Date: 04 Jul 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 04 Jul 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
More please!!!!!!
Date: 30 Jun 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww they are so sweet together.
Date: 27 May 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 20
Pretty please update.
Date: 17 Mar 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
i wounder what's going to happen with jasper?
Date: 17 Mar 2014 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad I is helping B get through it
Date: 12 Mar 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
It was so gret to see this story again! I reread the whole thing and the new chapter. I can't wait to see what is in store for Alice and Edward. Thanks for writing.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Freaking awesome. Thank you for the update.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
poor Bella
i can't wait for more
please update again soon
Date: 11 Mar 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
welcome back babe
Date: 11 Mar 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh the telling of this story is amazing. Walking thru her mind just wow. Thanks for updating.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was so sweet, I think it was a wonderful thing that they both killed him. I just can't wait to see what they do to the others. Oh, how fun that will be.
Date: 15 Oct 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love Leverage it one of my favorites! Parker and Hardison!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love it. Can't wait for an update.
Date: 06 Sep 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh wonderful update... thanks
Date: 04 Sep 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, nice touch with lykos teaching her how to use her abilities. When's the next chapter?
Date: 04 Sep 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
yea!!! I'm so glad you updated. I really like this story, can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow i love it can't wait for a aother ch.
Date: 03 Sep 2013 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Love the story awesome. Please continue with it. I want more of this story.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
eeek cant wait for more:)
Date: 08 Jul 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
are you still on facebook? tired to find you and could not
btw love your stores:)
Date: 21 Jun 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
great start
i wonder at the timeline?
is she afraid of Jasper?
the summary said Peters brother hurt her
in this chapter,
the sounds like Jasper is Peters sire.
~WickedTruth~
Date: 04 Jun 2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 08 May 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
so totally love the story hope the mojo kicks back in can not wait to see what happens will be bitting nails till next chapter. so love the story thanks for writing it. it makes my day to realx and read it.
Date: 04 May 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
What an evil cliffy. lol Awesome stuff.
Date: 03 May 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
I just found this and LOVE it! Can;t wait to see what happens whe Isa decided to protect Peter from Lykos! thanks for writing
Date: 03 May 2013 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
ah so Lykos is known about a bit huh
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
just found this story! Can't wait to read more! :)
-Kate
Date: 09 Apr 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 09 Apr 2013 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! I wonder if Bella will ever forgive Jasper!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it. Cant wait till Lykos finds B.
Date: 08 Apr 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
love it!! Great story!!
Date: 04 Apr 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
oooooh A new character introduced. This is gonna be goooood
Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful home. lol for mf joke there at the end.
Date: 13 Mar 2013 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait to see what Bella has planed for Jasper and the others! Who is Jasper's real mate!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
pixie bitch needs to die soon!!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
still with you.. That was hard to read.. gore..
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
I know you are hurrying to get this done and over. I really like the get to it chapters. I hate when things drag out for no reason.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
well here we go.
Date: 26 Feb 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
I hope there is a happy some where. I guess not huh?
Date: 25 Feb 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Isa and Peter are great together. Glad the Denali's are appauled.
Date: 17 Feb 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm begs the question of how many human pets the Cullens have had if Jasper didnt know who the Skanky bitches were talking about.
Date: 17 Feb 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
eeek Evil place to leave it. hmmm I wonder if Jasper really did say those things or was it someone impersonating him like Malice or Fuckward?
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
love it
Date: 01 Feb 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
You have a lot of good stories out there I can see why it takes you so long to update. You are spread thin.
This story is just sad.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh, you're into Leverage too? Christian Kane is just gorgeous...now he'd make one hottie vampire!
Love the story so far, the only thing I don't like is that now I have to wait for updates :)
Date: 31 Jan 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man, this is already getting good!
Date: 31 Jan 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad Garrett and kate agreed to help. Laurant needs to pay.
Date: 31 Jan 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
great story so far cant wait to see what happens next update soon
Date: 10 Dec 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it! Awe poor Bella!
Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
*Gasps* I saw all the update notices in my inbox and got all kinds of excited (knowing that sometimes you update multiple chapters at once) and found them all to be for this chapter. *frowns* Please I beg of you, more I want to read more.
Date: 09 Dec 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Cant wait for the Cullens to get whats due them
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
cant wait to read more i love it x
Date: 20 Nov 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hey girl! Agian you always deliver, awesome chappie ;) I so agree with you about Bd 2. I was disappointed as well Peter said nothing. I mean damn Melissa Rosenberg, really? You couldnt even write two lines for the poor guy? So messed up :( Anyhow God my heart is just breaking for Bella. She has been through such horrors, disgusting, I cant, cant wrap my head around it. I feel for Peter too because knowing his mate went through such hell and he wasnt there at the time to help save her, has to be so hard ;( But I know he will make sure those involved will pay! I cant wait to read when that happens. I have a feeling once Bella recovers as best as she can, she will unleash her wrath as well. I really like Char I think her and Bella will become good friends. I liked how they explained more baout mating. Oh I am with you girl about Garrett, lmao. I loved him in BD 2! Lee Pace was so hot! ttys hun xo
Date: 18 Nov 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sighs...yes Garrett was wonderful! Enjoying it so far!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I really like Garrett too. Although that is not how I pictured him. Glad Char is there to help explain things too.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
good story sad though. I hate that Jasper did not care if Maria tortured Bella. How horrible is that?
Date: 16 Nov 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
getting good time to get the gang togeather.
Date: 16 Nov 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
hahaha garrett was amazing!!! lee pace is so good! another amazing chapter :)
Date: 12 Nov 2012 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Charlotte will help her.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
more please update soon i like it now when will jasper come?
Date: 12 Nov 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
sad can they not find a way to heal some of that. Like smoothe it out? Vicky has been torn apart, just burn her up.
Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
ooooohhh cnt wait for more please update again soon :)
love it x
Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm a thickening plot
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella. Peter is being so good to her.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
can't wait intill you update love it
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ugh the Captain can take care of himself but I worry for B.
Date: 10 Nov 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 10 Nov 2012 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
this is hard. I am not sure about the word enjoy.
Date: 09 Nov 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Damn what a chapter, lol. Holy crap, Bella really attacked the hell out of Peter. Poor guy, lol. But I understand why. Poor girl has been through hell! Damn I am pissed myself, I cant believe they all tortured her that way, all of the horrible things they had done to her ;( I totally get why Peter is livid. I am sure he will do everything he can to find out all the answers. He is good for Bella I know it and he will help her thought this. Its going to take so much time though ;( Great chapter girl! Love this story so far, looking fwd to more :) xoxox
Date: 08 Nov 2012 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Intruiging ... looking forward to what happens next :)
Date: 08 Nov 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
cant wait intill you ypdate it its real good.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
that is so sad.. They did not care about Bella just do what ever.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmm so is jasper really a prick or was Maria messing with her?
Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 07 Nov 2012 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I hope your chapter get longer hard to review so little.
Author's Response:
what would you perfer; longer chapters - longer wait or shorter chapters not so long wait?
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
oooh Bella is a bit pissed off.
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I think it's a really great beginning, and I'd love to see you make it into a full-length story!
Date: 02 Nov 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay girl you got me intrigued already, lol. Is this really it? Or hopefully your amazing brain will urge you to finish telling their story. I know there is so much more to this! I am really into it, for real, lol. God what are you doing to me?I'm liking non-canon now. lmao. For real though I want to find out more about Peter and what the hell happend to Bella, damn. Thats just freaking awful :( Anyway, hope to read more soon Ellie babe! ttys chica, xoxo
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it, know it will be a good story. Please post more! Can't wait
Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well I know you write a good story. So I can't wait..
Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh great start. More more more please
Date: 01 Nov 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, I always a good Peter and Bella story