Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?
WHAT WILL EDWARD DO WHEN BELLA TELLS HIM HER MOTHERS NAME WAS REMEE? BELLA TURNS EDWARD ON HE HAD A HARD ON THE WHOLE TIME THEY BEEN TOGETHER, HE'S GOING TO HAVE TO TELL HER ISN'T HE? THAT HE KILLED HER MOTHER.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue
That was enough to make a person want to be a vampire, just to be able to do that for eternity! The last part was very touching, and this was a really good story. Always love Bella and Edward!
Thank you darlin'!! Your reviews were fantastic and touched me with the atteniton to detail. Almost makes me want to go back and read the story again! LOL
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 17 Goodbye
The fact of his fashioning a headstone for her mother resonated with Bella. That , coupled with the letter, and his obvious caring for her really stood Edward in her good graces. Maybe this will work out better than I feared.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 16 Acceptance
Bella must have the most forgiving heart in this world! She is an amazing woman and Edward is blessed to find her. It's just as Jasper said, if anything had gone differently, they would have never met. One act caused the other, you might say.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 Are You High?
Took him a minute to get through Emmett's silliness, but I'm pretty sure Edward has his attention now, as well as Jasper's. It's devastating news even for vampires. I'm thinking Edward is truly between a rock and a hard place. Whatever he does, it can't end well.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 Memories
The cheescake recipe sounds really good, sadly I have no sweettooth. Bella has such a shock in store, as she is bound to find out the truth. This is very sad because of their strong pull to one another. I doubt it will be strong enough to overcome the fact of Edward being the death of her mother!
I've made the cheesecake... and it's not sweet. You'd have to add some kind of berry topping or be heavy handed with the powdered sugar!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 Possibilities
The girl has no idea how close she came to death with that maneuver! Fresh blood in her mouth and sharing it with a kiss, with a vampire. Of course, Bella was thinking about vampires earlier, just not now, when it might be relevant.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 Something More?
Kind of odd that Alice didn't see this complication. Maybe she didi and just didn't want Edward to know. It's the cruelest irony that Edward wants the daughter of his last kill. Wait until Bella finds out that piece of information!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Face to Face
Promising , that Bella not only was aware of Edward all this time, but deliberately caused him to show his true intentions. I guess having a couple black belts and a can of pepper spray hepled.She seems to be as affected by him as he is by her! Very promising.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 Control Yourself
Here Edward thought he was being so unobtrusive, too. Bella doesn't miss much, except for the fact she's been followed by a vampire who wants more than just her blood! Still, she must appreciate him running off those two cretins!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 Welcome to Bran
Bella has some connection to this Romanian castle, that seems to be quite strong. Alice on the bus must be the Alice who is Edward's "sister", so that's pretty interesting. This has to be why Alice told Edward to stay at home for this last tour.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 Reflections
That was a horrible thing to have happened to his intended, no wonder Edward ran off unprepared to find the ones who committed the atrocity! All roads seem to lead to Carlisle, though, don't they? Beats being dead, I suppose, though Edward sometimes feels differently.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue
Amazing story! You are truly one of my favorite authors with unique and different story ideas! Bravo!
Aww tufano.... yer makin' me blush darlin'! hehe. Thanks so much, from the bottom of my heart. I like to stretch my imagination and see what I can come up with, that's for sure. Who says you have to stay in one genre with one pairing?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue
Such a lovely extra and as I'm sure I've said before these two or so cute xxx
What a wonderful grouping of reviews darlin'... thank you sooo much!! I'm touched that you enjoyed it so much.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 18 Disclosed Desires
Kinda knocked off my feet there :P I rly love this characters and the whole story it would be amazing to see a bit of Bella meeting the rest of the Cullens may I ask it there any plan for a sequel ? Just wondering because this such a beautiful story with so much potential xxx
A little late here, sorry, still getting used to how the reviews on here work. Thank you so much for the kind words, at this time, however, I have no plans to extend this. This grouping hasn't talked to me since I did the epilogue and since it is set so many years ahead, I feel like I wrapped this one up.
Thank you for reading!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue
This is a great story. The smuttyness at the end was worth the wait. Different from other stories I have read. Loved it. Not sure I love this web site yet. I guess I use to fan fiction which I am boycotting as asked.
Thank you for the support and for heading over here to read. So glad you enjoyed it!!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 Epilogue
Great story, loved your writing, thanks for sharing it with us!
Thank you for reading and enjoying trishc... so glad you enjoyed it! At some point I hope to come back and add pictures to this, but for now, I'm just trying to get my stuff moved over here... lol.