Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Cant wait for more
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Didnt rose and alice see the scars when the changed he when she was sick those 2 weeks
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good Job. I can feel the emotion put into writing this.
Date: 12 Dec 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
I really love this story i hope you will continue to write it!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it! Poor James!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved it! Go Edward!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
I KNOW I WROTE BEFORE AND TOLD YOU HOW MUCH I LIKE YOUR STORY,ONE
REQUEST PLEASE DON,T KILL EITHER EDWARDS OFF.. PLEASE!!!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
i JUST WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW HOW WONDERFUL I THINK YOUR STORY IS.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK,I'M LOVEN IT!!
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Like other readers I can't stop reading ,I have 5 chapters left an I hope you post something soon. I do hope to read other story's of yours, so please keep posting your work
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Found this story two days ago and can not stop reading! I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm still new to this website well had it for a little while but never really have gotten on it... Still trying to figure out how to get it where I get notifacations!!! Keep up the amazing job!
A new fan,
Rezzie
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE THIS STORY :) Can't wait for more
Date: 26 Aug 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Sully didn't tip off Marcus did she?
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Um why don't they tell black that Edward is her husband?!?! Bella cannot say anything against him that Edward has told her
Date: 19 Aug 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hi, I just found this, and have read through the last couple of days...it's great!
Thank you for sharing it with us all.
Can I offer one wee 'note' on the detail? most of which I love, but you do seem to get bogged down at times with lists that don't seem to be moving the story on, or having any other than a passing relevance, such as the lists and list of jewellry in this chapter, and a simelar plethora of lists when the wedding was being discussed...if they are essential to the next phase of the tale, then great, but the equivalent of 2 pages just to say it going to be expensive, pink and awful was a bit much, it could have been done in about half that, and been just as effective...
Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for the next chapter! T
Date: 18 Aug 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this fic! I'm mad that TWCS is not working right. I haven't got a update notification in over 2 months. Keep up the good work. Thanks for writing.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
This truely is a very captivating & intriging story!! This is an an amazingly well written & wonderfully developed plot & story line. Thanks for all ur hard work & dedication in writting this story!! Please,please continue writting this story for all ur avid readers like me & totally disregagard the bashing!! People should give constructive critism such that can be helpful & encoraging such as spelling & gramatical errors!! But not hate for story because u for warn people what story is about & if it's not for them then they should bugger off & not read will be impatiently awaiting next update!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Jacob needs someone to blame for his screw up he is going down
Date: 18 Aug 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
I was so excited to see a new chapter. Love the insight on Black. Now we know why he wants the Cullens. I laughed at the chapstick episode as my husband is not allowed to touch my chapstick as he has ruined quite a few tubes from twisting them up into the cap. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter. It was good to get a bit more of the back story on Jacob.
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh boy that panic room is going to get some use :(. Jacob is insane!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for updating, I had just put this story on a 'magic update thread' the other day on FB.
Jacob's an idiot. He's gonna end up getting himself killed. I feel sorry for Bella once he starts putting pressure on her. I hope she confides in Edward when it starts.
Love the way Edward and Bella interact. They're so sweet together. Loved the panic/safe room ideal.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
I so want an eos :)
Date: 16 Aug 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jacob really wants to die huh? Wow for cool panic room
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sweet they are getting close! Update when you can! I love your story!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Again I <3 Senior!
jacob=douche bag
Date: 05 Aug 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Marcus...yuk! Hope you go down!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
the smoothie thing--- what a hoot!!!
I <3 Senior
Stick it Elizabeth!!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
they are so sweet together!!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Jacob is a class a douche bag!
Date: 05 Aug 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad she woke up!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh man! Not good!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Let her have it Ed!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor bella..you are going down Jacob! Bella isn't week at all dumb ass!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ed sr is complicated! Bella is a criminal mind in the making
Date: 04 Aug 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well they like their girls young!
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok that is just craziness
Date: 04 Aug 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting lets see where it goes....
Date: 25 May 2013 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
Im reallybenjoying the slow burn of this story......I loved that u made james a good guy as well. A nice difference
Date: 22 May 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad you updated...I realize you all are not paid and it is something you do, for you. I am just really glad there are people who like to share! I am really impressed at how all of the characters are coming put of their 'roles', per say. The big meany, is really a soft pussycat, etc! I hope there is a time when the shrews will finally give up, but I have a feeling that will not happen. Jacob Black is a real 'winner'! And, of course, the family is still a family...we can't pick them! I hope to hear move from the story, but only when you're ready. Thank you.
Date: 20 May 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
loved the chapter, cant wait to read more. Take your time we understand.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, excelent chapter, thank you for updating and well hope that everything turns well with your mum and dad, an for you too. Keep the faith and see you next update :)
Date: 19 May 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love, love, love it!!!!! I was so excited to see I had an update email for this story. I love it and really can't wait for the next update.
Date: 19 May 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful chapter. Glad to see you posting again.
Elizabeth and Scully need to be put in thier places soon. Witches both of them. Maybe Senior can take away credit cards for awhile. LOL
Date: 18 May 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
i have no idea why i am still reading sorry story, just skimming though it hoping you finally give your Edward a set of balls I guess???????????
Date: 18 May 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
this is not a mobward story, no one is going to know more about a blood clean up and no one is going to get inside without an OK.....also this no sex is also getting boring........But you are a good writer, to have kept my attention this long.....
Date: 18 May 2013 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is a good person. I am happy she is letting Edward get past her walls she has built. She had the first of many O's to come
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update and extra long chapter. Hope your parents are on the road to recovery. Hugs.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
its very good so far i hope you continue it
Date: 14 Feb 2013 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is such a good story!!!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
hmm just started this a few days ago.
wondering if the guys at sue/phil's was one of sr's sons or not, though it may not be of importance
tip: you use the cartoon steam metaphor frequently. though, not to the point I can't read it (i've read stories that frequently use the "cat that ate the canary" metaphor so much, even in a single chapter, that it was difficult to digest; though I recognize they pull it from SM's use). metaphors tend to have a stronger display when used less frequently
Date: 23 Dec 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
All I can say is wow. I love this story. I hope Det. Black gets what is coming to him.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I just wanted to let u know that since I started reading you have captivated me w every chapter. One thing though, I hate Jacob w a passion. I want to either choke him or hit him on his jewels. I feel sorry for Bella, she just keeps getting the really short end of the stick here. I feel like is non-stop with the poor girl. Smh. Thanks for the wonderful story and can't wait for more !!!!
Date: 09 Dec 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hi,
i just found your story the other day and I just finished everything you have posted. I really enjoy this story. I can't wait to read what happens next!
-Lisa
PS- I think you need to compile all of Bella's recipes and make a cookbook!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm working on th next chapter right now between shopping with my mom.
As for the cookbook, I plan to get all the recipes used here and post them in a chapter at the very end. I have most of them already written out, I'm still waiting on two or three that I still need to get.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
i looked for you on facebook but all i found was Bargain Mafia and there are a few Jo Cullens lol. so could you please add me Terri-lyn Gagnon
Date: 06 Dec 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
So glad to see another chapter and that Bella made a great deal of progress in it as well. I cannot wait for the Cullen's to finally one up Black for the last time.
keep up the amazing work in your writing and enjoy the holidays.
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
If I were the Cullens I would be getting a restraining order and trying to get Black fired I'm sure they have more than enough evidence to prove he harrasses them, starting with his most recent harrassment of Bella while she was in the hospital. She's the victim and he was interragating her like she committed the crime herself. Love the story and am looking forward to more and couldn't agree more about silverblossom's stories they are awesome
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
Profoundly touching and heartbreaking! Interestingly, I especially love Bella drawing Edward Senior out and revealing his soft side. Thanks for the wonderful update - I look forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ha ha ha! I would have been doing exactly what Rose did, popcorn and all. I also would have gotten Tanya a course of appointments with a psychiatrist as she is clearly mental!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10
AMAZING!!! Loved, loved, loved the comment Bella made to Tanya about putting on weight! Brilliant. Right off to read the next chapter and the fireworks!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Amazing. I love this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
I have to say I was happy to see a new chapter. A great chapter, I have to say that I loved when they got one over Black but even better was the sweet ending of them talking in bed.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think some people are just rude and that is just the way they are. I love your story and I dont see anybody not liking it. I know some people have not taste and them are the ones that just need to keep there shit talk to themselves. Know that I got that of my chest lol I think they should can Black for his stupid shit or the Cullens should sue him for all of the false things he as accused them of. I am glad that that bastard uncle is dead or they would have to kill him again. I have never been happier to have her be so inocent :)
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
great job hun. Wonder how long until the DA and Black's superiors reassign his moronic arse.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just want to say I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens with Edward and Bella! Please keep writing! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 13 Nov 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
I hope you continue this story. I can't wait to see how the characters evolve. I love sseing their intereactions, and I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella end up coming together!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm liking this story more with every chapter I read.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
I am soooooo hooked. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see who the "rat" is. Something about Scully and the Denali's seem "off". Just saying!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Marcus is an insane one huh? Love what you said about entitlement.
Cant wait for more
Date: 15 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hmm Elizabeth got told huh? LOVED it. Picia is really digging herself a hole. Someone better tell Aro to reign her in. That little crack about the driveby makes me wonder if she isnt involved now somehow.
Dont think I'll ever think of smoothies the same way again.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
wonderfully sweet chapter between them
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG Black just wants to die doesnt he. Wonder why they didnt whip out the hubby card? Guess they want to keep it quiet a little longer.
Eli is a f'ing idiot like his wife and delusional sister. 10 Million for a wedding? HA HA
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow rough chapter. Glad she woke up ok. Me thinks it was Skankya or Eli maybe trying to get revenge or somethin.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow.....cant even have a nice quiet family dinner. Poor B. Too bad it wasnt Picia hit. Crotchety ole snoot bag.
Author's Response:
"Crotchety ole snoot bag?"
Where do you come up with these things? That made me laugh! It's priceless! Thank you for making my day!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great story ~ can't wait to read more!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad Senior is sticking up for Edward with his delusional mama and the others. Elezar is a twit who is controlled by those other women. Skankya really needs psych help. Senior needs to throw them all out on their arses.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG Skankya and the rest of that "woman" crew are the most delusional bunch of twits I've ever heard from.
YEY for B&E moving into the same room.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great CSI job by Bella. She's probably gonna feel guilty for not anticipatiing the detour though.
Ugh for her being sick.
Hope they tell elizabeth soon but she starts buying things for Skankya's wedding.