Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow what a eventful night.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Uh, what IS going on?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Well, I don't know Eddie, you're just too good to leave, right?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
So far his one redeeming virtue: he loves his mom!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Eddie, you sweet talker, you.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Even the thought of his grandma doesn't stop him? Tsk, tsk.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Eddie needs a little help with his plan.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Here comes Alice....
Date: 18 Aug 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh goodie, here's Bella. Don't make it easy for him!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Too much fame. Too much money. I hate when life sucks like that. Poor Eddie. Maybe Bella will come around and cheer him up? Or make it worse?
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Pathetic, Eddie, just pathetic!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
That's not some healthy time off.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
And I repeat, Yuck!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yuck, Eddie, you're a mess!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 45
Simply love this story!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
Don't hold back please!! Poor Bella, I hope Edward/Jasper and Alice get a swift kick in the ass, have absolutely NO sympathy for the arrogance of Edward and bitchiness of Alice.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
Omg loving the story!! It makes me want to cry and then go kill some people!!!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
Snap out of it Edward. Stop Bella from running away. Alice needs to find out what Bella did to protect her. They need each other to begin the healing process.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that's a bit much to digest!
Has Bella been on her own since 14, a child, raising one by herself?
Can't believe her mother would not support her under the circumstances.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, didn't see that one coming.
How old was she when she got pregnant?
The circumstances surrounding it sound ominous.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is so clueless when it comes to others and the lives they lead.
That was such an arrogant statement.
You rip him a new one, Bella.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
What happened between Alice and Bella? Is Alice over reacting?
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 15
That's what I want to know!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Everyone must sense the change in Bella's behavior. Do they think Edward messed up again?
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ahhhh it's so easy to just click right through the chapters and not know how many I've gone through until I hit the end. :(
I knew Bella's past was going to be big, but I hadn't expected that. FOURTEEN! Geez, that's just...wow.
I love the twists in this story, already.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
wow, this story rendered me speechless. i am amazed about how it turned. keep updating as soon as you can.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh love it update soon please xxx
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to mroe
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
HOLY SHIT! You've left me speechless as well.... Poor Bella....
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
I need more please
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 20
All I can say is wow....:)
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
:( Poor Bella, Can't wait to see the conversation in that house.
-Kate
Date: 25 Jun 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
great story so far! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I don't think she is 'just the cook'.
What is it that finally breaks him. When will he seek to learn what makes 'the cook' so desirable?
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
No Edward, your just an insensitive asshat!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Immature brat, that's what he is.
Will Bella confide in Alice Edward's un-gentleman behavior? Hope Alice reads him the riot act when she arrives.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
He took her words as an invitation?
Hm, wonder if that was her true intent?
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
If I were her, I'd wield a knife around so fast he would think twice about sneeking up on anyone ever again.
I don't recognize the song. Is it an old folk song?
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hope he gets stone-walled again!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
His family sure has taken on a pile of garbage. What will it take for him to want something more out if life?
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like the self destruct button has been engaged.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Go Alice, work your magic.
Edward sure is full of excuses.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is certtainly a self absorbed asshole.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yet, he seems to be pretty hung up on her, huh?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
*massive eye roll* act like a child, get treated like a child!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
WHAT AN ASSHOLE!!! Can I kick him in the nads?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh oh... I don't think she's horny, Fuckward!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
... and scared the crap out of her. Sure, that's how you gonna get her to fuck you *rolls eyes*
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
he sure has a big head! pun intended... LOL
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
pregzilla... snorts!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
what a horny pervert drunk... love it! LOL
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
How very Tony Stark of him... *smh*
Date: 10 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok, he's some sort of public figure that is in self destructive mode. What's on the horizon?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
What makes this privileged asshat so special that his escapades are documented like an ABC back to school made for TV movie?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
That in interesting beginning.
The things we do (or the who) under the influence of alcohol should teach use to moderation. But humans are slow learners, or is it the learning curve is too high to reach? Lol
Date: 10 Jun 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very interesting. Looking forward to more.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
looking forward to mroe
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Damn.... Alice really knows how to rip a new one, eh?
Date: 09 Jun 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy.... what an ass! LOL
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Now that was funny. One night stands are fine but don't mess with the bedding lol. So is that Alice giving him crap I love Alice.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ut oh!! Edward is in TROUBLE....
Date: 09 Jun 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Oh!!! A red head in his bed!! :) xx
Date: 09 Jun 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
I never got to read this story over at ff.net, so I can't wait to read it now! x ~Mina