[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
soo good
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the Fifty Shades comments. I totally agree. I can't wait to see the show down between Bella and the skank, that's going to be fun.
Author's Response:
oh yeah! I can't wait either
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
ahhhhhhh update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL I'm writing it as I type here! LOL
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
to funny :)
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
OH WOW..AMAZING :D
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! off to write ch 8
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Made me laugh.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the story. Thank you.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Ch 7 is up!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it cant wait for more
Author's Response:
mores up babe!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG I know what Bella did to Jasper hehe that is so clever :D I just love the banter between Edward and Bella they r so cute together xxx
Author's Response:
LOL paybacks a bitch, thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the letters between Bella & the Captain:) I see that Bella is getting her revenge on Jasper! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! next ch is up
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved Bella's revenge on Jasper. Her Skanks R Us and whack-a-bitch comment were too funny. I still love their effortless ease.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Ch 7 is up!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love the ease these two have with each other already just through their letters. I love her reaction to his picture.
Author's Response:
easy is good, thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this fic!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol I love fiesty Bella. I can't wait to see what she does to Jasper for payback or how Edward reacts to the photos.
Author's Response:
paybacks a bitch LOL
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
I loved Bella's letters to the guys. It just goes to show that a little kindness goes along way.
Author's Response:
it sure does
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just feel completely in love with Bella! That was a great thing that she did. Good start to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Ch 7 is up!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving this.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
aww i though she would comment on how hot he was since he called her beautiful. More please :)
Author's Response:
She will, ch 7 is up babe!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love the back and forth. So - are they going to start emailing each other? How about Skype? My son in law (who's currently deployed) Skypes with my daughter regularly. Makes it great to catch up!
Author's Response:
HEHE stay tuned to find out!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know but she did miss a big part of the getting to know one another before they fucked also. But we are mere readers not editers.
Author's Response:
LOL yep!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
soo good
Author's Response:
Lol thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hey Ms Kim- Happy Saturday to you.... Favorite line...."What FanFiction, and where do I find it?" that was wonderful....oh yeah, revenge is sweet!!!! LMFAO!!!! till next update... you rawk!
Author's Response:
LOL I kow right? Revenge is a bitch
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ok loved this but cant believe you dissed 50 shades. Must admit prefered the Master of the universe fanfic. Much better story. wonderfully written.
Author's Response:
LOL Sorry, but I HAD to! She only changes the names from MOTU and not even ALL OF THEM! That was it!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ah yes i think most of us have doped something at some point i ysed to put ex-lax in the coffee my old flat mate brought the cheap shop brand and used to cain my kenco so not on i look forward to more of this i love forces edward well off to check out your others and apologies i never review every chapter i too engrossed Dak x
Author's Response:
LOL its OK babe, more later!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Very cute chapter - keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ok so what did she add to the cookies for Jasper??? Too funny !!!!! But i bet he learned his lesson. Update soon
Author's Response:
Revenge is sweet! LMAO
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loving your story update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
ha ha she got jasper good... :) looking forward to more
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, so loved it.
Think we all know what you would want Edward.
Loved the Skanks r us and whack a bitch.
Looking forward to Jasper and Em's POV's, esp Jasper and his cookies. hahaha.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! More next time
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
ok leaving you love. love love love. giggles awesome chappy.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! paybacks a bitch Jasper
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving it so.
Yes Bella I think you could be getting into trouble, but its Edward, so what the hell. lol
Author's Response:
LMAO Thanks
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh, what has Edward planned. Can't wait.
Author's Response:
LOL wait and see!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Please please update today if its possible. I have to know what the hell was said in the others letters, and what made Jasper run so fast ;) great job so far enjoying every minute of it, keep up the awesome work.
Author's Response:
Lol hjopefully update tomorrow. And as they say.... paybacks a bitch!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Not a 50 fan, although I guess Bella picked Edward's curiosity and he'll go looking for it as soon as he gives Jasper something for the reaction he got from Bella's cookies.
I like their sharing information form, eqch asks something and gives something back. I wonder what does Edward want for his birthday? Will he tell Bellaor the guys?
Author's Response:
LOL paybacks a bitch Jasper!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
tut, tut Jasper.
Aw, Edward is lovely
Looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
loving it.
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
revenge is a dish best served cold I think revenge has started poor Jasper i just hope he's able to cross his legs tight enough and run fast enough (ohh is he gonna have to see Dr Feelgood) to prevent accidents. skanks r us and whack a bitch should become everyday sayings skanks r us needs another reminder to back off me thinks
Huggs Babe xxxx
Author's Response:
LMAO wait and see babe!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Laughed my ass off can't wait for mOre please tell me this will have a hea for e/b
Author's Response:
I know right, poor Jasper! NOT!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Saw this on Quiet Storm site on facebook, looked good, and I am hooked already just from chap 1.
Thanka
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've pulled that prank before!!! I was in the Marine Corps
Surrounded by little boys who needed to learn a lesson!! Lmao
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lmao!!! I love this story!! Bella is awesome!!!!
Poor Jazzy poo!(literally) Exlax cookies are great paybacks!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO How did you know?
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
OH WOW...SO amazing :) I really loved it! I wonder what Bella did to Jasper's cookies/goodies ;) Hehe. I cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
LMAO wait and see! LMAO poor thing had to 'run' out of there
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I really love ur story!! :) please UD soon again:)
Author's Response:
Thanks, updatingin a minute
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
So cute. I am loving this story. Can't wait to see what she has to say about his picture. LOL
Author's Response:
HEHE next ch is about to go up!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'll review this chapter here instead of FF:
Another great update, i didn't expect the picture of the guys though-what a good surprise. Don't see a problem with the age gap-8years? and the way you developed bella she's way mature for her age. Can't wait to see the next update, I'm sure it'll be as good as this one
Author's Response:
Thanks, next ch is about up!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh man. I want more and pictures too please. ;)
Author's Response:
Will do! Next ch is about up
Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! more tomorrow
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh, that was wonderful!!!! Yippee!!!! I love the easy banter back and forth....
Author's Response:
Thanks! tomorrows update is HILARIOUS!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
loving this so far, can't wait to see how it develops :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, more tomorrow!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
sweet!!! love dr feelgood! doctor doctor ...i have a fever! anything you have handy to take a fever with? lol
do we get another update soon? :just askin'
Author's Response:
ROFLMFAO! Maybe a flesh colored thermometer? Tomorrow babe! LOL
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love Edward's response to Bella with the picture! Alice should deal with Jasper:) Bella needs to focus on the Captain! It's great that he wants to get to know her as more than Emmett's little sister. I don't think the age difference is a big deal. They really are too cute! I am glad that you put the link on Facebook because even though I put this as a favorite story on here, I am not getting an email alert.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Oh next ch will be awesome, paybacks a comin Jasper! Watch out!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it Kim!
Can't wait for next chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! more tomorrow!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow, that was amazing :D I really loved it! I love their age gap, it is not a problem :) I need to comment though on Edward's birthday. Father's Day is not a set holiday...it changes every year. While it is always on the third Sunday in June, that is not always June 20th. Just letting you know :) I don't want to sound rude or mean, I just wanted you to know, in case you didn't. I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Author's Response:
I know about June 20th, it happens to be my sis in laws bday, she was born on fathers day too. im using it for story LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
I lOve this! It made me smile and I feel Bella's anticipation. Keep doing what your doing. I can't wait for more.
Heather
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Next ch is with beta now, will be up in morning. All I will say is its EPIC LMAO
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
She is doing just fine. I am glad there is a love connection. LOL
Author's Response:
LOL thanks! Paybacks a coming! stay tuned
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
To answer all ur Qs
Yes I think she will comment on the picture I love how these two flirt with each other so easily
I think she might try to get Alice to do something but lil Ali might develop feelings for this naughty jasper and not want to do something
I think she should show the girls who they r emailing and I don't think the age gap is that big :D true love doesn't care about age xxx
Author's Response:
Stay tuned for your answers, ch 6 is almost done HEHE
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
i have a 9 year age gap between myself and my hubby so I have no issue with your age gap payback is a bitch and Jasper deserves payback a 2 pronged approch for taking the p**s and making Bella mad at Emm
huggs xxxxx
Author's Response:
Revenge is being written right now babe! HEHE
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
ooooooh! loved the letter from edward...and that pic! gahhhhh!
Author's Response:
I know right! UGH
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
ooooh! nice one Edward! lets hope mallory gets the hint and backs off. great chapter hun xx
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
hola me encanta tu historia te voy a seguir aqui mientras los dias de suspencion a ff
Author's Response:
suspencion no, ban si, mas lunes en ff
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
hahahahaah! jasper wanted to get emmett in trouble (oh and have more cookies) lol. and bella's plan to send those pics...woo can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Keep going! LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved the letters from bella to the boys!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
He did the right thing by hidding the pictures, even from Emmett. Those are just for him. As for Bella showing the girls the picture I guess she should, after all, they are helping her out. I like that Bella and Edward write letter and not emails to each other, even if they take longer to get to their destination.
I wonder what will Bella do for Edward's birthday, and what will Emmett say about so much correspondance between his sister and his friend.
Author's Response:
yeah Em saw enough. LOL She will show them, and I love real letters.... we will see about Em later
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
you stopped it there???????
Author's Response:
LMAO YEP! :P
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
i like this :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Cant wait for more! I love their age gap personally!
Author's Response:
Thanks, me too. Off to write ch 6!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
heck no age is not a factor heck my dear fiance is 18 yrs older than me age is just a number.
Author's Response:
good, thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this story, can not wait for Bella's next letter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm writing it now! LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
soo good
Author's Response:
LOL thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story. As far as where you take each character, I think that any of the possibilities available for choosing would be great so have at it:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can not wait to see his resnse to the pics. This Bella sounds a lot like me.
Author's Response:
Keep readin, you have 2 chs to go!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
I LOVED it! It was great!
Author's Response:
THanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ha! Fluv the pretending to be the girlfriend bit! I'm shocked Em didn't lose his shit! Lmao!
Author's Response:
He didn't see the rest of the pics yet! LMAO Gimme time
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hehe Edward is so evil this fantastic xxx
Author's Response:
So not evil yet! LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh!!! Naughty naughty Jasper someone is gonna regret messing with Bella :P xxx
Author's Response:
UH HUH LMAO
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story so far. Please keep updating. I am following on fanfiction as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Ch 5 is being written as I type this
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
This Bella is so sweet I love how she took the time to think of her brothers friends as well as him xxx
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think this story can really go somewhere
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow already rly enjoying this story having the boys in the army is a rly I interesting twist xxx
Author's Response:
Thanks! Keep going, writing ch 5 as I type this LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I loved it. Did Bella go to far - heck no. Well maybe with telling himhe didn't have to share the goodies. But that is one way to make Edward feel very special. Especially with the pics of little Bella. wonder if he thinks of her at shower time. he he he
Author's Response:
We will have to see... LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
great start hun! reading this over here due to fan fic thingy. xx
Author's Response:
Thanks, me too!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really love your story so far! Cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well that was fun Jaspers in so much trouble did Emm hurt him badly lol aaaaaaaaaahhhhh poor Lauren not skanks r us need to learn to listen to not interested more please xxx
Author's Response:
skanks r us lmao. I love that!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella is evil. But, I love her. I also love the mail banter. Are they going to email? Cyber? LOL...*I'm a horny bitch* Love ya, girl!
Author's Response:
I know, LMAO Eventually, maybe, and DUHHHHHHHHHHH thats what happens when hubby's overseas LMAO
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Much love! Love! Love! Fabulous chapter, Kim!
Author's Response:
LOL thanks babe!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
God, I love this Bella! She's so cute! And, militaryward! DAYUM! Break me off a piece of that.
Author's Response:
LMAO thanks babe! So you approve?
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yea... So I followed you hear rather than ff.net. With all that going on, glad you're hear too. Loved this chapter, I can see over protective big bro but can't stop chemistry ;)
Author's Response:
LOL I know right? Oh just wait til he replies to her. More tomorrow here so stay tuned!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love army Edward!!!! Love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try, and its ArmyDrWard LOL
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this so far!
Author's Response:
WOW thanks!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
OH WOW...I really loved it :D I loved Bella's letter and picture ;) YAY! I found something, as a beta, that I didn't understand. I wish to make the following suggestion here, " I open the send envelope" , I think it should be "second" not "send". A send evelpope doesn't make sense to me. Anyway, I cannot wait to see Bella's surprise :D
Author's Response:
LOL thanks I will fix it!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
OH WOW..that was amazing! I really loved it! So, Bella must be super smart to not only have graduated college at age 20, but graduate with a Master's degree at 20 too! I cannot wait to see what happens next with them!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Ch 5 is in the works LOL
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, obviously, I didn't really read the last part of the chapter before writing my review...oops. Sorry. Anyway, still love it :)
Author's Response:
LOL its ok, love you anyways
Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, this sounds great! I really love it so far. So, Bella is what, 21/22? I just graduated college too and I am 21, just curious. If Edward/Emmett/Jasper are older, how much older are they?
Author's Response:
Bella's 19 right now, and the guys are 28
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
soo good
Author's Response:
thanks! so funny right? I can't wait for Bella's payback HEHE
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jasper is a sneaky little devil, that is so funny. Edward seems so nice and I like the snickers at the end of his letter/ At least he told Bella the truth so Em didn't get into to much trouble about the cookies. Added to favorites !!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey babe! Ch 4 is done and HILARIOUS! keep eyes posted!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
very interesting !! Loolking foward to the answers about the college dilema.
Author's Response:
thanks, and she explains in ch 4 which I just finished, stay tuned!