Date: 23 Aug 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 73
Great job with Bella's emotions these last few chapters.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 73
I'm glad that she is starting to think of finding her own way out.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 73
Poor confused thing
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 73
I don't think its the best idea to go over there alone Bella ..
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 73
Very interesting. I can't help but wonder how she will react to Edward when she finally wakes up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 73
oh very interesting - soooo love it thanks
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 72
NOPE. She's stuck without him
Thanks for the update/.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 72
I think B just needs time to come to grips with what she has learned.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 72
wow, she is very powerful
Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 71
poor B, reality is hard to take... a year, whoa.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 72
This is going to kill Edward .....but will Bell feel the loss of him as well?
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 72
pissed a little lol love it
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 72
Thanks for your update. I hope Bella overcomes this initial refusal to accept what Edward is showing her. She needs to know what is happening to will herself to wake up. I'm looking forward to next chapter.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 72
I hope Bella will be able to settle down and want to talk to Edward again. She is just upset right now. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 71
Well, THAT got a reaction! Not sure that he should have told her that way, but it needed to happen.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 71
Hey!! I have not been able to review on my phone so I am finally on my kindle. Don't let the others hate. I love drabble fics. They keep the fiction going! This fic normally starts my mornings.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing and enjoying! I actually had the same problem of not being able to review on my phone, but I discovered yesterday that if I uncheck 'use tiny mce' or whatever it is under the review text box, that I can review! Thought I'd pass it on.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 71
Poor confused b
Date: 20 Aug 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 71
You don't want my comments.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 71
Oh no, she's not going to let him back in now......
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 71
It's an understandable reaction. She will have to settle down and then she will know it is the truth. I hope Edward can get the connection back soon. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 71
Thank God you update everyday. I really love this story. MLD12
Date: 20 Aug 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 71
poor bella, time to get back to reality. going to be hard. Happy birthday to your little miracle. sounds like a hard couple of years
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 70
AHHHHHH Please update soon!!! I can't wait!!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 70
Oooohhhh. Nice progress.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 70
Oooohhhhhh.....shame on Edward. ;0
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 70
seriously
thanks for the update
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 70
maybe she needed to see this to help her get out.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 70
Bella's mind def working.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 70
LMAO at the teaser...oh what a show everyone in the room would see if he had been moving as well.
Can't wait to read more. Have a great weekend!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 70
Uh oh. Good place to end the week.
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 69
Since I didn't read this update yesterday, I got to go right to the next chapter!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 70
Another huge step. I hope Bella will stay there and let him help her through this. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope Bella believes him and undertands what is going on with her and begins to make an effort to wake up. I like your story and the slow build-up but I can't deny that I'm eagerly waiting for Bella to wake up...
Date: 17 Aug 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 70
I hope this won't set her back....
Date: 17 Aug 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 70
oh course lol = great chapter thanks have a great weekend
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 69
Will not call you names, will not call you names................. but fuck, really?
Thanks for the update.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 69
Omg living it can't wait tell tomorrow ............ Is it tomorrow yet :))
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 69
Get your man b. Yum
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 69
You're so mean leaving it there! :P But I'll live...you just gave me something to look forward to on the day that my college classes start back up. :D Think you can do some chapters like this when I have my exams too? Keep up the good work!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 69
UGGGGG WHY WHY THERE HUH WHY THEREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 69
Love it! :D
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 69
Ooo your being bad. Love it Love it Love It. You are such a good writer I hope your children are doing ok. My thoughts and Prayers are with you and them MLD12
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 68
ok I like the progress.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 68
I hope the meadow is soothing to her.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 68
Yep the meadow is a good place to start.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 68
Yay, the meadow! Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 68
I hope being in the meadow will calm her down. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 68
Yay the meadow!!!!!! She'll love it there!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 68
excellent thanks :)
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 67
love the pace of your story. thanks so much :)
Date: 15 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 67
Hey, anything is better than going back into the wreck, right?
Date: 15 Aug 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 67
great chapter
Date: 14 Aug 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 67
thank you for the update.........I wonder what they'll find in Phoenix
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 67
Listen tell those people to hold on. Story is good. And I am reading tpt. Good story...my wee one is 25 months and doesn't eat much. Butloves Mac and cheese plain pasta and cookies hotdogs French fries and mashed potato. That's all!!!!!! And shes23lbs. So that being said...your boy is precious. My next venture is wheat pasta. Wish me luck!!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 67
Your story is great as is, don't change it! I really look forward to your updates and you did say that they would be 500 words or less, so no one should be able to complain about that. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading. :) You're doing great!
As for a note on this chapter, I'm really glad that Edward is starting to get Bella to tell him things. And I'll never argue about a little bit of lovin between those two. ;) Hope our darling Edward can get her to come out of the car soon!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 67
Glad he's got her talking.
Write for yourself hun. I'm fine.
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 67
I can't wait to see what happens! hope he can get her out of the car for good
Date: 14 Aug 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 67
This story is absolutely PERFECT the way you are writing it! I wouldn't want you to change anything about the writing, I think it keeps us in suspense and waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, so yeah....it's perfect! This chapter was excellent, I love that they are going to be getting deeper in her mind now, and I can not wait to see the next chapter now!! Take care until then, and anyone that bitches about the posting time really needs a grip on life, you do have a world outside this fanfiction and it doesn't always let us do things when we want them done, see ya soon! Ciao!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 66
great chapter thanks :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 66
Penetrate hahahaha
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 66
Such a shame they got embarrassed. So, are the outside observers getting any hints of what B and E are doing in the dreamworld?
Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 66
great chapter
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 66
Loving the story! Keep up the good work. :)
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 66
AHHH Please update agaon soon!!! You have me on the edge of my seat!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 66
I love that Bella was so excited to see Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 66
Yes they need to keep talking too!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 66
Tired of Cliff Hangers. Be back in a few days Love this story MLD12
Date: 12 Aug 2012 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 65
yay - thanks great chapter. have a great weekend
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 65
great chapter
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 64
poor bella
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 63
great chapter
Date: 11 Aug 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 62
great chapter
Date: 11 Aug 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 65
ahh, sweet. she's so happy to see him :)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 65
Eppp :D cnt wait for mMonday
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 65
She was missing him. I can't wait to see what he does to get her to talk to him. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 65
ooooh kisy kissy
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 65
Just reading along. I have no idea where this going.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 65
I vote for more smooches!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64
Great job. The theory is plausible but how does she overcome it?
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 64
tease - lol very interesting thanks :P)
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 64
WILL EDWARD BE BACK FROM HIS HUNTING TRIP WHEN BELLA IS IN THE WHITE ROOM?
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 64
Aliens? Now there's an interesting theory.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 63
Hmm, I wonder how Bella is blocking Alice's talent.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 64
Cant blame her frustration.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 63
Awww scared alice
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 62
Interesting thoughts from them all
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 64
Ask and you shall receive!! :)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 62
Still here. Thanks for the updates.
Sorry the baby's mishap.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 63
Interesting. Bella has to wake up. The family can't lose the both. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 62
That is what I have been wondering. How do they know which is which. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 63
:-( she sees no future at all??? i hope he can bring her out of her fog
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 63
Hey I thought you did excellent being on vacation. Keep up the good work. I sure do hope like Alice that nothing happens to Edward & Bella. Thanks for the story! MLD12