Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:48 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Uh oh, the whores are about to decend. LOL I just hope Edward keeps his wits about him and doesn't get himself into a compromising position with one of them, that Bella may take the wrong way. I'm sure it will happen though. Thanks for a great chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Ah, the joys of court politics. Good thing Edward is aware that this could be a problem. I totally sympathize with Bella. The thought of my man doing intimate things with other women would drive me mad.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:41 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Can't blame poor eddie for being worried.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:28 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
It is good that he is trying to take such good care of her... what an extreme though with the thought of beheading those who upset her (ah but these times were certainly different)! :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:25 PM Title: Presentation of Future Queen
Hope everyone gets healthy soon!
This was a lovely chapter...
But the foreshadowing of WITCHES ON THE WIND is hard to read...lol
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Aww! that was so cute. Very very cute and hot! They seem so happy and in love. aww! hmm! so where's the obstacles?
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:29 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Like you said, a little fluff chapter, which was great. It is good to see the love of Edward and Bella to each other. I can't wait what kind of "adventures" those two will experience in the future.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Thanks for the update. I love this story. I hope E & B continue to grow together.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Well what can I say about this chapter...hold one I need to go get a cool glass of water and cool down a little first! What a honeymoon/fantasy come true!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Perfect. This chapter was perfect. Once again, I'm so glad that Bella was able to bring along Emmett and Angela.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:43 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
That was hot nothing like some time rolling in the hills. LOL
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Love this version better. :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:54 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I have already said this once.....I am so glad I have found this story! I believe I have read your work before, if not...your name was very familiar to me. On twilighted I am just teacher...on this site as well as ff.net I am the real teacher....so IDK...maybe I have read you before!
Nonetheless.......I have loved what I have read so far and am really looking forward to more!
Good luck with those babies of yours...my son is trying to start walking...............when that starts I don't know how I am going to get to sit at the computer and read! LOL!
Author's Response:
My trick...baby gates surrounding them in a childproofed area where I sit in the corner and can see the whole room. That way, I can still supervise, but if I get wrapped up it's relatively safe. IT's hard to really get into what I'm reading/writing, which is why I do that mostly during naps and after bedtime at night... but it helped to save my sanity a bit :)
I'm not sure if I recognize you or not, but I'm on all three sites with the same penname. I'm glad you're enjoying this and I hope you check out some of my other stories :) Thanks for all of the great positive feedback :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:32 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
thanks fo the amazing chappie^^
I feel soory about that they have to go back to that royal prison...
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Bon Voyage
loved it! It was sad to see her go.....but I have a feeling that things are just heating up! Do we get to see Tanya beheaded? PLEASE!!!!!! I can't stand her!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:26 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I am soooo LOVING this story. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I am glad they finally got more honeymoon time together. It was ashame they had to cut it shot to leave so soon. I hope even when they make it home and have to be Prince Edward and Princess Isabella that they can find time like this to be Tony and Bella again. Great job and I will now be looking forward to Monday every week to see what is happening in the world of Prince Edward and his lovely wife Princess Isabella.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:04 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Outside loving is always so nice and gives you a sense of freedom.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Lemon has always been my favorite flavor...I just never knew why! Great chapter! I love that they were Tony and Bella and the quote from Romeo and Juliet was perfect.
Sorry you have to drop back to once a week but we'll survive...I hope! I'm amazed that you give us so much already. Just please don't stop writing!
Author's Response:
LOL...you know I don't think I could if I tried! I"ve already got another one brewing for when Flyboy wraps up...NASCAR Driver Bella...nuf said :) (what, I like writing Bella as strong, independent, and tough) LOL
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:29 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Oh what a good honeymoon lemon. Love your writing. Always looking forward to your next installment. Meg
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:03 PM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Ah honeymoons...can't beat them! I love that you gave them both a chapter to just be Bella and Tony. Wonderful stuff!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:30 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
awwww, how sweet. And you're right. What kind of readers would we be to skip this chapter just because of it's lemony goodness? Isn't that why we all read fanfiction? LOL
~Susan
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:23 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I am so glad they were able to have this little retreat!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:16 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Lol at this rate they will be with child before you know it. :) I'm sure neither of them would be disappointed by that.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
OMG This story is amazing it so refreshing to read a story that has now texting no i'm speak and no abbreviations just beautiful well written proper english.
And may i say the descriptions of their union are amazing the words you use make you feel like you are there wa tching a felling every wonder as they expeience if themselves.
can't wait for more keep up the excellent work
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:03 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I kind of feel sorry for Edward and Bella. I mean the walk was great, but to have to be reminded that in only two days they are going to be forced back into another reality because of their titles. I wish they could just spend more time being Tony and Bella, but then again I have no idea how you plan to write this and I think that they will get time to be together but it's going to be hard for them. Okay I'm off my soap box now, LOL! I'm off to read the teasers!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:40 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
So they are in England.
I really liked the history lesson in this chapter, whether it is actual history or fake doesn't matter. It is good to see that you look beyond the rim of your teacup to create an overall picture of the story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:32 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I really love both of your stories, but especially this one. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
I know you mentioned you want to do a racing story next, here is a really good one that I fell in love with Memories of Us » reviews
Bella is hired as Edward's nanny after the death of his wife. Having lost her husband and child, can they help each other heal and possibly find love along the way? AU/AH. OOC.Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:25 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
ha ha ha nice joke in your a/n skip the reason this is nc17 ha ha, no thankyou you do them so well!! this was a lovely chapter, out in the open air on a picnic blanket that's dangerously romantic, cant wait for more and your posting is fine once a week is loads thanks ever so tracy
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Great chapter! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
BRAVO. That last sentence was beautiful it resumed how they feeling now and how heavy is the responsability that they are going to share for the rest of their lives. LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR STORY. IT'S NOT ONLY FANTASTIC BUT ALSO EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL. IT'S SOOO ROMANTIC.
did i tell you that i feel really bad for Renee i hope she can get out of that castle or at least that she has some lover in the down low or that Jacob help her
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:39 AM Title: Bliss
it is crazy for me to remember what all they had to do and go through back in those days! This was very tastefully done! Great Job!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
That was beautiful, and so romantic. I like the "old fashioned" words you use to portray what they're doing and feeling. It still comes across as incredibly hot without being crude. Does that make sense? Looking forward to the next installment when real life enters. I wonder how they will balance everything that's coming.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:06 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
great start to the honeymoon :D Now that they're maried, does Edward take over the Kingdom? or does Carlisle have to pass away :(
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I can picture the scene in my head.
This chapter was both sweet and satifying :)
I cant't wait till the next chapter !
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:28 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Beautiful!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Cool story... like the setting. Thanks for the update!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Wow, that was a great honeymoon chapter :) Loved it all! Cannot believe that the next chapter Bella will be introduced to England :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:18 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
jumped over here to read this after reading your an on fanfic..... so sad that you have to censor this beautifully written story..... thank you for sharing with all of us...... love your stories.......:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Very nice . Carlisle doesnt want to offend Charlie???? by sending ships
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Princely Reformation
yay! It's getting closer!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
it was nice to see his side of things!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Sounds like a perfect afternoon. Lemons are always welcome. :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
So sweet! I loved it. I have to say I'm kind of excited for them to get to their "normal" life. I'm excited to see how they handle things as they learn to balance their royal life with their personal life.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:16 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
So beautifully worded. I love the language you use to tell this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try hard to give it that timely feel to help get us all int he right mindset. I'm glad the effort is appreciated!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I loved the hot lemon scenes but I think I might (just a little bit not enough to stop reading) not like her calling him Tony. I know that's his nickname for her but it just seems like a different person than Edward when she calls him that. not a bad thing I just don't really know how I feel about it. I still love the story and I definately going to keep reading have no doubts about that. I also love the idea that you had on your blog about Nascar. Yes go with that. lol hopefully that does go through. keep up the great work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
lemony delicious! they get to have a honeymoon after all!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:06 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
the pics are wonderful! So glad I found this story! Good luck with it!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:00 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Great chapter. Of course I didn't mind the smut. LOL
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
ummm, yeah, need to change, lol. Great chapter- They better enjoy while they can once they get back to the "real" world, they have duties to perform. The rat these two are going at it though, Bella should be pregnant in no time! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
LOL...thought you'd appreciate that one!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
I love this story! It is so original and I love the characters! Can't wait to see what's next!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:52 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Fabulous and can't wait till Monday or Sunday. Either way, I'll be eagerly waiting till the next update. Take Care.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:31 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
Lovely chapter! A little al fresco lovin' was just the ticket for two people who'd been cooped up on a ship, and before that, in a Spanish Court. I'm glad they were able to find a little privacy, and fulfill that fantasy. Once they're back at court, it will be almost impossible to find that kind of privacy.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:28 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
nice!!! i am so happy their dreams came true, to find each other and to be intimate with each other! great chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:27 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
yummy sweet
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:49 AM Title: Fantasy Fulfillment
MMMMmmm honestly who would skip this chapter?! WTH?
Author's Response:
LOL...yeah I thought that same...but to each his or her own! Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:59 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
wow, vivement la suite
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:48 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I am glad to see they will hopefully get to spend some down time before having to take the offical place as prince and princess of England. I hope Carlisle show of support will stop the war from even starting. I know Bella would be really upset if something happened to her family. I cant tell you how much I am enjoying this story. I am always looking forward to the updates. Awesome work.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Great Chapter! I love this story so far! I bet Tony is Edward! Sly little Prince used his middle name! I wonder how they will react when they see each other at the alter! Hopefully EXTREMELY happy!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:52 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
You bring such detail into your writing that it feels like I'm reading a biography...just a really, really interesting one! Your descriptions of titles and estates and peerage is marvelous!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying really hard...and the peerage stuff is kind of confusing at times, but I"m trying. I've had fun combining little bits of reality with my ffn world. I'm going to have fun making E and B turn Nottingham House into Kensington Palace :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:39 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
what a stroke of good luck getting the estate given them to relax in, i'm sure they will be able to fill in the time with their new found activities, bella continues to amaze people introducing emmett the way she did was so very kind, it gives him a higher status in england i suspose, cant wait to see what they get up to next, great chapter thanks for posting as things such as rl keep us all busy, see you when you update next with no worries just when you can tracy
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:27 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Lovely chapter but I can't help but sense that something is wrong. What is about to happen???????? I am worried.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:54 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Wow, Carlisle thinks about everything.. It's good that he's thinking of protecting both Spain and Italy. As for Edward and Bella....well here's hoping that the next chapter will be interesting.
Rhonda
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:29 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
another great chapter, I wonder if Isabellsa would hold a more important role for England during the upcoming situation than the one she held in her own court... see u next update
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:34 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I am happy that Emmett is finally recognized as family. That was very sweet of Bella. It will be a new start for Emmett.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:35 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
great chapter!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:46 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Just got caught up on this, really good stuff so far! I love a good period story and you're doing a great job of it. I also love that you made Jacob Bella's adoring brother. You hardly ever see these characters set up in such a way and it's fantastic!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:42 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Great Chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:12 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Calm before the storm perhaps?? Good job! Looking forward to reading more when I get back from vacation!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:42 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I have to say I love both of your stories so much. Historical fiction has always been something that I truly enjoy. It must be the History major in me. Please British History is my all time favorite. So thank you for writing two incredible stories.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Loved it!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:13 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I am glad they get a bit of a honeymoon. It sounds like they will need it with the parade and formal announcement pending, as well as her having to acclimate to a new court which I am sure will be full of former conquests of the future king. She has a lot on her plate.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:01 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Thank you for the update. I can't wait to see where this story is going.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:35 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
aww they are too adorable and forget being proper. lol I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next. great job. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
love this story
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Will they be safe in Nottingham? Please don't let anything happen to them. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Amazing job! I completely understand about having to cut back on updates. I cannot wait for next week's update :) I am so happy for Bella and Edward :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Good chapter.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:48 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I'm glad Bella and Edward get a bit more of a honeymoon and I like how Carlisle's come up with a way to protect Spain and Italy. Looking forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:28 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I've really enjoyed reading this so far! Excellent job!!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:54 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
I like Carlisle's idea for protecting both Spain and Italy. He's a bright guy ;0)
~Susan
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
Ahhh, a semi honeymoon. Time alone with our favorite couple. Can't wait to see how they utilize it.....
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:24 AM Title: A Foreign Shore
finally a honeymoon..:)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:50 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
hmmm wonder when em and angela will meet their soulmates....
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:32 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
you did it again with another great chapter and i can't wait for more
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Sounds like there will definitely be some drama coming with France being a pain in the collective asses of Italy, Spain and England. Going to be interesting to see how Bella and Edward settle into marriedlife at court.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:01 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
I hope they have a pleasant time at this estate to get to enjoy each other!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:58 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Yet another great update! Thank you.
I hope Carlisle doesn't need to send Edward off to lead troops in battle. He needs to be home, pulling stud duty, right?
Will we see some of that duty performed in the next chapter? Think of England, dear!
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:56 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Hmm! Garrett...what's up with him? hmm! I wonder...if he's has something up his sleeve. I don't know yet. He seemed apprehensive about Bella.
So alone time....yay! The boat was fun but this estate might be fun for a little mini vacation.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: A Foreign Shore
Really cool update! I really love the time period the story is in, very cool idea for your story!!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:22 PM Title: Bon Voyage
I appreciate this version of Bella so much! She is strong, bold, beautiful, and a huge heart of gold! Was glad to see that Charlie did have some love and compassion for his daughter! Understandable that some men don't really know how to relate to their daughters. I cried for Renee, hope that she won't be too lonely. Excited for Alice and Jasper! And I love reading how Edward and Bella are learning about one another in new ways! Great Chapter!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 11:18 AM Title: Bon Voyage
It was great to have a glimpse in the mind of Charlie. Now his actions towards Bella are a little bit understandable.
I cant wait, what Bella and Edward will experience in England and what obstacles they have to endure.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:29 AM Title: Bon Voyage
i have to remember that i need to click on the new chapter. the first chapter popped up and i was like WTF happened! lol. but then i realized it was the wrong chapter i was reading. badbad
great job though!
Author's Response:
LOL...I keep doing that too! LOL.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Good to know that at least Charlie has a heart. So sad the good byes to her mom and brother. Alice will be so cute with baby. What a way to go on a boat ride LOL
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I love this story!
Waiting for the next chapter!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I loved the chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2010 10:59 PM Title: Bon Voyage
This is an amazing story i cant wait to read more i hope nothing comes between edward and bella
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:42 PM Title: Bon Voyage
J'ai hâte de lire la suite.
Je me présente...
Je suis une jeune grand-maman de 48 ans. J'ai deux filles de 25 et 21 ans. Une petite fille de 4 mois. Mon aîné est infirmière aux soins intensifs en cardio, et celle de 21 ans étudiante à l'université en génie.
Je suis peintre et photographe-amateur et adore les fics de twilight, je suis bêta pour la traduction française de "The perfect wife". J'habite dans la banlieue de Montréal, Québec.
Je lis avec l'aide d'un traducteur, je suis excellente en français mais pas bonne en anglais. C'est la raison pour laquelle j'écris la review en français!
J'aimerais être averti un jour si votre fic est traduite en français, je la relierai avec grand plaisir.
Fleur
Author's Response:
Vous devez être si fiers de vos filles. Je n'ai pas eu d'offres de traduire une de mes histoires en français, bien que ma très longue fic Femme Docs et Kevlar Knights était traduit en allemand.Autant que je sache, seuls deux chapitres ont été traduits though.
Quoi qu'il en soit, je vous remercie beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de lire et de traiter les traduire. J'espère vous voir autour de plus!
Merci encore!
Jen