Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my I just love this story it's just so freakin cute! I just wanna munch on it!!!
Author's Response:
Whahahahahahaha go right ahead, but I can't guarantee it will taste any good whahahahaha
Date: 03 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
ah that swim suit is just darling
Author's Response:
I know, I melted when I first saw it. So cute!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, you're Dutch! So am I ... well, American-born to Dutch parents :-) Love the romance ... can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Really?! Wow! Yeah, I was born and raised in Amsterdam :D
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Nice first date!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I googled Seattle Dates and that was the first thing to pop up. First I was a bit sceptic until I saw a picture of the view! :O I was sold
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
sorry about edwards nightmares, wonder what that is all about.
I so loved there first date. They have alot in common
I can't wait to see what they do on their next date
love it
Author's Response:
Dont worry, it will all be revealed soon ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, all I can say is James BETTER NOT show up and ruin this for them!!! Or Heidi either, for that matter...
Author's Response:
I wouldnt know... keep reading! :P
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
This story keeps getting better! So glad I found it!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yay! I love all of the little tie-ins too...like Emmett and Edward being raised together, Carlisle being the doctor Bella took Lily to, etc.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE that Carlisle has tatts!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great first date, I didn't think they would sleep together on the first date, I think they would want to get to know one another better. I can't wait to read how their relationship develops!
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Hee hee, I threw my sisters for a loop though ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hee hee, loving this!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a sweet chapter.. I love it..
Author's Response:
Aww thanks.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG now that was a first date that girls dream about.Loved it.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward Cullen... Hopeless romantic... (swoon)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
dat is the pefect date
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
i loved it so sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
That view is gorgeous! Loved their first date and cannot wait for more of them :) Amazing job! :D
Author's Response:
I know! I googled Kerry Park and that was the first picture I saw. I went slackjawed! That is the perfect view for a first date, me thinks ;)
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Splendid chapter! I
can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response:
It might take a few days for my next update. It could be tonight, could be tomorrow or could be next week... I dont really know, I have a busy schedule this week but keep an eye out
Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's official, I want this Edward he's making me swoon!! That view of seattle is gorgeous, I'd love to go there some day, Reading so many stories about just makes me want to see what it's like for real. Maybe one day, possibly when I'm old and grey and my kids are all grown up Lol
Author's Response:
Mmmh, me too! I've been doing so much research about the city on Google that I feel like I practically live there :P I seriously want to go there some day but I live in Holland so my dream is still faaaaaar away :P
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I was born in Seattle...and have seen the sky look that way...
Yes, tricky girl there at the beginning!
Loved their date...
Kathie
Author's Response:
:O Seriously! Wow...
And yeah, guilty :P but it added a nice touch huh?
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well, there is nothing sexier than Daddyward, I can tell you that!
So glad I don't have to wait for an update!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
god this story just rocks!! both edward and bella is admirable..
Author's Response:
wow, thank you so much :D
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think I would be giddy like schoolgirl (squeels and all) if your Edward called me for a date too. I love how Rose managed to clean Bella up in only a few minutes. Meet-the-mother-and-be-uber-presentable-in-15-minutes-or-less by Rose. Ta daaaa.
Author's Response:
Oh I know... that phonecall even made my rational, cool-headed, 'It takes a lot to get to me'- sister squeal :P
And ah, the magic touch of the Rose lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you (takes a bow) lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
A date sweet!Can't wait to see how that goes.
Author's Response:
You already can ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
What is about a man holding a baby that turns woman to goo.I would get that way everytime I saw my hubby with our son when he was little.Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
There is no way I could eat with Daddy Doctor C and Edward no way in hell.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Esme is so funny I would die if my mom asked me about sex.Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
I would love to walk into a tattoo shop and see Edward with his shit off too.Oh what a happy day that would be.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you write Edward.Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was great..I hope she gets a better job because it seems she doesn't like working at the bank..esme was great ,twins are adorable..update soon
Author's Response:
She will, eventually. and thank you :D I've just uploaded the 7th chapter.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
So cute! I want more!!!
Author's Response:
I just posted the next chapter =D
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
I really loved this chapter! It is one of my very favorite stories and I can't wait to see what happens next. The characters seem so real and the story just draws you in. Please update soon !
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! Gosh, now I'm blushing
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I loved the "getting to know you" part!
And Edward with Lily? WIN...
AND with his kids...
Very cute...
Kathie
Author's Response:
oh the "getting to know you" part was so much fun to write! I was actually giggling because of myself. Made fiance look all weirded out though :P
Thank you :D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
YAY! They are going out! I cannot wait for that! I am so excited :)
Author's Response:
I dont think you'll have to wait long =D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really don't know how I managed to leave my last review three times *facepalm*
Eek they're going out on a date, I get so excited over the little things. Edward sounds like such an amazing dad in this, makes me *swoon* lol
Author's Response:
Hee hee, I thought it was great! More reviews for me WEE! :P
And yes they are :D I'm writing it right now
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
update soon!!!!! this story is awesome!!!
the tats are to DIE for!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm currently writing the 7th chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
how cute
now it seems bella has mom and dads approval
oh I am so excited for the date
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D And the date is coming ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
i love edwards locket
he is so good with babies. i am sure carlisle will see bella again
love it
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
so I was going to ask what carlisle did but i see in your notes that is so hot.
I can't wait to read the next chapter and see if they meet up yet
love it
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow
that was hot
too bad she didn't say hi
loved it
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just found your story and I am giving it a read
I am liking it so far
can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking your time to read this story :D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
yay cant wait for the date
Author's Response:
Hee hee, keep an eye out
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome chapter, that Car is a little charmer :-)
Author's Response:
Takes after his Daddy ;)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great job :) loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow i cannot wait for more, please update soon i absolutly love these two and their kids!!
Author's Response:
Don't worry... I'll update soon
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
aw he is so sweet!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
those kids are awesome and i love tattoo carlisle and blunt esme!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it and i joined like half hour agao and i had to read this!
Author's Response:
wow! Thank you :D
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awww!! Just Awww!!!
Author's Response:
Can I add one more 'awww'? :P
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
THis is a great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)
Author's Response:
And thank you again hee hee
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you again whahahahaha you submitted the same review three times :P Dedicated much? LOL
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am loving this so far, can I be really selfish and beg for more?!?!? Tattward DILF makes me sigh! I love tattoos, I have ten, love them. Bella seems to like them equally, I can't wait to see were this goes ;)
Author's Response:
whahahahahahahahaha you dont have to beg! I have a large portion of the next chapter already written and I'm hoping to finish that today. Then it needs to go through my Beta and I hope to bring you the next chapter tomorrow ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. I loved the part where Lily puts Edward's locket in her mouth. That is a wonderfully adorable picture. And their interaction in general, so freakin' cute. I like how Rose is a great friend in this story and not just a cliche super bitch like every other story seems to describe her. Kudos to you for going the other way and giving her friendly attributes.
Thanks for the shout-out. hehehe. Made me feel uber special.
Author's Response:
But seriously, remind me to write that outtake ;)
Yes, the part where Lily puts Edward's locket in her little mouth was a visual I had before I even started writing this story and I couldn't wait to actually put it in words! :D
And yeah, it's true... a lot of people always put Rosalie down as a bitch but it's like how Emmett is mostly portrayed as a loud, obnoxious imbecile, it pisses me off :P So I made her uber friendly ;) And besides that... I like being a rebel LOL
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
I absolutely love this story! I did not want it to end. Everything about it just pulls you in and you want to see where it goes. It is so well written and detailed, and that's what makes it one of my top favorites. PLease! update soon.
Author's Response:
O Thank you so much! Gosh, that makes me feel all humble inside :P
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
A very manly locket! I like that...
My hubby was good with the girls when they had colic too...thankfully!
Wonderful chapter...thanks for sharing!
Kathie
Author's Response:
Finding that locket was a nightmare! But I'm glad I did before you thought I was turning Edward into a queer :P
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the lunch and Edward's interaction with Lily!
Author's Response:
Trust me when I say it's about to get better ;) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great lunch. Left me wanting More! Can't wait till Esme meets Bella. Thanks for sharing. Meg
Author's Response:
I know! I'm sorry :( But I really wanted to do the whole 'meeting Esme and the kids' in Bella's POV and it was kind of perfect to end the chapter where it did. Don't worry, I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great job with this chapter. I like how Bella and Edward were so close to meeting each other given the relationship with Em and yet some how, it never happened - I guess no R/Em BBQs with both Bella AND Edward there...
Small world.
Anywho... I think I'll be over here continuing my tattooed Carlisle fantasy. What? Edward was busy having first conversations with Bella and Lilly.
Author's Response:
Whahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Good point, on you go with tattooed Carlisle fantasies whahahahahahahahahaha
(Please keep in mind the poor man's married :P)
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank for having them meet again soon. Hope you update soon. Meg
Author's Response:
Couldn't keep you waiting for too long, now could I? Hell, I couldn't keep myself waiting for too long. LOL!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the sisters. Great start.
Author's Response:
Why, thank you! =D
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
aww i love this, so cute
Author's Response:
Thank you =D
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is the best! I can't
wait for more! I lust
love it! :)
Author's Response:
Oh thank you :D
Date: 25 Feb 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love how you have her describe him! :)
Author's Response:
Hee hee, well it certainly was fun to write =)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah poor baby and poor Bella...I hear it's though when a baby has collic.
I'm sure Edward will help her out :-)
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Mmmh, it is tough, very tough and who knows? He might ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awww...I am happy with the way they met! Although colic is horrible, I hope that Bella gets some sleep :) Great job! Cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
=D Yeah colic is all kinds of horrible but thankfully she has loyal friends ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awwww I think I love these two together already!!! I cant wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Dont worry. I dont think you'll have to wait long. I'm having far too much fun writing it ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awww I think AI love it!!! Very different plot line!!!
Author's Response:
:D Thanks for reading :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes, I am happy they met!
And the Emmett knows them too...
And that Doctor Cullen is the baby's doctor...so nice to look at!
Kathie
Author's Response:
;-) I know... I'm a genius :P whahahahahahaha yeah right
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Daddy C with tatts made me fall in love that much more with this fic. Good job. I'll just be over here having a nice little fantasy. Mmm...
I love the EPOV. He seems like such a wonderful father and of course it doesn't hurt that he is definitely a wicked hot DILF.
Author's Response:
Have fun with that! :D :P
And yeah, EPOV is so much fun to write and its ridiculously easy to crawl inside his head for me. Thank you for reading, you dont know what it means to me ;)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
So excited that you updated this story! It seems like it is going to be a world of fun to see these two get together. Her tattoos sound beautiful and his seem really cool too.
My fav line: "and so much emotional baggage that airline companies were in their right to charge me extra money for a ticket." hahaha
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! If you havent seen it yet... I've uploaded pictures of the tattoos onto my profile so you can go check them out ;)
And yeah, I'm crazy like that. I always make sentences weird:P
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter.
This is how I prefer my Edward. Laid back and inked.
Author's Response:
;)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Dr. Daddy with tat's ... fanning myself now!
Author's Response:
Hee hee hee, so was I ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
You are very welcome...this is a great story.
Esme...she makes me laugh.
I love the way Edward is with the kids...it feels *real*...
Thanks for sharing the visuals of the tatts too...
Kathie
Author's Response:
Kathie, my dear, I owe you :P
Hugs, Emma
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice! I like that Carlisle has tattoos too :) Loved the pics of the tats on your profile! Cannot wait to see where Bella and Edward meet again :)
Author's Response:
Dont worry... it wont be long now ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's very kind of you
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, that was great! I wonder how they are going to meet again?
Author's Response:
Dont worry. I have it all in my head waiting to come out ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story so far!! Daddyward and ink-- how can you go wrong??
Author's Response:
That's what I thought! :P
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
good start!! can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm late again for an early peek!
Loved this...and glad to hear that #3 will be along shortly!
Kathie
Author's Response:
whahahahahahaha okay, wanna make a deal? I wont update until you've had your early peek for Etched 3! :P
Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! :D i already have the next chapter written and now I have to wait on my Beta to send it back to me
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful first chapter...
Kathie
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie! :D
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story really has potential. I really like details in a story, so you can really picture it in your mind and you did a great job with that. The characters seem so real so you are drawn into the story. Can't wait for the update !
Author's Response:
Thank you, its always such an honour to get reviews like yours :D
And dont you worry, the next chapter will be up tonight or tomorrowmorning at the latest ;)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cant wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response:
Oh gosh, I'm so sorry for my late response! Thank you so much for reading my story, you cant possibly know what it means to me! And I'm currently working on the latest edits for the second chapter... tonight or at the latest tomorrow I'll put it up on the website... so dont worry!! :D
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start. I like the description of the little ones. I can't wait to hear some more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! :D
Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is great so far!! Cannot wait for more :) Do you have pictures of Edward's tattoos or are we supposed to imagine them?
Author's Response:
I do have pictures of the tattoos and I'm working on putting them in a banner ;)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazingness... Love the story so far... Please keep going...
Author's Response:
Will do, dont worry ;)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
really good start can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, the second its back from my beta, the second chapter will be up :D Thank you for your review!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D