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Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 104

I liked it!  Ihope your son gets feeling betterr soon.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 104

As you wish...

I hope your bebe is okay!

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 104

Ha that's cool, not is Charlie alright with what the Cullens are he talked Bella into giving them a chance.

I was wondering if she could go back to the white space and; since she can go back Edward can join her there 'cause she wants him to. 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 104

""It appeared there was really only one part of her that Edward really wanted to eat.""  Humm how do you know Bella?  Naughty girl, he's only kissed you.  Is that wishful thinking?

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 104

poor bella

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 104

Interesting. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 104

I LOVE IT! :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 104

I hope your son is ok, you're in my thoughts

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 104

Wow...did she open her mind to him??? I can't wait to see. I am glad she told Charlie she was going to give than a chance. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 104

She asked and there he is  now she has to get over the fear.

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 104

awesome thanks

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 104

:)

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 104

She's let him in again!

great chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 104

glad Charlie talked her out of leaving.  

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 103

Go Charlie!!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 103

charlie is a smart man ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 103

Love me some Charlie ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 102

OMG ??????????????????????????//

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 101

she is hurting both of them poor thing

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 100

she needed a shock and she got it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 99

like playful Edward

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 98

good place to go this should open her up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 97

she wants him close to :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 96

better now things are going to be better for both of them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 95

right now Bella doesnt know what she wants.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 94

poor thing 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 93

she has the right to freak out but it is killing Edward :(

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 92

Alice could of waited to call him lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 91

She is awake is she going to remember what happened with Edward???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 90

I hope that was enough for her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 103

:)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 103

Go Charlie.  

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 103

thank you for the update..Charlie...interesting

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 103

WAY TO GO CHARLIE !!!!!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 103

I love it!!!  :)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 103

Wow...I didn't think Charlie would know everything, I love his views. He is right. I can't wait to see what Bella has to say. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 103

Sooooo.......I take it that Charlies wouldn't mind if Bella and Edward get to know each other better.....:-)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 103

i love Charlie! he should pass out that knowledge to a whole mess of people around the world!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 103

Wow   really insightful of charlie!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 102

ooooh charlie knows huh?   Bet he knows about the wolves too

 

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 101

Guess Edward is going to have to wait for Bella to grow up and at like an adult before he can actually try to date/court her as an equal. Right now, she is still acting too much like a child. Thanks for the update. Even if it is soooo frustrating... but I am sure it would be even more so to be Edward. LOL!

Reviewer: Cullen sandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 102

I can't see him knowing what the cullens really are! I just have to wait to find out

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 102

Of course he knows they are different.  Has Charlie been talking to Billy?  I can't imagine that he would have anything nic to say about them.  He probably just thinks they are reall, really nice people.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 102

Say what? Good twist.

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 102

mmm, what does Charlie think?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 102

:)

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 102

Wow...I can't wait to see what Charlie knows. I didn't see that coming, but Charlie is a good cop and not much gets past him. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 102

oooh love it

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 102

He knows!? How?

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 101

Just when he thought she was opening up to her feelings the shutters slammed back down. 

Great chapter

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 101

pesky sharp teeth

Reviewer: shadowbride Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 101

poor edward; just when thinks were looking up!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 101

*scuffs toe*  I wish Bella would stop being so stubborn.

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 101

kind of sad chapter :(

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 101

Oh b. Ya need to get past this.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 101

:)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 101

looking forward to tomorrow

Reviewer: brookie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 101

bella just trust him you will not be sorry because you will be happier than you can ever imagine

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 101

Bella is just going to have to think it through. I can't wait. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 101

least she is facing it now. loving it thanks

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 100

If Edward Cullen is on all fours hovering over you you dont ask questions or require answers! You take that man and you do things to him that are wonderful and probably illegal in some countries! Or you try to anyway!

Reviewer: louc87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 100

I have spent the last hour reading this this and WOW I am so glad I have finally read this, it has been on my must reads for ages and you don't disappoint.

one word FANTASTIC. Can't wait to read more :D

Reviewer: Lady Ali Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 100

I am loving this story.  I read every chapter you have posted so far and can't wait to read more.  I srsly sat down last night and read all of this lol.  Great plot, great writing style, great everything! Love it!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 100

thank you for the update...it's coming back to her.smile

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 100

Love this Edward. Damn your such a tease with that one line!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 100

:)

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 100

Awww great teaser

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 100

Great chapter...thanks!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 89

A Bella smoothy lol to funny.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 88

she is trying lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 100

:) best teaser!!!! Have a great weekend!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 87

she is funny

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 86

He has his work cut out for him lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 85

I figured she wouldnt believe him at first

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 84

will she believe him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 83

Im slow but I think I get it know she goes to sleep and goes to the other spot so when ever she goes to sleep she changes spots.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 100

Monday Monday Monday

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 100

Stubborn Bella.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 100

Oooh, kissies!

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 99

Well, it's a start!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 99

:) trying to fight her feelings... cute.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 99

Vampire running speed - i"d throw up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 99

playful eddie is so cool

Reviewer: Lady Ali Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 99

Alright, I started reading this last night and finished it just now! I LOVE this story and need more lol I can't wait to read the next chapter. 


I love the way your telling the story in little segments and your plot is awesome.  I can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 99

I would vomit. Lol. What is wrong with this girl?! If a hot Edward Cullen wants to kiss you you go with it! You don't even think about anything but kissing him... and maybe tearing his clothes off. Who am I kidding? You rape that man if need be! Lol

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 99

I bet he'll step into the sun...no denying the disco ball effect lol

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 99

I love playful Edward! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 99

looking forward to more

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 99

I hope she won't be so mad at him ....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 99

:)

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 99

oh yay - love playful edward - great chapter

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 99

Oh I am liking playful Edward!  Go Eddie!!!  *snickers*

Reviewer: kellishines Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 98

He's going to show her him. Again! He hasn't sparkled for her yet.

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 98

What will he do in the meadow?  Sparkle, if the sun is out!

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 98

taking thing into his hands ;) 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 98

Oooh getting bold eddie

Reviewer: AliceHC24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 98

Will he be running super fast? But she will know its real when she gets there. His family must be like about damn time. Oh and thanks for the jump. Not knocking your work but you were right it would have been the same ole thing. It was a good decision on your part.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 98

Aww so she knows it WAS all real-sweet vamp-boy

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 98

I can't wait to see her reaction to the meadow when she sees it with her own eyes and not just in her mind. I hope she will open up to Edward. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 98

looking forward to more

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