Date: 29 Apr 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 37
Yes!!!!!!!!! So happy for them!! Happy ever after!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2012 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so proud for Bella to defend Edward.
She found an excuse to get away from Alex.
OMG! B and E are so hot together.
Thanks
Date: 28 Apr 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
I loved this story......so glad they both got their happy ever after ;-)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward having more than one night with Tania, I hope she nãopersega Bella.
I think it is so hot Bella and Edward.
Date: 28 Apr 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
I know her parents are going to blame her for what happened. Should she have cheated on Alex? No, but It's thier fault for pushing her to marrry him just so the 2 companies can merge. They never cared about what she wanted only what they wanted. I love Monty, he really does love and care about her. I know Edward is never going to let them go now. I'm just waiting for Alex to go away.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really think Bella and Jacob so hot , but so wrong for her to use it that way.
I think Bella will learn a lesson from Edward, and Edward learn a lesson from Bella.
The two are a bit presumptuous.
I loved your story.
Date: 28 Apr 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
I hope they can keep their happy ever after.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
this is sooo not going to go well...
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
ed is sweet!!! bella you are going to hurt him bad... i know it!!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
bella you are soo dumb!!! you are going to hurt ed and i am going to be pissed at you!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
interesting twist...
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh bella you are playing with fire how appropriate of a title. this isn't going to be one night. And you think ed is a man-whore it hink you are too look how many guys you have on the hook: jacob, alex, ed. I mean really you did jacob in his office... you have no respect for yourself!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
bella is a brat... yuk... oh ed what is up with that.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
bella you are playing a very dangerous game!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
i checked this story on FF and it's complete awesome gonna read the rest of chapters:)
Date: 27 Apr 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
open mouth insert foot bella... dumb...
Date: 27 Apr 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
read your other story on FF and loved it. So i saw this here and jumped on it. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
omg!!!! i'm so excited and i want more!!! i love it:)
Date: 27 Apr 2012 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
ughh Bella is so wrong!!! Edward loves you stupid cow!!! i hope she'll realize that soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
love it! Excite is what makes a story good!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Is she pregnant? I hope not bc then she won't know who the father is. Yes Bella Edward loves you and you love him. It is wrong to wish that Alex dies and goes away? lol
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
ughh girl you breaking my heart i swear!!! but i'm sure happy times will come!! i can't wait:D
Date: 26 Apr 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 21
you go Edward!!! go after her!!!
Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Come on! So close...but yet so far! I love this! Can't wait for the next update
Date: 26 Apr 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor, poor Edward. I hope Bella realizes what a horrible person she is married to. I know u said this is a HEA, so I will try to be patient.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Tis is so sad.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved hearing Edward's side-I am not sure how I want this to go-Bella will be so pissed if she finds out about Jane-Great story!
Date: 25 Apr 2012 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
i fucking love this story!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that :) Thanks
Bee xx
Date: 25 Apr 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh boy! Alex's controlling side is starting to come out. I'm sure he's not going to like Bella walking away from him. I hope he doesn't start hurting her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella doesn't have a clue at just how controlling he can be!
Thanks for the review :)
Bee xx
Date: 24 Apr 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella a lonely married woman. Sigh.
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hmmm, if I had to venture a guess, Alex had Edward beaten to a pulp to leave Bella alone, and the only way he wouldn't ruin his record deal which would also ruin his friends lives, would be if he made her hate him.
Author's Response:
You are very perceptive, you might just be right :)
Thanks for the review
Bee xx
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
wow did not expect that-but I can see the New Moon side here-is he just doing it cuz he thinks it will be better for her?.....
Date: 21 Apr 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aaaawwww man.........Bella isn't really going to go through with marrying Alex, is she?
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Noooooooooooo! This cannot be happening! Fix it! Wake up Edward and claim what you know you want...Bella...wake the fuck up! Love it!
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well somethings going on here. I think Alex had something to do with the attack on Edward and they told him to stay away from her.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
ohhh love the chappy and well as long as there is Edward hotness i am up for any fic ride you are taking us on.
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hello,
I just started reading this stroy recently and I'm totally taken by this completely loving/devoted version of Edward and frustrating yet wonderful Bella. I think you're an amazing writer and can't wait to read more.
p.s. the song Breakeven by The Script seems to fit Edward's perspective very well, check it out if you don't already know the song :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I am happy to hear you are enjoying my story:)
I know the song and you are right it does fit very well.
Bee xx
Date: 21 Apr 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
So sad.........they need to be together.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
This story is really good. I'm hoping it ends happy with E & B together.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I can promise it does have a HEA, but they have quite a way to go to get there ;)
Date: 20 Apr 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is so nice of Bella to do this fo Edward.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
My heart is freaking breaking in half. Bella's parents are so controlling and unbelievable. I wish she would tell them to take a hike. Please tell me this is a HEA?
Author's Response:
This story does have a HEA, thats all I write :)
Date: 19 Apr 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
god you are breaking my fragile heart
Date: 19 Apr 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story!! I don't understrand Bella, if she cares do much about Edward, then it wouldn't matter if he has money or not. Why is she so set on pleasing her parents? Marrying a man you don't love to make eveyone else happy is sooo wrong. Grow up Bella, stand up for what you want and don't let anyone tell you what to do. They should just run off and get married. lol
Date: 16 Apr 2012 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is hot and addicting.
I love it.
Date: 16 Apr 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Just loving this story. Awesome job
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nothing wrong with a bit of a challenge...Nice story!! Love them barwards!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
OK, I am really confused. Is Bella mad because Edward was doing what she wanted to do?
Author's Response:
She is mad because she thinks he has double standards. She knows telling him 'she'd pay him' was wrong, but he appears to let women use him like a toy anyway, so can't understand why he was so pissed with her.
Yeah, the both have issues :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very promising! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 14 Apr 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really loving this story so far...I can't wait to find out more about Edward and how he finally gets his chance with Bella!
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good stuff!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
She is truly sick!
Author's Response:
Yeah I didn't write a typical Bella in this one, she is a bit of a stubborn spolit brat to be honest, but Edward will work on her though! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the story and the sexual tension is HOT. I think that is what makes a story even better is the chase but once they do find each other is pretty good too! Thanks for the chapters back to back. I'm really looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Put her foot in and twisted. LOL
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yea, so not a good thing to mess with one man and wanting another.... hum..... this is good though.... seriously good
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
LOL! Shaking my head at Bella! Holy Cow did she truly utter those words to that hot man meat! I will "Pay YOU" if you lose your job? Holy Crow!~~~~
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well another Hold Onto Our Hearts huh! Your just an incredible author who draws you to the characters. Looking forward to more. Kathy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I was going to wait to post this story, but I thought hell, the story is done so why not :)
I hope you enjoy the rest, it does get pretty crazy in places, but its quite a ride ;)
Bee xx
Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
good story thanks :)
Author's Response:
THANKS! :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Promsing so far!
Date: 12 Apr 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love it, i love it!!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the mext chapter
xoxo
merrybc