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Reviewer: KKitty9811 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2018 12:27 PM Title: Epilogue

I love the whole story but most of all I love the ending 

Reviewer: TwiCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2018 7:41 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Oh Edward Anthony is going to be a pleasant surprise 

Reviewer: lojosmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:23 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

Something about your story caught my eye.  I don't usually enjoys stories that are so different than the original book.  I am glad that I did start reading this one, as it is very enjoyable.  I love the way you write Bella and Alice.  I hope Angela and Emmett are both allowed to accompany Bella to England.

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 9:25 PM Title: Epilogue

Still such a great story to go back to and read it all over again. 

 

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 3:40 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story! Thank you so much. Looking forward to more of your work in the future.

Reviewer: danqat Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 6:10 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

How exactly do Esme and Alice know that Bella is the girl that Edward fell in love with if he went to school alone? Just curious...

Reviewer: Kibachow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2016 2:57 AM Title: Epilogue

Beautiful story. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 11:09 PM Title: Epilogue

My eyes teared up at the first words of this chapter, as I knew what was coming. What a magnificent epilogue!  What more could one want that to live a long and happy life with family around.  It's too bad Edward went so far ahead of her. That is really sad,but they are together now and off on endless adventures. Thank you for this lovely and moving story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:34 PM Title: Balancing Duties

And so ends this lovely tale!  Enjoyable unto the very last word, it is....thank you so much!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:10 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

Under what name did you publish this book, Children of Creation?  It looks like something I would read....

Twins are here. A boy first is good for the monarchy, and a girl second will be daddy's little princess! I'm so glad I found this story.  I have really enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:53 PM Title: A Critical Choice

I knew, or almost was sure, you would keep Alice safe. Good news all around!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:43 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

I love that Kate got the benefit of Bella's mercy. I don't think she deserved what the others got as she was blackmailed vehemently to participate. They were very generous with her.  I'm so happy that Emmett was given the lands at Gloucester. I know he will do right by them and also be able to court and marry Lady Rosalie.  Now comes Alice's baby....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:15 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I should have known it was James!  And all the Denalis!  good riddance....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:33 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings

Just when I was thinking Tanya got away with all her dirty tricks, you surprise me and have Jacob capture her.  I'm eager to see who she throws under the bus at her inquisition....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:21 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

I can't believe Tanya got away or that she is gone for good, but with only 7 chapters left, maybe it is true.  I love the surprises Edward got for Bella!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 7:59 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

here i am again today! this chapter begins a mystery that I hope will lead to the demise of Tanya Denali and all who help her....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 3:36 AM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Tanya needs to die. How sweet was Bella with the envoys?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 12:55 AM Title: Banished

I suspect we haven't heard the last of Tanya yet. No telling what she will do.. I wouldn't put it past the stupid bitch to try to kill Bella, which would seal her fate!  Things are heating up for Emmett and Rosalie! Yes!  I love that Edward is asserting himself as future king!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 12:38 AM Title: Aftermath

stupid nobles! bickering and jockeying for position is all they care about! Carlisle should chuck them and find others who are more intelligent and amenable!  Yay! I was right! She is pregnant!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 12:26 AM Title: The Brewing Storm

I hope her nausa and vometing is due to her being pregnant....and I'm glad Edward is taking care of the Tanya situation, all the while knowing nothing of how insecure Bella is being about what his relationship with Tanya might be. Maybe it's her pregnancy hormones making her extra sensetive???

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 12:01 AM Title: The Dog and The Cobra

Oh I love Alice! Those pregnancy hormones are in full bloom! I hope Edward returns soon!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:27 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful

I suspect Rosalie may be an eventual ally, but I also susect Tanya will not and will try to secude Edward in some way. Ugh! The things Bella has to put up with!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 10:48 PM Title: Confidante

I would have hated to live at court in that time. Gossipy petty jealousies are not for me!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 10:27 PM Title: The Demands of Duty

I wonder if the gossipy jealous ladies circle that has formed will grow bolder in their torment of Bella once Edward has gone to France.  I have every conidence that Bella can handle herself and them!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 10:09 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen

with all that coupling, she'll be with child in no time...and have fun doing it!  Tanya. ugh. How did I know she would be in here somewhere!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 9:49 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment

ah another sweet lemon of a chapter. I love reading about their love!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 8:48 PM Title: A Foreign Shore

Still reading and enjoying this very much...love what Bella did for Emmett!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 7:54 PM Title: Bon Voyage

She is a quick learner! LOL! Desire to learn will do that to a woman....I love the lemons!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 7:24 PM Title: Altering Plans

I'm once again reading this story. I just had to start the day reading chapter 8 over again to get a taste of their lemony goodness. In this chapter, I wonder if King Charles is purposely making it seem a war is imminent for his own unknown as  yet purposes of if he misreads the situation. I love that you show Bella as a strong and intelligent woman here, even if she has to disguise that intelligence by feeding clues through her brother. Bravo!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:00 PM Title: Bliss

how very lovely and romantic. thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:38 PM Title: A Day For Miracles

Yay!!!!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:22 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

next chapter? will we know who they really are next chapter??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:05 PM Title: Princely Reformation

I'm reading as fast as I can to get to the reveal...I have to leave in an hour

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:56 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles

ah poor Isabella....I'm eagerly awaiting the reveal and hope it will be what I think it will be!  

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:42 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince

I am pleased to be reading this as a completed story. I read on TWCS or AO3 whenever I can as they do not censor as FFn does. I prefer uncensored versions.  Love the exchange between Edward and Angela. Did Angela recognize the parting phrase that Edward used? Possible from his time spent in Italy????  LOL...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:27 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

It IS him!  I just know it by the way Alice and Esme reacted to her humming their tune!  I'm already falling in love with this charming fairy tale....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:12 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

So I find myself reading yet another of your stories here....I love period pieces and look forward to this one!  Might I hope that the "Tony" she met in Italy is actually Prince Edward Anthony Cullen??  I read on....

Reviewer: Maphie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2015 2:11 AM Title: Epilogue

This has to be the best epilogue I've ever read.  Thanks.  *tears*

Reviewer: I Am Alice Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

This is a wonderfully written fanfic, and I believe it is one of the best I have read.... You are right up there with jmolly!! That is amazing!! You are truly one of the Stephanie Meyers of the fanfic world

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 7:50 PM Title: Epilogue

ty for sharing, loved it

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 9:09 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

i think you are doing a great job so far, i am also a fan of the Tudors and The Other Boleyn Girl i loved the movie and the book. The days of this time are truely intresting!!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:08 PM Title: Epilogue

Absolutely wonderful story, I loved it through and through.  There is so much love, it s amazing. Thank you  for sharing your talented words and beautiful imagination with us.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:31 PM Title: Epilogue

Absolutely awesome story! I was so happy that they had more children ;) but not that Edward died before he was 50! I was pleased with how you wrote the epilogue though ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 1:18 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

Thanks for the a/n at the end. BTW is Bella having twins?;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 11:21 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful

Ooh that was juicy! ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 7:20 PM Title: Bliss

So cool! I don't know if you know but if Edward is English he would be uncut ie have a fore skin what you described didn't sound like he was? ;)

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 3:02 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

Awesome start omg! Is Tony Edward? Please let it be so ;)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 11:57 PM Title: Epilogue

I LOVE IT!!!! So perfect ending like a true HEA I can not express how happy am I of this epi Thanks for sharring this beautiful story is so lovely :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:30 PM Title: Balancing Duties

Everytinme i read a good story that involves children I want to have one, beacuse what you write is so so so beautiful 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:28 PM Title: The Birth of Two Heirs

That was so so beautiful 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:26 PM Title: A Critical Choice

I can imagine the fears of the King and the queen after all they are expecting two babies.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:24 PM Title: Embracing the Crown

I am happy for Emmett and Rose

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:20 PM Title: Manipulation and Punishment

I think is goo that Carlise and Esme are going to be out of duty now.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:13 PM Title: Clandestine Meetings

the good thing is that Bella won two sisters.

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:10 PM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

that is a great gift Tony is a sweet heart

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:58 PM Title: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Yeah!! that is my Bella a smart lady

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:57 PM Title: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

After all that went good, while reading this chapter i was watching The snowwhite so It made me more visuals for the story :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:54 PM Title: Banished

Well after all not everithing is bad news

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: Aftermath

i love hot even the lemons you write them acording to the age of the story :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:46 PM Title: The Brewing Storm

This is a mess poor Bella

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:44 PM Title: The Dog and The Cobra

that bitch... Envy is poison a letal one

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 8:40 PM Title: Deceptively Beautiful

I love Bellas interactio, reading this (as I said before) I picture in mY Mind Kate lol

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 9:54 PM Title: Confidante

Poor newlyweds they miss each other ...

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 5:08 PM Title: The Demands of Duty

I love how u use words that fit in the time of the History making it more perfect 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2014 3:38 AM Title: Presentation of Future Queen

Duty awaits :) 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:52 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment

ereading this I can imagine how difficult is the Royal life I mean I remember when some pictures of Kate dutchess of Cambridge when out I mean they are a young couple enjoying themselves ans that happen..

Anyway great chapter so sweet and HOT too :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: A Foreign Shore

They are a solid couple i like that 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 10:57 PM Title: Bon Voyage

Well i wouldnt be opossiteve to travel like that :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 6:40 PM Title: Altering Plans

Edward is so sweet that hurts I am glad Charli give at least a glimpse of kidness the bad thing is a war ..

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 6:14 PM Title: Bliss

That was so so beautiful kind of akward for the witnesses but so sweet so pure :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 5:28 PM Title: A Day For Miracles

This is so lovely I like it a lot, but now I hate a bit that King Charles...-

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 4:38 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

The way Alice explain some aspects to Bella was so sweet even candid I like it it fits in the estory

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 3:29 AM Title: Princely Reformation

Well at least heis not going to be like that 

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:11 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince

So the rumors about him are true, well we need to se how it goes with his wife...

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2014 12:07 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

This is so so lovely, but I wonder who this Antony character is :)

Reviewer: ManyPF Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:40 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

I love this first chapter and I am here because a rec at a group on facebook so I know people there are rigth :)

Reviewer: cafigueroa1978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 2:10 AM Title: Epilogue

This was a great story and such a beautiful ending.  Makes you wonder when old age is reached what goes through our minds of the people we loved and the memories we have.  

Reviewer: Indianwalker Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 12:13 AM Title: Epilogue

What a wonderful story!!!!!!

Reviewer: Belighted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2013 5:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Great now I'm weeping in the middle of the day! Shoot, I adore knowing the full circle of a story but its so so sad to have to read it and then consider having to live so long without your own soulmate physically beside you. That is hard to ponder for anyone happily married, so consequentlyI find it ironic how high divorce rates are. Ugh, ok great, fabulous story, I'm not sure why I hadn't read it yet as I've read your others and loved them as well. So thanks!

Annie B

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:01 AM Title: Epilogue

That was such a beautiful story. There were parts that made me laugh, cry and angry at certain characters! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story! I was so happy he was there waiting for her when she passed it made me cry harder because it made me happy!! I can't wait to start on more of your stories on here or on fanfiction!

Melissa

Reviewer: eyelubtwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2013 3:27 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: KristalVictoria Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2012 6:20 AM Title: Balancing Duties

A. Mazing!!! I loved this story so much though my favorite was the epilogue. Brilliantly done!

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:21 AM Title: Epilogue

Yeah this chapter made me cry

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Princely Reformation

I knew it...Edward is Tony :)

Reviewer: Natissimo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:02 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

I suspect the young bride and groom may have already shared their first kiss. Thank you for writing...I adore this time period and all things royal.  

Nati 

Reviewer: zeeber Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:53 PM Title: Epilogue

awe...what a sweet story, so glad I read it.

 

thank you for sharing your words.....Brenda

Reviewer: zeeber Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 9:58 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess

very interesting start...looking forward to reading the rest of the story.  I do love period pieces with Edward and Bella.

 

thank you for sharing your words...

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 6:08 PM Title: Epilogue

loved it, loved it. thanks for sharing

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:28 AM Title: Christmas Eve Surprises

Awww now you have me crying. So sweet

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 9:13 PM Title: A Foreign Shore

I hope they can have a few good months before the drama starts

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 8:18 PM Title: Bon Voyage

I think Bella will be with child soon if they keep this up lol 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 7:36 PM Title: Altering Plans

I can't wait for Rose and Em to meet. Edward may call on Bella for help if war was ever going to happen. She's smart and sees what they all missed 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:53 PM Title: Bliss

Wow. 

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:33 PM Title: A Day For Miracles

You would think Charlie would be happy Bella has love 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 2:42 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities

God I'm so nerves for them. Glad Ang is going with Bella. Oh and I could have anyone watch or be in the same room with me and hubs 0_o I know they did but still 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 2:25 PM Title: Princely Reformation

I'm not liking Charlie but come on who is? As for Edward I can see why he gave up on love and started sharing his bed but just wait till the wedding :) 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:33 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince

I so wanna know what Bella sent to Jacob. Ang will tell Bella that Edward was kind to her? Hope so

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 1:00 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

So young to be a wife and mother yet now just look at teen mums and people looking down there noises at them. I don't mind the little slips cause I'm enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 10:54 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess

I love fics like this. Oh just had a thought (doesn't happen a lot) is Edward going by his middle name. Don't know if Bella will see this as a good or bad thing. Good cause it's her first love but bad cause he was kiss her when he's to marry another (even if it was Bella he didn't know) cant wait to read more. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Epilogue

I am so in love with this story.  I found it just looking for something new to read and I found this gem.  Once I statted I could hot stop.  The whole story from start to finish was beautiful.  My favorite part was when they realized that they were each others true love when they where getting married.

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