Date: 28 Jan 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Maybe Bella is going to some crappy state school where even an average amount of effort will get you an A because your work is miles ahead of the other slackers that are enrolled. However, if she is going to a real school, top 20 in the US, her school work should come before going out to dinner, especially and many of the other chores mentioned. There is plenty of time for that AFTER her paper is completed. Unless Edward works at the school Bella attends, it would be impossible for him to know whether Bella is being given enough time to do her paper. Even for the same class, if the sections are taught by different professors, the work may be vastly different and the grades given to the same paper can also vary widely. The fact that she is not procrastinating is something that should be encouraged, not chastized. That is the difference between going to Penn State and the University of PA. If Bella is going to a school that is the caliber of Penn State, I can understand why she shouldn't stress, but it is also doubtful is 4 summer school classes would have burned her out. Right now, Edward is coming off like a huge jerk who just wants what he wants and makes no allowances for the responsibilities of other people. Very OOC.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
love is in so many combinations
there is nothing wrong with their relationship as long as they communicate and it is all consensual
too bad people judge people by who they love. people are people doesn't matter what sex or color. it should be about what you are on the inside. they love each other and that is all that matters.
loved the story
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay the story was weird....... But in a good kind of I know now what I don't like and I just feel like the story could have been just a little longer because there are some things left unsaid...like the possibility of kids and why all of a sudden Charlie wanted Bella because that excuse was just plain vague and how can Bella fall in love with Esme when there obviously fighting...seriously u just don't know what to make of this story. :( sorry I don't mean to sound mean.