Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
This chapter was freaking awesome
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Mhmmm... That was so good...
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Too sweet! But how could she just go home? I am sure I couldn't...
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
Kids really do have a way of cutting to the chase, don't they? Loved the chapter!!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Now how could he conclude a thing like that? Well, I can understand not being able to slow it down, because they are getting very hot and heavy. But turning it into a real relationship? Maybe it is just too fast, and they do have complicated lives already...
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well you have confirmed for me, if I even needed it, why I steer clear of haunted houses! Of course, holding onto Edward is certainly appealing...
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay... So, I officially worship the ground Esme walks on. She effing rules!! I love the way you manipulated the original characters to the one that you have. They are fascinating, and funny. One of my favorite things to read, is when Bella and Rosalie are best friends or sisters, and I love the way you have them in this story. I love man and baby moments. Emmett is just too adorable for words when he has a baby. Edward and Carlisle too. I almost never see Jasper with a baby, so I don't really have an opinion on him and babies, but I know that it would be cute too. Anyway, I love you story, just thought you should know.
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks for the heads up originally, that you had been posting on TWCS, because I knew where to find it! FFn is sometimes problematic, although it is the easiest thing to use and find new things.
Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter, and really appreciate Bella's breastfeeding issues as a former breastfeeding mother myself! Good for Esme and the Cullens for standing up for what is right.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
hihi car is like his daddy^^charmer...
cute how flustered edrward is when he asks her out
Tina
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
well, well...coincidences...^^
well thought through
keep writing
Tina
Date: 15 Jul 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, It's rather interesting. I like this chapter. Edward's children are so nice. Thanks for your funfiction. I go to read next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
awww how sweet!!!
he sure is a good dad!
haha 10 seconds..really ridiculous^^ bur well three years has passed...
i like ff.net better but i´m too curious for my own good^^
have a nice day
Tina
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
uh oh cold feet huh
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
lol that was great
Date: 09 Jul 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
poor Edward he was a 2 pump chump
Date: 30 Jun 2010 7:16 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow great story, though the last chapters were a bit jumpy considering the timeline, but thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading very much.
M4troth
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story. I loved it!!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
naah.... But here is my e-mail: esperanga@hotmail.com (don't laugh it was a dare an I can't bloody change it lol)
xoxo
m
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was the best chapter so far. I loved the visual you set about Edward coming out of the pool. Hott!!! Love the story.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! I can't believe I'm just now getting to this story but I like feisty esme!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 8:00 PM Title: Epilogue
I'll be interested to see where you pick it up at. I'd rather it be either the for years before they got married, or pick up right when they get married. I don't want the kids to be super old! :)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
I just found this story and must say, am enjoying it. This was the best swimming scene in a fanfiction I've ever read. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Wow... thanks :D
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Such a beautiful love story!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward ... great father ....sexy as hell....multi millionaire......can he get any better???
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Fabulous!!! Love the tension ... and the great sex scene!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awsome birthday party; although Bella got the best gift: Edwards love!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Slow down? Huh? I hope things speed up for them!!! Edward is such a good father!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Edward is sneaky --- planning a date that kept Bella in his arms the whole time!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved the girl talk!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can the Cullen family be any more perfect? Wonderful swim day!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a romantic first date!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Nice chapter! Love it!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
AWWW---- there are so many ways to connect Bella & Edward --- they have to be in each others lives, right?
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love a tattoo'ed Edward, but Carlisle too? Awesome! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
So they meet! Let's hope that the tattoo's need more sessions to be completed, so they can meet again!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this first chapter!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Even if you do, in my opinion, it will be worth it, maybe you can regain your interest in Predator Hunter while writing the sequel
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
love the story....and you are right those suits are too cute!
Date: 31 May 2010 11:08 PM Title: Epilogue
very sweet story. i loved it.
Date: 23 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue
that was a good story i liked it
Date: 17 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: Epilogue
lovely story, i enjoyed every moment
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2010 9:15 AM Title: Epilogue
I havet say this was the a beautiful light filled story I have read in a long time. There was no Bella getting attacked, no one chasing to kill someone else, it was pure unadulterated love.
Thank you for a wonderful story and I had pleasure reading it in 4 hours.
Date: 06 May 2010 6:44 AM Title: Epilogue
great story ! loved how it ended!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:36 PM Title: Epilogue
I don't want it to end! I kept waiting
for the other shoe to drop, it never
did. That was brilliant! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:13 PM Title: Epilogue
read the whole story in one sitting - couldn't help it i was hooked : )
perfect ending from the terrific start !!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:35 PM Title: Epilogue
while i know i should have reviewed earlier *hangs head in shame* i just couldn't stop reading..... i laughed, i cried, i got angry and i even got a little scared when they where in the haunted house : )
thank you for sharing !!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:53 PM Title: Epilogue
Great finish to a great story! Have a wonderful day :)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 12:12 AM Title: Epilogue
amazing story bravo!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Ahhh!!! Such a great ending. It had everything - a wedding, a baby, cute kids growing up, a surprise kid, and more tattoos. What more can I say? I loved the story and loved the epilogue. That last line was perfect.
Great, great job here. I look forward to reading some of your other writings but I think it will be difficult to top this one. I mean... tattooed Carlisle - how could you top that? Mmm... fantasy time.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so glad to see that you're back. And who cares if we only get a tiny glance into lemonville. I'm happy just to see an update. Your ex is an idiot if he doesn't see what a prize you are and all the love that you can give. I say this based solely on the attention you provide to your characters and your readers and I only imagine how exponentially better it is in real life.
Beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow a Carlisle Cullen with tats that is way to sexxy.. The last 3 chapters have been great... I found this story on Fictionator let them have their props....
Author's Response:
O_o Fictionator???...
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:27 PM Title: Epilogue
Wounderful story, I laughed cried, and laughed some more!!! Great job!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG...I died a little when you described Carlisles sleeves! I am totally team Edward but I have a thing for Carlisle as well...I think my heart stopped!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue
OMG!!!!!!!! I so enjoyed this story.... thanks.....
Date: 15 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I so love that you gave Carlisle tatts...drools!
Date: 13 Apr 2010 8:54 PM Title: Epilogue
I have had this on my favorites for a while and wanted to wait til it had more chapters to read or was finished I am glad that I read it all at once. I really enjoyed it a lot and wanted to say thank you for sharing your story line with us all.
Date: 12 Apr 2010 7:06 PM Title: Epilogue
What a great story! I really enjoyed the whole story, and I loved how you ended it. I look forward to reading more of your work!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
bien empiesa a gustarme saludos
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Epilogue
let me tell you i love this story and am hooked on your style of writing i have already read your new story and am going over to check out some moor of yours so please keep writing and i will keep reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 2:07 AM Title: Epilogue
Ah...I did love this...and was blessed to get to see it EARLY each chapter...thank YOU...
Going to check out the NEW story now...
Kathie
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:55 AM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing .
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Epilogue
Noooo....
I am sad but happy at the same time. This has to be one of my favorite stories ever! You are really talented. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us! :)
Date: 12 Apr 2010 1:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Great Story... Thanks.. Love that Tattward.........
Date: 12 Apr 2010 12:43 AM Title: Epilogue
That was good, and i mean not just the chapter. But this chapter was funny, i especially loved Edward's reactions to Renesmee and Jacob.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Epilogue
i loved the ending, so cute!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 9:59 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful Ending.
Aww.. and nessie and jake made it to the story
Loved there love story
Love,
Genesis.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 9:53 PM Title: Epilogue
wow, that looks fun! so there were 5 kids wow
I don't think I'll ever have more than 2, but at the same time it must be so much fun...
I loved this story, really
much love!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 9:16 PM Title: Epilogue
Well done and thank you for that story. I am always a sucker for a tatward ;)
Look forward to your next one. Keep your chin up and remember to smile :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:50 PM Title: Epilogue
Bravo !!! This was a totally awesome story and I have loved every bit of it. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to your future stories !!!!!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:02 PM Title: Epilogue
That was a sweet way to end this story!! I loved every moment of this.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:30 PM Title: Epilogue
That was amazing :) Loved the ending, perfect. Cannot wait to read your new story too :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 7:10 PM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for a grat story :)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:07 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you, it was amazing.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:44 PM Title: Epilogue
It was a pleasure reading this story. The ending was so sweet and perfect.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:43 PM Title: Epilogue
Aw Im so sad to see this ended, but it was a great story so thank you for sharing it with us ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:08 PM Title: Epilogue
Aw, beautiful ending. Thanks so much for a great story!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Epilogue
oh the end it's the end already, they obviously have a great life together involving two more children but hell they can afford it, they are happy and satisfied and at the end of the day thats all we aspire to, a great story thankyou, i only found this story the other day and i'm so glad i did, thanks tracy
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:39 PM Title: Epilogue
My sweet, sweet girl! You've done SO well! It was the perfect ending, I think. Love the banner for the new story. Great job!!! Love ya girl!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:23 PM Title: Epilogue
<3
Kinda sad that it´s over ...