Date: 04 Mar 2022 7:52 AM Title: Original Publishing
I loved the original story so much and am really sad that I have no way to reread it I sought out and read both this rewrite/book and its sequel and they don't compare at all. Not meant to be mean but I'm having trouble in my day to day life and I use books to escape and I am sad to see that one of my favorite worlds got repalced by something that holds no joy for me.
Date: 13 Oct 2019 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Good luck on your book! I wish you could've finished this story and I could download it for all the rereading. I may totally buy your book either way! It looks really good if it's Pack Imperative rewritten! Shame you didn't upload this story on A03! I could still download Pack Imperative for reading sake after you take it down.
Date: 09 May 2018 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Just wanted to let you know your story is amazing! I first started reading it when you first published it on Fanfiction.net and recently started reading it again. Pleeaasseee update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 05 Feb 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Oh, please update this soon. I know it has been a while but this is too good of a story to leave like this. If you do come back to it, can you please write more Embry and/or Wuil please? They seem to be the ones left out most.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
I really liked the story, it's definetly one of the more unique twilight fanfics out there. The only thing I noticed that you have not written about Quil almost at all interacting with Bella. All the others are more or less equilly presented. Anyway, the story is very good, and I hope you will update it soon.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Hey!!!! Who wants to blow up fanfiction.net for their rules and tiptoeing.... Me!!!
Oh well... i guess I'll have to read this horrid story from the beginning (pssst I didnt mean that. Sarcasm)... now if I'd just remember this new site lol
Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
Fabulous story! It has been my guilty pleasure reading all week. Can't wait to see where the story goes.
You have a great ability to tell stories, great character development and thought has gone to each aspect of this storie. Can't imagine how long each chapter takes you to think through and write.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Departure
omg!! i cant believe your here! when ffn reworked the site i could no longer review on my not so smart phone and my computer crashed so now i can review! this is so great! im gonna reread it here and reveiw yay! thanks for writing.