Date: 30 Dec 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love that Bella can't really vocalize her inner monologue!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't beleive this is your first attempt! It was amazingly well done. I like the second-person point of view; it's a refreshing change from first and third, and it involved the reader more intensely than they do. Brava!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was fun! The first-person POV seemed a bit self conscious, but that just be first story jitters. I'd love to see these characters again if you're up for expanding this past a one-shot.
Author's Response:
I was sooo nervous when I wrote that. I did it on a dare. LOL! I'm working on copying the completed chapters of the continuation from FFnet to here. Tailspin is a WIP but there are 11 chapters completed and I hope to have the next installment to my Beta soon.
Thank you for the review. I really appreciate it!
Christa
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okay, wow... That was so hot you might want to include a warning! And, you left it open so I can infer my own HEA for them. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm actualy continuing the story in EPOV. Currently it's posted on FF.net. But I'm working to get the chapters moved over here. If you favorite me, I think you'll get an alert when I get Tailspin posted here.
Again, thank you for the review. I really appreciate it!
RuinedbyRob