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Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 73

Great job with Bella's emotions these last few chapters. 

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 73

I'm glad that she is starting to think of finding her own way out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 73

Poor confused thing

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 73

I don't think its the best idea to go over there alone Bella ..

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 73

Very interesting. I can't help but wonder how she will react to Edward when she finally wakes up. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 73

oh very interesting - soooo love it thanks

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 72

NOPE.  She's stuck without him

Thanks for the update/.  

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 72

I think B just needs time to come to grips with what she has learned.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 72

Bad ass b

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 72

wow, she is very powerful

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 71

poor B, reality is hard to take... a year, whoa.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 72

This is going to kill Edward .....but will Bell feel the loss of him as well?

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 72

pissed a little lol love it

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 72

Awesome!!!!

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 72

Thanks for your update. I hope Bella overcomes this initial refusal to accept what Edward is showing her. She needs to know what is happening to will herself to wake up. I'm looking forward to next chapter.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 72

I hope Bella will be able to settle down and want to talk to Edward again. She is just upset right now. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 71

Well, THAT got a reaction!  Not sure that he should have told her that way, but it needed to happen.

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 71

Hey!! I have not been able to review on my phone so I am finally on my kindle. Don't let the others hate. I love drabble fics. They keep the fiction going! This fic normally starts my mornings.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and enjoying! I actually had the same problem of not being able to review on my phone, but I discovered yesterday that if I uncheck 'use tiny mce' or whatever it is under the review text box, that I can review! Thought I'd pass it on. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 71

Poor confused b

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 71

You don't want my comments.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 71

Oh no, she's not going to let him back in now......

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 71

It's an understandable reaction. She will have to settle down and then she will know it is the truth. I hope Edward can get the connection back soon. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 71

Thank God you update everyday.  I really love this story.  MLD12

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 71

poor bella, time to get back to reality. going to be hard. Happy birthday to your little miracle. sounds like a hard couple of years

Reviewer: robbeeleebabe2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 70

AHHHHHH Please update soon!!! I can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 70

Oooohhhh. Nice progress. 

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 70

Oooohhhhhh.....shame on Edward. ;0

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 70

seriously 

thanks for the update

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 70

maybe she needed to see this to help her get out.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 70

Bella's mind def working.

Reviewer: christine30974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 70

LMAO at the teaser...oh what a show everyone in the room would see if he had been moving as well.

Can't wait to read more. Have a great weekend!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 70

Uh oh.  Good place to end the week.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 69

Since I didn't read this update yesterday, I got to go right to the next chapter!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 70

Another huge step. I hope Bella will stay there and let him help her through this. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 70

I hope Bella believes him and undertands what is going on with her and begins to make an effort to wake up. I like your story and the slow build-up but I can't deny that I'm eagerly waiting for Bella to wake up...

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 70

I hope this won't set her back....

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 70

oh course lol = great chapter thanks have a great weekend

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 69

love it thanks

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 69

Will not call you names, will not call you names................. but fuck, really?

 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: annabell2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 69

Omg living it can't wait tell tomorrow ............ Is it tomorrow yet :))

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 69

Get your man b. Yum

Reviewer: NcCullenGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 69

You're so mean leaving it there! :P But I'll live...you just gave me something to look forward to on the day that my college classes start back up. :D Think you can do some chapters like this when I have my exams too? Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 69

UGGGGG WHY WHY THERE HUH WHY THEREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: vaganski vrh Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 69

You...

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 69

:-)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 69

Love it! :D

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 69

Ooo your being bad.  Love it Love it Love It.    You are such a good writer I hope your children are doing ok.  My thoughts and Prayers are with you and them  MLD12

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 68

ok I like the progress.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 68

I hope the meadow is soothing to her.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 68

Yep the meadow is a good place to start.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 68

Yay, the meadow! Thanks for writing.
Lisa

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 68

I hope being in the meadow will calm her down. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 68

Yay the meadow!!!!!! She'll love it there!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 68

excellent thanks :)

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 67

love the pace of your story. thanks so much :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 68

awww poor B

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 67

Hey, anything is better than going back into the wreck, right?

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 67

great chapter

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 67

thank you for the update.........I wonder what they'll find in Phoenix

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 67

Listen tell those people to hold on. Story is good. And I am reading tpt. Good story...my wee one is 25 months and doesn't eat much. Butloves Mac and cheese plain pasta and cookies hotdogs French fries and mashed potato. That's all!!!!!! And shes23lbs. So that being said...your boy is precious. My next venture is wheat pasta. Wish me luck!!

Reviewer: NcCullenGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 67

Your story is great as is, don't change it! I really look forward to your updates and you did say that they would be 500 words or less, so no one should be able to complain about that. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading. :) You're doing great!

As for a note on this chapter, I'm really glad that Edward is starting to get Bella to tell him things. And I'll never argue about a little bit of lovin between those two. ;) Hope our darling Edward can get her to come out of the car soon!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 67

Glad he's got her talking.

Write for yourself hun. I'm fine.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 67

I can't wait to see what happens! hope he can get her out of the car for good

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 67

This story is absolutely PERFECT the way you are writing it! I wouldn't want you to change anything about the writing, I think it keeps us in suspense and waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, so yeah....it's perfect! This chapter was excellent, I love that they are going to be getting deeper in her mind now, and I can not wait to see the next chapter now!! Take care until then, and anyone that bitches about the posting time really needs a grip on life, you do have a world outside this fanfiction and it doesn't always let us do things when we want them done, see ya soon! Ciao!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 66

great chapter thanks :)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 66

Penetrate      hahahaha

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 66

Such a shame they got embarrassed.  So, are the outside observers getting any hints of what B and E are doing in the dreamworld?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 66

Get her eddie

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 66

great chapter

Reviewer: NcCullenGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 66

Loving the story! Keep up the good work. :)

Reviewer: robbeeleebabe2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 66

AHHH Please update agaon soon!!! You have me on the edge of my seat!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 66

I love that Bella was so excited to see Edward. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 66

Yes they need to keep talking too!

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tired of Cliff Hangers.  Be back in a few days  Love this story  MLD12

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 65

yay - thanks great chapter. have a great weekend

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 65

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 64

poor bella

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 63

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 62

great chapter

Reviewer: EdwardBella27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 61

sweet

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 65

ahh, sweet. she's so happy to see him :)

Reviewer: blve6 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 65

Eppp :D cnt wait for mMonday 

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 65

She was missing him. I can't wait to see what he does to get her to talk to him. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 65

ooooh kisy kissy

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 65

Just reading along.  I have no idea where this going.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 65

I vote for more smooches!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

Great job. The theory is plausible but how does she overcome it?

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 64

tease - lol very interesting thanks :P)

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 64

WILL EDWARD BE BACK FROM HIS HUNTING TRIP WHEN BELLA IS IN THE WHITE ROOM?

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 64

Aliens?  Now there's an interesting theory.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 63

Hmm, I wonder how Bella is blocking Alice's talent.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 64

Cant blame her frustration.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 63

Awww scared alice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 62

Interesting thoughts from them all

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 64

Ask and you shall receive!! :)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 62

Still here.  Thanks for the updates.

Sorry the baby's mishap.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 63

Interesting. Bella has to wake up. The family can't lose the both. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 62

That is what I have been wondering. How do they know which is which. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 63

:-( she sees no future at all??? i hope he can bring her out of her fog

Reviewer: MaddieLovesDuke12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 63

Hey I thought you did excellent being on vacation.  Keep up the good work.  I sure do hope like Alice that nothing happens to Edward & Bella.  Thanks for the story! MLD12

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