'll see how rose acts in the future.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Rose is trying to cover her own arse. Thinking that Bella knows about her trists with Emmett, she will try and befriend Bella therefore preserving her position. Edward has made it very clear that Rosalie will not bad mouth or interfere again. Her job is on the line. Who knows, maybe a friendship will develop between the two women.
Was the intruder dumb enough to leave behind sny info as to his boss?

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Prezward can tuck me in if he wants to ;-).    Love that they are opening up with each other.  Rose is nice.. Maybe Bella should hide !!   Love it!! Update soon.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Well, Rose shocked me, but I am glad she talked to Bella. Edward tucking Bella in was so sweet. Sue is so good for Seth. I have no idea about Nauel. I can't wait for this to unfold. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Bella is still a little upsetting in her actions. Being independent is fine, being stupid is quite another. All she had to do was call her father to find out about the house. Right she is the only one that can really judge what is missing. Her safety is important for Seth. 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Great chapter.  Get the "slow" but can't wait for a little forward progress. 

I'm thinking maybe the stalker/evilness has to be someone close. Someone unassuming who could gain the confidence & access the CCTV monitors in the whitehouse. With Nahuel, the logical person would be someone from the Amazon but I don't see the stalker as a female. Maybe it is and you'll fool us all!

Looking forward to all of it....the relationship, the solving of the stalker & yes, the seduction!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

I think Rose changed her attitude because she had to change her attitude or loose her job. I think it was forced. She is willing to play nice because she would do anything for Edward. She has noticed that Edward is happy. Edward and Bella are sizzling when they touch. I don't know how slow they will be able to go. They might combust.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

yaaayy! <3 new chapter! :) loved this! <3

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Great story and chapter, thank you.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

:)

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Love it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

I am so glad they worked out that communication problem.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Thanks for the awesome update.
Yes, the heat is definitely on the rise!
The a/n was reassuring and answered the questions I was thinking. You must be clairvoyant, lol.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

I hope he does have a great day. I am so glad they have started to figure things out and are going to try their relationship. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

hey

WOW great chapter!

On my gosh...

really!

I think it's good that they wanna try it!

I really like that!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

love it and thank god they had their talk

men sometimes their brains get ahead and over think

so thrilled that edward will be courting ms swan. should get very interesting

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Uh yeah!  I'm squirming here, 38,000 feet in the air and all the air vents are on high!

I LOVED IT!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Oh what a wonderful chapter.  I really hope they make it.  Yes, we need to find out what's up with Jazz and Em and Rose.

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Woot woot!

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

ooo Prezward and Bella got there orgasm on yay.

 

CAn't wait to see what happens when the staff find out about it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

awww  glad they got to talk....and play

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Yes, that was some sexy communicating they were doing about their lies and dislikes, oh wait, maybe just likes;-)). All good, can't imagine who the dead guy is because I can't imagine we got James out of the picture that easily.

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

love love love! <3 please never stop! ;)  They are finally acting romantic! yay!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

That was hot!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Great chapter!  I love that they are working it out and that he is letting them meet aro so that he can start to prepare meals for Seth!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

;looking forward to then ext chapter 

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Edward and Bella finally!! :).        Love, love, loved  it!!!!!     Update soon;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Bella should have been a little more encouraging with her side of the kiss. Her side must have said she was not interested. Edward was being a gentleman and accepting her answer. He wasn't going to push the issue. That was a critical moment and Bella blew it. You can't give mixed signal if you are interested in a person. It is a big risk for Edward to show interest in her. She better be sweet and and not embarress him. She can have a razor sharp tongue. She needs to put that away and be sweet than honey. Edward has been so good to her and her son. Much more than she has been to him.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I think I would prefer two small updates, but I'm fickle and may change my mind. Woman's prerogative and all that, you know. Haha
I think Bella's pulling away was due to her just waking up, morning breath, etc. She had no idea he would take it as rejection. Edward is so used to getting what he wants. That kind of instant gratification has him acting as a petulant child that was reprimanded for taking something that didn't belong to him.
Let's see how convincing Bella can be behind closed doors! Will Edward's intoxicated state cause his filter to be non-existent?

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I wish Edward would have let Bella say what she wanted to begin with, but I think whatever happens next will be very interesting. I can't wait for Sue to start work. Seth is going to love being with her. That is going to help Bella so much. Great job...thanks!!! As for the chapters...I think I would like 2 shorter, but I am game for whatever is best for you. Thanks!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I will take my updates however you choose to send them and be very, very thankful!  I think Edward is trying to maintain professional distance here and also protect Bella's reputation.  God bless Alice!  I loved the bit with Rosalie. And Emmett I the elevator...too funny!  As far as the Senator and Mrs. Cullen go, I don't think Edward really cares a lot.  It's his job, his office,his, life, and ultimately his decisions.  He wouldn't be where he was if he based everything he did on them.  

I'm glad your little guy is doing well and holding is own.  I also hope that you had a Happy Mother's Day, as I did.

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

hey

WOW great chapter

My gosh... he locked the dooor!

is this exciting :)

Hope it will be good!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

ok, that was mean... please update fast...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

ooooh  rose and em got caught.   Oh Edward overreacting from the kiss.    The media is SOOOOOO annoyting sometimes.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I actually like the shorter chapters 2xs a week.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

looking forward to more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

:)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Yes! 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

OMG, of course you would leave us right here. Meanie.   Loving this story, but then I've said that from the first.

Thank you for the update.

I would prefer 2 smaller chapters.

And, I can't wait for your Drabble.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Whatever works for you but I'd rather have a long chapter. 

I think Edward & Bella need to talk!  The attraction is there but maybe the timing is off. Maybe a littl kissing and communication so no misundestandings?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Well I am so glad Edward did not have another woman in that room.. awkard

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

well edward i wish you would have let bella  talk to you in the beginning

i know she likes him and is worried what others think. but hey daddy gave his blessings and she was happy about that

i am thrille dsue will be taking care of seth. a good fit

looking forward to more

Reviewer: KarenCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

omg! Please update soon! xD<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Looking forward to the next chapter....

Reviewer: LeslieWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

Shorter chaPters. That way I get some of it sooner! Great chapter. I hope Bella pulled back because of morning breath and that's it.

Maybe Rose won't be such a frigid bitch of she starts getting some from Emmett.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

I am really looking forward to finding out what will be happening behind the closed door!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

:)

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 Press Conference

ooo how am i supposed to choose how often i want chapters, i would have you post it all now so i could read it to completion if i had my way. But i will go with whatever you prefer.

 

Silly Edward a girl pulls away from a kiss and he automatically thinks he has overstepped. Can't wait for Bella to explain that it isn't the case and maybe you know jump his bones to show him how wrong he is. But as any parent knows disruption free time is hard to come by would love for Seth to strat to cry right at the most important moment.

 

Sorry i am totally waffling can't wait for the next chap 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

Bella needs to learn how to be grateful. She did not need to snap at him when he asked for a list of items for Seth. She knows people are after her. She knows the reporters are hounding her. She says she loves her son, so why would she put herself &/or him in danger to go shopping. Edward is trying to help her and keep them safe. If she doesn't care about the safety, then she should just go back to her house. Bella can be so stupid. Why is she lacking basic manners and respect. Alice seems to have been taught these lessons. Bella acts as if she was brought up in a dumpster. She also must have some mental illness that needs to be checked. Her mood swings are ridiculous.

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

:)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

Nice!  The relationship is growing rather naturally - not forced.  The break in was a surprise.  Thank you for letting Charlie survive, by the way!  Too many punches would seem contrived here.  Again, the mystery here is first rate and I love it!  Also, hugs to your little guy from a fan.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 A New Home

I am glad Charlie didn't get hurt. I wonder who was in the house. That kiss was so sweet. I hope there are more to come. Great job...thanks!!!

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