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Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds

I'm nervous what the angst will be and how it will affect them...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I hope the angst doesn't last very long and that there is a HEA!  Cannot wait :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

Gah, that was amazing!  Wonder how old they are, just curious :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

Wow, this sounds great so far!  I cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 3: Clouds

looking forward to more

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

love this

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

I'm so glad E doesn't cheat. I read that in someones review and it worried me.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

:)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

So they're happily married...you said Edward doesn't cheat...so...more please!

Reviewer: Emma Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 2: Whipped and Worshiped

Looking forward to more :D Can't wait to find out whats going to happen :D

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

i like it

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

Dbl. play, trust, he leaves to live dream that's not her, she waits for his return, angsty--i gotta a few guesses. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

Why would ANYONE possibly want to ruin that? I'll never understand men.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

Wow, that was really hot!  I'm trying to figure out what the plot of this will be...I'm a little worried about the angst, the OOC, the weird little vibe I'm afraid of.  I mean, he's a professional athlete, right?  He's tempted all the time, right?   Is there going to be cheating?  

I really want to read more, though, so bring it on!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Double Play

     Oh Please write some more!!!!!!!!!   Love it!  

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