[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
go Esme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If I could rate this chapter any higher, I'd rte it a 100 just for that!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Baha, that was so funny about the three sisters and the haunted house. Reminds me of one of my best friends, we (my other best friends and I) convinced her to go on Space Mountain at Disney World (even though she was so scared) and during the whole ride she screamed, "I HATE YOU GUYS!!" It was so funny! Anyway, loved that Edward and Bella are growing closer but I hope Edward can realize he can be in a relationship with Bella :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
I know why she had to go inside....she has more self control that I do!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter! I hope Edward doesn't freak out and try to stop seeing Bella. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I wonder who threatened Edward to get him to call lol
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
I totally love this Edward, everyone but my husband got grossed out when I nursed my kids
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
i love this, please update soon
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
colic sucks! luckily mine didn't have it, but my best friend had to go through it with both of her kids!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I fucking love the idea that both big Daddy C an Edward are inked! *swoon*
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
omg yummy tattooed man!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Don't be a wuss Edward!!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
aw, love at first sight
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
RELATIONSHIP!!!!! Great story!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love these two!! Great job...I can't wait for more!!! Thanks!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
well yeah I'm a little bit hot and bothered now, is not that bad :P
much love
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Edward is all confuzzled Lol. I'm sure he'll work it out soon enough :D
Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh no please don't let Edward start freaking out.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh good lord that was scary! and now I'm the one whos gonna have bad dreams! hehehe
much love
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
hahahahah... what a fun second date!! Good job!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
I liked this chapter a lot cause it was just... so... your Bella. She is easily overwhelmed in her head but sweet and funny on the outside.
I thought this line was good [albeit heavy on the cheese]: "Because I love the idea of capturing moments from the past to take with you to your future.”
And I especially liked the Alice smirk that should be illegal in ten states. LOL. Good job.
Author's Response:
Hee hee you can blame my sister for the cheesy line:P
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a ridiculous A/N. That is much too much going on for one person. Good chapter. I liked Emmett's big brother talk. I like how Edward would "kick his own ass" if he did something to hurt Bella. That just seems like a funny thing to possibly try to do. And I like the twins cause that is definitely how I picture little ones asking about the new lady friend.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
That's my lil sister!!!
wicked. i am so proud emmA. luv you loads sis. keep up the good work ^_-
(K) Joo the plumber
Author's Response:
:D Awww, sweet brother :D:D Luv you 2:D:D
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Really liking this fic. Cant wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was great.. my blood was pumping too. Cant wait for the next update!
~meg
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was hilarious! I'm anxious for the kids bday party though!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great job describing the haunted house! Felt very real!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like what I've read so far. I always like stories with Edwards P.O.V
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thoughs and prayers for your fur kiddo. Thank you for sharing your writing. Meg
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
I probably would have acted just like Bella for that. I hate scary.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it!!! I can't wait to get to the rest of it!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
That sounds like a great date! I
can't wait for E's pov!! :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
loved it i was actually scared, i am such a wimp!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww, can't wait for next chap, update soon ^^
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome date!! At least so far is my ideal date... (my kind of date is having sex on the roller ccoaster next but as I said IDEAL... ;D )
Is the house for real??
(I am from Greece so I don't know a thing...)
M
Author's Response:
Hee hee, it only exists in my head, sadly enough. Wow, sex on a rollercoaster... I've only ever had sex near one :P
And yay! Another europe girl! I'm from Holland ;)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww...that was sweet for Edward to make her feel better about the haunted house. I cannot wait to see what else happens on the date :)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
<3
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Still a great story ! Loved every bit of this chapter. I really look forward to each and every update so keep up the great work !!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! You dont know how much every single review means to me
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Every time I'm done reading a chap I curse you... but in a good way cause I want MORE!!! Like RIGHT NOW!!! LOL
Author's Response:
Wow, the first part made me gasp, the second part made me howl in laughter :P I'll try to update in the next two days but I cant guarantee a thing.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am really enjoying reading this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:D:D:D
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh god this brings back memories of a family holiday to Salou in spain when I was a kid and we went to this haunted house. It has real actors as well and was scary as hell, we were in it for half an hour and I came out shaking it was so bad. It had creepy rooms and corridors and rickety steps. So so scary, never again would I ever go inyo anything like that in my life. But the way you described it in this was spot on, you had me cringing over what was coming next Lol
These two are so sweet together ;)
Author's Response:
Hee hee, I think I might have given myself nightmares. Unfortunately it's not a real haunted house, or I might have wanted to go ;) On second thought... maybe not :P
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
So cute! It reminded me of Halloween Horror Nights at Universal Studios!! Keep it up you're doing amazing!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D:D I hope to update in the next two days but no guarantees
Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love it! I think I might actually go in that haunted house...
Author's Response:
Yeah, too bad it only exists in my head :( Fun Forest is a real park though... thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't wait for the fairy she will be giving to wendy. i am also looking forward to what she decides on car's gift. their relationship is moving along
i think they are both a little scared of getting hurt
love it
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aren't these kids sweet.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really enjoying this story! Keep up the great writing!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Still a great story ! I absolutely love it. Can't wait for next chapter !
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 10
i love your story so far. i cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Sweet chap! :D
Can't wait for the party! Actually the aftr-party! Can she stay over? ;)
M
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww yay im so glad Edward's family likes her the way that they do!!! Gotta love Alice and Rose!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
awh a girlie timew i love those
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
This was a fun chapter, just letting Bella be Bella.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved it this is such a sweet story i love it
Date: 08 Mar 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 9
liked it glad em talked to him
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love it and if Bella is going to dress as a fairy for Wendy, that is going to make things very interesting hahahaha :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Can't wait to see where it goes!!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
<3
Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the story!! I keep
waiting for the other shoe
to drop. They just seem too
happy! Is it something odd,
like thier ex's show up to the
Birthday party together! :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
Amazing job! I cannot wait to see what Bella gets Wendy and Car! Cannot wait for more :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved it can't wait for more!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loving this story. Happy upcoming birthday to you and your daughter and I hope you doggie gets better soon.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
update soon, I love each chapter of this story
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wasn't expecting a chapter for a while so I had a little fangirl moment when I seen the update alert! Lol. Loved the chapter, I'm intriged as to what Bellas present will be for wendy ;)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is an excellent chapter. Take all the time you need sweetie. Hope everythng works out ok. SO sorry to hear about your dog. Congrats on the upcoming birthdays :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Aww emmett is looking out for Bella what a sweetheart!!! Looking forward to your next update.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 9
omg this is so awesome i can not wait till the next chapter you are a great writer and i want them to both go thru their changes together and for each other as well loving and helping each other they are perfect for each other keep me posted
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
<3
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
well i loved and i can't wait for more, i love this story!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
aw i loved the ending especially!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
i loved it, and that sunset is beautiful!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
aw i loved edward with lily!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
This was amazing, great! I am glad that Edward had "the talk" with Emmett! I understand about taking some time off for the story, take all the time you need (as long as it isn't too long like say 2 months or something) Hope you can get everything under control soon.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think was a great addition to the story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope that the coming weeks aren't as hard as anticipation makes them...
I loved the Emmett/Big Brother moments...
Thanks for sharing...
Kathie
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
I'm sorry to hear that RL is turning a crazy for you, it always comes first so don't worry. I had my first daughter at 19, now I turn 29 in middle of April and she's almost 10 and my second daughter has just turned 3, time flies Lol
writing is supposed to be fun, so only do it when it is and not causing you stress. I'll still be around when you next update!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love momma bear Esme. Looking forward to the next chapter. Meg
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Saw there was an update today, but then all I saw was chapter 8 (fabulous btw). Is there not a new chap?? THanks, and great job so far keep it up!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
loved it very cute swim suit
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
loved it very cute swim suit
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
esme is so kick ass heck yes
Author's Response:
Thanks =D Momma Bear Esme is fun!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
Not sure what if anything could have made this chapter better. A group of hotties in skimpy suits, a ridiculously hot, wet B/E, adorable kiddies splashing away, and my favorite, Carlisle without a shirt showing off his tattoos . Sigh, what could be
better? Oh I know, how about a motherly Esme essentially sticking up for all of woman kind?
Author's Response:
Hee hee, wow thanks! :D And I knew you'd like Daddy C =D
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
I certainly thought I missed a chapter or something when I started reading. Good job with this one. I thought the date was sweet, especially when they were telling each other about their tattooes.
Author's Response:
Thanks :D I think you'll love the next chapter... Carlisle in swim gear and tattoos ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
please update
Author's Response:
I will as soon as I'm ready. Thanks for reading
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
YAY go Esme! I'm a breastfeeding mum and I would be horrified if someone complained about me breastfeeding my baby, so way to go Esme for upping the dickheads haha. Loving this story, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.
Author's Response:
I never breast fed my baby but several of my friends did theirs and this happened to one of them. She went bat shit crazy on the manager's ass but somehow i dont see Bella doing that ;) So Momma Bear Esme stepped up to the plate! :D
And thanks, its so much fun to write :D:D:D
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is such a lovely story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I'll update soon dont worry! :D
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
I loved this chapter ! This is a wonderful story and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you... the reviewers make writing it fun! :D
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Aww.. what a wonderful chapter.. so sweet. I'm really loving this story and I love how Edward and Bella are just made for one another..
Author's Response:
Aww thank you!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh sweet David Beckham on a stick....Dr. Sexy Daddy has tats...guh, HAWWTT!!
Those bathing suits are too cute for words!!!
Author's Response:
(fans with hand) Do you need some drool wipes? I have some in my purse ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Fun and playful chapter! Esme's scary!
Author's Response:
Hee hee, dont worry... she won't hurt you ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was an great chapter and yes that swimsuit is too adorable!! I love how they all took up for her at the restaurant against those asses.
Carlisle's tats sound awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D you should have seen my face when I google imaged baby swimsuits, I was one ball of goo because it was all so cute!
And yep! Doctor Sexy Dad has a fiery passion for ink! :D
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Absolutely love this. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'll update as soon as I can
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow...Mama Bear Esme to the rescue!
Loved that...
Kathie
Author's Response:
Thanks, sweetie :D:D
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very cute swimsuit, loved the swim and I LOVED when Esme got up and gave them a what for! Absolutely perfect :)
Author's Response:
hee hee, thanks :D want to join me in a big shout out to Esme?
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
I want to be Cullen too.I would go apeshit on someone if they tried to make be leave if I was feeding my child I'm so glad they took up for her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too but Bella is too shy and quiet to do that ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Damn! I love a fierce Esme. That was awesome
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
That is an adorable swim suit for Lily! I loved it! Also loved that Rose called Bella's one piece a "cellibacy suit", haha! Amazing job and cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Well, a Nike onepiece doesnt exactly scream sex :P And I know! I saw the little bathing suit and went Awwwww, if only my daughter was still a baby :P
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG the wrath of Esme!! Lmao, that was genious!! It's unbelievable how much that happens though, some people are just rude but it's perfectly natural to breastfeed your child. I'm from northern Ireland and there was a huge campaign over here about womans rights to feed their babies in public.
Edward is just the sweetest thing ever, I want one Lol
Author's Response:
Sweetheart, we all want one :P hee hee.
And yeah, no meek and quiet Esme in this story! I love Esme and I love her even more when she asks crude questions and goes up into someone's face about something that's rude ;)
I never breast fed my child, so this isnt a personal experience of mine but I know it happens a lot and that just pisses me off. I thought it would be kind of perfect to use in this story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whatcha mean I'm sure it's delicious.
Author's Response:
Whahahahahahahaha well, maybe you could dress it up with some nice herbs, maybe a salad to go with it? Let me know how the recipe turned out ;)