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Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 91

That should make for Ali-Mae's life around this school interesting. I'll bet some of the teachers will cause her more problems than the students.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 90

Bring to the office and lay down some authority, Edward!
Cartoon characters, much better than naked. lol

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 89

Oh Edward, the naked idea, really. At least it made her laugh!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 88

The hate of parents is spread like locust to their children. Perpetuating the hate through rumors and misconception. Why does it have to be that way?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 87

He is getting ahead of himself. He better ask Bella before it caused a fight of epic proportions.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 86

More than friends!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 85

Yes, time for the ground work to be laid out for a proper relationship to flurish.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 84

Great reunion scene!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 83

Now Ali will have the opposite problem from being picked on. They will try and use her to get to the famous guy!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 82

Now this is a big step in the right direction for Edward.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 81

Ali-Mae will be so excited to see Edward again.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 80

Their status will reveal itself shortly.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 79

A much better care giver! Now Bella has to keep up her end of the plan to get Edward to stay.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 78

She did the only thing she could think o to get him to come back to her! It worked.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 77

What happen to Team Cullen to the rescue. Once again they did more damage to Bella and Ali-Mae and the pain they thought they were trying to prevent. Such a common mistake when loved ones over step their boundaries.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 76

Good contact! How bad is the set back?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 75

Two months is a long time to hide. Decision time.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 74

Can't blame you Edward, but you need to reach out to Carlisle. He will protect your where abouts.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 73

Carlisle has every right to upset with his wife. He knew his son was making the adjustments necessary to correct his mess up existence. They had no right to get involved at this stage of Bella's and Edwards friendship.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 72

You tell them Bella. How will they tell Ali-Mae that they kicked out her best friend?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 71

They will not be able to fix this. Bella needs to stand up for herself and tell Alice she did it again. Saw something that wasn't there and made a snap decision hurting others.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 70

How can they not see it?
Will they be able to stop him before irreparable damage may be done?
Alice better fix this!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 69

He's going to bolt all because they have no faith in him. Hope Charlie and Ali step up and read them all the riot act because Bella is going to have a set back in her progress!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 68

Who asked Emmett to be the spokes person on behalf of the 'Edward can't change' group!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 67

Slowly the bonds are mending between friends!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 66

The hair will grow back as a sign of her progress!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 65

Awe! Sweet admissions of infatuation and growing admiration for each other.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 64

Just answer the question, Edward!
Bella deserves to know how you have grown in affection towards her.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 63

Jasper will work his magic. Can't wait to read Maggie's take on this mess!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 62

Oh yeah, Renee has her hands all over this brew-haha!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 61

Team Cullen to the rescue again. Why do I get the feeling Renee has something to do with the paps being at the hospital?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 60

Jasper just threw Edward to the wolves!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 59

Great, add the stress of the paps to the little girls already upside down life.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 58

Bella must have talked about Edward to Ali-Mae before the accident.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 57

What was Bella about to say?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 56

where we go!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 55

What a circus to wake up to!
Will Bella experience an loss of memories?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 54

Bella was under age. She must have been under the jurisdiction of one of her parents? If Renee gave up parental rights then Charlie had the next of kin thing going in his favor. By the courts directives he should have been her legal parent/guardian. How did that not happen?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 53

About time Charlie showed up! Perceptive as always.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 52

She didn't even care about his explanation of the 'other hole'. haha.
What names did she come up with?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 51

Put on your big girl panties Edward and talk to her about the physical side of where puppies come from. haha!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 50

Sasha was about to give birth to puppies, right? Awe, a bonding moment for Edward and Ali-Mae.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 49

Who? Was Maggie staying with the Cullens? Or was is Ali-Mae?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 48

He is in love with the idea of her; the difference in her person from what he had become accustomed to.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 47

such a long process to endure and the hard work of recovery hasn't even begun.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Just play your music to sooth her weary heart and soul.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

Go Team Cullen!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thank goodness!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 43

Where did they eat?
No wonder Bella was malnurished, she had no where to prepare food or store it for that matter. How did Ali-Mae get fed?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 42

The attachment is changing for Edward. His comments are sounding as if there will be a future for Ali-Mae in his life beyond Alice caring for her in the interim.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 41

What was Edward grasping on to? How did his presence affect Bella's recovery?

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 40

Perceptive Alice. He can't pay penance by sitting in her room.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thank goodness that Maggie has been an ever present force in Bella and Ali-Mae's lives.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 38

Bonding between Ali-Mae and Alice will be interesting to watch.
Hope Jasper is successful in his efforts.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 37

A bit teary eyed.....'when' she pulls through.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 36

Even family support cannot prepare you for that image!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

Did James have any contact with Ali-Mae?
Her apprehension with Jasper speaks volumes about her cautious nature just like her mom.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 34

Bella obviously talked a lot about her best friend to her daughter.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

Together, they need each other in order to find the strength to press forward day after day. This is going to be a long haul.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 32

Alice has some actions of her own that need to be taken to get her back to where she used to be just like Edward.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

No Edward, you don't.
Do something with the chance you've been given to show Bella you can return back into the human being that you were intended to be.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

Now who is the emotionally broken one!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Doesn't sound like she is going to be up and around any time soon if at all.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Reality is hitting Edward right where it needs to.....respectability and concern for others. this may be the turning point his family is praying for.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 27

Good thing Esme over rode Edward's reluctance to be with the family.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 26

How Bad are Bella's injuries.
Can't remember how old Ali-Mae is. 7?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 25

I'd be just as stunned as Alice!

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wow! Not sure where this could be headed.

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Date: 20 Aug 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Interesting....Jenks? Why was he there?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 22

They all seem to need each other to get thru the hurt!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

Alice need to sort this out!

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 122

Just came across this one today, great story, thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 122

Loved it, beautiful  story!

Thanks for sharing.

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 122

I loved it!  Edward sure changed.  I'm glad that he was really close to Ali.  Thank you so much.  I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 122

great story

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 122

I loved this fic. Would love to see an outtake about Bella being pregnant with Jack and being in labour with him.

Reviewer: dazzling-addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 122

Fantastic story! Loved it!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 108

I don't think Alice was in any position to make threats, but I'll forgive her 'cause she's in labor and all that... yeah...

Reviewer: JenGail01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 122

Really loved the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 122

Thankyou for this amazing story. I really enjoyed it and loved that they all go their happy ending. Love your work.

XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
XoxoxoxoxoX

Reviewer: nanie057 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 122

c(était une très belle histoire

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 116

I gather she said yes!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 114

So excited!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 112


What does Edward mean " a place away from her and Ali"?

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 110

Progress!!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 108

Go Alice!

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 102

I love how these two have forged such a firm friendship and also I love how Edward is so patient with Bella, even being prepared to be just a friend if that is all she can cope with. Not many men like that around!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 79

There, now time to kick some butt!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 78

oh no.... what happened to her?

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 77

Oh boy... I bet they will think twice now before deciding what's "best" for them, huh?

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 75

I think it will take a bit more than just a phone call for him to forgive them.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 73

I knew I liked Carlisle... no ass kicking for him... maybe just a little spanking. LOL

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 71

thanks for updating! Poor Edward... I wanna kicke everyone's ass! (except Bella and Ali, of course)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 72

YOU TELL THEM BELLA! 

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 70

She cared for him as well.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 69

No Edward you need to be there for her she is good for you.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 70

*sniffs* More, please? *pouts*

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 68

Oh no but he is trying to change to be better.

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Date: 19 Aug 2012 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 67

Like Alice would ever let her move back in there.

Reviewer: Lovedwardalways Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 66

But I bet he still thinks she is beautiful.

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