Date: 22 Aug 2020 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Uuuhh there's body shots and then there's this... This is sexual assault.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
WTH!!! I have liked your story until now! If that was me; I would of never forgave him and fucked his ass up.
Now, that I have a child in junior high and trying to get her to stand up for herself, I will kill a fucker if he ever did something like that to her. I finally got her to start sticking up for herself though its coming slowly. But if she was ever in this situation and took a guy back like that; I would knock her ass out.
I was a bully in high school and I fucked with a lot of people but when I went to my 10 year high school reunion, I wasn't a bitch. I was just myself; well, I guess, my new self. I changed a lot after I had kids and grew up but I would NEVER have treated someone like that at that age or let anyone treat anyone else like that. Once, I even helped a girl pick up her books when they knocked her down. That got a few stares from everyone and asked what the fuck I was doing. I told them to shut the fuck up and leave her be, she didn't do shit and there were other people that deserved what we dished but she didn't. They left her alone after that, though she wouldn't leave me alone after; which was kinda annoying but I was as nice as I could be.
But Yeah, she should of just kicked his fucking ass to the curb and changed her locks and kneed him in the balls at the resturant.
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
AWESOME!!! little story thanks for sharing it with the extras' to ;D
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
It's as if this was written by a fifteen year old.
miraculously changed bullies, twenty odd year old virgins (only the females of course).
Misunderstandings aplenty and other ridiculous plot bunnies. Oh yes, let's not forget that every girl that gets with Edward, apart from Bella of course, is an irredeemable skank, yet Edward is a poor misunderstood man.
give me strength.
Date: 02 Apr 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow and he called her a dweeb I don't like him
Date: 26 Jul 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Why in the world does she want to be around someone who fucked her boyfriend?
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
I gotta say, I liked Bella until this chapter. She has a boyfriend and did body shots with other guys? That is pretty immature and classless. Would she want Edward to do body shots with another girl? I hate girls who are hypocrites. So she can do something that he would be considered a douche if he did; that's wrong. Also, why be a pussy with James and let him lick her? She was in public. She could just get up and leave. That just doesn't make sense.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh so good. I laughed..cried...hated that rat bastard...everything I was looking Grier in a story. Thanks so much...and thanks library Facebook page fr the rec!
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Awww sweet end to the story. TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
hee hee Love them sneaking away from Alice
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved seeing thier lives snippet style
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
awwww for the end. Glad he talk to the little boy.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
the massage et al was a great grovelling technique.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow Jess called her???? interesting
Date: 08 Dec 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
alcohol does make people stupid, but she was wrong to try and make him jealous with Mike.
Date: 08 Dec 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
lol for sue being there. Glad someone broke victoria's nose. Guessing Em never got a look at Victoria that day at the club?
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow they did it. Happy dance
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love Em He is so cool
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
Esme seems really nice. Ugh damn Victoria how did they get her laptop?
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
should have kept James there for the cops..... ah well. Glad the guys showed up when they did
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
She is an idiot to meet him alone. Does he have cameras in her house?
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
James needs his ass kicked.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
ugh James huh.....that bites. Hope Tanya doesnt hurt Seth
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well they are moving it along....
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
surprised she let him in. Tanya is such a skank
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh Eddie....you've really screwed things up huh
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hope E behaves himself. Oh B Seth has a crush I think
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
glad she stopped it before it went to far. They all need to talk a lot of things through before.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hope Bella makes him grovel. Poor Alice. Stupid jury for convicting the mom
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh eddie. Deeds come back to haunt you
Date: 07 Dec 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
glad she and alice are friends. oh Cullen..... you have a lot of sucking up to do.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
typical jock boy
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Gym Coach is pathetic. Poor b
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kids can be so mean huh?
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
WOW. Love this story! Lovely ending!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 26
i liked this story very very much....I loved it!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see what will happen in this story!! Thanks for posting and sharing this.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great job. This story was fantastic. For your first fic this was a great one. I don't think a sequel is necessary, I think you told all that you could. Thanks...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! glad you enjoyed it! I may post some more of my completed stories, so if you liked this keep an eye out!
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
Baby here, yay! Good chapter.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have enjoyed this story, but I don't know what you could do for a sequel unless Vicki and James kiddnap their baby.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it. This was my first fan fic I wrote about 6 years ago.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Rose is a bit wrong. Bella had forgiven Edward up until he acted like a jerk at the reunion. His own actions made her see the old Edward and bring back painful memories. Being bullied can really scar and while it is something you can forgive you still dont forget.
I am not sure if I am just reading it wrong but it the section where Bella snarls "Excuse me?" seems like either a line is missing or Edward should say Excuse me.
I am glad they made up.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
I had a feeling the jerk side would resurface. He deserves what he is getting.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
So much in this chapter I am not sure where to start.
First love the sex party idea. Although I would be sketched out by Sue too if I was Bella. Esme should have been invivted to even things lol.
I don't blame Bella for her intial reaction to Edward after he admitted that he had cheated on Tanya.
If they can't make the drugging charges stick there is always the tape. It is clear that James and her need to go away to jail since they are not going to do it on there own.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yes, she finally smartens up. Way to stick it back to them.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ineresting but Bella can now just throw Vicki in jail for hacking, slander and extortion if she tried anything. James should already be rotting in a cell.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Why would Bella let him do that she should have just walked away and out of the club.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love this story. Awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
Again chapters 14 and 15 repeat themselves
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! Don't know how I did that, but I'll fix it right now!
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know! Don't know how I did that, but I'll fix it right now!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 11 and 12 are the same chapter, just letting you know
Date: 02 Jun 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter! Uh, engaged in what,lol?
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
I thought that was going to smoothly! Good chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
So, a magical tranformation happened?
Good chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ooh! She should have kneed him in the crotch ~ he deserves it,lol!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really, he is a grade A ass! Mean and a bit sociopathic!