Date: 22 Jun 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
ha! I can't believe he actually got her to design the entire house! Great planning Jake! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I so want that house!!! Loved it, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
i really cant wait for the next chapters to be posted. I am curious as to how Bella will react to the fact that Edward is the buyer of the lot and her ideas are going into the house that he is having built for them to live in.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
haha, nice one jake.
loved it. thanks.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great snooping job by Jake. Like him being a good friend.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
heee heee if only she new :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow Bella is going to be shocked as hell when she finds out that the house is going to be her's!!! Four kids! WOW!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH WOW, that was amazing! Her house sounds amazing :D I almost wish it were mine ;)
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
just found this and I am loving it! Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
love love loooooove i just loooove it lmao
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story, romantic, funny and really great written. The idee that you love someone you never meet. Txs hugs sanna
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Awwwwww! That is just so sweet!!!!! Love Armyward!!!!
Loved it!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Aww, he is so freaking cute. And he is building her a house!!!! Love it. Thanx for updating. See you soon?!?!?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!! Wait til Bella finds out what's going on.
Date: 22 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am in love with this story! I cant wait for more!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
i just love edward
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh wow, that is so cool, building her a house !!!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh shit, I love it, Lauren has some balls, bet she didn't think BElla would beon the computer !!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
sweet !!!!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
omg just got back from vacation, with no figging internet. yea I know I even boooked it, oh well hubby and kid had a great time. Love this chapter, can't wait to get caught up, it is Thursday 7 pm. *mwah*
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sapphire and diamond necklace. Wow you did put a twist in there with jake.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
aww it seems we have a family in the making and another couple of sets of eyes on skanks-r-us lol
hugs xxx
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
God I love this story! Hopefully Edwards family follows him too!
Thanks for making Jake a good guy! I am totally team Edward but I like when Jake is a good guy!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can not wait to read the rest of what you will come up with for this amazing story! I really can't wait until the next updates to come.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sweet chapter. Yea!!! A Jake I don't automatically hate.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aw, wow, SO amazing! YAY!!! I really cannot wait to see what he gets her! I love the idea of them building her dream house :D So excited! I cannot wait to see how Bella reacts!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you, loved it. Had a few chaps to catch up on and loved each one.
I do hope Bella needs to use her moves to whack a bitch. I can understand that Bella is unsure, she feels plain and nothing special, but she has good friends and a great man to help her see otherwise.
i think if i was in that situation i would feel like maybe he was just tryong to pass the time.
But hey, loving it and looking forward to more.
Loved the whole cake and skype. She went to so much trouble, so it should show where her feelings lie.
Thank you for the updates.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story!!!! Love the way how B reacts when lt. Mallory disrupts the skype chat!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cute so far!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it. Bella is one tough chick. Nurse Mallory better watch out!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love it...Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well the got the ILY's out. I'm sure Edward will enjoy his pictures!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
What a great way for Edward to celebrate his birthday when he's so from home. Loved the t-shirts. Wonder what's in the last envelope
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
OH WOW...AMAZING :D I really loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH MY GOSH!! YAY! Loved it! The ILYs were perfect and I LOVED what Bella said to Lauren ;)
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH WOW..>SO amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awwww poor Bella. I love that she's a badass!!!!
I hope Skanksrus gives her a reason to go MMA on her ass!!!!!!!!
Lol
Loved it!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
i love kick ass bella!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Lol loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 15
I like that you are making Bella a shy but tough girl that you don't want to mess with. I would love to read about her kicking Lauren's ass.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved the "I Love you's"
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Envelope please
Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am wondering if he should wait till the guys arent watching to open his present :-)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
So super excited to get three chapters what a treat. Loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter and maybe another day like today.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
this is awesome. i love how Bella said she would play wack-a-bitch with lauren lmao. thats hilariouuuuus
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
Go bella. Work off that anger
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ugh hopefully skankren will finally back off
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so loving this story can't wait to see what in envelope tomorrow,Thank you for the early update you too mathisson xx
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh they said it and she told the girls and now their training to kick skank ass watch out mallory the bitch pack is after you
hugs xxx
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Isn't it funny how everyone automatically knows you're in trouble when they use your full name?
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
haha skanks-r-us got her ass handed to her verbally with a side order of my man touch and i'll break you love it
hugs xx
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww sweet surprise
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
so good it looks like jasper has learnt a lesson
hugs xxx
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww sweet big bro talk
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aww poor self deprecating b
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!!!! Uh oh interrupted by em.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh b. You are dangerous. Hmm wonder what em will say about b and e
Date: 20 Jun 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh evil bella and her treats. ROFL for the fifty shades commentary
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the reply. Wonder how long till em writes her.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great idea b. Hopefully. Skankren will back off now.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Uh oh she caught out jazz. Lol.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Liked the pig's. B is so sweet to send yhr stuff. Medical officers are in a diff promotion track than other officers so I can see the rank difference. (Im retired AF)
Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet start. Graduate at 20, wow.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
OH WOW, so amazing :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
Aww, they are just too sweet!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love Bella's surprise! I think Edwardis going to just die when he sees everything she is doing for him. It is just going to make him fall in love with her more!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story!
Date: 20 Jun 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
that was great! i can't wait to see what the present is.
Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!!! Gimme more please. Can't wait for the update. Thanx so much though
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 12
i loooove this story one of my all time faves :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awwww epic epic epic sweetness so sweet I had tears in my eyes xxx
Author's Response:
awww thanks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oooh can't wait to see Edwards birthday surprise Bella is so super nice to these boys, well when they don't lie to her hehe xxx
Author's Response:
LMAO no shit! *giggles*
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awwwww Loved it!!!
I just wish your chapters were longer!! Lol
Author's Response:
patience is a virtue! ch 13 is being written now!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was so sweet!
Author's Response:
thanks, more to come!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
nice birthday surprize for Capward love the story so far
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awww that was so sweet. I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon.
Author's Response:
thanks! Will write more ASAP!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait to see the rest of the surprise!
Author's Response:
you will laugh LMAO
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
love this story!!! can't wait for the other birthday part!!
Author's Response:
thanks! just wait, you will laugh
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
kodak moment there and Dr Armyward has a surprise for his birthday from a group of beautiful ladies a a sly pair of buggers
hugs xxx
Author's Response:
hehe just wait for the rest!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very sweet
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! Awww she made him a cake!!
Author's Response:
she did!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wonder what's in his box?
Author's Response:
hehe you will see
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Cant wait for more loved it!
Author's Response:
thanks, being written now!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wonderful Chapter. You get him told B.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow a birthday party in a box shipped out to war and a brother bear to put it all together i wonder what team icepix has sent out to the boys is someone in for a nasty surprise
hugs xxx
Author's Response:
who doesnt want a party in a box? LOL
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
OH WOW!! YAY!! I cannot wait to see what he gets as a present and how he reacts to the cake :D
Author's Response:
LOL me too!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
That went well. Now they are both open to moving forward. I can't wait to see what the girls ave planned.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews, next ch is about to go up! Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, I think it's time for Bella to get serious and make our dear attain hers, of course with a little help from her friends
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
I definately think that there wasn't too much acting in that phone call. They may not fully realize it yet, but those feelings are there
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well, payback is definately a bitch! Hehehe