[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great Chapter. I really look forward to your updates each week. As far as your question on redemption, I wouldn't really think any of them were redeemable. That said, I think Jazz has the best chance because I hate that Alice's does not have her love in her life cauuse he is such an ass.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
no I don't write so I don't know. What I want to say is that everyone is not against you because of your weight. Now what they think in their heads they may very well think less of a fat person. She has got to toughen up. Jasper can be redeemed. Charlie, never. Jacob has other issues as well. james?? I don't know. The main thing is that Bella in her love of Edward needs to take care of herself be healthy and do some excerise everyday. If she does that she will loose some of her weight. She may not be skinny but at least the overeating to soothe her damanged personna has stopped. She can now look at herself differently.
Date: 21 Oct 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter. Jake is one lousy doctor. what an arse. Hope he gets fired. Poor b. Stuck working with wankers and then bushwacked by assper. Glad he was found out though. Go Esmom. Rose is cool. Poor eddie and his hand
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
God i love Edward in this. And it looks like ASSPER fits Jasper so well right now. I mean come on what the hell is his issue with Bella? HE jealous or something?
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter. What is wrong with jasper! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
one of the best edwards i have ever read he is truely the most wonderful man
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper hopefully becomes avgood guy andi think jake bailed charle out. I just dont get it, ive been made fun of abt my weight in elementry and middle school heck its what made me anerix, however after my parents found out and such lets just say i gained it all back but in high school, college and my adult life ive never been outwardly made fun of like bella is, if i was id have been in a lot of fights. Poor bella, we know we aint skinny we dont need people telling us, we do own mirrors and buy our clothes
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
YOU CREATE TWO SEX BEAST of them.
oww... i feel ashamed of Jasper, because i love him, but i know you are making a really good work with him in this story.
Love this chapeter very much.
thanks
Date: 10 Oct 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
There first time together was perfect. It wasn't too much it was real.
My theory is James is the good guy. I don't know he was just too weird. Maybe that served a purpose. Then I always hoped that Charlie would come around. Jake has been too solid a bad guy. From the bet to getting fired for sexual and drug misconduct to his asshole attitude. Now Jasper I have no clue what his problem really is. There has to be something buried really deep.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
What is wrong with Jasper........he's so mean!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
sweetward love him
Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jasper needs to pull his head out of is arse soon x
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
J'ai trouvé la première fois de Bella et d'Edward très romantique !!!
Jasper est très décevant, mais j'ai bon espoir qu'il change.
Merci.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
WOW !!!! loved it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great update. I cannot believe that Jasper is still such a bastard!! Good for ALL of them standing up to him on Bella's behalf. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am in love with Edward he is the best man ever :) I think Jasper is doing drug that has to be the reason he is such an ass.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
i was a little disappointed.....i've read your first times before and this time it wasn't as discriptive, that's not to say i'm disappointed overall absolutly not i know in the end this story like all the others will be great!!!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, I didn't think it was possible to hate Jasper more, but how I'm surprised that it is!!!! Die alone, Jasper, no Alice for you ever again, hope you get bold and ugly, because the ugly soul you already have, jerk!!!!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Glad Rose is doing better. I can understand her taking it slow. Happy that Em is being understanding and supportive. What the hell is Jasper's problem? Just dont get it. Ah well it will come out soon enough.
Yippee for first, extra special time. You get a pic for that, the Dancing Lemon.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
OH SHIT I CAN'T BELIEVE CHARLIE PUT HIS HANDS ON BELLA AND PULLED HER HAIR OUT AND MADE HER FALL HE NEEDS TO SPEND THE NIGHT IN JAIL HELL HE WAS A COP HE KNOWS BETTER. I'M SO GLAD EDWARD CAME TO HELP HER.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'M GLAD THEY GOT THERE NEW YEARS KISS AND A FEW MORE BELLA IS AFARID OF GETTING HURT AGAIN AND I CAN'T BLAME HER I'D BE AFARID TO IF I WAS HER. I LOVE THAT EDWARD IS SO SWEET TO HER AND HE HELPS HER I REALLY HATE WHAT HER FATHER DID TO HER NO ONE SHOULD EVER HAVE TO GO THROUGH THAT KIND OF ABUSE.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'M SO GLAD THE DR. HEARD WHAT WAS BEING SAID TO BELLA AND ANG. HEARD WHAT JESSICA WAS SAYING AS WELL. THE SLUT SISTHERS NEED TO BE PUT IN THERE PLACE OR FIRED FOR ALL THEY HAVE DONE TO BELLA AND OTHERS I'M SURE SHE ISN'T THE ONLY ONE THEY HAVE TREATED LIKE THEY TREAT BELLA.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ow, ow, ow, and ow some more for Mr. Pecker.
Glad Bella got to lay into Jacob, finally.
Excited that Bella has come to a sense of peace to where she's feels she can move her relationship forward with Edward to the next step.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
DAMN IF THIS ISN'T SAD I CAN'T BELIEVE OTHER NURSES WOULD SAY THINGS TO BELLA LIKE THAT. WELL EDWARD SEEMS TO LIKE HER AND THE OTHER NURSES CAN EAT SHIT AND DIE.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so proud of Bella. Eventhough she is right and Edward should of written her up. But thankfully Jacob didn't see him so they don't have to worry about it.
Date: 30 Sep 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Woohoo, finally she tells off Jacob and Mike!!!! I love this story and look forward to the next chapters.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!!!!!!! F I N A L L Y !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW WE ALL HAVE THE PLEASURE OF LOOKING FORWARD TO THE WAY YOU SO ELOQUENTLY TURN YOUR WORDS INTO BEAUTIFLUL LOVING MAGIC. TRULY LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
So glad she stood up to dickwad Newton and fuckwad Black!
I'm a nurse, and Bella would probably have signed her email, Isabella Swan, RN not Nurse Isabella M. Swan..
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
J'ai bien aimé ce chapitre !
Bella a dit son fait à Jacob !
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay, this chapter only proves that Bella's changing and becaming the woman that she was always supposed to be!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. Update soon.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter. Love that Bella is building her confidence, finally standing up for herself. Hope she gets the chance to use some of her kick boxing skills on Jacob he needs a swift kick.
Waiting for your approval on twitter so I can follow you.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Mr. Pecker hehe ok I would have to snicker about that but a doctor shouldnt. I am so proud of Bella putting that prick in his place. cant wait for next time
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aww bella is growing with edwards love
Date: 29 Sep 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
I had just taken a drink of my Coke when I read about Mr. Pecker and spit it all over my screen!!! Too funny!!! So glad Bella is standing up for herself. Having someone show you attention (especially someone yummy like Edward) does wonders for your self esteem. I hope Bella keeps growing and working to be the best Bella possible and that will be the sweetest regenge she can have.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Confidence in Ms Swan, it has grown and it looks great on her.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
I don't think I am very mature either. I would have had a hard time holding it together for a patient named Woody Pecker with a prolonged stiffy. Uh, I am excited for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! That scene with Mr. Pecker, was EPIC. And Bella telling Jacob off, yeah, about time she got to get some of her tension out and direct it at the person responsible. Her kickboxing class sounded like fun! Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks so much for sharing!
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Go Bella for standing up for herself with Newton and Black. You just had to make the patients name Pecker huh? LOL.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad that Bella is handling the Jacob issue so well. She didn't run screaming, crying or anything. I'm sure it hurts seeing him but what she said to Edward is correct she has done much better for herself. Too bad Charlie came back when he did. Dealing with Jacob was enough but add that to it and I'm sure there will be some setback. I just hope she remembers all those who love her and that she is so much more then that. I'm not really worried about Jacob to much. He'll screw up soon enough and be out.
Jasper is a ass but maybe hitting rock bottom like he has will wake him up to what's really important in life.
I think that Charlie may of had the money all along, but was using Bella to pay for everything. I hate to say that because I was hoping that he would come around but that doesn't seem likely. I mean Bella's mom died in a accident. There would of been insurance money, maybe even wrongful death suits. I'm also wondering if maybe he is the one who owns the building, or he's selling drugs.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah Bella. She put jasper in his place. Hopefully he'll see her for who she really is now.
Fuck. I hope the new Dr isn't Jacob. But I have a feeling it is. I hope Edward can keep his cool.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't the poor girl ever get a break. It seems as soon as something good happens something bad knocks her right back down.
If this doesn't prove Edwards love I don't know what will.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
While I'm really glad that Bella stood up for herself, I wish she had remembered who she was a didn't act out quite as much. By screaming at him like that she was lowering herself to his level and she is so much better than that.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really glad that jasper got his head out of his ass.
That was a great dance ad Edward was so sweet and attentive.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella really is coming a long way. She finally realized what was holding her back and is doing something about it. The girls are great, I can't believe they dragged Bella to a sex shop.
Date: 24 Sep 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope that Bella realizes what she has.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow what a date.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad that everyone is moving forward.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
The whole Charlie situation is just sad. It sounds like he was a good man once. Losing his wife, the his job, then his leg turned him into a butter old man. Maybe now that he has hit rock bottom, or he will when he realizes Bella won't help him anymore. Maybe he will realize what a monster he became and get the help he needs.
Im so glad that Bella is starting to realize her true worth. Size doesn't matter it's the person on the inside that's important.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love all the new characters. Emmett and Alice are great. I can't wait to see them with everyone. Now that Edward is working on Bella's mental health maybe it will give her the push she needs to feel better about herself.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward really is a miracle worker. First Rosalie started to make some progress. Yes I know it won't be that easy. I myself suffered from a eating disorder at one point in my life so I knew its not going to be smooth sailing. Then he shows Bella kindness and she starts to realize that she deserves better. I also know her journey won't be easy. I'm sure there will be a lot of guilt associated with her leaving her father. But she deserves this. She deserves happiness.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Poor Rose. I have to admit I peaked at your blog before reading this and I was horrified when I saw Rose's picture and the works minus 20lbs. I wasn't sure what you were getting at with that but now it all makes sense.
Edward is so caring. I'm really glad that he is already so caring of Bella. She really deserves it.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella. With all these people talking down to her it's no wonder she feels the way she does. She is such a sweet and caring person who won't stand up for herself because she doesn't think she deserves any better.
Im glad that Edward sees her for Tge amazing person she is.
Date: 22 Sep 2012 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG, this is really good story.... I love it... Every chapter
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
Damn jacob! I think someone who hatesbella paid charlies bail
Date: 20 Sep 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Maybe Jacob did or jasper but that is unlikely. I hope that jasper comes around.please update soon
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Im like u i don,t love myself
Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella isnt at all fat, hard to tell if shes chubby but according to the pic u posted shes healthy looking no fat not skinny...skinny chicks look nasty.....so lauren should shut up along withcharlie
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yeah, im glad Bella stood up for herself. now if opnly Jasper can grow up. I love that your doing a story that kind of reflects on my real life. im a 'big' girl, and the hubby is active duty airforce (so he's like all healthy looking). Great job, keep up the awesome work.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why do I get the feeling that Jacob Black is somehow involved in Charlie's release? Great couple od chapters can't wait until the next ones!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
I don't recall if in the beginning if you wrote Charlie was friends with Billy Black, if so, since Jacob is working at Bella's hospital now, did he wire the money so Charlie could get out and torment Bella as amusement for himself... just a thougth. Edward's right though something fishy is going on.
So looking forward to Bella and Jacobs meeting.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH hell the hospital hired Jacob didn't they???
Loved drunk Edward and fluffiness.
Good for Bella standing up for herself and calling Jasper out on his rudeness.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story so far can't wait to see way happens next update soon
Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
jasper is an ass and my bet is jacob paid charlies bond. looking forward to more.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
So much to talk about this chapter that's a little hard to put everything in words, but I'll try:
1- Jasper deserves to be alone until he grows up. The bastard!!!
2- Jacob's jerk that deserves to go down, terrible doctor, he loves the money and the power, but is horrible at taking care of pacients!!
3- How the hell Charlie found U$250.000, who gave it to him???
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
my vote is that Jake paid the bond
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Who paid his bond? I am at a loss there. Surely Jasper would not do that. He might be petty but to hurt her like that?? If he did then Esme and Carlisle need to throttle him.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oui c'est bizarre que Charlie ait été libéré... Peut-être quelqu'un de riche (Jacob ?) veut nuire à Bella et Edward ?
Jasper est un idiot mais il a peut-être eu un problème avec une femme grosse et du coup il aurait une haine pour ce genre de personne.
Bon j'ai aimé ce chapitre.
Merci.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hhmmm cant help thinking that Jacob n Charlie are in this together but whats in it for Jacob ? Bellas obviously getting fit and monitoring her food intake so what Id like is for Assper to suddenly notice her body change and try to be nice to her - so Bella can hand him his ass on a plate ( but what about poor Alice - didnt really think that through, did I ? ) look forward to next time
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
What a great chapter! I have no clue what is going on with Jasper, why does he give a dam who Edward loves, why so hateful to Bella.
Jacob, what a lowlife. This is going to be interesting. And why do I have a feeling Jacob had something to do with Charlie getting out of jail?
Date: 17 Sep 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lllloved it xx
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
More please!!! thanks.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
Have I told you lately how much I just love your story? If not, let me clear it up. I really, really, love your story!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
I KNEW Jacob was coming to County! I totally called that last chapter. As for Assper there, oh boy do I want to kick his ass! I'm so proud of Edward and Rosalie for abandoning him for his behavior. Edward's remark of "give my ticket to a bum"...wow, harsh, but deserved. Also proud of Bella's progress, especially where both Jacob and Charlie are concerned. I can see a future where Bella and Jacob have it out in the middle of the ER. He's certainly a Class A Prick as you stated. And Charlie...WTF?! How the hell did he get out?! Somebody paid his bail. Not sure who....MAYBE Sam....or is he friends with the Class A Prick's father...and the only reason besides his legal troubles that he agreed to work at County was to keep tabs on Bella and report back to Charlie and make her life a living hell? I highly suspect the Blacks have something to do with Charlie's release.....Thanks for sharing!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Fishy indeed. The Dog is sooooo lucky he didnt get his lights punched out. Arse. Hope B gets revenge somehow.
Jazz is such an arse. New Classic Line: Give my ticket to a bum on the street."
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome chapter. Love seeing Bella's growth. She never would have stood up to Jasper a few months ago. I know things can't end with James with just his eviction. I'm nervous to see what happens there. And then we have the mysterious surgeon. Hmmm...Jacob, possibly? I think very possibly!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella a bien fait de parler à Jasper et je crois qu'il va réfléchir...
Je pense qu'Edward sait le nom du nouveau chirurgien et c'est J***b B***k. Non ?
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella est énervante et je dis bravo à Edward pour sa patience et son amour.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Quel sale type ce Charlie !
En plus il lui a arraché les cheveux, j'espère qu'il va être puni pour ça.
Bon chapitre, merci.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Merci pour ce bon chapitre !
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ouf et bien il y a eu une grosse dispute ! Bella était vraiment fâchée.
Bon chapitre.
Merci
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit! Bella finally stood up for herself and now the new surgeon coming is none other than Jacob Black. This is about to get messy again.
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jacob is the new dr isn't he?
Date: 15 Sep 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Go Bella, give that arrogant little ass, his ass on a platter. Looking forward to the next chapter and hope it is soon.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Très bon chapitre !
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Bon chapitre.
Merci.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie méite bien une bonne raclée.
J'espère que Bella va faire confiance à Edward.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
J'ai aimé ce chapitre, Merci.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
THAT WAS SO UNFAIR OF HIM TO COMPAIRE HER TO HIS X..... AND RUDE ...BEING ON THE PLUMP SIDE MY SELF i WOULD BE CRUSHED ..BUT OUR GIRL FINALLY GOT SOME BACK BONE AND LET j HAVE IT
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
AH LES MAUVAISES ! Heureusement Angela et Edward sont là pour Bella.
Même son père est horrible...
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella a de la chance qu'Edward soit là quand elle tombe.
Bon chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
J'aime bien ce chapitre et je comprends très bien ce que peux ressentir Bella...
Merci.