love it

i sure hope they do not let their guard down since charlie shot some guy

cause it is a plant. the real deal is still out there waiting for a chance to strike

look out guys

Finally!! A kiss:)

llooking forward to more 

Blossom!

hey

good chapter!

I'm normally a good person, but I like it that Charlie killed the man.... I think he deserved it!

Bella and Edward are sooo sweet together!

bye

Lil

Happy Belated Birthday!
Edward still has so much to learn about how to communicate someone be is interested in.
Bella's kiss surprised even me. Her outburst on the hand die not. Did she mean to let it slip that she was falling for him?
Mystery man sure is a puppet master. Everyone is dancing in the direction he wants. Charlie is possibly an exception to that rule. Will the intruder's identity assist the agents or will it be another dead end.

I don't think Jasper is gay. He could be a cross dresser or have a shoe fetish. Bella needs to realize that Edward can't react spontaneaously because he is watched. He has to think all of his actions through. Bella might want to do this somtimes. She seems to act and then get embaressed by her actions once she has thought them through. She is a very judgmental person. She acts like she is a very perfect person and lives her life only way it is to be lived.

Magnifique!

hey

oh my gosh!

the chap is great!

but this mystorious PoV is great!

but I hate him, or her!

bye

Lil

I think he's into Alice because of his shoe fetish.

:)

looking forward to more ! 

The sisters are just so cute!
Don't for a minute believe Jasper's gay. He has somehow been exposed to women's designer shoes and really likes the way they look on Alice's feet! Now how do the girls get him to drool over the rest of her body? This should be fun.
I'm not ready to comment on the mystery POV just yet. He has a long list of connections. That leads me to believe he is rather close to the president.

I have no idea on what is what...Japser/shoes/Alice. The mystery POVs...I have no idea who they are. I am just going to keep enjoying the story and let it unfold. I love it! Great job...thanks!!! I hope everyone is feeling better at your house!

ooooo okay my vote on Jasper is that he has an Alice shoe fetish and that he recognised Alice's shoe when she threw it at Prezward, I have decided that the mystery POV is an oposition politician who either wants Edward's job or wants to get a particular candidate into the job. love it when i get updates for this story.

I am thinking it is James and he is one pervert. I can't believe that the White House doesn't  know that  they have such a big security leak. I am also wondering why they don't want Bella back at her house. I haven't figured out yet what he wants with Bella. I think Edward would keep his popularity if he was truthful to the puplic. He could state that she was moving into the White House because she was being threatened and he felt responsible. This was the only way he could keep the press away from her and her son. She would also be able to work and get medical care for her child.

interesting I can't wait to find out the mystery pov i think its James??????

My first thought is always James for the bad guy, but I really don't know. Sounds like Rosalie needs to be careful. I hope Bella doesn't freak out on Edward. He is being honest with her. I would like to think that the White House is still the safest place for Bella and Seth, but it bothers me that someone gave out info about security cameras and it has not been caught yet. It is like there is a mole in the White House. Great job...thanks so much!!!

oooo me confused about who the mystery person is why would they want Bella away from her home?

I so think Bella is going to be back to her bitchy self-protective self next chap, she is not going to want to move in with Edward even if it is the safest option.

Someone wants something from her house. Seth's dad. The guy that ... Never mind I'm confusing myself more by trying to figure it out. I'll just wait for you to reveal it to me.

Bella still has the right to refuse the offer of moving her and Seth into the White House.
Ok, what does all this have to do with Bella's home? Does the security team do random checks of the surveillance system? Surely someone must be aware that access has been gained by an outside party? Who would slip up and give out that kind of information? It must be James tracking the coming and going of events.

So happy to hear your son is on the mend. What he went thru sounded really scary.
Glad you have a bit of breathing room now that you are into a new class. Take some time for yourself. A refreshed mom is a happy mom.

Wow, Rose is a major bitch. What ls her problem?  Emmett had a great ideal.. Who knew?? Lol.   Edward should have told Bella face to face.  The mystery POV... Stalker Mike??  Love it!! Update soon and often:)

Well that was a busy morning. I love how Seth can bring everyone together. I can so see Alice walking into a room full of men dressed like that. I wonder if Edward is just going to find a way to move them into the White House. Seth would be running things before long. Great job...thanks so much!!! I hope things are going better for you all.

hey

good chapter!

I really liked it!

Jake and Seth are sooo cute together ;)

hopefully Edward will come up with a plan!

I bet he takes her to the white house!

bye

LIl

love it love it can't wait for more

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wow!

wow!

départ canon!

:)

I have no idea about where she should live.  Who is threatening them?  that is an FBI job.  Alice comes out in nothing and Jasper is obviously interested in her. Perhaps they have met before.

Lol have those two been messing around? Hmmmmmmm? And I still wonder about the shoe thing lol

I'm glad to hear Cayden did so well and even happier to hear that all our prayers and thoughts helped you so much.  I love the bit with Jake and Seth with the phones here!  It's too true!  The guys have GOT to answer that toddler's phone.  I  was thinking that Edward might move Bella, Seth and Alice in the Executive Mansion.  The White House has lots of extra space, a guarded perimeter, and a very controlled environment - which includes an outdoor space for Seth to play in.  It also means that there is no commute time for Bella and Alice.  If Alice and Jasper aren't a "thing" now, they should be soon!  Be fair, the man just saw her in a cami/ shorts set and heels in the morning.  He's only human!  Take care  and let us know when you know more about  Cayden.  For the record, when I had my daughter I had 5 IV bags going and 3 bracelets...but then my arms and wrists are way bigger than his.  Give him a collective hug from all of us!

Bella's moving to the white house, right. 

Yeah for you & your sons procedure going thru safely.

Thanks for the update;-))

:)

ooo loved it as always wonder if Edward will ever fess up that it was rosalie that got them to safety

Can understand needing some normalness for Seth, but she is kinda unreasonable.   LOL for the phone joke.  Hee hee for Alice's reaction.

hahahahahaha got to love alice update soon

hey

great chapter!

ooooh 

Edward si god .)

I really like him!

bye

Lil

Rosalie needs someone watching her every move. She can't be trusted.  Bella knew there were men in the outside room. She should have dressed appropriately. She could have had at least worn decent PJs. I think likes the President more than she is letting on to Alice or herself.

Well I am EXTREMELY surprised that he has not fired Rosalie already.  I mean really?  I dont think the President would have put up with someone giving oders under his name and then not even notifing him.  Plus what she did about blurting out about the DNA test.  Now I think she was the one to tip off the press in the first place. 

I am glad your Cayden is ok.  I just wish your chapters were LONGER.

:)

Great chapter !  I loved it...  poor Edward ..... he he   can't wait for more !

hahahahaha yes he is in trouble!update soon

Thanks for the update:-))

I wonder what Rose's deal is?

Thanks for the rec's, I have one too, The Story of Us & Instruction no Included(completed stories), by SexyLexiCullen & her mob ward wip, Weather the Storm.

Looking forward to your next chapter.

Wow!  Rose should have known better then tongive orders like that and not notify the President.  I was surprised by Bella reaction to seeing Edward.  I am hoping only good things hapoen between them now.  I hope all goes well with your family.

You're right!  Edward is in. So deep when it comes to Bella now!  He spent so long just taking care of business, now that Bella's hit, she knocked him for a loop.  Part of me thinks Rosalie is involved and part says, "uh uh.  Too obvious.". I do think if Rosalie had anything to do with parts of what'd happening to Bella, it was the small stuff - now she is just stuck back pedaling trying to stay hidden and keep Edward uninvolved and in her world as she sees it.  Nice chapter.  The background stuff is important.  Sometimes more than just important.  It's vital.  This chapter also allows us to see the various relationships popping up.  Bella and her security details, security and Seth.  ( they do adore him!).  Also Bella and Edward's relation ship and how it is changing.  Well done!  We'll be praying for your little guy here.  Try to breathe and take care of you too.

:)

when it comes to this story, I am usually pissed at her or him. Right now I am laughing.