Date: 25 Apr 2024 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow I loved your story and I would have really loved to read the sequel. It has been many years though.
Date: 25 Apr 2024 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward needs to immediately go to the police and tell them about about Emily and her death threats about Bella all he said was that she threatened to kidnap his daughter. Hiring more guards is good too. Bella is gonna freak when she finds out about Edward being hurt. The police need to be WAY more involved in this case now, maybe even the Feds need to get involved.
Date: 24 Apr 2024 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
Carmen's story is obviously a one sided exaggeration on Carmen and Emil6's parts. I'm sure Emily left out the part where she was sleeping with Jacob and it was HIS baby. I think Bella should and will give him a chance but I hope she goes slowly so she can learn to trust him again. Her instincts are pretty good as far as he goes but I really hope she doesn't run again when he makes an inevitable mistake. He's a man, he will. He also really disenfranchised Bella by not giving her a chance to not be like Emily. I really don't care what he went through, the girls are NOT the same and he should have talked to Bella instead of attacking her and her character without even really getting to know anything about her. And how about starting with telling her that Tanya was a lying tramp.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Edward is just as confused as Bella is and I think he needs a little kick in the pants to get his act together, but it looks like he's moving forward and maybe he'll even do the right thing.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
And I am assuming that Kate is lying about having Edward in her bed many times. It was once and he didn't even remember her name. That's probably because he was drunk. But you know whatever she has to tell herself.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think part of Bella's problem is that she runs instead of stays and talks to people. If she would've waited for Edward and confronted him right, then he would've told her the truth. He might've even told her the history with Tonya and how much he despised her.
Date: 23 Apr 2024 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
The lemon was just fine. Great even. I think Edward is not too concerned with who could be hurt with his actions. I'm not sure I like his attitude about women right now. I know he'll change eventually but for now I think he needs to do a little bit of growing up. He hasn't even asked her how old she is or much more about her. It's like he's just concerned with getting her into bed. I hope he's not so selfish and gets his act together.
Date: 11 Aug 2020 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good story so far. He seems remorseful but there's no way I could take him back as more than a friend after he slept with all those girls after her. I'd just keep remembering them everytime we got close.
Date: 05 Jan 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sounds good when will it be available to read
Date: 05 Jan 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
Sounds good when will it be available to read
Date: 27 Feb 2018 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
i am enjoying your story very much. though unrealistic, i loooove that edward
says whatever he wants to those women in front of whoever is around...he
doesnt allow any insults against bella...he immediately puts those women in
their place. i love it. in majority of fics, we don't see this at all which is so
frustrating. keep it up. i love protective edward who will say what is in all of
our minds and not let those women get away with their tantrums or attempts
at seduction.
Date: 03 Mar 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 32
IT WAS GREAT CANNOT WAIT TO START SEQUEL
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
At least they're getting their HEA
Sherry
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Jacob, Emily, and Nurse Swanson need to be brought to justice for what they've done.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hope is good,
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 29
A sweet moment in time.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Emily has to be mental to behave the way she does. At least the twins are healthy and safe and Edward is awake.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
I knew that was gonna happen. Can hardly wait to read on.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well at least one crazy bitch is gone.
Sherry
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward held a very professional conference meeting, but he should have addressed that last question.
Gotta be Emily in the car, or Tanya.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad Edward is finally doing this the right way, but he still has anger issues, he needs to learn to control himself better. Poor Bella can't catch a break.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
Famous last words Edward. Something is gonna go wrong.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
This can't end well.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
I don't think they'll be in different rooms long.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:04 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Yep, Emily is crazier than her mother, Carmen.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
Emily is as crazy as her mother, Carmen.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella can't catch a break.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm delighted Carlisle spoke to Edward on Bella's behalf.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
The Emily story was so heartbreaking. She sure did a number on Edward. Hopefully Bella can give him a chance to make things right.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh bloody hell. I didn't see that coming.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
Though Edward has been an ass thoughout, I hope Bella gives him a chance to redeem himself.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
About time Edward realizes what he's done and what his actions have caused, now to start redeeming himself.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
It's a good thing Alice and Bella got away from Carmen.
Sherry
Date: 31 Dec 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Carmen is up to no good. Her daughters are just awful human beings. I kinda feel bad Eleazar is related to them. I'm hoping Edward will start having a change of heart soon, as well as redeem himself.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Irina is a real jewel, isn't she? Bella needs to toughen up a bit, or she's gonna have a hard way to go. I'm glad Elizabeth is her GYN and is being supportive.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:49 AM Title: Outtake 1
I want to know what Emily did to Edward to make him the way he is. The dude is deplorable. Well played bu Carlisle and Esme, recording him admitting to everything was perfect.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good for Bella for starting fresh, but Edward really is a douche. I know I keep saying that. I can't wait for things to change for these two.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Renee and Charlie are a real piece of work. By leaving it looks like things may be looking up for Bella.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really want to junk punch Edward.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
I thought Edward was 21. He's a real douche.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is a real douche. I thought Bella would bring 'something' home with her.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Why do I think that was Tanya on the phone? Bella really should have had that conversation with Edward before getting into bed with him again.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
Something tells me Bella will be taking something home with her.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love Emmett, fantastic things worked out for Angela to attend also.
Sherry
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
I kinda feel bad that Riley will get his feelings hurt over a bet. Alice and Bella are on cloud nine with excitement.
Sherry
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Every teenage girls dream to see their idol.
Sherry
Date: 29 Dec 2014 10:56 PM Title: Prologue
Interesting start.
Sherry
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
cool story im glad theres a sequel ;) a few points though when edward was recovering there was no mention of the broken arm? in emilys o/t she said she hadnt seen him in 6ys but it would of only been 5 ? when bella was taken she was only gone for about 12hrs but in her pov it sounded like days? but i did enjoy the story though and am looking forward to the sequel ;D
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
just finished reading all alone, but i dont see the sequel. are still going to write it. this was a good story.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32
J'aime cette fiction, c'est une bonne histoire.
Merci.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Je viens de lire cette bonne fiction, Merci.
Carmen est la mère d'Emilie, la jeune fille qui a fait souffrir Edward, c'est un morceau de nouvelles.
Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:20 PM Title: Prologue
C'est le bon début, j'aime!
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
I love the title of the next story!
Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
I just don't understand Edward's way of thinking when he says that they are too young to get married, yet they weren't too young to have sex, live together, or have a set of twins?! Not to mention the fact that Edward has already lived a pretty wild life - traveled extensively, lived life to the fullest, & sowed his oats far more than most men ever have - young or old! So him saying that they are too young is just ridiculous! I think it's nothing more than just a scapegoat for him...a pathetic, hurtful excuse that doesn't make sense. :(
I'm not saying that they should get married just because they have children together, & I DO realized how young Bella still is. However, they've made these life choices together & they claim to love one another deeply, not to mention that they already live together, so what's the hold-up?! Him waiting around makes it seem as if Edward wants to keep his options open, or doesn't really want to committ...which is bad for poor Bella in more ways than one! :(
If he'd marry her, maybe then some of these skanks & naysayers would hopefully finally realize that he's serious about her & loves her...chose her. As it stands, everyone pretty much thinks that he's only with her because he knocked her up. :( It would also soothe a lot of her doubts & self-esteem issues where he's concerned & show her that he IS in it for the long haul - that he's sticking around, truly loves her & wants to be with her for more than just their children's sake.
He NEEDS to put a ring on Bella's finger & marry her, or at least ask her to marry him ASAP!
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am so happy you are continuing this little families story. Can't wait.
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
A good read, looking forward to the sequel.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
Thank you I've enjoyed the story.
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 32
can't wait...loving this
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 32
Glad the babies and b are ok.
TY for writing and sharting.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Finally they are together as a family! !!!!!!!!! Loved reading this story. Can't wait for you to start the next one
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
Nasty skanky nurse. Loved it. Enjoyed the story throughly. Can't wait for sequel.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am extatic you'll be writting a new sequel!!
This truely as been a beautifully captivating & intriging story. I have looked forward to each & every update. I can't await to begin reading the sequel!!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
The family is finally all together. I love it! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
YES IT'S SAD TO LET GO BUT... LOOK FORWARD TO " NOT ALONE ANYMORE " YOU MENTIONED ANGST BUT I HOPE THERE'S NOT TOO MUCH THESE TWO DESERVE TO FINALLY BE HAPPY AND MARRIED!!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
Can't wait for the sequel!!! Loved this story.
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved this story. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
loved it and can't wait for the sequel
Date: 17 May 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
I really enjoyed this story, and look forward to the sequel, hopefully it will not be too long. Many thanks for an excellent job.
Date: 09 May 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Well, after everything I hope there's no more danger to happen to Edward, Bella and their twins.
Date: 07 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Great story.
Date: 07 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Thank God Bella didn't go through anything more.
Date: 05 May 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Glad the drama is over. Now for the healing.
Date: 05 May 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Date: 05 May 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
CAN'T WAIT!!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 05 May 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Loved it can't wait for next chapter,hope not to long .love it.great story .
Date: 05 May 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Loved it :)
Date: 05 May 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
*wipes tears* This is fantastic!
Date: 05 May 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Loved the update and soooooo looking forward to reading more and especially the sequel!! How soon will they post??
Author's Response:
I hope to have the last chapter up in two weeks and I already started the sequel.
Thank you for your continuing support
fiona
Date: 05 May 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
This truely has been such a beautifully captivating story!!! I am extaticic that there will be a Sequel yay!!!
Date: 04 May 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
looking forward to more
Date: 04 May 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Loved it!......Can't wait for the next Chapter.
Date: 04 May 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
So glad they got to her in time!
Date: 04 May 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
So excited to get this update. Glad that they got to Bella before Jacob could do anymore damage to her. Can't wait for her to be united with her children.
Date: 04 May 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Finally those crazy people are behind bars, bella and edward are back together cant wait for the next cahpter
Date: 04 May 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Wow Some messed up psycho's in this story.
Date: 04 May 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
There are a couple things about Bella's condition that have not been addressed: she has just given birth. Therefore, her breasts are well on their way to getting engorged. Very painful unless addressed. Also, she is also bleeding (like a heavy period). Why would Jacob want to rape a woman in that condition? Is he just that much of a gross creep?
Author's Response:
I understand what you are saying but remember that the twins were four weeks old when she was taken so the bleeding would be stopped by then and jacob didn't care less about if her breast were engorged or painful. He is that much of a creep. I hope this clears things up for you
fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 04 May 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Love it! So glad they found Bella!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
God you sure do like keeping people on their toes!!! Awesome story! I couldnt stop reading, god I can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
I hope she knows where Bella is.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
I just hope that they find Bella before Jake can do anything to her. Bless her heart. She just had twins four weeks ago. Her boyfriend is in the hospital. She has really been through a lot. LOVE this story. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:35 AM Title: Prologue
Très belle histoire
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow. And he didn't even have to play along. I would of told her anything she wanted to hear.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING. I love this story and watch for updates each day. Wow! what a plot twist.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
I feel so bad for Bella and Edward. These people are crazy. I hope Bella learns from this not to leave the bodyguards behind. She and the babies need to be protected from crazy people, who think they know Edward. She has to be smarter and grow up. She will never be a normal teenager again. She has people who depend on her now.