Date: 28 Dec 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
Goodness. This is a really evil Edward! I loved it when Bella put Esme in her place! I'm worried for Nahuel what with the newborns attacking him, but Peter and Jasper should have no trouble taking care of them. Hopefully both Bella and Nahuel will be stronger now they are in close proximity.
I'm sorry that you feel you have lost your juju. Please don't give up! It is very rare for me to enjoy a story that isn't B/E HEA but I am loving this one!
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well all I can say is what I said on Fan Fiction, write because you want to. Most of us don't know anything about B Whitlock. One person can not destroy what you enjoy, if you enjoy it. Just stop and think so many of us enjoy your stories. I don't like everyone of them but you are a good writer. You write about things others don't and everyone is not going to like them. Just do it because you want to.
Your choice but if all the good writers leave what is left? junk
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow!!! What an amazingly captivating & intriging story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Don't get discuraged please because some of us have truely enjoyed reading ur stories very much so!!! Trust me I really do appreciate all ur hard work & dedication in writting for us!!!! I know how much effort & time it take to write sooooo Thanks soooooo very much!!!! I do review very often, but I am currently reading over 280 stories currently & therefore am reviewing many stories all at once & try to spread my reviews amongst every one. I rate this story as a #10 out of #10. Please keep posting ur stories here because I truely have enjoyed reading them!!!