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Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

Man, i hope Emmett didn'tcome home early and hear that ......

Author's Response:

Ohh I think if he did.. Emmett will have made it known!!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh dear the things that self-loving did to my hoohaa wow love it xxx



Author's Response:

Hmm yea... who can resist some Edward self loving.. I know I can't!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Important dying for them to talk about this thing between them!!!! i love possessive Edward !!!

Author's Response:

Ohh they will talk.. its coming up soon.. give them some time!!

I love a possesive Edward as well!

Thanks!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

OMG he is so mega damn cute can I take him home please I'd love to keep him in my back pocket to bring out and cheer me up xxx



Author's Response:

Hmm.. sure.. why not?? Everyone needs a little Edward in their life!! he is too cute,. isn't he??

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

Awww poor Edward needs to have more confidence in himself xxx



Author's Response:

Yea... he is a bit clueless.. but he will get there!

Thanks!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

So just like a suspected Bella feels for him just as he feels for this is very good news :P xxx



Author's Response:

Ohh yea..she feels somethng... just need to figure out what!!?

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5

Go get your girl Edward !!!!

Author's Response:

Hmm I am sure he will have no problem with getting his girl!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

I rly love this Edward too he is so super sweet it's nice to see that he isn't struggling that much with his thirst for Bella xxx



Author's Response:

Yea... this is a little fluffier than Twilight.. I wanted to explore their relationship without a whole lot of extra stuff!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

TWCS said I already reviewed this chapter but I can't find it so I'll review again just in case 

This was a rly nice intro to Bella and I'm rly glad to see Edward wanting to talk to her not shying away :D xxx



Author's Response:

Yea.. you will see that I changed up this Bella a little bit.. made her.. stronger,, maybe more sure of herself!!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bubblescurly18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Pooh very interesting start can't wait to read more :P xxx



Author's Response:

Glad to have ya along for the ride!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mamadog93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

I LOVE this and can't wait for more! <3



Author's Response:

So glad that you are loving it!!

Makes me happy!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow! This is just...

I'm completely in awe. I love this so much, and it's only on the 8th chapter?!

This chapter especially, I'm so giddy, lol! I love their connection. So sooo much better than (you know) ;) 



Author's Response:

Aww... so glad that you are enjoying it so far.. there is so much of their story to tell!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

I like that she feels the mating connection so strongly as well, even as a human.



Author's Response:

Yea... I thoughtit would be a cool little twist to the story!!

Glad you are enjoying it!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

this is really good...



Author's Response:

So glad that you are liking it!!

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yes, this Edward is more mature and confident. Very refreshing. 



Author's Response:

So glad that you are liking this Edward. In some aspects he is a bit more mature.. in others.. he is still a 17 yr old teen boy!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nice to see a story where Edward doesn't want to kill her right off the bat :)



Author's Response:

yea.. I got tired of those.. soo hear is what ya get!!! Enjoy it!

Reviewer: horphan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter, nice beginning :)  off to read more!



Author's Response:

So glad that you are liking so far!!!

Cant wait to hear what you think as you keep reading!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4

*sigh*. So dreamy......lol. Studying will be so fun and interesting !

Author's Response:

Yea.. this Edward is dreamy.. I fell in love with him!!!

Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

He's awesome!! I can't wait till he realizes ......

Author's Response:

Hmmm yea.. I love this Edward.. he is much more a 17 yr old teen than 109yr old vamp

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

:). He looks receptive!!!! Hope the will become close soon :)

Author's Response:

He is very receptive.. as for the closeness.. hmm I think it will come!!!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

So far so good, time for Edward to find his mate now...



Author's Response:

Yea.. I think Edward would agree with you... he wants a mate!!

Thanks!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

good beginning! i hope he doesn't try to resist......

Author's Response:

what would the fun be in that??!!! it is a fluffy story!

Thanks for reading!!!

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