[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:25 PM Title: Bon Voyage
2 wonderful chapters King Charlie suprised me. Can't wait to see what England brings. Meg
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:00 PM Title: Altering Plans
quelle belle fic!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:42 PM Title: Bliss
une chance que j'avais une bonne réserve de glaçons!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:01 PM Title: A Day For Miracles
vivement la suite
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:39 PM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
bye, je suis pressée de lire la suite
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
ça se confirme, edward est tony...wow
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:02 PM Title: The Mind of A Prince
Votre fic est si intéressante que je la lis avec un traducteur google. Je suis nulle en anglais. J'espère qu'un jour elle soit traduite en français.
Author's Response:
J'ai utilisé Google Translator pour répondre en français. Je suis si contente que vous appréciez l'histoire, et je vous remercie de passer par la peine de traduire les chapitres que vous puissiez les lire. Il me fait du bien que vous pensez que cette histoire vaut la peine. J'espère que vous apprécierez le reste de l'histoire, et bon travail à calculer les Tony / Edward corrélation si tôt!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:48 PM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
J'espère, j'espère que Edward est Tony!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:21 PM Title: The Fate of a Princess
J'ai l'impression que Tony est peut-être le Prince Edward (Anthony). Ce serait super!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:49 AM Title: Bon Voyage
So nice to see that King Charles does have affection for his daughter, and to understand that he just doesnt know how to relate to her. Great that the happy couple got to spend some time honeymooning on the voyage home to England. Cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:40 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Great chapter! I love how sweet Edward and Bella are together. And great insight into King Charles' mind. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:30 PM Title: Altering Plans
Really enjoying your story!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 9:06 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Great chapter.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Bon Voyage
This was sweet. Alice and jasper are going to be parents. They will be great.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:48 PM Title: Bon Voyage
That was incredibly hot! I had never read a sex scene without the words "pussy" and "cock", so, I'm all for "womanhood" now, lol!
Poor Bella... leaving your mother and brother until who knows when... that must be so hard..... oh! and I love to hear Charlie has a heart hidden deep in his chest, but he has one, I wasn't expecting that :P
Nice chap ^^
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:46 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Well, I love this chapter. It's very cute, hot, and romantic. Aww! Aww! I can't wait for Chapter 11.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:25 PM Title: Altering Plans
Aww! He's so proud of his Bella. Aww! That's beyond cute and romantic. He's already protective of her. Awww!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:08 PM Title: Bliss
hmm! That was just plain nasty. All those people watching them have sex. yuck! hahaha. Then again, in this society, it's like porn. lol.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:56 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Sad to see Bella left her family. I wonder when they are going to meet each other again. How will her mother cope? She will only have Jacob. Her husband will obviously ignore her and went off fucking someone else.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Wow what a chapter. Oh and Alice is pregnant how great!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:22 PM Title: Bon Voyage
What a lovely way to begin a life together...with love, respect and unadulterated passion!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:09 PM Title: Bon Voyage
Loved this chapter. I am glad that Kind Charles spoke to his daughter. I just wished that he would have hugged her good bye. Can't wait to see whatelse you have in store for this story.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:06 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Oh i love it... what a great chapter... I would love to see Bella pregnant too...
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:41 AM Title: Bon Voyage
fantastic chapter, they sure are enjoying married life, alice is having a baby i hope that goes ok that sort of thing was frought with problems back then, next stop england i wonder if everybody will be pleased to see the new queen? more please thanks
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:30 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
yay! It's about time. Good Grief! lol. Charlie is a bit of very traditional royal ehh? He kinda reminds me of Henry VIII. Man hoe! lol.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:23 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Nice chapter, the long awaited lemon was perfect. Thanks.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:23 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Thank you, for another wonderful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
This is taking so much longer. Good grief! When's the wedding? lol. I can't wait. lol.
hehe. Angela and Alice know it was Bella and Edward in Italy. lol.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:04 AM Title: Princely Reformation
Awww! He misses Bella. aww!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Aww! Poor Bella. She's in love with Tony but Tony is Edward too. aww!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:45 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
Hmm! So Angela and Jacob met Edward. Has Renee met him yet? hmm!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
Lothario? what's that? Nice chapter so far. I think Alice guessed who bella is in terms of Edward's song. hmm!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:17 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
So Bella's Isabella II? So I'm guessing Tony is Edward and He and Bella both met in Italy eh? lol.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:10 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Love this story! I have a feeling Alice's little one is going to have a royal cousin pretty quickly at this rate!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I love the language you are using to tell this story. You have done an amazing job using the lingo of the day. I am also releived about King Charles's soften stance on Isabella. Their goodbye made me weepy.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:31 AM Title: Bon Voyage
OK, you have me a little worried. maybe I'm just reading more into this statement than I should...There would never, ever be another woman that would ever compare to Bella...does that mean he is going to try to find another one? or does that mean that he's found the best and there isn't a point in looking for another one? I'm really hoping it's the latter of those two ;0)
~Susan
Author's Response:
It's definitely that there's no point in looking for another one. It's his way of saying that his womanizing ways are over :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Fantastic and SOOOOO Hot!!!!! Great chapter and I loved how you made Jacob her brother. Can't wait to see what happens when they arrive in England. And poor Alice, I can't imagine that this has been a comfortable trip for her!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Fantastic as always. Glad to see a bit of humanity in Charlie...
Nice wedded bliss!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:06 AM Title: Bon Voyage
They are too sweet together, I love it!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:03 AM Title: Bon Voyage
is thier little bubble gonna pop when they get to England.....will trouble be waiting for them?
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Wow, a great beginning for their new life. I guess you could call that one of the first honeymoon cruises?
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:50 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Is this story going to have the intrigue and backstabbing that the time period was known for?
Author's Response:
Let's just say that the ladies of the English Aristocracy might not be quite as kind as the Cullens themselves. That's all I'll say for now :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:47 AM Title: Altering Plans
Please tell me Lauren ad Jessica don't join them to England!
Author's Response:
LOl...no fear there :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Was childbirth a frightening prospect at this time regarding the mortality rate of the mothers? With all the sexing they are doing I would think Bella would be pg soon.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: Bon Voyage
yahoo! the prince and princess are horn dogs. lol I love it. I can't wait to read more. this is going great and I liked the goodbye between Jake and Bella. so sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: Bon Voyage
funny seeing you here! ;) I love how sophisticated your lemons are. They totally fit the mood, time period of this story. Loving it!
Author's Response:
Hey hon! Glad you're hitting here too. I love it here. I'm having fun being a fish in a smaller pond. I'm getting the joy of hitting most of the top tens! I"ve never had that before ...LOL!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Bon Voyage
How hard this must have been to a young princess bride in that time. The sadness from leaving everything and everyone you have ever known to unfamilar lands and family. At least in Bella's case she loves or will learn to love all these people. You have the best story and I am loving every word.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:11 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Loved it! I can't wait until they get to England and to see how Bella fits into Edwards world. This is such a great time period and story I can't wait until Monday! Happy New Moon Release Weekend!
Rhonda
BTW I'm following you on Twitter now so when you see rhondalynn09 you know that's me!
Author's Response:
I saw that and figured it out right away before you even told me :) I usually post silly stuff with a few writing updates here for there...but it's fun. :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:07 AM Title: Bon Voyage
They have had a nice start together and deserved it! I look forward to seeing how they deal with life's responsibilities for them!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Great chapter! I'm glad you are posting both places because even though you are on my list here, I can't seem to get updates. So the ff chapter tells me to come here.
Author's Response:
Have you gone into your account info/edit preferences and clicked the little box to indicate you want email alerts when an author updates? If not then that is probably the problem with you not getting your alerts. If you have then I suggest sending out a message to Bob or even posting it on the Shout box on TWCS homepage. They're super awesome about fixing things if you let them know!!! :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Bon Voyage
All good things must come to an end. That's right, I just pulled out that cliche. But's true! Great chapter, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Have you gone into your account info/edit preferences and clicked the little box to indicate you want email alerts when an author updates? If not then that is probably the problem with you not getting your alerts. If you have then I suggest sending out a message to Bob or even posting it on the Shout box on TWCS homepage. They're super awesome about fixing things if you let them know!!! :) Glad you liked it.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:42 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I don't think I ever mentioned it, but I love you characterization of Jacob. I'm so glad he's her brother instead of some random, misguided lover. I know SM said that in the books Bella really did fall in love with Jacob, but I NEVER got that impression. He really was more like a brother to her. Her heart always belonged to Edward. So bravo, this is the first time I've ever read Jacob as her brother, and I think it's the best way to have him characterized. You're awesome :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you and I agree wholeheartedly. I felt that she loved him, but not in a romantic way. It was much more in a brotherly way, while Edward was always her true love. Never once in the books did I feel she would have ever been happy being romantic with Jacob. Of course SM would know since she wrote it...but as I reader, I never interpreted it that way. I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:37 AM Title: Bon Voyage
enjoyed the story so far...keep up the good work!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:36 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Fabulous chapter! Please update soon!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:31 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Edward is heading after that whole pregnancy thing for sure, her orgasm only increases the likely hood. Damn lucky Bella. :(
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Great chapter, can't wait for more!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Bon Voyage
awww sweet ending
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Bon Voyage
I just have to say I love your story and I look forward to each and everyone of your updates.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:12 AM Title: Bon Voyage
lets see how the english court will receive bella?
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:07 AM Title: Bon Voyage
Ah, travel in the olden days. Not luxurious by today's standards, but they sure managed, didn't they?
I love how they took care of each other with the bathing, then took a little more care of each other with the lovin'.
I can't wait til they get to England.
Thanks for the update!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Bon Voyage
MMMM i love it!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Altering Plans
bella is most obviously a highly inteligent queen and is very apprassed of the current political climate, she is going to go down a storm in england at least she has a forward thinking (for the time) husband, it's a shame her time is getting cut short with her family well her mother and brother, her father just seems to be a product of the time in which he lives which i suspose it was the norm for men to be chauvonists, bella is pleased to also have emmett going to england and he's a lord was not expecting that, wonder what they will get up to on the boat ha ha i dont need three guesses lol, fantastic chapter, more please
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Altering Plans
Finally! I got to chapter 9! :D
I love how Bella is so smart, I hope Charlie realizes it some day... and also the fact that he has been a complete fool.
Now I'll *try* to follow your story... I know I have to click somewhere... :/
Can't wait for tomorrow!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:56 PM Title: Altering Plans
Wow I really shouldnt have been surprised that Bella was more aware of what was going on then she lead to believe. Edward will have a powerful wife and queen at this side when he takes over England. It is sad the Bella is having to be ripped away from your family so quickly. But Edward will always try is bext to make her happy and that became perfectly clear in this chapter. I am so happy to see Emmett and Angela coming with Bella because it is always hard start off a new life in a strange new place so far away from family and friends. I cant wait to see what will happen next between these two. Great job.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:17 AM Title: Bliss
My message was deleted T.T
anyway... I was saying that....... OMFG that was HOT!
Now I only have a couple of hours to sleep, but it's definitely worth it :)
ps: I'm glad it doesn't sound too formal, but just plain weird x)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
Charly's a d!ck!! >.<
oh, uh.. my family is catholic, but, yeah "ceremony full of kneeling and standing, recitation and response", you got it right, LOL (I laughed with that for quite a while xD)
Now... running to read next chapter!! :D:D:D
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:53 AM Title: Wedding Eve Festivities
Awesome... I can't stop reading...
aww.. poor Bella... and poor princesses of all time.. life was so hard for them back then... I mean... witnesses? GAH..
Men were SO lucky.. ¬¬
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:36 AM Title: Princely Reformation
Loving this story so far. I'd like to read it more often but I'm bussy with my classes... :(
Btw, I have just started a class in my college called "British literature", I most definitelly think this story will help me for now to see how everything was back then..
I thought you wouldn't need to know spanish, specially not after who-knows-how-many chapters you have written already, but I wanted you to know that you can always count on me if you need any reference.
Oh! and sorry if this sounds too formal sometimes, or just plain weird, lol, it's 'cause I'm still learning english.. n.n'
ok, I'll better shut up and keep reading :)
Author's Response:
it didn't sound too formal to me at all. Thanks :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:10 AM Title: Altering Plans
Love this story, can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: A Day For Miracles
Loved this chapter!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:07 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
Like how the story has started, off to read more!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 10:20 PM Title: Altering Plans
Gah I love this story. Can't wait for the next update
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:33 PM Title: Altering Plans
I have rather enjoyed reading this story. You attempt at 3rd person is definately getting better but often times gets slightly confusing. I am sure this may be readers fault (haha) and not always author.
I look forward to reading more of this story as well as your others. I would like to ask if you will be transfering these stories to twilighted.net as well.
thanks!
Author's Response:
I don't think so. I don't like the validation process. It just takes too long and depending on the Jr. Validation beta you get, it can be very daunting. The one I had for FDKK was awesome, but not all are as awesome as Sassenach Wench. Anyway, I seriously doubt I will go through the trouble.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:53 PM Title: Altering Plans
Another great chapter to go with another beautiful story...with any luck King Charles will redeem himself somewhere along the way and show that he truly loved Bella... but had his reasons for behaving toward her the way he did.... Maybe? Please? I hate to hate Charlie!
Author's Response:
:) Next chapter you'll understand a little more. He's still a chauvenist pig much like most men of the day, but his reasons aren't all bad. You don't feel quite so much like he's an unfeeling devil, just an emotionally stunted man that doesn't know how to interact with his daughter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:33 AM Title: Altering Plans
another great chapter... i cannot wait till Em meets Rose, and i love that Bell and Edward are enjoying their wedding bliss
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Bliss
That was beautifully and so sexy at the same time.
Gah. Love. This. Story.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: The Mind of A Prince
ok.. ok.. so.. I'm almost sure Edward is that Tony guy... let's keep reading to find out... :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:56 AM Title: The Fate of a Princess
This story sounds promising!! I just started it, while looking for something different. So, this is perfect :)
I read FD&KK some time ago, I loved it, so.. I just knew your writing was great and that you had awesome ideas.
Oh! If you need some help with your spanish, I could help you, lol. I'm a native spanish speaker. But.. well.. old spanish is quite different, though.. harder >.<
Well.. I'm gonna keep reading!! ;)
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it, and thanks for the offer. I"m past the point where I would need the Spanish, but I appreciate the offer! Looking forward to your opinions :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:34 AM Title: Altering Plans
i love it!!! thanks! cant wait for more! :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Altering Plans
I love their connection and how edward is so proud of her for who she is!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Altering Plans
Oh! I can't believe Charles is so uptight! At least he wanted to get the English Royalty out of Spain just incase there was a fight, but I think Bella was right and Edward is right to be proud of her. He's got an increadible woman to spend his life with.
I do love this story!
Rhonda
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:53 PM Title: Altering Plans
Fantastic chapter! Edward is so observant when it comes to Bella. Has Rose been mentioned yet or will we meet her when they return to England? I can't wait until Thursday! Oh and THANK YOU for the sneak peeks on your blog...it helped me make it until today for the update.
Author's Response:
I'M GLAD THE sneak peeks are helping you bide the time. To answer your question, there has been a mention in passing of Rose. When Jasper was discussing with Jasper a few chapters ago before the wedding how he should be pleased to have Bella, he made a tongue in cheek reference to Edward's cousin Rosalie "Dutchess of Vanity" LOL. I couldn't resist. That was my big hint that she's a vain beeotch. Anyway, when that all starts up should be interesting. Hope that helps :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Altering Plans
Uh oh, should we be worried about Jessica? I hate to say it, but I hope that king Charles is killed in some kind of battle and Jacob takes over as king. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:52 PM Title: Altering Plans
Like your story a lot. Thanks for the gift of that last chapter early... it was fun to see it posted! Please keep writing. I love this B x E so far.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: Altering Plans
can't get enough of this. thanks for updating.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:56 PM Title: Altering Plans
glad that he realizes Bella's worth as a stratigizer.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:11 PM Title: Altering Plans
Awesome chapter! I loved how Bella was the mastermind behind diplomatic/war relations. Edward and Bella are so very sweet together. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:57 PM Title: Altering Plans
That was amazing! I am sad that they had to cut the honeymoon short but in the end it is ok. Like Edward said, they have the rest of their lives for that :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Altering Plans
I love this story
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Altering Plans
I love this story. I had forgot about Emmett being Bella's guard. Is Rose going to be in this story???? You are doing a wonderful job writing this story. I am very much enjoying it and as always I am looking forward to your next update.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:45 PM Title: Altering Plans
I'm so glad Bella will be formidable queen one day. Did you know that Henry VIII actually named Catharine of Aragon his Regent when he went of to fight in a battle at one time? (This was early in their marriage). A Queen with knowledge of politics and statecraft is a good thing, indeed.
I wonder if all along Charlie wouldn't let himself get too attached to Bella because he knew that one day she'd be gone? I'm probably over-romanticizing his brief vulnerability.
Author's Response:
Next chapter you will understand a bit more about Charlie. You get a brief glimpse into his head as he's bidding the group farewell. He's not all bad. LOL.
I didn't know that of Catharine of Aragon, but it doesn't surprise me. She seemed like a highly intelligent woman.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:13 PM Title: Altering Plans
I know Bella will miss her brother and mother, but besides that I would be happy to leave my father. She gets to bring 2 of her favorite people.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:08 PM Title: Altering Plans
Excellent!! Nothing to add since you are weaving an incredible tale!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:03 PM Title: Altering Plans
Would Esme be concerned of a potential attack on Italy? That jealousy that others have for Bella and Edward makes me so nervous! PEople get ugly when they are jealous.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Altering Plans
To bad they were interruted but it was good to so he could see how amazing she is. The boat ride home should be fun wink wink.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:09 PM Title: Altering Plans
Yay for Emmett coming! It just wouldn't be the same without him. Love it! Still love it, you know that though!