[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
Ok that sucks big time that they are being separated.
I hope it's just temporary!!!
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
Yeah!!! She took the phone and they crashed her celery eaten'
Buffet!! Lol
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
Oh I hope she's not too stubborn to let them help her!!
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
I really hope Edward can keep the jealousy away!!
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
OMG!!! Loved it immensely!!!! I am so jealous of Bella!! Lol
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
Aww it's gonna work!!!! So happy!!!! Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
Loved it!! I hope she agrees!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
Please don't kick Edward out of the mix.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
This chapter was awesome, I love agent Izzy Swan! Maybe she will be able to accept their money as payment for negotiating Jasper's contract and not throw a fit for helping her out.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
Aww, so sweet they drove out to Forks to get their girl :)
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
She won't like any of thier help
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
I forgot to rate my last review!!! 10 by the way!!
Jasper better step it up!!! Lol
Loved it!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Oh this looks like it will be a fun story!!! I've read a few
E/B/J fics and they were really good! I hope u keep this up.
There are quite a few of us who like these stories! Loved it!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
Oh I predict Bella is going to be mad when she finds out Edward went snooping in her finances - interesting to see Jasper's feelings on this since he is the true 'gay' one in the relationship (for now)...
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
I foresee some jealousy issues on the horizon for all three of our lovers, can't wait to see how they handle it
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
Wow, that's hot! I think they sexual tension was too much for them to handle, can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
Warm...fuck hot!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
Ooh, they all want their cake and eat it too as the saying goes. Sounds good in theory, but let's see how they handle the reality of this relationship.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
Mmmm
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
So at this point I can't tell if they want her to be their beard so they can date in public, or of they are interested in more with her - but I really like the story so far
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
Bella did a bit of talking there too.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
Well, at least he is aware of his shortcomings in the relationship
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Wow, so much fighting and insecurity this early in a relationship can't be a good sign. I am excited to get Bella in the picture and see what happens next.
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
Hmm I would have felt rejected
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
Can I be Bella in the middle ;-)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
wow thank god for bella and looking after her boys.
smart girl that one.
the boys you are lucky. they all are. they fit well and feed off of each other. it will take them far. thank god rose was able to help with the information.
i see it as a win win. the cover is good. i am so loving the story
rember if you don't continue for others i would still love the updates.
i am hooked. so loving it
thank you
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
I usually like what you write so why not!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
ahhhh my heart is melting. could these guys be any better. i so love them. they came and got her and they had food and boxes and jasper got her a phone. wow panties wet anyone
love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
wow realization
i love it
i was sad she left but it makes sense she doesn't have alot she would need what she came with
i so love that the guys are going to get her and help he rclose the house. that just proves she is more than sex. they want her in their lives. this will work
love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
loving it
i sure hope they can pull through and make it work
seems bella pulls them together and their relationship is better
they bring out the best in each other
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
oh my god so loved it
these guys are too funny. who complains about being taken care of. bella you have the best of both worlds. you get to watch and they love going down on you and making sure your needs are meet. hot damn you go girl
the boys seems to take it in stride. hope this works for all
i just hope the jealously stays at a low. it is hard to share someone you love. but if the love is all around maybe not so hard
love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
wow loving it
i am glad that bella is open for anything and that jasper is being honest about his feelings and what is going to happen
oh and em and rose make it all that more interesting. i can't wait for the game
if anything happens and you pull the story you cna always just deliever the chapters to me. i have loved everything you have written. this story is no different. i hope others pick up on it and read. i would hate to lose my story
thank you for witing
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
wow a litle confused but i like bella being in love with someone would jump at the chance
they are being completely honest with her and edward still cares. it is a chance but what the heck live
love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
glad jasper is getting the picture and is willing to try and keep his man
just like any relationship he has to work for it
takes two and i am glad he is seeing that
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
i have read some good stories with the three of them
i always love your stories and i am looking for more with this
this is going to be a wild ride
thanx
Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
Bella has been through so much and then to find this all out. This has to be confusing, but then she seems to know what she was and is will to do anything in order to get it. I can't wait to see where they go from here. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
Well I am glad that Jasper is ready to make a few changes. He was taking Edward for granted. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Well, I think it sounds interesting. Great job...thanks!