Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:11 PM Title: Epilogue
OMG, amazing, LOVED the Epilog. Great story!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:02 PM Title: Epilogue
Awh, it's truly over. Such a great HEA!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:50 PM Title: Epilogue
I am a bit emo that the story is over but it's ok! it must be hard on you writing fluff with all the (shit?!) in you RL...
I'll go check out the new story!! I know it will be as good as this one and even better!!
xoxo
Marianne
Oh! By the way! my favorite DILF was here ;) It was amazing!! hehehe
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful story.
You did a wonderful job with this story and I', now looking forward to the next story.
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:35 PM Title: Epilogue
*tears* I loved this story SOOOOO much. Its sad to see it end. is there a picture of the wedding dress????? i was shocked hear it was midnight blue.
new story sounds good, any date it'll be expected??
*tears* goodbye Tatward. you'll always be in my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:23 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh I love this story and I will miss it!!! It was so cute when Lilly ran down the isle to her Daddy...that was my favorite part!!! Edward watching Renessmee was so funny. I am sure my husband will be the same when our daughter goes out for the first time! Just curious how far apart in age Charie and Renesmee are. I knew that Bella would get her book published. That is what she was meant to do, not work in a bank forever. Great job...thanks so much!!!!
Author's Response:
Ugh, stupid! I should've put that in there somewhere! Charlie and Renesmee are about a year apart in age.
Thanks for reading :D
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Epilogue
Incredible story. I loved every bit of it. You did an amazing job.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:08 PM Title: Epilogue
I would just like you to know that this has been one of the best stories I have read in a very long time. You are an amazing author with incredible talent and I, for one, am eagerly waiting you next story.
-Rayne
Author's Response:
Wow... (blushing now)... thank you so much for reading it! I'm putting the new story up on the website sometime today, I hope it doesn't disappointment, it's my first attempt at a history fic and my first serious attempt to some angst so you can imagine I'm chewing my nails off...
Thanks again!
Love,
Emma
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
i'm sure it'll be fine. you did a fantastic job with etched. too bad vampires can't be tattooed. then again, it's never really been talked about with the twilight vamps. i loved tat-ward as human. maybe we can have a tat-ward vamp?
Author's Response:
Mmh, we might need to explore that possibility :P:P lol, maybe in a future story ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Epilogue
wow i can't believe it's over, i loved each scene but the wedding with lily so cute and calling edward daddy almost made me cry, so cute! i wish youwould do outtakes of the years as the kids grew up, i will miss this story so much and i'll be back to reread it when i get the urge, thanks so much!
Author's Response:
I might... it's not something I'm interested in doing right now as I'm completely excited about exploring Predator Hunted... but I'll let you know if I do :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:56 PM Title: Epilogue
Well I am pleased they got married and had a family together. they where already a family but those two together make beautiful babies. of course there kids are ssucessful.
love it, thnax
Author's Response:
Yes they do ;) Thanks for sticking with this story
Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:53 PM Title: Epilogue
great story, love the ending looking forward to reading more of your work
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! The new story will be up on the website sometime today
Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:51 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you so much for writing this incredible story. I'm sad it's over, but I'm looking forward to Predator Hunted. Looks like it will be awesome too. I hope everything is going well for you and your little girl! Best wishes.
Author's Response:
I should thank you for reading it! It's just a figment of my insanity, LOL :P I'm sad, too... I'm uploading PH today, so keep an eye out :D
Love,
Emma
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 2:45 PM Title: Epilogue
wow! what a great epilogue! i've never read one that tied everything together so well. fantastic job! i'm excited to read your new story, too. it sounds great. i'm definitely checking it out.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading it :D
I'm uploading the new story today! I hope it doesn't disappointment... (gnaws lip:P)
Date: 10 Apr 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sorry 'bout the Photoshop BS, I know how frustrating that shit can be! Back to the story...SQEEEEEEEALLLLL! I am so happy these 2 are taking the plunge! I mean, it only makes sense, why pay for 2 places? Its just more economical...and FUN!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
I seriously love these two! I know we're in for some angst...things are just too perfect!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awesome chapter.
With lemons, sometimes less is more. This time what was there was perfect.
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
<3
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! Thanks for braving heatbreak to write it!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love it! They all are so happy. I hope Bella is able to stay home and write. That is what she really wants to do. Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Thanks so much!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
glad your back and feeling better, break ups are never easy, lots going on in this chapter thanksgiving, xmas, newyears, and their relationship is still going strong so it's all good, thanks tracy
Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 17
moving in with the delectible edward cullen life is sure looking good for bella and edward right now
Date: 09 Apr 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
50 million dollars jesus how much money, i can see how bella is conflicted with regard to the money, at least she does not need to be in a hurry to get another job
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
ohhh sexy, sexy always nice to lemon or two, off too check out the outtake, thanks tracy
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
lovely chapter just showing lovely family time and evertybody getting on
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
another great chapter, loved the declarations now they are in love things are going so well, the party was a blast, the twins are so super adorable, wonder what the morning will bring?
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
decisions, decisions edward what do you want to do, just go with the flo and let it unfold naturally,
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hey Emma,
I'm Carrie, kind of new to the site but absolutely love your story! I'll be honest I haven't beta'd for anyone in a long time but if you are still looking for someone I would love to help you out. I've been involved in Fan Fiction on and off for the past 8 years, started out with Days of Our Lives. I've done some writing which I can send you if you would like to read and have ran a few fic communities ofer the past 8 years. As I said I think this story is fantastic and you're writing style is wonderful, let me know if you are still looking for some help.
Carrie
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love how they have come together. I also love how willing each has taken to the others kids which is great. it is not always like that, I know. The baby's room for liliy ahhh that was sweet. poor bella and having or getting a job. she will or she will publish her book. something she really wants to do.
i also really loved that she left all the furniture for the nursey for the gal who got her home plus the spa day. how sweet especially since she lost her husband and she is newly pregnant. that was too sweet
love it
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
ugh killer. Some good points would be if kate or james came into play...woot for drama. loves it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
omg that was great hopefully you will have them getting engaged and married and maybe having a baby together and her writing a book and getting it published just not doing any book tours. keep me posted vze13yama@verizon.net
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Good chapte; I"m glad that Bella is all moved in now. Maybe Bella won't need to find a new job; maybe she can just get her book published and be a writer; she seems to be pretty good at that. But either way, I'm glad that Edward is being very sweet about Bella and the whole job search.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad that you are doing better. It takes time to get back to where you once were and that is the hardest thing. That is so cute that he changed his room for her. And that nursary sounds really beautiful.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
minus the haunted house it's a great date, loved the way they entered the park
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
bet she is going to make a fairy some how, loved the girl time, edward does seem to be doing things he has not before like the kissing
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
super protective emmett, gota love him
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
i l.oved the swimming pool stuff, and the wolf whistled kiss, it's good that they are doing things alone and involving the kids, well esme cullen not a lady you would want to cross obviously, and nice to see jasper and alice
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Im soo happy your back 4 real i love this storys and i soo wish i had a room like lilys lol
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
hey it sounds like they both had a good time they especially liked the ikiss, i like the pictures that you put at the end it really helps me as i'm english and quite often struggle with what famous landmarks look like, thanks
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad your back! I
love the update! :)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
their going on a date, lily has 9 days to get better, i wonder what they will do?
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the chapter even if it has got a lemon in it!! My imagination is enough for anything in that department as you know!!!
xoxo
Marianne
PS What's the new story??
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
it's all going well they are both in a position to date, and now bella is going tr meet his kids and mum, enjoyed that chapter
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
glad to see your backand i hope everything is going better for you. looking forward to the next update.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh so thats how they met again, and there is a history with emmett making things easier for them to see each other again, will she sat yes to lunch? i believe she will now that lily is not seriously ill
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
ohh i like the tattooed dr cullen nearly as much as edward tattooed hold on is he a doctor in this, edward is a piano teacher that's cool, i like his little kiddies and their mum walked out, great stuff, i wonder if he will seek out bella or her him, or another chance meeting?
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
yay you're back and i loved the nursrery!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
You did great-- some lemons are just better hinted at!! Glad to hear you're doing better. Give it time, and you'll see that everything happens for a reason!!
As for a beta for your new story, I'd be willing to give it a go. I'm currently working two stories now for Avery Shane, but I have plenty of time. I pretty much return the chapters the same day, given I get them early enough. Let me know if you need me!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
first impressions are good between bella and edward, we know why bella is single james is an ass, but what off edward circumstances? i hope we find out soon, looking forward to find out more about these two and whether we get a jasper or an alice,
Date: 08 Apr 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
i've been meaning to read this for a while after i saw it on most recent and now i'm glad i started it, story sounds cool, thanks tracy
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was great :) I am so happy Bella has the inspiration to write again, maybe that can be her career? Wonder what will happen next? Loved the picture of the family, so cute (even though I didn't really "see" it, I used my imagination).
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
well it's good to have you back!!!!
I know it's going to be hard but your stong and resilient, it will be ok...
i don't really know the duties of the betas but I'm good with grammar and such, if you ever need my help...
much love
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad your back! Love this story!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! So very sweet.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Welcome back!! I was all excited when I seen the update alert! I still want one of these Edwards, he makes me swoon ;)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
so glad that you are back sweetie - it's doesn't matter whose fault - there are 2 people in any realationship (or if you read some ff) 3 or 4 - but no matter, you are going to be fine!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was a lovely heartwarming chapter. Well done and glad to see you back.
Sorry about your breakup. Hearts are resiliant structures, the wounds you feel now will heal to small scars I promise. You are stronger than you know and braver than you think. here are some of my favorite quotes.
"Love is much like a wild rose, beautiful and calm, but willing to draw blood in its defense." - Mark Overby
"Women are like teabags; you never know how strong they are until they're put in hot water."— Eleanor Roosevelt
Date: 08 Apr 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad you're back. And glad you are doing better. Life is a journey, not a destication...it's cheesy but that phrase has helped me more than you know. this is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. I just love sweet Edward in this.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad you're back! Wasn't much of a wait, thanks for that!! I hope that everything out well for you, who knows what the future holds! Love is a powerful thing that can overcome lots and lots of road blocks!!! I must say though, I did miss the lemon. But I understand your dilemma! You can make it up to us in future chapters....right? Right? Lol!!!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Nice update! I really hope you are okay. Break-ups are really hard to deal with. Big hugs!
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love your story!!, I can beta for you if you want.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awe, I'm glad your back! Can't wait for more :)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
EMMMA!!! Girl, I'm so glad to see you back! I really liked this chapter, and no worries about lemons. They'll come when they come. You can't force yourself to be ready for anything.
If you need a beta, I'd be happy to help you out if you like. I'm doing one for my girl pattsylove (plus running thorough all of her old chapters before we hooked up). Whatever you like!
If you have a minute, check out the new story I just put up. I'm kinda proud at how it's starting out (plus, it's the first thing I've written that's longer than 1 chapter) and would love your opinion.
Love to ya!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this story and glad you are feeling better! Although you do well with the citrus-y writing, I like it when occasionally absolutely everything is left to the imagination :)
Great job!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
i sent many cyber hugs your way, little sister. i'm glad you're back. i enjoy your fabulous stories. i also recommended your story to a couple of people who were looking for a great dilfward story.
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
I just found your story today and read all of it!!!!! It is truly fabulous and I have loved reading it. I do hope that everything in your life will be looking up soon. Thank you for sharing with us this wonderful story, and hopefully soon you will be able to finish it, they you want. Again, thank you and I hope this finds you well.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
what a lovely view xx i love this story xx
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
AWESOME! :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
Yay! Jumping for joy, they are moving in together!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
I think Bella handled the "my boyfriend is a multi-millionaire" action very well. Especially after taking the Tylenol 3's!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Their 1st time was so sweet! Sigh.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Trick or treat, Edward as an Angel? Hubba hubba!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
They finally told each other how they feel, yippee! EPIC!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Relationship please! Go for it!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ack, that Haunted House action gave me the creeps! I don't handle scary very well.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
What does Bella have up her sleeve for presents for Carlisle Jr. and Wendy?
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmy, what a big, scary teddy bear!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Esme layeth the smackdown on that restaurant manager!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG, a week? I can't wait till the big date!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, talk about fast track, meeting his family already, LOL!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Woohoo! A lunch date with a chaperone and baby in tow in her future?
Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Mmm, Carlisle and tattoos, hot!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Talk about chemistry! Whoa.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love a man who's not afraid to cry...
Good chapter, as usual.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sad it is ending soon. But happy you have more stories planned. I really enjoy your writng style. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sad it is ending soon. But happy you have more stories planned. I really enjoy your writng style. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sad it is ending soon. But happy you have more stories planned. I really enjoy your writng style. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sad it is ending soon. But happy you have more stories planned. I really enjoy your writng style. Meg
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Shit I need a drink and a smoke. I don't smoke but hell it was HOT.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward as an angle is too good. What a visual angle wings and f me eyes.
Meg
Date: 30 Mar 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so happy that they're moving in together. Is marriage next for them?
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love the ily decloration and the shot down of Jessica. He he makes me happy. Meg
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love it!!! Who cares what other people are going to think. They know they want to be together. They twins see Bella as there mother. Edward thinks of Lily as his daughter. What is there for wait for. Sometimes you just know.
I am so sad this is coming to an end. I can't wait to see what you have in mind though. Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
I enjoyed so much!! Do we get to see the wedding?? Ooops that slipped ;)
I loved it!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
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