[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ok she is really pregnant with Edward. Second, that girl there withEdward did prensava .... I put a doubt in Bella's little head .... and he, too, because they have not returned to Bella? Because of a stalled car? calls a mechanic
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think this girl is there with Edward wanting to take the place of Bella.Edward has to give a more convincing had it. And be careful with her because he is giving many facts of his life for her.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Is that right? Bella is pregnant?
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow at last he goes back to her. finally took
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
She can not see that he left his soul with her?
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
He also has to wait until she asks for it back because? if he really loves her he comes back and ready for it.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is ruining their relationship by force. She loves him and he loves it and everyone in the family want him back because shemused that he has to make something that is striking that he does not want??
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
Because she feels so much miss him he has to stop being altruisticand do ask that everyone is talking back to Edward
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can not understand Bella .... I begin to think she is masochism
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
It's so hard to say "I love you" or "miss"?
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
You missed the name of the story (laughs) should be called "Nowhere"
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
he really was ....... as ......... and now they will live away from each other?
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
she'll even have it though and see it go ..... it will not go
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Tense over .... I'll keep reading
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hello. I think you are doing a great job writing this story. I hope everything works out with B&E. I also hope you update again today. Keep those chapters coming chapters coming and
I promise to send rating or a review or both.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
It is heart wrenching and it makes me not feel like saying anything because it's such a little dose and it leaves me bummed and I have to wait just to get more bummed.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
I like the story very much. I have worries about 'right now' girl. Not worried about Edward but circumstances and misunderstanding and misinterpretations. At first I thought Bella would go there the same time he came here and they would miss each other to surprise each other and right now girl would say some misleading things that would perpetuate the problem. But now I see car trouble initiating a situation but again somehow right now girl creating a misunderstanding. I would hate it but I fear it will happen.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
So FFn is a major fail so I am reading this over here.....and all I can say if FINALLY HE IS COMING HOME!!!
I still don't know what dream it is he was supposed to be chasing....was it a music career?? Doesn't matter because he needs his girl and Carlisle is right, when Charlie goes she is going to need Edward more than she realizes and it's his right to choose to be there for her.
So glad he is fnally mannig up!!
Date: 20 Mar 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really love this :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!