Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 63
great chapter thanks
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 62
love it great thanks ;)
Date: 09 Aug 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 63
Oh dear. That is not good. Hopefully it is not bad news that she can't see them
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 63
Aaawwww.....Poor Alice. She sounds so afraid that she is going to loose her brother. Let's hope not.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 62
Just when we have one question answered, we have more questions!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 62
Yaaaa....some progress right?
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 61
awesome thanks :)
Date: 08 Aug 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 61
Poor Bella.......Hope Edward can wake her up for real soon.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 61
:( damn, he;s gone again!
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 61
They both have to keep fighting to get her through this. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 61
Well, that didn't work like Edward hoped.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 61
awww she fell asleep in his arms.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
I woke up yesterday and today and there was no update. I hope you are well and you made it home safely from your vacation!!! Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for writing. Lisa
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 60
Awww, next one please! too good to stop here!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 60
That's a good way to keep their connection.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 60
Great updates this week. Enjoy your trip.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 60
great chapter so sweet
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 60
Awwwww for first kiss
Date: 03 Aug 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 60
Nice kiss. I WOULDN'T COME BACK TO REALITY.
Have a great time in the mid-west.
Thanks for updating.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 60
He did it. He kept her with him. This seems loke a huge step! Great job...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 60
Good quick thinking Edward !
Date: 03 Aug 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 60
yay finally a kiss. That would make anyone stay lol. Hopefully she will be able to open up a bit more. Tease to leave it there for the week. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 03 Aug 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 59
great chapter thanks :)
Date: 02 Aug 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 59
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Aug 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 59
Awe poor b and her shaky memories
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 59
Oops. Guess that wasn't such a good idea. Go on and trust him, Bella!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 58
great thanks - have a blast :)
Date: 02 Aug 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 58
I wonder why Edward doesn't guess that Bella is stuck in the car in her mind?
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 58
lol...temper, temper Bella :)
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 58
I love Bella explaining about where she is from. I love it! Great job...thanks!!! I hope you have a great time while you are here in Kansas! :)
Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 58
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 58
literally laughed out loud at the one line. thanks
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 57
Y'all have tons of fun. I'll wait for Edward today. Never been to Memphis and I love Elvis.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 57
great chapter
Date: 31 Jul 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 57
Amazing keep going girl n good luck on vacation :D
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 57
Maybe Edward's touch is helping Bella's body heal?
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 57
yea hes back!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 57
So when she sleeps he is able to get through her shield? I can't wait for them to talk more. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 57
yay - awesome that will make edwards day getting that reception. perfect have an awesome trip :) :) :)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 56
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 56
thank you for the update.....Edward is so stubborn..........I hope he isn't going to be stuck in Bella mind....since her shield is so strong
Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 56
Just wanted to drop you a note telling you how I'm enjoying the story. :) Keep up the good work!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 56
go eddie link up with your girl
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 56
Happy to be back in his bubble again :-)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 56
So he is inside her shield again. Great job...thanks!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 56
very intersting thanks
Date: 28 Jul 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 55
poor eddie so frustrated
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 55
Poor Edward. Good thing Eleazar was able to keep him from making Charlie suspicious.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 55
So, B's progressing :) Thats good.. I wonder how'd it be if she finally wake up ..
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 55
great chapter
Date: 27 Jul 2012 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 55
I would say SWATH bit was ironc. I didn't see the movie so I have no idea what happened.
Thanks for the update, waiting for next week to have more.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 55
I felt bad for Edward. I am glad Eleazar was there to talk him through it. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 55
WELL IT'S A WAITING GAME NOW I HAVE TO WAIT LIKE EVERYONE ELSO DOES NOW I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY BUT HOPE WHEN SHE WAKES UP THAT WON'T BE THE END.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 55
GREAT CHAPTER THANKS :)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 46
WOW ALL THEY HAVE TO DO IS WISH FOR SOMETHING AND THEY HAVE IT TO BAD LIFE ISN'T LIKE THAT.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 41
WHERE DID THE CHAIR COME FROM?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 39
THERE FOR A SECOND I THOUGHT SHE WAS GOING TO KISS EDWARD AKA HER ANGLE
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 38
DO YOU MIND IF I TELL YOU MY FEAR ABOUT YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH I LOVE IT SO FAR. I FEAR THE WHOLE THING IS GOING TO BE BELLA IN HER MIND AND EDWARD TRYING TO GET HER OUT IN THE OPEN AND WHEN SHE WAKE UP THE STORY ENDS NO REAL TIME WITH EDWARD OR CHARLIE OR EDWARD'S FAMILY NO TIME WITH HIM MATE HIM LOVING HER AND HER LOVING HIM, THATS MY FEAR I HOPE I'M WRONG.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
SO IS THE SEAT BELT AROUND HER IS THAT PART OF WHY SHE CAN'T MOVE TO GET OUT OF HER MIND BECAUSE SHE IS OUT OF THE CARBUT SHE DOESN'T KNOW THAT YET.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
DAMN CARLISLE REACHING OUT TO TOUCH HER AND EDWARD TELLING HIM NOT TO TOUCH HER BROKE THERE CONNECTION HOW SAD.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
BUT IS SHE TALKING IN HER HEAD OR IN REAL TIME OUT LOAD SO JASPER AND EDWARD CAN HERE HER?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
SHIT IT FEELS HOPELESS LIKE SHE WILL NEVER WAKE UP
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
SO IS SHE REALLY MOVING OR IS IT JUST IN HER HEAD THAT SHE THINKS SHE IS MOVING.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
I THOUGHT HE WAS GOING TO KISS HER AGAIN BUT I WAS WRONG WOULD THAT HAVE HELPED HER TO STAY WITH HIM?
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
I HOPE SHE WAKES UP SOON IF FOR NOTHING MORE THEN TO SEE HER ANGLE ( EDWARD )
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 30
I HOPE THERE REAL HOPE FOR BELLA. MY HEART IS HURTING FOR EDWARD HE LOVES HER.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 54
I had a feeling that the movement Bella was able to do in the car would translate to the real world. Very excited!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 54
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 54
NIce to see some of b's efforts are shining through to the real world. Great Charlie.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 54
I am so glad Charlie was there to see this for himself. He deserves the hope that come with this. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 54
lookingh forward to more
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 54
Yes, she's fighting to recover
Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 54
oohh glad charlie is able to get some good news. love it
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 54
Hmm did you write this pre scandal? If so you must be done type of pre cog. Ie. gossip mags, Hollywood scandals. referring to her as being a sleeping beauty or Snow White.... Have heard these words a lot today unfortunately :( on a brighter note... Love the story!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 54
Bella is making progress... really trying hard to move and get out of that car ;) Just want to let you know I really enjoy this story of your, but been bad and haven't written very many reviews... but love it... thank you for the frequent updates.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 54
Woo Hoo They saw her foot moving.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 53
That car is her mind. Once shes out of there she will wake up.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 53
Go b. Keep at it.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 53
Thats it Bella keep thinking like that and keep working on moveing :D and Sm Dont worry if your late, life happens and we understand ;)
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 53
Se this is what I hate about drabblish fic. Just when things are getting good, the chapter ends and you have to wait for the next chapter. *sigh* Lord, give me patience, and I want it right now!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 53
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 53
yay great chapter thanks
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 53
So when she moves her foot is that only in her mind or is she moving her foot and everyone can see it? I can't wait to find out. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 53
She's got the determination now! Edward will just help her strengthen it
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
WILL CHARLIE BE UP SET THAT EDWARD'S IN HER ROON ALONE? WILL EDWARD BE UP SET HE HAS TO LEAVE BELLA'S ROOM WHILE CHARLIE IS THERE?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 27
THANK GOD SHE IS ALIVE
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
SHIT SHE DIED?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
GOD BELLA DON'T DIE.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
OH I HOPE THAT KISS HELPS BELLA HER HEART IS GOING TO TAKE OFF LIKE A JET ISN'T IT AND CARLISLE IS GOING TO ASK WHAT HE DID RIGHT?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
EDWARD'S VOICE IS MAKING BELLA RELAX ISN'T IT? ISN'T THAT WHY HER HEART IS BEATING SLOWER.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 20
POOR BELLA SHE THINKS SHE IS DIEING.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'M SO GLAD ALICE, JASPER AND EMMETT WERE THERE TO HELP EDWARD STAY CALM.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
BELLA IS THERE AT LAST EDWARD MUST BE SO HAPPY
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
THEY WENT TO ALOT OF TROUBLE TO MAKE BELLA'S ROOM SO NICE AND TO MAKE HER FEEL WELCOMED.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
YES IS KNEW CHARLIE IS SMART.