Date: 18 Jun 2013 2:30 AM Title: Epilogue Two
I loved all three of these stories! I read them it seems non stop until I was done!!! Amazing writing! I really want to read more about Aro! I couldnt get wnough of him in these stories! Thanks so much for sharing these characters with us! Jess
Date: 15 Jun 2013 2:28 AM Title: Epilogue Two
Really enjoy these stories. I was wondering why Chapter 18 is not showing up? I asee reviews but no chapter. Went to FF to read the chapter.
Thought I would give a heads up. = )
Wonderful story, your E/B--Bebella and Mr. Fuckhot are 2 great characters. Will miss them terribly. I hope you add some Out Takes to either of the 3 stories.
((((HUGS))))
Date: 11 Jun 2013 2:23 PM Title: Epilogue Two
What a good ending, but I am going to miss this crazy family. Thank you for the wonderful journey.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:12 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Fantastic story- thanks for sharing!
Date: 02 Jun 2013 2:58 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Such an awesome series!!! I'm so sad to see it end! Thanks for the fantastic adventure!
Date: 31 May 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
I miss their glory days.
Date: 30 May 2013 10:13 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Love this story. Soon I'm going to reread the whole thing. Good job!
Date: 30 May 2013 10:02 PM Title: Epilogue Two
What a ride ! I love it from the first chapter of Quiet Storm to the last of Riders on the Storm. You are an amazing story teller, so talented. Mobward is my favorite "Ward" and yours is delicious. Thank you again and again for sharing.
Date: 30 May 2013 12:54 AM Title: Halfway
Gulp....I'm writing this before I begin this chapter and the few that follow. I actually don't want to start reading because then it will all be complete and I love this little family. Well here I go.....
Date: 29 May 2013 10:10 PM Title: Epilogue Two
I really hate to see this end!!! I cried the entire last chapter! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us! On to your next story!
Date: 29 May 2013 1:38 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Awesome as always!!! I'm sad it's the end, but what a wild ride it has been!!! Thank you for ALWAYS providing excellence!! You have such a gift at writing and hope you get a book deal for the WHOLE trilogy!! It's THAT good!!
Good luck in all you do!
ps: SO glad you are keeping the Facebook group!! It brightens my day when I see one of your posts-regardless of what it is about!!! :)
Date: 29 May 2013 12:53 PM Title: Epilogue Two
First off...Congratulations. I have to say that I loved all of it. I'm sorry to see it go and always looked forward to your updates. It's been an amazing and sometimes bumpy ride but wouldn't change a word. I think a lot of people are going to miss the skip. Second...this is the series that got me hooked on your writing and now I'm reading all of it. Again love it... You're on my list of favorite authors. Look forward to your next project and your updates on Higher and other unfinished stories. You make my week a little better.
Date: 28 May 2013 11:19 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Cried for three chapter. I knew I would, which made me drive 34 miles to get to a computer to review. My phone is a bitch and wont let me write a review.
I am seriously gonna miss this, miss the entire freakin series. I have been here through it all, and through it, I fell in love. Thank you.
Date: 28 May 2013 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Coming full circle with Kylie's wedding... perfect! and the timing is perfect, too! This story has been a life saver for me on several occasions of RL. You're a wonderful writer! Thank you so much for sharing this story!!
Date: 28 May 2013 10:00 AM Title: Epilogue Two
aaah i cant believe this is actualy over. this is so sad i want future outtakes please!!!!!
Date: 28 May 2013 8:22 AM Title: Epilogue Two
OMG- Can't believe this story has come to an end. You created a masterpiece that had me waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing your story with us.
Date: 28 May 2013 7:07 AM Title: Epilogue Two
I've followed this story since the Quiet Storm. Have loved every chapter. I'm going to miss all the characters, I feel like I know them personally. You're a brilliant writer.
Date: 28 May 2013 5:17 AM Title: Epilogue Two
Perfect... Just absolutely perfect. Like what a real big crazy family. And ending it Kylie's wedding coming full circle was brillient.
Date: 28 May 2013 4:44 AM Title: Epilogue Two
I'm sad to see this come to a close but am waiting paitently for your next project! Thank you so much Lexi!
Date: 28 May 2013 4:38 AM Title: Epilogue Two
GREAT, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, EXCITING, DRAMATIC... JUST FUCKING WONDERFUL!!
I loved all the storms. So good. I want to go back and re-read Quiet Storm, which I know you have pulled. To publish. Good for you!! Great story.
Love it and looking forward to more stories from you I hope!!
Date: 28 May 2013 4:30 AM Title: Epilogue Two
i am sad:(my favourite bebela and mobward goes to live witout me:(
Date: 28 May 2013 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue Two
I was good til Edward choked up at "more than there are stars in the sky." A great epi to end with. Loved it.
Date: 28 May 2013 2:03 AM Title: Epilogue Two
"More than there are stars in the sky." Loved that saying coming from Big Ed.
And I will cherish this whole series, what a masterpiece;-)
Thanks so much for writing!
Date: 28 May 2013 1:43 AM Title: Epilogue Two
great ending although sad it is over. going to miss big e and his bebella :)
Date: 28 May 2013 1:13 AM Title: Epilogue Two
no words... is so amazing!!!! love it!
Date: 27 May 2013 10:55 PM Title: Epilogue Two
great ending, but I'm so sad about this ending :(
Date: 27 May 2013 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Okay, So now im just gonna go curl up and cry my little eyes out!! Great ending to a fricken AMAZING series!! Gonna miss these lot so much!! Can't wait to see this fuckawsome series published.
Date: 27 May 2013 9:26 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Magnificent! Thank you so much for taking such good care of these characters. I have enjoyed every word
Date: 27 May 2013 8:59 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Family !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hell wish I had a happy one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 8:40 PM Title: Epilogue Two
:) What a brilliant chapter to end with! Loved this story! Loved the series!
Date: 27 May 2013 8:32 PM Title: Epilogue Two
awesome chapter, hate 2 see it end. I guess I can re read it tho. :) Great second epi.
Date: 27 May 2013 8:22 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Thank you Lexi for writing the BEST fanfiction I have ever read. I'm sorry you didn't get to experience it as the reader, but I'm sure your experience writing it over the years was just as fuckawesome!
Date: 27 May 2013 8:16 PM Title: Epilogue Two
I had to shed a tear at the end. So sad to see it end but you did an amazing job!!
Date: 27 May 2013 7:54 PM Title: Epilogue Two
no A/Ns on this one, huh? don't blame you....there'd be tear stains all over them....it's over, it's finished, and stands gloriously magnificent along side of it's 2 older siblings, QS and WTS. Thanks for taking us on this 3 year journey...see you around soon with your next chapter, next story.
Date: 27 May 2013 7:47 PM Title: Epilogue Two
All I can say is Thank You! Thank you very much! (Curious if they have stats on how many people get a Flag PDF copy of these 3 stories today)
Date: 27 May 2013 7:28 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Such an amazing story! I have tears in my eyes knowing that its over. I can't wait to re-read the whole series again!! Love your work!!
Date: 27 May 2013 7:19 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Damn.... That was fukawesome ending!!!! Funny as hell like this family is and foul mouthed which I LOVE!!!! Still in denial but loved their send off you created.
Definitely hope you do more (outtakes/future takes) but this had a little of that with the skip with the kiddos and all that. *sigh* oh how I'll miss them!!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 6:57 PM Title: Wayward Son
I'm sad that it's ending. Thanks for the journey and I hope u get a 3 book deal.
Date: 27 May 2013 6:51 PM Title: Epilogue Two
Quite the ride. Thanks for sharing. It was amazing.
Date: 27 May 2013 5:50 PM Title: Epilogue One
Sorry to see this end, but all good things do. I have enjoyed the ride and look forward to other stories you write.
Date: 27 May 2013 4:30 PM Title: Epilogue One
what can I say....it's still so surreal that this is all coming to an end! have you thought about a book deal yet? i hope you have....and that whoever you go with lets you have free rein over the content....i like here that you have the 3 kids' POVs. i'm kind of shocked that Jasper had to go, as he was the one who first introduced Edward and Bella....but not surprised as that seems to be par for the course in this life. will epi #2 be about the 2 who started it all? Our beloved Skip and Bebella? my best wishes to you in life, my dear, and thank you so much for giving us this glorious story!
Date: 27 May 2013 4:23 PM Title: Epilogue One
I am so sad it's almost over! Such a good story!!
Date: 27 May 2013 2:48 PM Title: Epilogue One
Crying.....crying that is all I do when I have read these last few chapters..I kind of feel bad for Jasper, but if he was going to try to hurt Edward or Sonny, it is what it is....he always felt out of place, but it was him who changed his name from Cullen.....THANKS FOR THE ONE OF THE BEST FICS I HAVE EVER READ. Sher
Date: 27 May 2013 1:19 PM Title: Epilogue One
Can't stop crying... Loved the hospital mad dash and the usual strong family dynamics. So good!
Date: 27 May 2013 12:37 PM Title: Wayward Son
Why do you always make me fucking cry. I am so very nervous about the next chapter and I will probably fucking all though it. I WILL MISS IT SO MUCH BUT I UNDERSTAND..TIME TO PUT ONE FLICK TO BED AND START SOME MORE. THANKS Sher
Date: 27 May 2013 10:02 AM Title: Epilogue One
Aw man... Only one left, I don't think in ready haha. This one was great since we got to see how they're all makin it work and everything is working out. Plus who doesn't love a baby and seeing the cullen men faun all over them. Swoon!!!
I'm in denial about one left but know you won't let us down ;) were gonna love it and it'll make us wish more and more.
Date: 27 May 2013 9:55 AM Title: Epilogue One
Great wrap. A Skip & BeBella wrap up coming too, I hope:-)?
Date: 27 May 2013 9:34 AM Title: Epilogue One
It has been amazing to go thru this epic journey with these characters! When I started reading fanfic Quiet Storm was one of my firsts and I fell in love with the Skip and Bebella. It's hard to embrace that the story is finally coming to a close. I thought it was amazing how you've made this story multi-generational and still kept your core couple solid in their roots and evolved the story. Kinda anxious for the last epi, I'm very curious to see how everything wraps up. Again it's been amazing. You are a wonderful writer and I will definitely continue to read your stories. Can't wait to see what comes next :)
Date: 27 May 2013 9:04 AM Title: Wayward Son
The Skip crying... sniff siff, just beautiful. That was 'great' is an understatement. You brought us and them closure and riding the storm to the end. I also love that you always finish your stories but did want you to know that I could of gone on reading this indefinitely,js.
Thanks so much for all the awesome writing you do.
Date: 27 May 2013 7:36 AM Title: Epilogue One
This is a beautiful epi part one, loved it.
Date: 27 May 2013 7:05 AM Title: Epilogue One
So sad to see it end! I think I'm obsessed with these characters :/
Date: 27 May 2013 6:39 AM Title: Wayward Son
I love weepy Edward, lol! & it's like a bad episode of Full House, LOl!
Date: 27 May 2013 5:54 AM Title: Epilogue One
*cries* I'm so not ready to say goodbye... But I live the way it's being said.
Date: 27 May 2013 5:33 AM Title: Epilogue One
Beautiful. I love your amazing words. You are a gift. Do much love for you.
Date: 27 May 2013 4:56 AM Title: Wayward Son
Oh!!!! The tissues I went through with this chapter!!!! Amazing!!!! Again, sad to see it end, but a lovely ending just the same.
Date: 27 May 2013 1:47 AM Title: Wayward Son
Although I understand that it can't go on forever I would really, really, really like it to. I am not ready to let these characters go. I love them all so much and what you have done with them. I am always so excited when I see an update. Thank you so much for bringing them to life, you are an amazing writer.
Jen
Date: 27 May 2013 1:22 AM Title: Wayward Son
Just reading the AN got me feeling all weepy... Then I go reading the chapter and I can't believe it's nearing its end. Got all glassy eyed with some tears slipping out. Love these guys and would love seeing future-takes or whatever (just to feed our fix). I don't mind being a needy bitch when it comes to these guys... Give us as much as possible... Or feed our fix with a new story ;) lol
Def can't believe it's damn near over... Gonna miss em all.
You can feel loose ends being tied... And I'm glad skip and dame got to work some things. Poor B... She's gotta handle all these grown ass men... More power to her =P
Date: 27 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Wayward Son
oh is really happening... :(
Thank you for sharing with us this amazing job, this has been an amazing journey, I never really cared for new characters when it was a fanfiction story, yours is the first and only that have turned this, Sonny, Dame, Ky, Maggie and all the new characters, right now is like they have always belonged to this madness Twilight characters have created. COngratulations, you are an amazing author!
Date: 27 May 2013 12:17 AM Title: Wayward Son
good. sad to see this coming to a close
Date: 26 May 2013 11:41 PM Title: Wayward Son
I'm crying now.....bawling like a fucking baby! The last regular chapter! It's a good one, too. One where everyone says what they mean, clears the air, makes things right; one with a lot of love in it! Thanks for the ride, hon. This series may just be my favorite of all time....don't tell Cara cuz I love her stuff too....j/k. Please finish your other stuff one day....the stuff that's been on the back burner for, like, for fucking ever! Won't you, someday?
Date: 26 May 2013 11:02 PM Title: Wayward Son
Waah! That was beautiful. I was afraid for a minute there.
Date: 26 May 2013 12:54 PM Title: Halfway
An other amazing chapter, as always, you are so talented.
After all they have been through, Bella and Edward still love each other with the same strength, it's exceptionnal.
Thank you !
Date: 26 May 2013 3:13 AM Title: Halfway
Great story!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 26 May 2013 2:18 AM Title: Halfway
it makes my heart hurt at the differences between damion and edward. I wonder what will happen i'm a little scared.
Date: 25 May 2013 1:18 AM Title: Halfway
Really hate to see this end! Love this series! You are a great writer! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Date: 24 May 2013 4:25 AM Title: Halfway
:( sad to see it end..but have loved the ride. Can't wait to see what other stories you have after this
Date: 24 May 2013 2:36 AM Title: Halfway
I am happy that you resolved the sonny damion issues but there are still damion parental issues that need to be resolved and I really dislike spoiled Kylies reactions to Jordan. Great chapter. I have loved these characters from the very beginning.
Date: 23 May 2013 10:45 PM Title: Halfway
PLEASE don't say "End"!!! An ass long epilogue aka next installment would be VERY MUCH appreciated! :) and I know I'm not alone in thinking this! There is SO MUCh more you could write about!! Sonny & Maggie's baby...Dame...Kylie...College. And so much more!!!
The characters you have created in Sonny, Dame, Maggie, Gio, Jordan, etc. are as addicting as Edward and Bebella!!! I don't even consider this series as fanfiction as its taken on its own life!!!
I SO recommend u submitting the Storm Series for publishing!!! This is Fifty Shades Trilogy times 1000!!! I would buy it and I've already read it!!!
Love it. Love it. Love it. !
Date: 23 May 2013 8:37 PM Title: Halfway
This is by far the best fic I have ever read ... And read again. You never disappoint, I feel like i know these characters personally and I will miss them when this fic is truly over. Maybe you will treat us with some future fics of Grandpa Skip and Grandma Bebella - please :).
Date: 23 May 2013 8:46 AM Title: Halfway
Ahhhh man... I can't believe the end is near. I've loved this journey but you can feel loose ends being tied up. This chap made me kinda sad with it all plus the heart ache of dame. I am looking forward to the epi and any outside. Whatever fix I can get of these guys!!!
Date: 23 May 2013 5:40 AM Title: Halfway
another great chapter, cant wai to read more. I so thought you forgot about us. lol, glad this story is back in action. I'll miss irt when it will be over.... :(
Date: 23 May 2013 3:45 AM Title: Halfway
Awwww! A little Skip and Bebella is always nice. Looking forward to the Damion and Edward talk. I think I'm gonna need tissues for that one. Great update!
Date: 23 May 2013 3:08 AM Title: Halfway
Lexi I love this trilogy! Do you think you might publish these? I'm going to be so sad when you are finished but then I think I will go back and start at the beginning. I read The Story of Us and it's sequels 2x.
Date: 23 May 2013 2:32 AM Title: Halfway
I am so sad that it is ending. I could read about them forever!!
Date: 23 May 2013 2:28 AM Title: Halfway
For the first time in this story, this felt like an ending chapter, a winding down chapter. In a good way, of course....When you started this, it was going to be a 10 chapter epilogue to Weather The Storm....and look what you've done here! I sound like a broken record, but I'll say it again! This is epic. This trilogy is like The Godfather of fan fiction! I love how they're still just Skip and Bebella, no matter what else is going on. They still fuck each other's brains out and have a love that is so strong! Damion is my favorite child of theirs, always has been, but he's now pissing me off and acting like a brat. Oh sure he has his reasons. I know. I hope he knows that whatever happens, his parents, both of them, couldn't love him more! Ok I'll stop the fucking gushing now. I'm sad this is almost over. I may have to read it all over again from the beginning....in a few months...
Date: 23 May 2013 1:41 AM Title: Halfway
awww so sad saying good bye to the skip! I understand is time, great job :)
Date: 23 May 2013 12:04 AM Title: Halfway
I am crying like a fucking baby right now. How do I miss Mr. Fuck Hot and BeBella. I left you a message on facebook. I just loved this chapter. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 10 May 2013 4:03 PM Title: By the Book
Loved, its sad that im just reading this now, for what ever reason im not getting notified anymore when u update. Ugh, how come its been so long since this one has been updated, im just missing ur Edward and Bella. Lol
Date: 08 May 2013 7:24 PM Title: By the Book
I live this chapter, thank you for sharing. Your whole saga is amazing.
Date: 04 May 2013 3:49 PM Title: By the Book
The sit down with Sonnys strategies was done really well. Kylie's attitude was perfect. She really is spoiled and wants everything about her. I hope Jordan understands but holds her ground. I would like to see damion and sonny and their so be close.
Date: 02 May 2013 1:55 PM Title: By the Book
Loved it! I like how I feel like I really know these characters, they're all fully developed characters and consistent with their actions and what they say. Carlisle and his wanting to go home to a quiet house and watch porn instead of hitting up a club, and Grandpa now at a different stage in his life just wanting to be a part of something but still a bit of a hard ass and dishing it out to Carlisle to get his way.
Thanks so much for writing;-)
Date: 02 May 2013 6:52 AM Title: By the Book
"Edward got married; he didn't lose his balls, LOL
Date: 02 May 2013 5:27 AM Title: By the Book
Loved the long chapter. I was waiting to see if Kylie was going to get jealous of Jordan. It was sweet to see Maggie bring the mama of the group. She is a mini Bella. I love it. Great opening and closing lemon. Great update.
Date: 02 May 2013 4:11 AM Title: By the Book
Aww sunny and Maggie are so sweet! I liked having a Kylie pov too! Excellent as always
Date: 02 May 2013 2:54 AM Title: By the Book
Wow that was a LOT for one chapter! I'm not sure how I feel about Jordan...I used to think she was good for Dame, and I kinda still do....but....she seems weird. Maybe it's because she really IS on the outside. I love the way Sonny handled things between Jersey and Philly...what with Mike being too good to sit with "#2", he sealed his own doom. Sonny was brilliant getting Luke to do his dirty work....I love the sex between Dame and Jordan...I love how he loves her thick curvy body! He's a real man! Sonny and Maggie aren't bad either when it comes to getting down and dirty...I laughed at what Carlisle (?) I think said about Skip being like Michael Jordan, what with retiring and getting back in the game, over and over...funny! Great chapter, doll. I hate to see this saga end, but I will buy it when you publish it!!
Date: 01 May 2013 11:58 PM Title: By the Book
Another great chapter as always. Yay my lazy ass is finally leaving a review. It has been awhile. Although this chapter was pretty tame it hit me on a personal level. I am talking about Kylie's POV. I wish sometimes I had an older brother, a protector. Kylie always had two. Now that their lives are moving in different directions I can see where she is coming from. By being the baby of the family she was used to having all the attention. She is in for a dose of reality. It is hard because she was close to Dame but they are not seeing eye to eye. And I know people will hate me for this next statement but I am gonna say it anyway. It is not Jordan's fault. If he is wrapped up in school work and his girlfriend and neglecting other peoples' feelings it is not her fault. I am not very close with my brother even though he is 3 years younger than me. I used to pass blame on his wife sometimes why he doesn't come over my house that often. I have come to realize you cannot make anyone including a sibling make time for you if they don't want to. Kylie needs to focus on herself and her goals for life. It is not the Kylie show and not everything revolves around her. Even though I do alot for my parents and my brother at the end of the day I look out for my husband and kids' needs first. Wow I sound bitter but I am not I have come to accept life as it is. I love your writing because you keep shit real. Life is shit sometimes and not everything is rainbows and unicorns. It is messy and feelings get hurt sometimes. I love how from the beginning of Riders to now how much these three siblings have grown. Keep up the fabulous work and I can't wait to see how you will wrap this for us in a pretty bow.
Love ya,
GemGirl Fanfiction
Date: 01 May 2013 9:36 PM Title: By the Book
This third story is good. But kind of tame. It doesn't have bloom and guts like the first two. I missed the blood and guts the lemons are nice. But Santino seem like a whimp. He definitely is not Edward.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:39 PM Title: Crawl to Montauk
This entire Saga should be made into a movie! Everyone i tell to read it loves it. I can't get enough of Fuckhot Edward and Bebella.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 11:55 PM Title: Crawl to Montauk
Holy hell, such great characters! You are such a rock star writer!!! Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us
Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:19 AM Title: Crawl to Montauk
oh myyyy lol
some smexy times Loved the chapter i llike Damion but i wish he and Edward would get along :(
Date: 27 Apr 2013 5:44 AM Title: Crawl to Montauk
I love this story so much I'm at a loss for words as to tell you just how much!