i wanted to add something else ,i think its a win-win situation edward and bella clearly love each others kids and i think they provide the love to the children as a family unit .this a good thing

YEA!!!

Yeah some people are going to say that they are moving too fast but I say whatever works for them is what is best. They know that they are going to be together so why delay that. Instead of paying 2 set of bills every month it only makes sense to pay one.

Good stuff!  Better to end it where it feels right than to drag it out and make the whole story suck :)

Love this tory and can't wait to read more of your work :)

*Pouts* it's almost over *sadface* lol

it does make sense for them to live together rather than Edward just paying for her living expenses.

I have been trying to work out how to make banners for a long time, I feel like I should be wearing a hat with stupid written across it. There is a programme that was recommended to me that may be useful to you, its www.piknic.com

Loved this chapter. The two of them are so cute together.

So no James or what's-her-name showing up? its a good story even if there's not more "complications"

this is such an adorable story. i accually like both edward and bella, that rarely happends

What you need photoshop for? Anything I can do to help?

i am sad to see this over cant wait to see what the next story is about thanks for updating :)

Yay their moving in, I kind of figured it would happen if she ended up getting fired, it just made sense.  It's funny I was just sitting here wondering when the next update would be for Etched and viola here it is :-)  I can't believe it's coming to and end though :-(

Awesome Chapter, I'm looking forward to your new story!

this is one of my favorite stories. thanks for sharing.

p.s. update soon. PLEASE? lol

Lucky you!! I loved the chapter!!

xoxo

Marianne

That is absolutely a ridiculous sum of money for one guy to have. It's a good thing he just a woman and another kid to feed and take care of. 

Happy belated Birthday to your little one! And I have been doing a little NM rewatching myself. It's not bad to watch with the sound off just seeing them move around in your periphery when you're doing something else. 

Great job with this chapter. I wonder what kind of job Bella will get. I'm off to read the C/Es outtake. Can't wait!!

I love the chapter banners...its your story so do what it is you love :).. That was sweet how the kids love bella the way they do. Also the fact that edward loves lily like bella loves the twins. It would be nice if real life was like that. xoxo~Aud

aww that is so sweet :) does Lily look just like bella??

men with nice bodies and tats are one of the most beautiful things I have ever seen. Where did you get this story idea from?? xoxo~Aud

Hmmm... a migraine in a house where people are banging on a piano?

and it's kinda funny-  for him to worry about her thinking less of him since he has money...

PUHlease....mama always said if ppl are offering it is very rude to say no.

thats why ppl never offer me anything because i always say yes.....lol

so if Edward is offering..why say no!! lol

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please don't take so long, i love this story and i loved bella's reaction to the mony, and happy birthday to your little girl!! enjoy new moon!!

Bella's boss is such an ass. She could fight him in court for unfair dismissal, single mothers have so many rights these days. But I get that she hates her job, like so many jobs I have worked in the past I was secretly begging to be fired even though I was too stubborn to quit.

Wow edward has a loooot of money, 50mil, my eyes exactly almost popped outta my head when I seen that not so small figure lol

Yeah wake up lemon!

Great chapter, and btw you have got to love Granma Esme, taking Lily with the twins.

Can't wait for the update.

i loved the chapter. i liked how you explained how much money he has. i cant wait for t the next chapter. i hope its up soon.

well i hope you enjoy your daughters b-day and enjoy new moon

i love the chapter. wow to find out your boyfriend has 50 million thats a shocker. but doesn't phase bella she isn't in it for the money. I sure hope she finds a new job maybe something she really wants to do that will pay the bills. hot hot sex, more hot hot sex

love it all

Well at least he told her because Ireally thought that he might just keep it a secret for a while and the would have gone badly for him. Now I wonder what she is going to do.

wow, i am surprised they where able to enjoy each other and really enjoy each other without any kids.

they are hot, it was a great first time. love the interaction between the 2. i loved him laughing at her when she takes his size in. love it all

oh my gosh woman now you have all hot and bothered and that is not good in this days of the month ya know! I can't even take care of bussiness myself! OK TMI, sorry :P

I'm so going to see the outtake right now, much love!!!

I absolutely love this story.  You are doing a wonderful job. 

*sighs happily*

I think I need a cigarette...

Mind you , poor wee Car, hope he feels beyyer.

Can't help but wonder what fool will get in the between B&E though?

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Well finally, this is one of my favorite stories (and not only because I want to follow it) update soon you leave me itching for more every chapter you put on ^^

:)   god i whant my world to stopp spinning..... i whant my on daddy tattword

Wow in suddenly got very hot in my livingroom Lol I love the relationship these two have. Poor Carl, getting your arm reset is horrible, I have first hand experience :(

it must be fate that you updated today. I was only home from booking in with my tattooist. It's my birthday on 17th April and that's when I'm getting my ink done. This will be number 12, I'm running out of room Lol

Awesome chapter. I love mama bear Bella. I really enjoyed this chapter.

I'm loving your Inkward/Dadward! I love how close they've all become. Are either Heidi or James going to make an appearance? I can't help thinking everything is going so well that one of them is bound to turn up and start causing trouble. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Best Part:

Emmett who carefully cradled Lily against his chest.

“C’mon, Lily-pooh. We’re going to wait for Auntie Rose to finish pimping up your Mommy,” he said, walking over to the couch. Lily in return cooed and patted his cheeks.

Rose took me upstairs and dived into my closet. When she emerged, making victorious sounds, I wanted to scream.

“Rosalie, I’m not wearing that!” I shrieked. She was holding the only bikini I had. It wasn’t flashy or anything, I was just reluctant to show the amount of skin that any bikini shows.

It was a night blue halter bikini with boy shorts. “Yes, you are. Now, give me your Nike celibacy suit and put this one in your bag. We have to go, otherwise we’ll be late.”

RPOD is a common disorder among women (and some men dare I say ***winks***) of all ages all over the world. Doctors say that it is completly normal when you see this hottie in any form ***guilty blush***

There is no need to worry!

Symptoms: fantasising,daydreaming,dazzled eyes and possibility of drooling every time you hear the words: Robert Pattinson Edward Cullen twilight vampires sparkle and in some severe cases also bronze,green, Cendric Digori and blue

Loved the chapter!!

Marianne

loving it!

Sure you can Edward! Just go with it...

Glad you're feeling better. Great chapter, glad the girls could talk.