[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
uhhhh who the hell is jinx :DDDDDD
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww! She sang for Edwurr... <3
PIE was wondering how you'd get Alice into the mix, and Jasper! You dog, you!
"Bella looked at all three men, wearing identical hostile expressions. She reached over and smacked Jasper on the back of the head.
"Ow!""
Bwahahahahahaha! Love Bella! Don't mess with her guys. Shell mess you up!
Tanya keeps digging herself further down. Good place for her!
Love this! Thanks for the update when you have editing to do.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'd really like a house to fall on Tanya...I'm just sayin...
Date: 30 Apr 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
I've been following both versions of this story and I think I like this one better, solely because it's Bella/Edward/Jacob. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
If she is pregnant, its not Edwards! HA! I hope she gets laughed out of the office and then loses the house the first day by opening her mouth! :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
"Need a cigar?" oh yeah, he knows what happend and it seems he is fine with it.
I'm amazed by Esme!!
Oh noooo, she can't be pregnant! This must be a lie!!! Poor Edward. Hmm, when I remember right, they didn't have much of a sexlife before Tanja ended the engagement.
Thank you so much for your quick updates, love this story, very unique :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
First off, I love the nod to 2001: A Space Odyssey!
Apparently a small potato put in a microwave for 10 minutes will also erupt into flames. Or so my friend tells me. I've not tried this at home.
Edward is accepting of Bella and Jake having relations, but I'm looking forward to their discussion of the situation. It's a no-brainier for Bella, but not for them in their lives as they've been raised. There has to be some kind of talk.
Who/what DOESN'T Esme know?!
Pregnant? <_<
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, Esme is speechless! I love it, imiagining super-posh Esme, barely tolerating Jacob and Rosalie(!), but immediately being charmed by her new daughter-in-law!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my...
That devious wench.
No way it's his.
Well done! I realized I haven't reviewed in a while, I'm sorry. I've been following both stories. You really are amazingly talented.
Date: 29 Apr 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is such a great story with quite the unique spin on it! I am really enjoying it and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
thats a huge cliffhanger :L ....
loving ths story lots and lots and lots !!!
Date: 28 Apr 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
so intersesting to see the differences between both stories... thou I am more a E/B fan... this one is good to read too... wonder where your going to take the three of them...
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
now that last sentence shocked me.
Look Jacob can love Bella and not sleep with her. That is Edwards wife. So his position is that of a brother or best friend. Now that sounds so close to Twilight I can no be shocked I said that.
I knew that Tanya would be there. She was not through fleecing the golden goose. Poor little gold digger.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved this visual. "
"...It coughed and shook like an elderly dog trying to dry its fur. Bella gave a little squeal of delight at the bouncing."
This made me laugh big time.""More!" Bella cried and clapped her hands. "More!"
"Here, Bella, look at the naked girls," Edward said and handed her the Playboy."
Love this SFM. Tankoo for all your time and effort, Lissa!
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
I adore the relationships among E/B/J, especially Edward and Jacob. It's one of the sweetest friendships I've seen in print.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
ahhh rosilies a jelous biatchh :)
loving edward/bella/jake ;D
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love that we got to hear more from Bella. Also liking that Jake isn't involved with her just yet, even if Edward would accept it. I'm really not sure what Rose was hoping to accomplish in her jealousy, but I guess we all do silly sometimes.
Poor Edward. Tanya was a selfish bitch.
Oooh! I can't wait to see if Bella is the one with a special destiny and how that will be fulfilled. Hmmm, is Alice also a Fae?
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! I'm gonna go to fanfiction though, cuz I LOVE E/B!
Date: 20 Apr 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
So enjoying this story. A big fan of yours always and so nice to see a new story! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
"A creature stranger than he was. How remarkable"
Aw... Poor Edward! What a sad childhood and life he's had.
""Bella zzzzt," she replied, and glared at the power outlet. "Not okay.""
LOL! LOL! LOL!
I do like this Jacob. How very strange. Thank goodness Bella and Edward finally got their freak on!Date: 20 Apr 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
I know you have two versions. I just don't understand Why. I am reading this because this is where you started..
Author's Response:
I have a explanation of why I decided to do it this way on my blog.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another mythical creature, how intriguing. Bella has taken the lead in order to satisfy her cuddle needs. They fit so well together, all three. All is new for her, so much to explore *lol*
Thank you for continuing the original version :-)
Date: 17 Apr 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
I had to laugh about the outlet.. Just like a child.
Get the child protective devices for the outlets. LMAO
Date: 17 Apr 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ohhhh so they are different versions!!!! Now im really excited I didnt notice til this time around....(I feel really slow now :()
Date: 17 Apr 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ahhhh our guys have fallen haven't they. Love this story and love all the quick updates! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 16 Apr 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
this version is interesting... like seeing the difference between both stories.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story. I'm still following it on FFn, but I have to say I'm liking the triangle version a little better. You are doing an awesome job!
Date: 16 Apr 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward. Determined to be noble for his friend.
So, I was wondering about this:
"Then, she had lost her Chosen to the sugar-blood sickness and it felt as though her heart had died with him."
Her Chosen, eh? One of her priests who got to get and give "special cuddles"? (Waggles eyebrows) it must have been a helluva thing for a vamp to lose someone to diabetes.
Author's Response:
*grin* Right. The "Chosen" were priests that she took as lovers. (And I had wondered if people would understand what ailment he had. Thanks!)
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Excited to read the original..very curious how you will do the whole e/b/j
Date: 16 Apr 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ooooh! A Fae as well? I like it, I like it! (Should I mention he immediately reminded me of a certain cherub?)
I also like how attached the boys are to Bella and vice versa.
Yay for having Rosalie around! W00t for glamour usage.
I'm not used to following stories here, but follow here I must. I love this story and can't wait till you post more. If I weren't such a longtime follower of fic, the ménage aspect might have squicked me out at first, but I truly like the relationship the guys have already, so canon "rules" don't come into play for me.
As usual, every update leaves me looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm so grateful that you're following your instincts and posting your original story here. It's so good and feels much more organic to the situation and the characters. I've been reading both, but am starting to think that I may just stick to this one. The way you describe the dynamic among the three of them here just elevates the story to a different level, maybe even a different dimension. :)
For one thing, it delves so much more deeply into the relationship between Jacob and Edward, which has such a sweetness to it. You get the feeling that Bella is like the missing piece to at once complete, and spark, the circuit.
I'm so sorry that you felt so much pressure to diverge from your vision, but I can completely understand the need to avoid the stress. Honestly, I can't help but feel a bit sorry for those who are only reading the version on FF, but to each her own. Meanwhile, I'm happily eating this up!
Thank you so much for writing.
Author's Response:
That is so very kind of you to say. Thank you.
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have been so curious about this version since I finished the sixth chapter of E/B story. It´s really great that with minimal changes this story feels completely different. One different scene, a few different reactions and viola! we have E/B/J... Although I prefer the E/B version, I like this one, too. I am very curious and impatient to see what happens next. In both stories.;)
K. (MrsPuddle on ff.net)
PS: her drinking their blood is sooooooo hot=)
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
I just noticed that you changed the title of this story on FF.net, and after reading your author note at the bottom so that I know you post the original version here...Guess I'll keep reading both versions :)
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
This chapter left me wondering. Perhaps she being Bella will be better off with Shakob. Since he is obviously in tune with her. Edward is wierd. Then of course as soon as gold digging Tanya gets Edward on her continent she will be throwing fits and he will give in after all Shakob is better with Bella.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is too funny! Thanks for this wonderful story! Cheri
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
really enjoying this story ... hope one of the boys dosent get kicked out of the trio :)
Date: 10 Apr 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just found your story. I am loving it. so totally different from anything that I have read before. Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOVE this story so much I had to review on this site as well!!!! It's funny how ur not getting many reviews on this site but u have nearly 500 on the other...How curious...Anywayz I'm bursting with anticipation for more!!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting story.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
REALLY like this story! Very unique and interesting. Looking forward to more. Thank you - Cheri
Date: 06 Apr 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, boy. What an ending! Can't wait to see what is next! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 06 Apr 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
so she will be Edward's wife. LOL
Date: 06 Apr 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
now wouldn't this be odd to come into the "future" so to speak and not step each new invention as it came. She has come from mummies into this land. A vampire! well well
Author's Response:
I've always wondered what it must ahve been like for people born in 1900... To grow up riding in horse-drawn buggies, and then see a man walk on the moon 60 yesrs later.
That had to be incredible.
Date: 06 Apr 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
ut oh. Indiana Cullen is it? Well you have woken up the Goddess Bellastone. LOL
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I know I'm repeating myself, but I am so in love with your story! I'm having such a blast reading it! You are a really good storyteller, and I love your writing style too. I am really into your main characters; they are great, and I love them more as I read along. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Thanks so much for writing! I look forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Hello,
That's so sweet! Thank you.
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is so good; I love it! I wonder what the effects from Bella's bite will be on the guys. I also wonder if they'll both fall in love with her, and which one she would choose, if not both. If it's one of them I hope it's Edward; I can't bare to read a story where Bella and Jake are together. I can't wait for her to learn english so I can know what she is thinking. I suppose they'll keep her at Edward's home, but will vapid Tanya still be there; I hope not. If Lauren finds Jake's watch, he'll be in deep *hit. Maybe Bella still has it. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Hello,
I have the answer to the relationship question and the traits of my version of vampires on my blog if you'd like to know. The reason why I did this is because I didn't want people to get invested in the story if it wasn't going to be something they enjoyed.
Lissa
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love your story already! I can't wait to see what happens next! =) Kelly
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Lissa
Date: 03 Apr 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful story, can't wait to see where it goes. Love your descrptions with everything that she is trying to understand! Thank you - Cheri
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you. I hope you'll enjoy it!
Lissa
Date: 03 Apr 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, as good as all your other stories, without a doubt. Can't wait to hit 'next' Thank you - Cheri
Author's Response:
Hello,
Thank you! That's so kind of you to say.
Lissa