Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow Skankya and the oblivious brigade are in for a real eye opener come christmas.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was alot of back ground on the crazys and it was needed I know understand why they are so warped. I agree with you about the ass holes that make rude remarks about you writing I think if they dont like it move on read something else by a book. I appreashate your writing so keep it up.
Author's Response:
This is really embarrassing, but I'm going to reveal it anyway. I'm crying! You're review made me cry! In a good way! Happy Tears, I swear!!!!! :) I never realized just how many people out there liked my writing until the nut jobs came out of the woodworks. So thank you for the great review and thank you for reading. I write for readers like you. As long as readers like you keep on reading, I'll keep on writing. :)
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
she def thinks out side the box. Cool chapter.
Going to bed now. Will pick up reading/reviews in the am
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
Elizabeth seems to be one anal biatch from listening to what everyone says. Grr Black is going to be a problem i think
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. Bella is such a smart resourseful person. Glad she stood up to Alice. aww for nice Daddy C.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great bonding time shopping. Go Bella sniffing out Leah.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful time with the cooking and all. Elizabeth and Picia are going to be annoying as hell.
Married huh? You surprised me. i was expecting an adoption or something . Kewl. SHe did take it wall
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
glad Esme was the first person she saw when she woke up.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. No rape I hope???
Author's Response:
No, there won't be any rape in this story. Personally, I believe Bella's and Edward's first time should be with one another.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great!
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Keep doing your thing! Update soon!
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Amazing story! And I agree, RL comes before our (amazingly awesome) 'make believe' world !! Thank you for taking the time to update and actually write the story unlike oher authors who didn't update for 2-3 years!! Seriously, there's some stories like that!! I love how amazingly this is written and how real it seems. I hope Scully gets what's coming to her and Elizabeth gets over her petty "Tanya is better for my son" world. I can't wait for the next update!!! Hope your family is alright !!! I LOVE this story :)
Date: 28 Sep 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
I just wanted to say, that I love this story and how it pulls you in. I just found it and read it all in one day. I can't wait to see what happens next and when it gets completed. Thanks for writing a great story!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well you certainly give us a good product. Take your time for that is what a good writer does. Love this story!
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
great story! I can't wait for more
Date: 01 Sep 2012 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
I found this story yesterday and I found it very hard to stop reading. So I finished what you have written so far tonight and I love the srory. This story has it all it makes you laugh and at time laugh really hard! and at time you cry. (Thank god I wasn't at work when I read about her being shot.) Well I just wanted to let you know that I love the story!!! I hope things are better with what you are going through and your mom is doing well.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loveddddd it x
Date: 30 Aug 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
Good chapter.....
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it read again biting my nails for the next chapter. Cried when Bella was shot cried for joy when she woke up laughed when eleazar wanted money for Tanya but I can't wait to read the next chapter and all the rest chapters of their story. What is the future for them is going to be like. Love it. Keep on writing you are sooooooo good this story is awesome.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love Bella's revelations throughout the chapter and how well she is handling his need to touch as well. I am looking forward for those two to have some time where they can make more progress in their relationship. I would love to see Bella help the guys with more "research" as well.
Love the story!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Chapter was outstanding. Bella has so much working against her. She and Edward are overcoming adversity one step at a time. I am so happy to see recognize real and abiding love. I lookforward to every update. Keep up the wonderful job.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
awe i love it...there so sweet to eachother amazing love this story and cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
Absafuckinlutly loved it xxx
Date: 19 Jul 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
j'aime beaucoup cette histoire attendre la suite avec impatience et j'espère qu'ils vont rester souder
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
i love this story and can't wait to see what happens. Their first kiss was so cute and truly sweet. I'm sorry to hear your life is falling apart. Trust me, I am all to familiar with said action. I hope that everything gets better soon and another update is around the corner! =)
Date: 23 Jun 2012 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for this story, love it. Love all the intrigue & drama. not good at reviewing, only know what I like reading & I like well written, good storylines, & yours are both. Happy writing and I'll happily read. thanks Pamela
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
This story is freaking amazing. I have absolutely have enjoyed it. I would love to beat several of them and kiss a several of the others. I do hope we get to have a few happy chapters where E & B get to spend time together.
Looking forward to the chapter and where we all go from here.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
The last couple of chapters were great! The part of Edward begging Carlise not to make the decision of Bella's care was heart wrenching. And I was so glad that Bella remembered that she told Edward that she loved him. Is there are back story for Det. Blacks need to get Edward so badly that he is harassing Bella? I can't wait for the next chapter. I will keep your mother in my prayers.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Black is truly a nut case. Bella seems to be able to hold her own. I like their lawer as well. I'm am so glad she told Edward she love him. He really needed to hear that. Ed Sr., old softy. He is good for her because lord knows someone need to protect her. What's up with Aro? He's so distant from the rest of the family. Eliz should see how much happier and better her husband is, what gives?
I truly love this story. You are indeed a great writer!!!!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good Chapter......
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
That Jacob is one nutty bird. Great chapter.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
j'aime j'aime beaucoup
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good Chapter.....
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter.....
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked very much of its history, it has a good appeal and with dark circles around a pure girl in the middle hmmm good recipe for success congratulations. And it starts with her being torn from the life she knows and losing their tuos murdered, and now I read and see if I can find his owner lol