Date: 17 May 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
ok so english 101 never start a sentence with "hello my name is". try to keep "i" out of sentences as much as possible. doing these two things will entice a reader to be even more drawn into your story; also it may challege you to come up with more indepth ways of writing. i do hope you take this adavice constructively and not matiously.