[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, the first meeting of Bella and Rosalie couldn't have gone more wrong and ended with a fight between Bella and Edward. But at least they made up AND thy love each other :)
It was so sweet, that Edward took care of Bella, when she was sick. Hopefully she can someday repay the favor and be Edward (sexy/naughty) nurse. ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Damn woman! There is a lot in this chapter. First sick call, first fight/misunderstanding and first make up. And OMFG, Mike is a fucking dick! I'm glad that E pounded is career. I can't wait until Rose and Bella meet. Good update, my friend. No not good, fucking great!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Totally worth the wait, thank you for such a beautiful chapter! Yay, the ILY's have been said, well, I bet he wasn't supposed to hear her say it, lol. ;)
Can't wait for the ball! :)
Kudos to Angela for being such a great friend and roommate!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
WOW, alot happened in this chapter. Great job. Im glad to see that this Bella and Edward are more like a RL type couple than most fake couples. Loved it, keep up the awesome work.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
think this is my new favourite story... LOVE IT!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hi,
This is the second time I've read this chpter. It still rocks. It seems like forever since you updated. I sure hope you will will do so soon! I truely love this Bella. She is such a real person as is your character Edward. Set your fans here from you soon, please.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
swoon over dr. Edward... he really know how to make a person feel good... and Bella needs to feel better... she's had to much negative feedback and def needs some poitivity.
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
He's a very caring guy :)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
can so relate to this Bella... I'm a nurse... bit over weight (size 14), but don't get the teasing she gets... the people I work with are much nicer and more professional... but like miss B, I'm still waiting for my prince...
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love your story...everytime I see a new chapter, I do a fistpump in the air and shout "yes!" :D
Edward is just such a sweet boyfriend and brother...I hope that both women in his life will get better soon.
And I like the fact that Bella still has self-esteem issues...I mean, it´s horrible but at the same time you just don´t get over it so easy...so your realistic take on it, is one of my favorite things about the story :)
Oh, and I hope Charlie will go to hell...although I love Billy Burke/Charlie in the movies :/
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
I saw this rec'd on a facebook page and I had to check it out. I am so glad I did as I am loving it. What is your update schedule? I can't imagine who the characters are and what the misunderstanding could be...Can't wait until next time.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my god, I loved this chapter!!! Their date was two cute for words! I thought the 'ten positive things' idea was clever... it is just sad Bella only came up with eight. I love how sweet Edward is, it makes me so jealous of Bella! Hehehe I hope Emmett can help Rose through her problems. I can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
That was a sweet first date, no doubt.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awww.....to cute :-)
Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was such a perfect date!! Loved it. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my......sounds like young Dr. Cullen is falling for nurse Bella ;-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Such a sweet chapter, like the other ones too. That Bella gets help and now has lots of friends on her side is sooooo great and now she admitted to herself and her journal, that she is in love with Edward is just a bonus.
I am curious, when Bella meets Rosalie and their friendship is blossoming.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this first chapter.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
Update!!!!!!!! Love the story
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved this chapter. She moving along very nicely.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
Such a sweet chapter. Wonderful date andpresent. Ugh someone needs to castrated Jake. Ugh again
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter......
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Once again, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! I loved the date and how Edward is with her. He is too sweet. I wish I had one of him. ;) Oh I think I know who the character is. Tanya? Maybe? Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoying this story, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
I actually love this story! Being a thicker girl I love that Bella is considered beautiful in this! Thicker girls rule and I can't wait to read more!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
so what if she is fat?she should have given Lauren a good kick in the ass.or fallen upon her 'accidently'.:P
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Sweet chapter (mostly) Poor Rose. Hope Em, J and E will get her ready and healthy for the trial. Go Alice, get em. Awwww for kisses. So you get this
Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!!! My heart hurts for her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
*sigh* their New Year's and first kisses were awesome. James totally creeped me out. I just hope he isn't too much of an ass to Bella in passing.
I wanted to cry for Rose. At least Emmett made her perk up a bit. She needs things to turn around and start to go good for her.
Edward and Bella were so cute at the end. I can't wait for Jessica and Lauren to find out about B&E. I know they will probably cause a scene but I want to rub it in their faces. Of course if they are cruel to Bella over it then I can totally see them losing their jobs :)
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it and I am glad to see Bella is a real woman with curves and not some damn stick.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter, finally some well deserved happiness for Bella. Really love this story. I am soooo looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Enjoyed this chapter very much. Thanks for posting. I like the flow of the story, you've got it moving right along at a great pace.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!! Such a great chapter. I am sooo in love with these characters. God, I wish chapter 7 was ready already!! ;)
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Our local hospital always has a Valentines Day Ball to raise money, so your formal ball is not off base.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
So much happening in this chapter! Moving in, sleepovers, KISSES!!! Oh and Royce :(
Cant wait until next chapter!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
Damn, I would love a Tattward of my own! This is a lovely sweet fic, hope James isn't too much of a moron in this. Hopefully Emmett kicks Royce's ass!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Another great chapter. Loved it. Can't wiat for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I adore him. I love that he stood up to Emmett.
I think it's funny how so many people think chubby women are lazy or ugly. Helloooo... Do you think Marlyn Monroe was hot? Cause she was a size 16!!!!!! All women are beautiful in their own way, especially to the man/woman who loves them.
Have you ever heard the song Fat Bottomed Girls from Queen?
Are you gonna take me home tonight?
Ah down beside that red firelight
Are you gonna let it all hang out?
Fat bottomed girls
You make the rockin' world go round
Hey I was just a skinny lad
Never knew no good from bad
But I knew life before I left my nursery - huh
Left alone with big fat Fanny
She was such a naughty nanny
Heap big woman you made a bad boy out of me
Hey hey!
Wooh
I've been singing with my band
Across the water across the land
I seen every blue eyed floozy on the way, hey
But their beauty and their style
Went kind of smooth after a while
Take me to them dirty ladies everytime
C'mon
Oh won't you take me home tonight?
Oh down beside your red firelight
Find more similar lyrics onhttp://mp3lyrics.com/vvOh and you give it all you got
Fat bottomed girls you make the rockin' world go round
Fat bottomed girls you make the rockin' world go round
Hey listen here
Now I got mortgages on homes
I got stiffness in the bones
Ain't no beauty Queens in this locality (I tell you)
Oh but I still get my pleasure
Still got my greatest treasure
Heap big woman you done made a big man o' me
Now get this
Oh (I know) you gonna take me home tonight (please)
Oh down beside that red firelight
Are you gonna let it all hang out?
Fat bottomed girls you make the rockin' world go round yeah
Fat bottomed girls you make the rockin' world go round
Get on your bikes and ride
Ooh yeah oh yeah them fat bottomed girls
Fat bottomed girls
Yeah yeah yeah
Alright, ride 'em, c'mon
Fat bottomed girls - yes yes
Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can´t wait for the next chapter I really like this story edward is really sweet
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
I absolutely love this Edward. What a great chapter. I love all your stories but this is quickly becoming my favorite. Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome chapter hun, i cant wait to read more please update soon :)
Date: 07 Jul 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Swoon!!!! 100 mL of sexy Dr.Cullen is exactly what nurse Swan needs... And I would like to be put on the same dosage.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Why's there no next button on this chapter? :( Can't wait for the next part - this is a great story and so well written! I also love how your story is more real, as in the characters aren't all 'perfect'.
Looking forward to more!
Tessacartwheel
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Please ignore the haters out there! People in general are mean - ie makes your story very realistic and rooted in truth!
Another excellent chapter with another awesome E shining through! I'll admit though I've got to go back and reread the first 4 chappies - after I had read them I started "A Fresh Start" now I'm confusing the to Edwards! ;-) can't wait for your next update!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Geez, Edward just put it all on the line didn't he? Liking the flow of the story, it's moving right along and very smoothly.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome story ! I really love the storyline. Can't wait for next update !!!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG Charlie needs to fall down some stairs and get run over by a truck. What a dick. Awww Edward is so swewet.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved this chapter and excited to see hoe Bella actually goes about " turning a new leaf" for herself. Am looking forward to reading Edwards POV about everything and how he is going to get Bella to see herself in a better light but also by his side.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
You ROCK. I'm signing up with you on fb. I just can't get enough of this fic. I totally love ur TATTWARD. I want one!!. ;)) seriously can't wait for more.
oh btw: BIG FU CHARLIE!!! (both hands giving the middle finger). Though I would have gone to Edward too. (still pouting and stamping my feet, I want one.)
Also have decided to read ur other work, it's just more of you to love. SWEET!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
The first chapter was incredibly sad. I hope Bella's spirits or outlook on her life can be made better. I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm so stoked that Bella is allowing Edward to be in her life. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOVE EDWARD!
Hope Charlie burns in hell
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!!! I love the long chapters but good lord, 11,000 words.. geez lol ne ways thatnks for sharing this story and as far as ur bad reviewer, dont mind the close minded.. I've been in Bella's, and ur place.. Im a chunky monkey and I know what it feels like and its hard to trust.. :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
i get teary eyed whenever i read about your bella. i def. understand where she's coming from and how she's feeling
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie is a jerk. I just love Edward!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! I love the part where Edward was listing all his faults. That was funny and cute. That was so messed up what Charlie did the jerk. I will join you in the pummeling. Oh and I just want to say I love your writing. There was a warning at the beginning of this story stating it was different. They shouldn't read it if they don't like it, and I agree with that if you have nothing nice to say don't say anything at all. No need to stress over those people anyway they are dumb! :D Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my goodness! So much going on this chapter, where do I begin? ;)
From the top:
- I love that she used her journal and first entry was her list. Some do that for New Years, but hey, I like it anyway. She needed to write it when she was in that mindset.
- The green iPod Nano was an awesome gift from Angela. Bella's fave color? ;)
- The lost patient. Not gonna lie, I cried. Your writing brought out Edward's emotions and I was right along with him and Bella in that scene. Beautiful. Well done.
- Bella being honest and direct with him during lunch in the cafeteria. Thank you.
- Charlie - inexcusable. Thank God she had her journals with her and whatever else what mostly meant something to her in her messenger bag. He's going to be pissed when he gets the first hospital bill addressed to him. Don't know how Paul (isn't that the slumlord's name?) allow Charlie to change the locks? Paul knew she was going to move out and everything, right?
- Did she not go to the hospital because she didn't want to be embarrassed? I mean, there's always a room for staff to sleep in right?
- As for Edward saving her, oh my! It was like how I wish the tent scene in Eclipse really happened, LOL. He is so damn charming. Loved it, and the following morning... oh my! His words were just what she needed. My hubby's had to do that in the mirror with me before. Then they have breakfast and she talks about how Jake ruined her. Grr. Get him, Edward! ;) And she added one more thing to her list, tee hee. Loved it. Totally swoonworthy moment between them.
- And then shopping! I love how he kept on encouraging her and bought her a dress to take her out NYE!! Of course his family pitched in with the furniture. ;) It wouldn't surprise me if Esme does her room at Angela's as well. Just because they're nice like that. :)
- *gasp* He spent the night cuddled with her, AGAIN, and this time had no excuse about hypothermia. Hmmm... ;) And she didn't even mention it in her journal? She must've been really okay with it. I mean the first time, she wasn't. She didn't want to get back in bed after she tinkled. But the last line of her entry is so very important. She needs to say as her mantra every time they're together.
Great chapter, hun! Hope you don't mind the long review, but with such a long chapter, I couldn't help it. ;)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
First off, dont listen to that nasty reviewer! They are probably trying to make themselves feel better. I want a man who can see past the physical and see the real me. But until that happens I will live my dream with Bella and Edward. I get all warm and fuzzy when I see an update alert for your fic. LOL! Thanks for writing.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
I think this is a great story! Ignore the naysayer's and keep on writing! Of course it's not going to be realistic that's why it's called FAN FICTION. You can write your story however you want to. While constructive criticism is great there is no need to put down a writer and their story just because you don't like it. As you said above that's why there's a little red x in the corner click it if you don't like what you're reading! Anyway I hope Bella opens up some more so she and Edward can get to know each other better. I also hope Karma comes and bites Charlie in the ass :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, and as for this story I think its sending out a great message. Im a bigger girl and I FLOVE this story. People just need to move on if they dont like it. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved this chapter, I love this story. I can really relate to "this Bella". I am excited about the direction this is headed and cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the wonderful escape...
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
*Swoon* Every plus-sized girl needs a Dr. Feelgood. It's tough not being a stick-thin woman and how you have Edward handle Bella and her low self-esteem just brings tears to my eyes.
I can't wait for Rose to meet Bella and see how that goes. They could definitely benefit from each other.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hand is up and putting the boxing gloves on......come ere Charlie......
Awesome that Edward has made his feelings known......hopefully with Alice and Angela she will get more comfortable within herself..
More more more more.......come on I know you want to update already!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story sooooo much! You are truly an amazing writer! :)
Date: 06 Jul 2012 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really good and long chapter... Love it!!!! =D
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love love love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful how relaxed he is with her. Cute she woke up and he came to the guest room and got in bed with her. I love his carefree attitude he has with her. She needs normal.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it!! I cannot wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
Eat your heart out Lauren and Jessica, he wants Bella.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm feeling a huge affinity for this story. It's so well written! Can't wait for the next chapter xx
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ahhh Charlie must suffer more!!! Tattward sexy!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
omg. i feel so bad for Bella. I can relate to her on her weight but I've never had people openly degrate me before.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well heres your fix, LOL! Poor Bella, what kind of father does that to their child. Having no christmas since she was 16. He really is just the sperm donor. Edward is sooo nice. I hope he keeps it up. Sometimes men can be stupid, even Edward. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hope that isn't some foreshadowing there at the end and is just Edward being concern about his new friend!
Love this story! Can't wait for you to update!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read about Bella taking control of her life! Again - wonderful Edward! I'm there with you on shoving the crutch up Charlie's ass! Can't wait to nurse Stanley & Mallory taken down a peg or two!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
What a great Edward! Love a "perfect" E & an "imperfect" B. Totally funny him calling Tyler out on what he says & to whom!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Excited to read more!
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
hi!!! I really love your stories I think they have all been great and very well written please keep on writing!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
loving the story, can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Such a wonderful chapter, hun! Loved it!
From the little boy to Victoria...Edward was right there to stop the harrassment, and he did so rather eloquently each time. And at the end of the "date", I love how he reiterates that he's her friend. The journals and pens were a very nice touch!
Loved the pics on your blog, too. So sad that Bella hasn't celebrated Christmas in so long, but hopefully, for a short time while she was in Edward's company at Butch McGuire's, she was able to. Like she said, it was the first Christmas in a long time. I hope we get a bit of the "date" in her POV. :D
Didn't like the uneasy feeling Edward had as he drove away. :( He better pay more attention to his gut in the future!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really love this story. As a 190ish girl myself though , I have never in my adult life heard comments like the ones Bella gets from perfect strangers. Maybe they say something after but i dont hear it ( and Im from new jersey so that is saying something) being hit over the head twice a day with rude comments seems a bit much. The memories of middle school assholes did all the damage to my self esteem. No adult contributions were required.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Aww, I like seeing their friendship blossoming and I like Edward defending her. No matter what people say, just keep posting this story. There are more readers that like what you're doing than don't! I can't wait for moving day and seeing how that goes! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have me in a tie...I'm in the middle of reading a nerd love story, because I saw your sequel for that story..now you sway me with this little gem...what to do, what to do???
Keep writing! I'm feeling for your Bella and Edward sure seems sweet as hell.
Cheers Tina
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another good one! Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
I bet Charlie locked her out. If he did I hope she calls Edward.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter. I really enjoy how you are building their friendship. They both seem to really need each other in that way right now. Can't wait to watch this progress!! BTW - Why no love for my White Sox?? Good guys wear black after all! *cough*firstplace*cough* :-)