Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 95
He has been overlooking the most simple thing. I am guessing she would talk to him if he just asked to talk to her. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 95
Apparently she's just as clueless as he is..lol
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 95
I have been reading this for hours! I just found the story! Oh Bella Bella Bella! Of course he wants to see you! He wants to ravage you with his love! He's dying to be near you! :D
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 94
:-( he should go for a hunt..he needs a distraction
Date: 20 Sep 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 94
I like the realism of Bella's condition.
Date: 20 Sep 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 94
She'll stay with the cullens
Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 94
It is just going to take some time for her to get through this. She has a long road ahead of her. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 94
looking forward to more
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
good idea Edward is so smart lol
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
he should be full lol
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is in control
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Charlie so sad
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
That would freak anyone out OMG
Date: 20 Sep 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
he already heard her didnt he
Date: 20 Sep 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 94
awww poor edward. at least she isnt totally freaking over esme and carlisles help
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 93
lol for Bella wanting to run in this story
Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 93
Poor Bella is overwhelmed!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 93
THX We're moving forward.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 93
should get very interesting - love it
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 93
I hope Bella can find some comfort in Charlie's words about the Cullen's. I know she is scared, but she has to figure out they won't hurt her. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 93
Yikes, Edward must be climbing the walls right now......
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 93
I think Bella must have issues with Charlie, they seem even less connected than at the begining of Twilight. Hope we get see them...work things out a little bit. She also has to reall grieve for her mom and Phil so everyone needs to give her a chance to get her bearings. Good transitional ch.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 93
omg bella just sooo pissed me off just now.. after everything edward said and did for her..she just wants to jump ship!!! wow thats just being selfish and childish.. i think ugh
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 93
looking forward to more
Date: 18 Sep 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 92
lookiong forward to more
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 92
Yay! Bella's awake!
Poor Edward, I hope it doesn't take her long to trust Edward & desire his touch again.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 92
Yeah, but I think the shit is about to hit.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 92
*sniffling* Beautiful. :)
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 92
Poor Edward. But he helped just like he said he would.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 92
awwww charlie's there. Sucks that B is scared though
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 92
Now we know who Alice called, sneaky little seer that she is.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 92
Very smart Alice!! She knew Charlie would be the only person to calm her down. Hopefully she'll relax and let Edward back in.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 92
not quite what edward was hoping for. glad she did remember. - awesome thanks
Date: 18 Sep 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 92
Awwwwwww
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 92
I feel so bad for Edeard, but I am happy for Charlie and Bella. I am so glad she is awake. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 92
alice? why did she have to text charlie, she should have waited for carlisle or edward. she always has to have her nose in stuff that is nothing to do with her. carlisle is her doctor and edward her mate, she is nothing to her.
poor edward he couldn`t even talk to her befor charlie got to her. now he is taking her home and edward has to fight to see bella again. sometimes i really hate alice.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 92
Poor Edward......
Date: 18 Sep 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 92
Poor Edward.xoxo
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 90
Wow, is she really out?
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 91
woah! she's awake ;)
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 91
Good Morning Bella!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 91
I absolutely love it. I can't believe that it worked and Bella is now awake!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 91
Woo hoo!!!!! Wakey wakey
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 91
ALICE!!! FTW! Charlie's on his way.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 91
Thank goodness... lets see what she remembers now!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 91
FINALLY we have lift off!!! She's awake!!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 91
What a cliffie!
UPDATE, PLEASE!
:-)
Date: 17 Sep 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 91
*Chuckle* that's really mean how you are developing a habit of cliff hangers.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 91
Eeeeee!!! I love this! :)
Date: 17 Sep 2012 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 91
*second of total silence*
...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!
She's AWAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YESSSSSSSSSSS!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 91
Love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 91
Hell yeah! That was awesome. Loved Alice's countdown.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 91
Finally!!! She's awake!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 91
Finally!! I so looking forward to what is going to happen...
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 91
I started reading shortly after you started writing and I've been fine to wait and see how the story progresses. I've enjoyed a chapter a night, until this one! lol I want to know what happens now! :) Can't wait for the rest of this weeks updates.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 91
Yay - way to redeem from friday LOL
so awesome thanks :)
Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 91
Yayyyyy......she's awake!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 90
Your cruel... You can' t stop there... But I love your writing...
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 90
Now THAT was a cliffhanger!
Date: 15 Sep 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 90
it happens yayayy she free
Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 90
EEeeeeee!!! *squealing and clapping* I. CAN. NOT. WAIT!!! :)
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 90
Is that what saves Bella?
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 90
Is she waking up?!?! Why is she counting???? Thanx for updating see you soon
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 90
Wha? There you doing that cliffie shit again. grrrrrrrr
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 90
oh wow..... Did he really do it? Is she going to wake up now?!?!?!?!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 90
Please update over the weekend....that was one heck of a cliffy.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 90
What happened??? Is she awake???
Date: 14 Sep 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 90
Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 90
oh yay awesome chapter for the end of the week - have a great weekend
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 90
Oh you evil, mean little author, you!
I love the story! Can't wait till Monday comes!
*bites nails and looks at the clock, tapping foot incessantly*
Date: 13 Sep 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 89
Bella smoothie - cute idea. Or drinking from a straw in the IV. That's actually a good idea.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 89
wow a normal human reaction for Bella....novel concept. LOL
Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 89
I think tomorrow she'll ask why he has to save her and he'll have to tell her about her being his mate.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 89
Bella smoothie...that is funny. I hope she believes what he is saying. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 89
:( 1 step forward and 2 steps back......
Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 89
I'm not a Bella smoothie for you to suck on, lol! loved that.
poor bella, but i like her reaction. in so many fics she is ok with it no questions asked.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 88
Dream on, Bella. Oh wait, she is dreaming. lol
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 88
LOL That's so cute how she's trying to disprove his claim. I can just imagine her yanking on that branch!! It's not going to be as easy as how she "disproved" (by stubbornly doubting), his mind-reading and his ability to pass through the mantle or veil from reality to "comascape" where she currently resides... Too funny!
Gosh, I hope she doesn't stroke out when she realizes his word vomit-y confession is, in fact, the truth.
Maybe you can come up with a different way to keep her from freaking out and occupied/distracted *nudgenudge winkwink* while the scientists come up with a way to get her outta her own noggin... *waggles eyebrows suggestively*
I rec this fic to everyone. I love it. But I'm one of those readers that lets a couple or three chapters accumulate before jumping in. But I love you soooo much and you're always on my list of fave fics/writers when I'm asked. ~RoseE. xx
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 88
Bella trying to prove that vampires don't exists, even in her mind is quiete funny. I just hope, with her run, she doesn't trip. That would be funny for Edward the first moment, until she snapped her ankle or so.
But at least she tried. Perhaps they should wish themself to a beach, so that Edward could show her some sparkling vampire skin.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 88
thank you for the update.Bella really isn't giving up.....she can really do what Edward does......lol
Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 88
I hope she won't push him away when she figures out he is telling the truth. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 88
She's going to trip and fall....
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 88
lol for her trying to best her vamp
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 87
I don't see any way he can convince her while he is in her mind. Her mind means that anything can happen, even the supernatural.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 87
Ha..are you going to bench press me???? LOL
Date: 11 Sep 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 87
she is very fiesty ;)
Date: 11 Sep 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 87
Well she would say this is all in my head and we can do anything here.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 87
He's going to have fun proving it to her
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 87
They are too cute together