Date: 15 Jun 2012 1:17 AM Title: Just Friends
I hate the way Edward treat his employees. He is so mean and all of that cussing. Is the F word the only word that mans knows. If i was his employees i would report him for being verbally abusive. I hope he and Bella get together so she can see how he treats the people around him so she can tell his sorry ass off. She is not scared of him. She is exacly what he needs in order for him to start treating people like human beings.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 11:42 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Really liked this story. It was fun, and mostly engaging. The ending was a little drawn out, but I can't fault you that too much.
But I will say that before you start releasing the sequel, I highly recommend getting someone to edit it. It is a true testiment to the story itself that I continued on and read it despite the grammar and spelling mistakes, because I usually drop a story like it's hot because of them, no questions asked regardless of the quality of the plot. I probably won't read the sequel (I don't believe in them), but it will definitely increase your readership if you found someone to edit your stuff for you.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:39 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
I love this story. I'm sorry I have not given u a review for every chapter. I was so engrossed in the story that I just kept reading.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 9:00 PM Title: Damn Insecurities
Haha!! I had to come join this site after the .net one changed all the rules and whatnot. I couldn't NOT finish this story. I am glad that Jane got a piece of Bella! Now we gotta get Emily and James taken care of!! The story is great!! I can't wait to read more! It'll have to wait until later, as my lunch break is over!! :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2012 11:31 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
I loved this story!! Can't wait to read the sequel!!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:14 AM Title: The day that changed their lives
Great intro, So many conflicts already shimmering, I look forward to reading more
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:20 PM Title: The Inevitable
Ass-kicking Bella totally rules! It's so nice to see her character with a backbone.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:08 PM Title: Thankfulness
Oy, naughty Renee! For shame, woman!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:22 PM Title: My Strength
It's strange to feel bad for Jessica; she's normally a crazy bitch in FF. I'm all confused now. :p
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Can't Escape
Edward needs therapy. Pummeling a hotel employee for being startled by a nearly-naked woman is insane. Have to admit I judge Bella for finding it attractive. Of course, their dysfunction is all part of the fun.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:00 PM Title: Damn Insecurities
She forgives him too easily. Pushover. :p
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:29 AM Title: An ending is just another beginning
Love Love Love Love Love this
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 9:42 PM Title: An ending is just another beginning
I love this story so much.
You're an amazing author and I'm so glad that i finally read this amazing story.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:03 PM Title: The day that changed their lives
Got your memo about moving to the site. Didn't wanna lose one of my fav authors and esp didn't wanna miss out on staying up to date with FTI !!!!
So glad to know you're still writing and posting. Good luck! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Damn Insecurities
glad they made up.fab chapter
Date: 06 Jun 2012 3:40 PM Title: More surprises than a little bit
Really? You just had to kill off Hannah. That's sad. Glad that James is in police custody and that everyone is okay. Glad to see Bella pregnant.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:45 AM Title: I hate her I hate him
Holy heck! How many people are after them?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Amazing, Astounding, Mind blowing...speechless
Wow! I wasn't expecting that! But so glad it happened.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 6:02 PM Title: Pretending
The saboteur is Victoria, right? She's working with James. I noticed that you have mentioned Victoria's name both in dealing with James, and then in a meeting that Edward had with his department heads. She's PR if I remember correctly?
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Just Friends
Can we please have James be hit by a bus already???
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: At Sunset
Hello,
Firstly I've been following your stories for quiet sometime now. So congrats. You're a reat writer.
But I've just come over here from ff. net and was already reading Facing The Inevitable. Are you going to transfer it over to twcs too?
Love ff
Author's Response:
Yes I will be posting FTI here also, and thank you so much for following my stories it means the world to me.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 9:54 AM Title: The day that changed their lives
I love this story. I read it over at FFN but since they've gone balls up over there, I decided to follow it over here cos' it's definatley one I will read again x
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chaos
looking forward to more !
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:17 AM Title: The day that changed their lives
just discovered this site to my delight and your is my first story im really into it and ive only read the first page
Date: 01 Jun 2012 5:39 AM Title: Defying Gravity
loooking forward to more