[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Life happens. Just keep swimming is my moto. Keep up the great work. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Go Esme! That is just too funny!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome first date. Very sweet.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
omg that was awesome i am excited for the next chapter hopefully they will get closer to making out and then getting engaged deep it coming you are a great writer informme of next chapter denisesexton@verizon.net
Author's Response:
You can put this story on your favorite stories list and you'll get an automated alert everytime I update ;)
thanks for reading! :D
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
They are gelling just like a family. It is so sweet!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
mmmmmmm that outtake sounds good :P
soo, they haven't slept together huh?
but they loooooove each other! gosh I think I'm leaving :)
much love!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
they had a hell of a night.I love to see edward loving the kids such a good daddy. i love the interaction with all of them together
love it
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was amazing! Maybe the two of them can have a Halloween party of their own (or go to one on their own?). I wonder what will be next? Cannot wait for it :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was a wonderful chapter! :)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oooo... I'm soooo excited for my outtake. Mmm... gotta love that man with ink. Yum-Oh. And I'm even more stoked that I got a shout-out. I feel like a celebrity on your super awesome talk show couch. O.M.G. I am Tom Cruise squeeing and jumping up and down on Oprah's couch about how much I love Katie. FYI, in this scenario, I think you are Oprah and Katie is your fuckawesome story.
Loved the chapter - I was confused for like half a second cause I thought Bella was having a dream about waking up in Edward's bed and then I remembered he put her there and I was all smiles again.
And the kids and pancakes and Lilly's kicking feet and Edward. Swoon, that DILF is pulling out all the stops and it doesn't even feel like he's trying anymore. It just comes naturally.
Angel/Devil time on the couch was quite good too. I love how Car and Wendy have taken to Bella so well. No tantrums. And I think if they break up, Edward may try to get custody of Lilly cause he seems over the moon with her. Not to mention Mama.
Author's Response:
Oooo!! Can we do a happy dance on the stage? Just for the fun of it? I'll have my producers download 5ive's Everybody get up-song for nostalgia sake ;) (not that we're getting old or anything, LOL)
Thanks for reading, sweetheart and I'll contact you when I've put the outtake up ;)
Hugs,
Emma
P.S. Do I have to be Oprah? Can't I be one of those supermodel-looking talkshow hosts? You know, just to boost my ego a bit? :P
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful chapter ! I really liked the way things are progressing with Edward and Bella. One of my favorite stories. Can't wait for the next one !!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
what can I say, clearly im hooked on your story....
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
i LOVE this story!!
and i need more asap
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
ooo Girl talk - fab-u-lous!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I love Edward's character in this story. He's so sweet!! I also watch Hocus Pocus every Halloween, so that little bit made me chuckle. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
*sigh*
Why doesn't that happen when I go to the local pool?
Thank you for this writing :-)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Aaah , a perfect first date.....soooo lovely!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
Liked it...Im loving it :-)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
i love the chapter. i cant wait for the next one. i hope its up soon.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oooo i wanna hear more about Carlisle Sr!!!!!
Pretty please!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Okey dokey. What can I say.
Found this site and then this story almost by accident. So glad I did, loving the start of this daddyward and tattward - nice combo...lets see where you take this...can hardly wait!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love Hocus Pocus, one of my favourite movies from when I was kid...back in the days of old...god I sound like a granny and I'm only 28...but it seems like so long ago that that film came out.
I don't know why but I keep waiting for the shoe to drop, like either James or Heidi is going to show up. When Reading stories my mind constantly wonders in so many different directions. I guess I'm an over thinker lol
Author's Response:
I know what you mean, I turn 21 in two weeks and even I feel old when it comes to that movie!
But don't you worry!! this story is mainly fluff, I don't do drama and angst well and even when I do I want it to be over as quickly as possible so I can continue on the fluff ;)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
=)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
Such a sweet chapter.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
i loved their little family time and Edward is such a great dad and boyfriend, can't wait for more!!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emma the story is great!!! Keep up the great work. I cracked up at the thought of big strapping muscular tattooed Edward in a sparly halo and angel wings HAHAHA!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! They are very sweet together.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wendy and Car are so adorable they really do deserve the perfect family they all do! x
Date: 19 Mar 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
so glad that the kids are all feeling the love as well. cant wait to see what will happen in the morning.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
`well looks like these two are moving along at a good pace.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
ok squee that was so sweet at the end.
too funny with them pissing their pants in the haunted house.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
wonder what bella has planned for wendy''s gift...
a tinkerbell impersonator for the party? maybe a bag of fairy dust? a video, letter, phone call from a fairy?
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
had to throw in the 'big brother'emmy talk
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
swimming was great. good to see how close the family is. definately showing bella what she is getting into. surprised you did not have wendy or car comment on bella's ''pretty drawings' (tattoos)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
such a sweetheart and a gentleman. esme would be proud!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
and so it begins...
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
love how unsure they both seem to be. so adorable that you made edward a blusher too! you have got to think that with his wife walking out leaving him a single dad it would effect his self- confidence.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
so cute, talking about the kids all proud and such! at least it shows on both ends that the kids are the most important
Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
AWWWW....Perfect!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am so glad bella got wendy her fairy. i also love that she got car his special gift. she is good for the kids na dloves them and wants the best for them. esme taking lily so bella could go and claim her man. back off jessica. how cute is that edward carrying around lily and loving it. waht an adorable family, i have goosebumps. i bet she is going to love waking up in his tshirt in the morning. agh i think i would die.
I really am enjoying this story, thank you
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
I liked how you skipped ahead in time just a bit. It makes it much realistic with the ILYs. I squeed just a bit when I realized that's where it was going. Gah, I love a good first ILY. Great job.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
I about cried when Car said that Bella was his mommy. And then Wendy asks Edward if Bella was going to be her mommy that about broke my heart because these kids want a mommy so badly and they love her so much and so does she. All of these kids need each other and Edward and Bella to be a family. And Rose and Emmett are going to have a baby!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Those three from the tattoo shop are quite funny characters. I am kinna glad that Esme called when they were on the sofa because I think that it is kinna soon for them and that is something that they would both regret the next day.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
Um.... Yeah that haunted house would scare the shit out of me. I have seen some scary places too. My cousin helps out at a haunted house in Arlin Texas and that place is really scary it is huge too.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
What an awesome chapter.. keep going... I love how Edward and Bella are progressing..
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder what idea Bella has for Wendy's gift. They are getting along so well I just hope that nothing comes inbetween the two of them.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad that Emmett came to talk to him because that just shows how much Bella means to him. Those little kids are sure perseptive little people aren't they.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
That chapter was funny and sweet up until the stupidity of those men. I can't believe that in this day and age that there are still people out there like that. I mean maybe they should have a little compassion towards people.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well that was a great first date for them. I wonder what Edward has up his sleeve for the next one.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
YEA!!! Edward and Bella are going to go out on a date. I am glad that she got to meet his kids too.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
They are just too cute even though they have just met and they seen so intune with each other.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
That is the worst feeling in the world to have to hear your child crying and not knowing what is wrong with them or not being able to fix it. I am glad that she is ok and that is sweet that Edward sat and talked to her while Carlisle was helping Lily.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
That is the worst feeling in the world to have to hear your child crying and not knowing what is wrong with them or not being able to fix it. I am glad that she is ok and that is sweet that Edward sat and talked to her while Carlisle was helping Lily.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
All I have to say is That is really hot!! I just love a guy with tattoos! Those little kids are so sweet too and poor Edward his mom is only trying to help him out!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Something tells me that this isn't the last time that they are going to meet if those ladies have anything to do with it.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
that was so perfect
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved the interaction between ed and the kids. and the talk with his mom too funny. at least he is getting out of the 'but what about grandbabies' guilt trips. lol
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awe that was so sweet, what a great chapter!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love the story and this chappie because it had interaction with the kiddies, which I LOVE. I hope there is more of that to come. :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
so cute how rosa is trying to break the ice and set something up with b&e. wonder if cass was doing the same thing?
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
edward daddy is cute! tattooed edward daddy sounds hot!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I absolutely love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the way Edward is with Lily and Bella is with Wendy and Car. It's so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh I love this story.Edward has to be the perfect man I want one too.Great chapter.Can't wait until the next chapter.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
This story is amazing. please keep up the good work.l I love how you show the connection with the kids.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww that was a cute chapter! But I think I am still drooling over the fact that Carlisle has sleaves... Yum!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
's ok, little kids can be a handfull, I don't have any of my own but I have lots and lots of little cousins, the little ones are 3 and 3 and 1/2 to this day, and we are the prefered nannies hehehe
much love!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
It's not like they men could see...a baby under a blanket is much better than a poor mother trying to either pump or feeding a child in the restroom. Which many people have forced them to do at times. Would they want their meal prepared in the loo?
Kate
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a wonderful day for all of them!!! The kids were all so cute. I am so happy that Emmett and Rosalie are going to have a baby! Great job...thanks so much!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Please don't smash me... :P
I love it... Can I have a silicone bitch-Bella fight?? Not much... Let's say after PreK one day?? Sounds good?
Kisses
Marianne
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hey a single parent has to take some chances...way to get the kids there Edward!
Kate
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
i love this story, they are a cute little family. Car and Wendy were so great. Update soon
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I already read "Dragon Stones" and I agree with you in recomendation therms, by the way lovely chapter ^^ Update soon it isnt every day we find a story so full of fluff
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
i loved it very sweet
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aw I kinda teared up Reading this, it was very sweet :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was a perfect day for them! Well done! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
Great story. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful chapter.
You truely have a way with words.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow one of my favorites those kids are so cute and them wanting bella to be their mom is adorable and i love how edward was carrying lily around, can't wait for more, i love this story!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
What can I say but Awesome!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Such a sweet chapter. I'm lookin forward to seeing Bella become the mama bear towards Edwards kids.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was amazing! I am so happy they said "I love you"! Also happy Wendy finally got her fairy! :) Cannot wait to see what happens on Halloween with these two ;) Until next time :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
Fabulous chapter! The twins really love Bella! Her fairy gift was perfect! They will make a lovely family!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thank goodness he didn't go all emoward and run! I love this story and I love that it's all working out!!!!! Keep up the great work, the birthday party and the declaration were fabulous, almost as good as Wendy getting her fairy!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
You were so right this chapter was totally worth waiting for ! I really loved it. This story is one of my top five and I really look forward to each chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
i love the chapter, i loved how they said i love you. it was perfect for them. i cant wait for the next chapter and hope its up soon.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
And yet again I just wanna huggle this story to death! I just wanna scush it and love it! Short but sweet chapters.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter is fanfreakingtastic. The twins were so adorable and Edward with Lily just made me go awe. I really really really enjoyed this chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
<3
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
only 2 dates and now he is already thinking of calling things off because he is afraid. ahhh edward dumward get your head out of your ass.aghhh he is frustrating me. can't wait to see what he decides
love it
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
I really loved this chapter! This is still one of my favorites, can't wait for the next one.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
yay another update, i always look forward to these, i loved this and edward's thinking of bella and lily living with them already, so cute! can't wait for more, it brings a smile to my face!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
love it cant wait for more thanks so much for updating :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love those crazy Scottish girls!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
I want to go to that haunted house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
zombie Bella lol
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
Emmett to the rescue lol
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ah yes, the Edward angst. I love your story so far, keep it up :) Can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it!!
I am also worrid about Wendy... I hope it's nothing...
(Oh gosh... Look at me!! Worried about a fictional lil girl...I CAN"T HELP IT!! Fucking Pathetic!)
Anyway...
Till next time
M