Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 13: Choices
I'm sure that will not be the last time Edward gets frustrated with his new limitations and lashes out at Bella. He knows he's safe with her so he can let himself lash out. In a way it's a good thing, it means he's comfortable with her. I just hope Bella will have someone that she can vent to and not feel like she's disrespecting Edward.
Date: 08 Jan 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: Choices
So are you saying the angst is just beginning?
Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play
Yes I want in there too! If they don't kick me out for changing my alias lol
It will show up as da wen de or beachlovers
Date: 08 Jan 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 11: Now
Yea he is going home!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Yes what is your FB?
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
What will I do when I catch up...bite my nails I'm sure :-)
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
I love this Emmett!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you do! That seriously makes me smile so big! And that I'm hearing from anyone, because someone told me no emails went out for this story's update, or the Clear and Bright one just before it. It's made for a very sad girl. :( And I may not have a chance to get on my fb to accept anyone until this evening, but it's Chloe Masen, just like here. And if you're interested, I also have a private group/page/whatever you call it where I sometimes post special things pertaining to my stories. Let me know if you want in there, as well. I know people get mad when you just add them to that stuff.
Thank you for your continued support! xo
Date: 08 Jan 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
I am glad I am not current with this story; I couldn't take the wait along with the sadness. I am such a wimp :-)
Date: 08 Jan 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13: Choices
That was amazing :D I am so happy for the progress they are making together :) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 22 Dec 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 12: Home
Great chapter!! So glad that he is home, even though it is hard on them, they will find a rhythm and everything will work out, I am sure of it! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 18 Dec 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Home
Ah but she does have his unwavering love and devotion and that's all that really matters.
I adore this story and I'm so glad Edwards home.
Date: 17 Dec 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Home
Edward is so loving in this story. He cherishes Bella so much.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 12: Home
You are doing a great job with this one. Keep going
Date: 14 Dec 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 12: Home
OH wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I really cannot wait to see what happens next :) I know they will make it through the hard times; sometimes we have to put up with the rain to see the rainbow :D
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
Is it ok if I keep asking for a HEA?
Date: 14 Dec 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
Awe hell your sucking me again! To heavy angst Fuck! I will stay way behind on this one because I am overwhelmed in RL right now. But you also are a HEA girl Right?
Date: 01 Dec 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: Now
Loved all the updates now that I've caught up! Edward should thank the heavens that he has people that love and care about him so much! I am just glad that he finally got his head out of his ass and realizes that he needs to be home on his own, with the help of Tyler making him take a good, hard look at the truth!
I'll be anxiously awaiting the next update!
peach
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: Now
Emmett better get to Edward asap and safely. We don't need anymore accidents. Bella better get that house set up for Edward and fast.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 11: Now
Yay.....he's coming home!!!!!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 11: Now
amazing!!! FINALLY he is going to get out of there! :) and I love that Esme sort of redeemed herself! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now
OH wow, that was amazing :D I really cannot wait for more!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now
God that was perfect. I wonder if Tyler will come for the ride. Edward is finally taking back control of his life. He never should of listen to the people that told him he had to be there. He has the resources to do it from home, he's lucky in that way. Plus he has The best nurse and cheerleader there in Bella. Between Emmett and Tyler they will get him back where he's meant to be.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now
Amazing story! I am hooked!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now
:) he's coming home! Hopefully to heal.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 11: Now
I am so glad he is going home where he needs to be! Please update soon!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
finally getting ot the update from back when ... looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
:)
Date: 27 Oct 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Great chapter. Poor Edward.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Bella needs to look into outpatient rehab. This place he is in sounds horrible. Edward sounds like he is getting more depressed.
Date: 23 Oct 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
I will wait for ever for this story because it is worth the wait.
Bella has to get him out of there. They can afford the kind of care he needs. That type of care may work for some, but it's not right for them. Bella can be absent during the therapy sessions, Edward can fight without her watching. But once that's done they can regroup together. I hope she gets him out.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Glad to see an update! No excuses needed. We all have real lives that interfer with what we'd rather be doing. Please share your super secret place on fb.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Hurry, Bella, and get him out of that place and back home! You can get help to take care of him there, and maybe then it won't be so easy for depression to overwhelm him. It sounds like you're thinking about it...so do it!
Thanks for continuing this story whenever you can. Your readers are still here!
Date: 20 Oct 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Amazing! Poor Edward, he is dealing with so much :(
So glad that you are still writing, sometime RL just gets crazy!
would love to see that FB page if you want to share... I am Kate McCarty-Lutz :) you can find me!
Excited to read more when you can write some more and update again :)
-Kate
Date: 20 Oct 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Oh wow, that was amazing! I know they can move on from this, Bella won't let him stay in this moment. I cannot wait for more! Just curious, are you going to show their life before they got married? Maybe an outtake at the end showing their relationship. Loved it!
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
Bless their hearts. It will be a difficult road ahead but they can get through it. Will Edward ever be able to walk again or at least be able to make love to his wife? I think that is what bothers him the most. While making love is wonderful it isn't everything and their are other things he can do to please her. She just wants him in bed beside her and to hold her. Please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken
heartbreaking........
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
:)
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
The females in Edward's family are real bitches. No wonder Edward was so attracted to Bella's sweetness. Emmett is such a good friend to Bella and Edward. Edward needs to talk to the doctor's about his problem.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
I'm done feeling sorry for Edward. And it's time he stops feeling sorry for himself. Because no matter what the outcome Bella will be there. Not out of duty or loyalty but because she can't be anywhere else.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
OH WOW...SO amazing! I really loved this, and cannot wait to see what happens next!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
They are both strong people. They will need that to keep fighting to get through this. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
Wonderful chapter. I loved the glimpse into their first meeting and their first date.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9: Questions and Answers
Great chapter... gah wanna just slap Rose.... but oh well... Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
I hope that they can keep the faith while they are apart. And I can't wait to see the smug look that Edward is going to get to give mike newton when Bella walks in week after week to her husband. And when he leaves there either on legs or wheels we know that they will do it together.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
That doesn't matter. Even if he is never able to get a erection again it won't matter. They can still have it all, the can still have kids if they want, but what is most important is that they will still have each other.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
It was inevitable that Bella was going to break. no one can be that strong all the time. I'm sure she would of held it together longer if he didn't force her from his side, but they will get through it. Their love is that strong.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
I am so proud of how strong Bella really is. She is a amazing person.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
Edward and Bella love each other so much. This being apart is hard on both of them. Edward just needs to pop Mike. He still can use his arms. The people who run that place need to get rid of Mike or at least don't let him talk to the new patients. Emmett is such a good friend.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
(:
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
:)
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
:)
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
Edward has enough of an uphill battle to get through this. He doesn't need other patients in there with him trying to mess with his head.
I feel so bad for what Emmett has been through. Rose is such a bitch. She doesn't deserve Emmett.
Edward and Bella just have to keep their faith and keep praying and no matter what happens they will make it through this together. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
will edward ever get better?
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
looking forward to more
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
wow :( So hard for them.... So happy that she has Emmett there on the outside to help her. Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
This fic is so sad, I always find have tears running down my face whilst reading a chapter. I just hope they have some better news soon xx
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 8: Between All and Nothing
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I think I know how the sentence ends (that you started at the end) ;). One little thing, here, "The life I share with my wife, who is, and is my rescue ship", doesn't make sense. Saying "is" twice is weird. I think the first "is" should be "was" :D
Author's Response:
First of all, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Ans as to the 'is' you mention... the first is means his life. "The life I share with my wife, who IS, ... " Maybe it wasn't as clear to read as I thought when I wrote it. ;)
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
loved the update looking forward to more
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
Edward needs to have hope. They are doing great things with spinal therapy and research. But most of all he has Bella's love. That is what she craves most of all. They can buy toys, pumps, etc to show physical love. That is the easy part. They have true love which is the hardest part because you can't buy it. They just have to stay together.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
I hope you're blessed with a new laptop soon or a resurrection of your old one. Until then I'll just reread and savour what's here.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
OH WOW...SO amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what happens next! I am so sorry about your laptop, but I will be patient about it, because I completely understand :D
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
I'll still be here when you come back.. Come back soon...we need to know what happens to Edward...... xo
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
First, I just want to say that I love this story. It's awesome, and heartbreaking, and inspiring, and a bunch of other things that don't have words.
And I'm sorry about your laptop :-( I had a computer destroyed last year, and it sucks, especially when you have such personal stories hidden away on there. I hope you get to keep updating but completely understand if you need to put things on hold for awhile. Good luck!
Kit
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Sorry
Great chapter... so heartbreaking for both of them...:(
Sorry about your computer :( That sucks, hope that you will be able to be back up as soon as you can!
-Kate
Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
Great story. I hope that you will be able to add another chapter soon.
Date: 29 May 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
Edward trying to be protective of Bella is backfiring. He is hurting her by not being honest with what is going on with his body and his feelings. I think Bella is worried about her place in his changed life. Will he still want her? His family doesn't like her and lately he acts like he doesn't want her around.
Date: 26 May 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
so hard for them :(
Date: 26 May 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
OH WOW...that was amazing! I really hope they find Bella soon! I cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
God, this chapter was so heartwrenching at the end. It's good he could laugh and not feel threatened by the photo. Bella was overreacting a bit, but I understand how they both feel. Going thru something like this emotions are rocky on both sides and a moehill can become a mountain.
Date: 26 May 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 6: Footsteps
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
Unfortunately so many people who love us can't handle the tough stuff. My in-laws can't deal with their son's (my husband) disability either. It's been 16 years and she's still terrifed I'm going to divorce him one day and she'll have to care for him. We'll be married 29 years this summer. If I haven't left by now, I don't see why I would in the future.
Date: 07 May 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
I am so proud of Bella for standing up for Edward. The essence of Edward is not his legs. He is still Edward and his mom should still love him. He is more than baseball. Bella loves all of him. She is happy that he is alive and that the essence of Edward is still there. He could have been alive, but be mentally damaged, where he wasn't his true self. He could have just died. Bella realized she has been blessed because she still has Edward.
Date: 07 May 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
looking forward to more
Date: 07 May 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
OH wow, so intense! But, I still loved it! I really am so glad Bella is sticking by him! YAY!!
Date: 07 May 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
wow! Great chapter... big blow up there... hopefully Esme will be able to make peace with her fears and put them aside to support her son.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 07 May 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
oh lordy...she has a fight on her hands, and she is very right too. Going to be hard when others are fighting against her. Even Edward...thats where this is going isn't it?
Date: 07 May 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: Faith
Bella is a rock and I know the emotions are running high, but for Esme to say she would leave him. UGGG, I would have slapt her too.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
That was heartbreaking and encouraging all at the same time. The love and devotion it took for Bella to hold it together like that is amazing. Edward is a very lucky man indeed to have a women like Bella around.
I really love this story. Not sure if I have mentioned that yet.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds
God these two are in deep. I'm with Rosalie I want what they have.
I can feel the drama coming.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped
Just as good as the first. I enjoyed the mix of smut and actual story. You have a really goOd mix going.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play
Wow. If that is any indication of how this story is going to be I may need a cold shower after each one. Lol
Date: 24 Apr 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
amazing story so far :( (and personally I don't care to read all the medical jargon.... I don't understand half of it anyway!) So I applaud you for just telling their story the way you choose to! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 20 Apr 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
This sounds like it is going to be a tear jerker.
Date: 19 Apr 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
Already breaking my heart
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
I'm looking forward to seeing how E/B deal with the unexpected change in their life. My husband became fully disabled 16 years ago. I went from being a stay-at-home mom with 3 small girls (the youngest was 2) to being wife, mother, breadwinner, advocate, and whatever else was needed to take charge of our life. I jokingly call myself a widow...I just didn't get to bury a body because the shell of the man I married still lives in my house.
Date: 19 Apr 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Prayers
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I hope that Edward and Bella will make it! Heck, I know they will!
Date: 23 Mar 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds
Do I sense the approach of impending doom?
Date: 23 Mar 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play
Just found story and it sounds so good.