Date: 15 Apr 2012 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things
hmmm Rose is acting more and more suspicious.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 15 Apr 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things
ooo i'm begining to hate miss hale i don't know why i feel like she is jealous of miss swan but i sure hope prezward fires her ass soon.
And i am loving that prezward has finally realised he is owned by miss swan oo i get so excited when i see these updates in my box
Date: 15 Apr 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 Handling Things
I want more!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
How crazy is that, your Cayden is acting out your story line. I know bumps and bruises with the occasional blood letting happens, but with his extra special circumstances I'm sure you stress yourself out. Your family is in my thoughts and prayers.
The presidential suit at the Park Hyatt Washington, wow, Bella is in for a surreal ride.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
;-)), thanks for the update & best of luck to Cayden next week.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
This stalker situation is somehow getting out of hand. I just hope, that Edward knows what he does to help Bella and Seth.
The paparazzis are also getting ruthless, but from them it is unfortunately expected.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Well I am glad they are going to a safe house and that Alice will be with them. They have been through enough, but I am sure this crazy person is just getting started.
I hope Cayden is doing well today. I can't believe how things in the story are happening to him. Write only good things about Seth from now on!! I hope the procedure goes well.
Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 10 Apr 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
What a mess with the press. I love the way Emmett put everything. He is so right about it all. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Great chapter! can't wait to read more.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
:)
Date: 08 Apr 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
wow another threat?! edward is going to freak updaate soon
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Marvelously good...and unfortunately, too realistic. The threats, the press! it would be nice to think it's overdone, but as we all know you are writing realism. And beautifully.
I say if Seth and Cayden are mirroring each other that much - go for broke. Write in a scenario with Seth's body gaining the ability to eventually heal completely! (hey, it' s worth a shot!). Cayden will remain in our prayers, as will you, and we look forward to great news from you. Take care.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
I love this so much ^_^ and oh god that is eerie :s hah.a good luck again :D x
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
great chapter hope cayden dose great with his procedure and i will keep in my prayers.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
I hope Cayden is doing well & you will be in my prayers!!
Kay
Date: 07 Apr 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
thanks awesome chapter
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
loved the chapter she can never catch a break
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
wow poor cayden. i am glad he is doing better and my prayers are with you all.
man bella must be besides herself with all that is going on. she knows her and the president weren't intimate but hey i guess that is not what it looked like. i am glad she is not made at the president and is accepting moving to a safe location. man reporters need to be more aware of what they do and who they hurt for a story
what a chapter. thanx for writing
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Wow! Now I'm really hooked. Not that I wasn't before. Will find out who the asshole is on the phone soon? I'm amazed that you find time to write with everything you have going on in RL but you really keep the story interesting. I will keep your real life Seth in my prayers.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Wish your little Cayden the best of luck, he'll be in our prayers. Also great chapter I can't wait for the next one. And to hear Prez Cullen's reaction to what happened to Seth. Take care and good luck.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
This is an absolutely fantastic! I am so eager to read each newly posted chapter. Once read I am left wishing there was more and definitely wishing the chapters were longer.:)
Date: 07 Apr 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Poor Seth, yeah I am glad he is not going to get hurt anymore. That is creepy that the similarities with Cayden. I missed Edward in this chapter but hopefully he will return in the next one. Gosh I was hoping for more kissing. that was so hot.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Wow, fantastic chapter. This story is really amping up. Love it. I have thought and maybe it's a stupid one, but I'm starting to be very suspicious of Rose. Hummmm.
I think keeping Seth safe is a good idea, way to weird for your son to be repeating his injuries.
"Now I just need to write myself meeting Rob and him falling madly in love with me and whisking me and my boys away to Califonia." THIS is hysterical and I think you should.
As always, thank you for the update.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
hey
OMG Seth... hopefully he'll be fine!
the presidential suite is great!
I just looked it up...
it's fantastic!
will Edward be there ??
bye
Lil
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
you better start writing only good things about Seth
will continue to keep Cayden in my prayers
Date: 07 Apr 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Great story. I hope the procedure goes well for your son. Lots of courage from France.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
awwww poor little seth.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
Excellent writing!!
Btw - if your writing becomes reality...will you write that RP falls madly in love with me while trapped on a metal tube 35,000 feet in the air?? Thanks! :)
Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 When Vultures Attack
oh my god love this. Poor Bella you do one stupid thing and it has gargantuan conqesquences. As a parent i know the panic you feel when somthing happens to your little one and you got that across so well in this chap. At least she is going to have prezward to comfort her. can't wait for more.
And i totally agree about keeping Seth healthy because yeah just to freaky that Cayden keeps getting sick like seth.
Date: 03 Apr 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I am glad that Bella finally realized that Edward does not deserve her bitchiness. She is one fowl women. Just because you are heartbroken does not give you the right to disrespect the President or be rude to the general population. Edward has more that kind to her, but she has spit venom at him at every turn. I hope after her breakdown she can be a kinder person.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Thank you so much for the update in the middle of everything you have going on around you.
My prayers are with you and your precious Cayden.
Will Prezward pull away from Bella or ask her if he can turn their unique situation into a plan to lobby congress for reform?
Great media situation. Bella could reveal Seth's paternal side; then gave Brady honored as a hero by telling their story; then build up president Cullen as someone trying to correct the health care reform act while giving her the chance to care for Seth. It's a win, win in the eyes of the media and hopefully his ratings will rise just as his appendage does when Bella is around. Haha!
Take care of yourself. You are too important to your family to become ill at this time.
We'll be here when your available.
Kristi
Date: 31 Mar 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Just wanted to wish you son the best of luck !
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Don't worry about not updating. Just worry about your son and school. Although, I know fanfiction gives our minds a much needed break from RL. So take a break of you need it.
Date: 31 Mar 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
rl and your son comes first....we all understand that....or we all should
Hmmm thinking its Rose that tipped off the press. What IS her problem? Still wanna know who the baby daddy is, esp since I think the sleeze will come back at some point.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Well, thank you for the hard work you are doing to put this story out there. I'm enjoying reading it.
Good luck to you and Cayden & hope & pray it goes as well as possible for him. Good luck with school, that's a great accomplishment.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I truly love this story :) I hope everything goes well with Cayden and ur master's :D xx
Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I hope they can start their realation ship now! <3 love this! <3
Date: 30 Mar 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
This is great please update soon I cannot wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
We will all pray for Cayden. I know what it is like with master's school. It is hard to work and then go to class at night. Dont get me started on all the work that is required.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I wish you family all the prayers for cayden and his procedure
love the story
Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
OH prezward you are so caught hook line and sinker. i love this story so much
Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
First I can not imagine all that you go through with your son. I have a hard time with my kids too. I have a son with ADHD and he was recently hit by a car on his bike. He nows has mild seizures and his medication is not working. They also just discovered that he might have Leukemia. Yeah that was a shocker. On the same day they told me about my 11 yr old they told me my 13 yr old needs testing for Hepatitis and liver failure. I have broke down so many times. I mean how on earth do they get these things? But I still think your family is suffering more and I applaude you for your courage.
Now as for this story, I am thinking its Rose that is tipping off the press. I am so glad that he held her and let her get it all out. I love that he is having wet dreams about Bella. Now maybe we can move on and they can start a relationship. I do wish your chapters were a lot longer but I understand that you have a hell of a lot of load on your shoulders too.
I wish TWCS would allow us to use the PM again. They have disabled it due to spam is what they told me. I hate that I can not have a private conversation with all you wonderful authors. I guess I will sign my reviews with my email incase you wanted to send me a response.
I will pray for your son. Take care.
Carrie
clgarcia67@gmail.com
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Thank you for updating! I really don't know how you do it, with all the things happening in RL, we appreciate you much more for that. I hope that your son, will have some type of health stability, and that his doctors can do the test and safe manner, with no further implications. He will be in my thoughts and prayers, and I wish you guys the best possible outcome. Hopefully, he doesn't have any of the dz that you mentioned. Take care of yourself and be strong. Good luck w your Masters! See you soon!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
so edward is already lost to bellas charm :) update soon
Date: 30 Mar 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
I hope you're son's surgery goes alright. and good luck with the Master's program.
Date: 30 Mar 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Cayden will be in our prayers here...especially on April 19th. In general, anesthesiologists will use something different if ANY allergy is a remote possibilities. Keep the faith!
Great update. In a way, the press reaction was almost bound to end up this way at some point. By today's standard it is almost the norm! You hit this one right on the mark. It was marvelous getting inside Edward's head at this point in time and his relationship with Emmett is complex but it shows depth on both their parts. Thank you for updating so soon...especially given the circumstances. Take care!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
Ooo self-loving thinking of Bella, naughty Prezward. Thanks for the update, I love this story.
Okay, so you need to take care of YOU and your family, and not feel obligated to us. If we love your work (me) we will all still be here when you return.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
great chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 19 Vultures
LOVE it bb!!
Are you getting your master's in acct? I hated acct! blah. Marketing major here. Good luck with Cayden. I'm sorry he is sick.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections
wtf?
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 14 Demands
very thick
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 Diverting Disaster
yes not exactly a place for an infant
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12 Barbie Bella
that should be interesting
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 Career Move
getting involved witha staff member cant be easier, look what happened with Monica and Bill
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes in Attitudes
:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 Repercussions
dum da dumdum
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
I do not think he is really IS a asshat, if this was real life, she would be in jail, but he is given her a chance to help her son and others by readdressing the bill, who cares if he gets good PR because he is doing a good thing
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 Bargaining Chip
not me
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 Trouble at Home
and projectile vomiting from a sick kid is so nasty
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 Explanations
great
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
hey
OMG Brady *sniff*
I'm sure he would be a great Dad!
but Edward will be, too! I'm sure... *smile*
great chap!
bye
Lil
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
this has the start of something awesome and different
Date: 26 Mar 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
That was an emotional chapter. Poor Edward is getting the blame for just standing there. He didn't ask to be shot at. With all that Bella told him, did he even here her say "I enjoyed it", "I wanted it"? Thats what he should have heard along with all the rest.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 How I Got Here
I was recommeded this story by my mother PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine. I love what I have read so far, however I don't like that it is so short.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 Close Encounters
I still can't get over the fact that Alice gave him the bloody handkerchif. Why would she do that? Especially since she has to know he isn't the father? Even knowing what I know about Brady, I'm confused. I'm sure you will answer this in another chapter, but I'm dying to know! lol! I hope your baby is ok. I hate that you have to go through all of this.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
Oh um wow. WOW. Now we know. Poor Bella and that's awful for Edward. Have they seen that man?! Why would you want to shoot that sexiness?!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Ok, I read this right when you posted, but was unable to review. AWESOME! It was sad hearing about Brady. I swear I almost cried. We now have an insight as to why Bella was reacting to Cullen the way she was. It's perfect, and as always, can't wait to read more!!!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Yes! <3 sad but really good chapter.. I'm so happy she could let go of Brady and try to be happy with Edward :) Hopefully she will be the first lady one day.. ;)
Date: 22 Mar 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
I was right Brady is not Seth's father. Hm, that will be an interesting development.
Prezward was on his best behavior. I wonder if he will ponder the loss of the lovely Miss Swan?
First name basis is progress for these two.
Bella's ready to live in the future. Look out Edward!
Date: 22 Mar 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Thanks for the update, it solves some of our mysteries, still many more to unravel. ;-))
Date: 22 Mar 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
love it
Date: 22 Mar 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Thanks for the background! Enjoyed it
Date: 22 Mar 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Beautifully touching! Thankfully, Edward has allowed Bella to realize what she lost, appreciate the gift of Brady, and begin to move on the way Brady would want her to. I'm still curious about Seth's biological father though. Thanks for the rapid update!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Prezward is a good and honorable man... am treally enjoying your story. Different from most and that's a GOOD thing!
Catherine
Date: 22 Mar 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
looking forward to more
Date: 22 Mar 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
wow oh I thought he was his dad damn, who is seth's dad?update soon
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
I gather from Bella's out-burst that Brady was not Seth's biological father but was will to step up and accept the responsibility of raising him. The something Brady never experienced.
I have to give Prezward credit for keeping hus mouth closed as Bella revealed her mixed emotions from the kiss Edward took from her.
Bella is correct in stating Edward had no right to force himself on her with out permission.
Curious as to how the conversation will play out once Bella removes herself from the strong comforting arms that now craddle her?
Date: 22 Mar 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
Poor Bella! were tyey a couple or best friends with benefits?
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
that was good! Wow!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
I'm so glad that was not Seth's father. I really liked this twist better and I did cry too.
Maria
Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
kinda figured out the Brady thing. Wondering who the sperm donor is. Probably Newton. LOL
Date: 22 Mar 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Poor Bella trying to hang on and needing to let go. Edward holding her while she shed the last of her tears for Brady. Such a good chapter. Love the story!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
awwe great chappy cant wait for the next.
Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Brady sounds like a wonderful guy. It is sad that he died, but I am glad Bella now sees that what happened was not Edwards fault. I can wait to see how things develop between Edward and Bella and how Seth reacts. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Oh Bella it wouldn't have mattered who you fell for after Brady you would have felt guilty but it is okay to move on.
Lovely as always bb i love these two so much and of course now the UST can start.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Letting Go
Well, I am gald that Bella has finally realized that she has the possiblity with Edward and that Brady would want her to move on. I know it is ill to talk of the dead, but I hope Bella's connection with Edward ends up stronger than the one she had with Brady.
Date: 21 Mar 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
great chapter waiting for the next one...
Date: 21 Mar 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
This is great I cannot wait to see what happens next please update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
Loved the chapter, I can't believe she let it slip to Edward that she enjoyed the kiss, yeah, yeah, it was forced and what not and he should be ashamed of himself, but come on! He is Edward ;). Is Brady, seth'dad? Or he was just going to take care of her? Can't wait for the next chapter. See you soon!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 17 Emotional Confrontation
Brady must be Seth's father. Rose needs to be fired. She does not give him good advice, and I think that he is starting to see that.