[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:20 AM Title: Prisoner of Love
Very well written. I agree about not confusing her and just leaving this as a punishment, putting off any other scene to another time. The spanking wasn't the only punishment as she didn't get here picnic and had to serve all day with little interaction.
Author's Response:
Thanks I can't take complete credit for the well written aspect, just had some good editing on this one. I'm glad that you agree with her punishment scene was worried that a few people would string me by my feet for no lemons....LOL Thanks for the review.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 6:17 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Please update your story soon! I have loved what you have wrote so far. Your story is the kind that you pick up and never want to put down. Please update it soon so I can find out what happens next in this amazing story of yours! I wanted to add this review here too, this is a review that came from ff.
Author's Response:
I wanted to add this review from another website here, so that everyone could see what it said. I know it's crazy to submit a review to your own stuff. I wanted it here too.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:35 AM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Draw?? Do you mean drawer?
Author's Response:
You are probably right, I will look to see. Thanks for the review though.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2012 2:49 AM Title: Moving On Up
Even though Charlie is understanding of Bella's choices it would still be so awkward to have to vet your daughters Dom, but necessary with everything she's been through.
Author's Response:
Yes, I so agree...I think it hard to begin with just being around a man that you know will be having sex with your daughter. Let alone add the fact that he found out in the worst of ways by James throwing that information in his face. I think given the circumstances Charlie has been very caring for his daughter even though he doesn't agree with her lifestyle. My dad would hit the fan, and probably wouldn't speak to me. LOL Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2012 12:20 AM Title: Excite Me
Definetely a lemontastic chapter
Author's Response:
Yes, we all like our lemons... thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2012 11:47 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
Excellent chapter thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Your welcome, and I am glad that you liked. Keep reading thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2012 9:11 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
Um you really do have a way with words great visualizing the scene whew is all I can say.
Author's Response:
Some times I worry about my words, and think I need to clean them up some. I figure the story being what it is could use a lot more color. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2012 6:36 PM Title: I Touch Myself
That was beyond steamy and unlike anything I've ever read before it was hot.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked, was that a good 'unlike anything you've ever read before'. **wringging hands** I worry a lot thinking that maybe, just maybe it's a little much.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:55 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
I'm glad I found your story and am very intrigued great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you found it too. I can always use more reviews. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chains of Love
what a scene! that was sizzling hot! i'm just waiting for the other shoe to drop. irina's missing? that can't be good. and now that edward has spotted james, i expect james to begin harassing bella at any time.
Author's Response:
It's coming I just have to figure out when and where. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chains of Love
I have to say I was a little hesitant on reading this story but I have to say, I love it!.
Cant wait for more... I need more!
Author's Response:
I am glad to see that you came, read, and liked. That warms my heart, thanks. I have to wonder what held you back? Just curious? Thanks for the review...mores comes kinda stuck at the moment trying to figure out what to do next.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 1:00 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
Hmmm, I think her ass will be gone... just fire her now Edward!
Author's Response:
Ah, yes Irina...She would definitely lose her job if it was up to me too. Thanks for the review
Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:18 PM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
hahaha... they almost get caught... hahaha... The officer was an idiot hitting on Bella like that... They are so damn horny but they have to wait till her medicine work!!
Author's Response:
All good, who hasn't been caught by the cops before?? Thanks for the review
Date: 07 Nov 2012 10:53 PM Title: Moving On Up
I love to see them playfull like that!! Charlie was amazing with Edward! He will do anything to protect his little girl!!! But on the other hand he doesn't want to know to much details... poor him! lol
Author's Response:
I figured this is how a good daddy should be, be protective, but not want to know all the details. LOL Thanks for reviewing on both
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:10 PM Title: You've Got A Friend In Me
Bon chapitre avec la rencontre d'Alice et Bella.
Author's Response:
Good chapter meeting with Alice and Bella.
Ouais, c'est bon de savoir que Bella gagne une sorte de système de soutien pour l'aider à travers tous les moments difficiles de la vie.
Yeah, its good to know that Bella is gaining some kind of support system to help her through all the tough moments in life.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 10:00 AM Title: Easy, Peaceful Feeling
J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
Bella et Edward se sont avoués leurs sentiments, c'est un très beau moment.
James se rapproche..
Author's Response:
I love this chapter!
Bella and Edward have confessed their feelings, it is a beautiful moment.
James approaches ..
Oui, James a été la suite et regarder Bella depuis qu'elle a quitté. Sucker visqueux, et il sera de retour à un certain point dans les histoires. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen.
Yes, James has been following and watching Bella ever since she left. Slimy sucker, and he will be back at some point in the stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2012 9:08 AM Title: Down On The Corner
J'aime cette scène que joue Bella, je l'imagine dans sa tenue !
Author's Response:
I love this scene plays Bella, I imagine in his outfit!
Ouais, j'ai essayé d'être aussi élaboré que possible au sujet de sa tenue. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen.
Yeah, I tried to be as elaborate as possible about her outfit. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:01 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
I love how you spent so much time on going through the set up/lists/interview stuff. I know nothing about the lifestyle but am curious with the stories. This is really interesting to read.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had to do a lot of research to even begin this story. I still do a lot of it trying to figure out how to use things, where things are done, or how a dom would want his submissive to pose or position herself. I have even read the karam sutra looking for ideas. Trust me my life is very vanilla, and I have had some people wonder about me. LOL I just read really good sites or have people in the lifestyle tell me different things. This is my imaginary world.
Thanks for the review, I am glad that you like.
Date: 07 Nov 2012 4:12 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
bien me gusta
Author's Response:
well i like
Bueno, me alegro de que te guste. Seguir leyendo usted puede encontrar como mucho. Gracias por la lectura y crítica me encantaría saber lo que piensa la gente.
Well, I am glad that you like. Continue reading you might find you like a lot. Thanks for reading, and review I love to know what people think.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chains of Love
The shameless hussy needs a spanking
Author's Response:
It's coming...and she's begging for it. LOL Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Call Me
C'était une bonne soirée !
Author's Response:
It was a great evening!
Merci pour la lecture et l'examen et ce fut une bonne soirée pour eux.
Thanks for reading and reviewing and it was a good evening for them.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:22 PM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
Bon chapitre !
La cuisine c'est bien !
Author's Response:
Good chapter!
The kitchen is well!
Rien de tel qu'une bonne cuisine se défouler pour faire sourire tout le monde. Merci pour la lecture et l'examen de l'amour d'entendre vos pensées.
Nothing like a good kitchen romp to make anyone smile. Thanks for reading and reviewing love to hear your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 7:02 PM Title: I'm So Excited
Ils ont passé le contrat !
Bon chapitre.
Author's Response:
They spent the contract!
Good chapter.
Merci, et oui, ils ont signé le contrat. Ils ne vont pas par elle strictement mais à ce point. Je pense à faire mon prochain chapitre où ils le suivent mieux. Surtout, étant qu'elle devient plus confiant et sûr de son statut de nouveau. Continuez votre lecture et merci pour l'examen.
Thanks, and yes they signed the contract. They don't go by it strictly though at this point. I'm thinking of making my later chapter where they follow it better. Especially, being that she becomes more confident and secure in her status again. Keep reading and thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:40 PM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
J'aime ce chapitre !
La police est toujours là quand on n'a pa besoin ! Non ?
Author's Response:
I love this chapter!
The police are always there when you do need pa! Not?
Oui, ils viennent toujours quand ils ne sont pas nécessaires, besoin d'eux et ils ne sont nulle part autour. Heureux de voir que vous avez aimé le chapitre, continuez à lire et réviser. Merci
Yes, they always come when they are not needed, need them and they are nowhere around. Glad that you liked the chapter, keep reading and reviewing. Thanks
Date: 06 Nov 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chains of Love
awesome chapter! more please!
Author's Response:
It's coming in the process of writing another chapter.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 3:10 PM Title: Rehab
Bella has so many people now that care about her and will help her to get better!! Edward cares about her so much! Rose was so much help too!! can't wait to read the rest...
Author's Response:
Keep reading I'm hoping that you like where they are going.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:50 PM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
Liking your fic. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Your welcome....thanks for reading.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:46 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
omg!! I think I'm going to be sick with everything that happened to Bella... I would have definitelly killed James after everything he done.... In his seep if I could... And why weren't the other doms doing anything to stop James and protect the slaves? And Alice was there? I knew it... It's a mirace that Bella managed to e back in the lifestyle a year after everything... Edward will protect her about anything but with James coming from money and power....
Author's Response:
The other dom were gone, he had successful run them off. They were tired of his ways. You will learn this is another chapter. Yep Alice was there, and it's a miracle. The lifestyle is something that she needs, wants, desires.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:24 PM Title: Disturbia
God!! *gasps* Rose too?? They not only kniw each other but they are in te same danger!! It was Rose the friend who talked her into ving with James ad the others... I don't blame her but if it wasn't for her Bella wouldn't have been involved with James... So what will happen? Will Rose help her? And will they manage o get free of James? who else has the tattoo? The woman that Jasper is interested?
Author's Response:
Yes, Rose to...remember Rose was training to be a Dom because things didn't work out with Royce. She went to the house thinking that she would be a dominant. Bella doesn't blame her, she takes all the fault because she had the money to live somewhere else. Rose helps her to overcome, her guilt, her hurt etc. Eventually yes, they will be free of James. You will see who else has the tattoo in You've got a friend in me. Yes, the woman Jasper is interested in.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 2:02 PM Title: Excite Me
Shit!!! Really? James is not only moving to Seattle but e is a billionaire with a lot of influence too?? That's why Bella is so afraid of him... she is afraid that se wont be able to fight him off? I believe that she doesn't go to sub sace but maybe in a place inside her head where she can't feel the physical pain that James used to inflic on her... she maybe used to do that with James when he wa extremelly brutal... Will she get better with Rose's help? Edwar is starting to fall for her!! And the scene in the beggining was soooo HOT!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, as you read Rose is a counselor that happens to live the lifestyle and doesn't look down on people who do. She will put Bella on antidepression pills, and anxiety meds to help her to cope with her life. Thanks for reading and reviewsing on both....:)
Date: 06 Nov 2012 1:36 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
wow!! I'm so excited to read the next chapter... it is the only time for them to participate in threesome after all... because Edward won't allow any sharing afte Bella is his sub!!! They are sp great together and they get to know each other more and more!! Edward is so sweet with her!! He trully cares about her and what happened to her....
Author's Response:
I think I might have run off a couple of readers with that one. Maybe they were hoping for a threesome the entire story. I don't know thinking of writing other stories similar, when I say that I mean erotica or bdsm.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:25 AM Title: Sunday Kind Of Love
great story love it can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
It's coming soon I promise, have a chapter with betas, and two outtakes. Waiting there approval.
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:49 AM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
That was so hot!! And sexy!! The whole scene was awesome but I loved that Edward can't wait to have her all to himself!!
Author's Response:
Yep, wait until he does HOT!!
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:27 AM Title: Natural High
The first meeting went really well! Edward and Bella both like each other and want to try more... Does Bella have to have this document before evey scene? And what if the dominant want to improvise in the playroom? And will Bella be able to deal with it?
James has done far more damage than I first thought... He is sadistic!
Author's Response:
You will see the extent of his damage in chapter disturbia and disturbia 2 were she has flashbacks. She has to have this paper in order to get her mind wrapped around the idea of things. She often has an anxiety attack on Jasper when things get to off course...he thinks it's subspace, but it's not. Like I said learn more of what is wrong with her. Edward will get her to where he can improvise, but not yet.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:58 PM Title: I Touch Myself
omg!! That was so fucking hot!!! And they were only on Skype... can't wait to see them together in person!! James did all that? Shit! Edward is furious!! Will he help her with the tattoo being a plastic surgeon?
Author's Response:
Yes, he is going to help her, but she doesn't get help with it until Chapter 25 which isn't out. She sees a doctor Edward recommends. You will see, the question is can she get it removed or repaired before James finds her?
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:32 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
wow!! And Edward has gone through so much too!! I love the backround that you created for both of them!! So will Bella stay with him and go 24/7? Jasper was great with all the informations!!
So I know that I say the exact same think to both rewies in TWCS and FFn but I know that reviews are important to the writer and I wanted you to increase your reviews in both sites! The story definitelly deserve it!! It is amazing so far! Andthank you so much for answering!
Author's Response:
You are right, I do need the reviews and I appreciate them on both sites. Thanks... I try to answer all my reviews unless something like a computer glitch which happened yesterday keep me from three of them. FF doesn't have my complete tally of review right either. When people see it like right now it say 153 to people, but when I click on 162. I don't like that really. I have keep all the review good or bad not matter what. That is what makes me grown as a writer, and there is always good and bad in life. I can't please everyone. Thanks for reviewing I like that people love my story.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:07 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
omg!! No wonder why Bella is so hesitant... James is an asshole using Bella's trust like that! Is he still obsessed with her? Will he be after her?
Author's Response:
Yes, he is still obsessed we will see him in down on the corner chapter or the one after that. He will talk a little about following her. We will eventually see him again. Once she is very confident in the playroom. My last chapter is when she start finding her strength. Once she has that he will come.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:04 PM Title: You Sexy Thing
wow! Their limis are so similar! Especially the hard ones! Edward will teach her so many more things!His questionaire was amazing an so unique! No te usual staff about her life but about what she really wants and needs! and they were so cute in Skype... hahaha... checkng each others appearances! lol
Author's Response:
I loved that questionaire when I saw it, they can talk about the other junk. People don't always want to open about about their sexual fantasies...We all have them no shame in it. LOL
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:00 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
Bella is really insecure about herself but she is Bella after all! I love how honest and open they all are and I think that this trust is the most important in the relantionship of any kind! Bella must have gone through a lot and can't wait to find out...
Author's Response:
You will find out pretty soon, and it hurts to. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:55 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
wow!! This story seems great! I really like how it starts!!Edward need a new sub and what better than Jasper's? can't wait to meet Bella...
Author's Response:
Thanks, I noticed you also reviewed on FF. I will acknowledge you here. Everyone can see, it. Keep reading and thanks for reviewing twice per ch.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:56 PM Title: I'm So Excited
This was amazing :) The only problem that was really noticable was the spacing in the appendixes.
Author's Response:
We can fix that it might have been me or when I transferred. You never know with technology.
The last review you said something about her eating me. I noticed after I posted that I said No. But it is actually a yes. Sorry, got carried away.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:51 PM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
OH WOW...love their lemons ;)
Author's Response:
I love their lemons to, makes for some really good, sweet, with just a little bit of tangy lemonade. LOL
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:44 PM Title: Moving On Up
So amazing :) Although, I must ask, in a previous chapter, Bella is mentioned as being on a high whole grain and veggie diet. Does she eat meat?
Author's Response:
I mainly used the idea from the PMDD website, suggesting those things. I hadn't thought of that...will have to think for a minute. No, I would say that she does eat meat, but not a heavy diet. Edward feeds her ham and cheese sandwiches in one of the chapters. So, no
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: Play With Me
Excellent story.
i'd love to know what Jasper thought of the scene.
Author's Response:
I have two outtakes... Jasper's POV on the night and Alice's POV. Alice's will cover more of the changes she sees in Bella, and the things she witness. She will briefly talk about saving Bella's life and how it changed hers. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:05 PM Title: Disturbia Part 2
Pauvre Isabella ! James mérite d'être brulé vif après avoir été démembré.
Author's Response:
Poor Isabella! James deserves to be burnt alive after being dismembered.
J'ai pensé fortement à faire cela, mais je ne sais pas quoi faire avec la ventouse visqueuse encore. Seul le temps nous le dira, mais il ne sera pas agréable. Merci pour la revue.
I have thought strongly about doing that, but don't know what to do with the slimy sucker yet. Only time will tell, but it will not be nice. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:07 PM Title: Hit Me Baby One More Time
Wow!
Fantastic story
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you liked it. Keep reading more coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:55 PM Title: Excite Me
Mon Dieu ! James est là !
Author's Response:
My God! James is here!
This is a flashback in the story, her remembering the things he done to here. We won't offically see him until around .... Chapter Down on the corner we have his POV, then Edward sees him in a chapter. Can't remember which one at the moment. He will be back when she is more confident in the playroom.
Il s'agit d'un retour en arrière dans l'histoire, son souvenir les choses qu'il fait ici. Nous allons le voir pas officiellement jusqu'à environ .... Chapitre vers le bas sur le coin, nous avons son POV, puis Edward le voit dans un chapitre. Ne me souviens pas que l'on à l'heure actuelle. Il sera de retour quand elle est plus à l'aise dans la salle de jeux.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:19 PM Title: But Whips and Chains....
Journée sympathique, ils ont fait davantage connaissance !
Author's Response:
Nice day, they have more knowledge!
Yes, they do. The better they get to know one another the stronger the bond will be, and the more they fall in love with each other.
Oui, ils le font. Le mieux qu'ils apprennent à connaître l'autre plus le lien sera, et plus ils tombent amoureux l'un de l'autre.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:18 PM Title: Natural High
very interesting, first bdsm story i have read with these scene sheets.
Author's Response:
I did that on purpose.... I felt that given Bella's past she would need something to prepare her mind for the scenes. I find it on a website, now don't quote me, but I felt like it was something used while at play parties or arrangements with other Doms to watch or particpate in scenes with them. So, I include... it will runs it course when she gets more confident in the playroom, but we will not always see it described to the that degree in the first few chapters.
Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 4:00 PM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
C'est un bon chapitre, j'aime cette scène à trois !
Author's Response:
This is a good chapter, I love this scene three!
R: Heureux que vous aimé, merci pour la lecture et l'examen.
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:52 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
still reading, wishing it was moving a little bit faster, still looking to see where this goes
Author's Response:
Hopefully, it will once you get out of the first so many. I think so....hang in there. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:03 PM Title: Natural High
Quand on lit le formulaire c'est amusant, mais aussi ce n'est pas simple comme jeux !
Merci.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:41 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
very interesting , I am eager to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping you like where I take it...thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:31 PM Title: I Touch Myself
Je crois qu'elle a aimé "cyber" !
Author's Response:
Reviewer: I think she liked "cyber"!.
Response: You could say that, I think she liked it alot. LOL Thanks for the review keep reading.
On pourrait dire que, je pense qu'elle a aimé beaucoup. LOL Merci pour la revue continuez à lire.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:16 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
J'ai bien aimé ce chapitre !
Author's Response:
reviewer: I liked this chapter!
Response: I'm glad to hear that you liked it. Thanks for the review...
Je suis heureux d'entendre que vous avez aimé. Merci pour la revue ...
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:11 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
Pauvre Bella ! James a été horrible avec elle.
Author's Response:
Poor Bella! James was horrible with it.
Oui, il est terrible et pense qu'il est un don de Dieu. Qu'est-ce une douleur dans le cul qu'il est. Merci pour revoir l'amour de voir quoi que ce soit une choses.
Yes, he is terrible and thinks he's god's gift. What a pain in the butt he is. Thanks for reviewing love to see whatever one things.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:28 AM Title: You Sexy Thing
J'adore ce chapitre avec leur rencontre sur Skype !
Author's Response:
I love this chapter with their encounter on Skype!
Je n'ai jamais utiliser Skype, mais j'ai lu à ce sujet dans plusieurs histoires. Je pensais que ce serait une bonne idée d'utiliser dans ces histoires. Je suis content que vous aimez le chapitre, merci pour l'examen.
J'ai accompagné d'une traduction sur ma réponse de votre réponse, et j'ai aussi inclure à la fois un anglais et un français de retour pour vous. J'espère que vous ne me dérange pas. Laissez-moi savoir si cela choque et je vais arrêter.
Bonne lecture :)
I have never use Skype, but have read about it in several stories. Thought it would be a great idea to use in this stories. I'm glad you like the chapter, thanks for the review.
I include a translation on my response of your response, and I also include both an English and a French back to you. I hope you don't mind. Let me know if this offends and I will stop.
Happy Reading :)
Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:18 AM Title: Kitchen Rendezvous
She is flexable lol. that was a long time coming.
Author's Response:
LOL ... long time coming..... good god, I'm turning into a prepubestant boy. Yes, she is flexible I wanted her good and limber for him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 11:05 AM Title: Don't You Want Me?
Merci, j'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !
J'aime quand il y a une histoire et une romance pas seulement des scènes BDSM, donc pour moi c'est parfait !
Merci.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I love this chapter! I love when there is a history not only romance and BDSM scenes, so for me it's perfect!
You are welcome, I have had a couple of people tell me that. Thanks for the review.
Merci. J'ai eu un couple de personnes me disent que. Merci pour la revue.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:47 AM Title: I'm So Excited
Wow there is a lot to this
Author's Response:
Yeah, who knew right.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:45 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
Isabella a l'air parfaite pour notre Edward !
Author's Response:
My review said Isabella looks perfect for our Edward!
Yes, she does. I included a translation so everyone would be able to read. Hope you don't mind. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:16 AM Title: Everyday Is A Winding Road
Nice little on the side of the road but I am afraid that the cop put her on the radar making it easier for James to find her.
Author's Response:
You will see in Chapter....let me think....Down on the corner. He has always known were she is. A restraining order half butt keeps him from going to her. He wants her confident so he can break her again.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:52 AM Title: Moving On Up
I love Charlie he is the best dad. I think Bella feels comfortable with Edward
Author's Response:
Yep, she does and Charlie is always the best daddy.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:26 AM Title: Rehab
I love them all ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks you!!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 9:05 AM Title: Disturbia Part 2
James in one sick bastard that needs to die
Author's Response:
Yep, he depraviting has no bounds. I figured he would do about anything to hurt her.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:39 AM Title: Disturbia
Alice ??? James must die
Author's Response:
Yep, Alice saves her and comes into her life again. Thanks for the review
Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:21 AM Title: Excite Me
ruined underwear and need a sham wow lol
Author's Response:
At least the sham wow comes with a couple in a pack. You might want to buy in bulk. LOL Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:57 AM Title: But Whips and Chains....
Edward is head over heals for her
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is and falls deeper as the story goes. Thanks for the review
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:35 AM Title: Rehab
Aw, poor Bella. I cannot wait for more :D
Author's Response:
Yeah, I hated doing this to her, but have to have drama some way *sighs*. Not everyone has wonderful experience in life.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:08 AM Title: Disturbia Part 2
I couldn't read this...not because it was bad, but I cannot read some scenes like this. I still wanted to review though :)
Author's Response:
Your fine, I had to show how bad her could and did hurt her. I couldn't get to explicted in them...have a warning at the top, but graze over some aspects.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 7:07 AM Title: Disturbia
OH wow, that was amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked, thanks for the review
Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:56 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
wow. so far you've made reference to a lot of things that i have no knowledge about...guess i'd better start googling. as always, james needs to be punished.
Author's Response:
There are things in here, I don't even know what they mean. I'm amazed the police are not knocking down my door from the websites I visited, and some I had to back out slowly...LOL Google is a gals best friend, I downloaded a list which also has somethings I'm not familiar with. Thanks for reading.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 6:12 AM Title: Excite Me
GAH! I did not heed the warning...guess I will from now on! I loved it! Perfect scene :D
Author's Response:
Yes, be careful the warns are there for a purpose. Thanks
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:56 AM Title: But Whips and Chains....
SO amazing :D I loved it! I forgot to mention it earlier...but I LOVE Edward's tattoo (according to the picture, anyway). :D
Author's Response:
Yeah, was clicking through picture looking for a new profile picture, and it popped up whoever did it. Did a great job, decided right then and there this was the Edward I wanted. He explains how he got it to nothing over the top or dramatic.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:49 AM Title: Disturbia
OMG, that's wild that Rose and Bella know one another.... OMG!
Author's Response:
Thought I would tied them all together. Thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:40 AM Title: Excite Me
Awh, man...the first 3/4 of the story was wonderful... we saw some hot double play action...come on we all know that was hot... even if we don't like seeing them share....but Bella is going to Edward and he is going to truly adore her...we see that already... then we have to hear that the Monster of all vial creatures is coming to town...oh...No....not good. Glad Rose is in the house...
Author's Response:
It will get better I promise skip ahead to "I'm so excited" they will get back on track. Thanks for the review it makes me smile the responses I get.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 3:14 AM Title: Play With Me
WOW!!! this is truely an intriging & captivating story that has eautifully well written!!!! Please continue with Frequnent Updates & continue writing more stories just like this one!!! Thanks 4 all ur stories.
smileya987
Author's Response:
Thank you so much...I appreciate the vote of confidence. I will be updating soon have two outtakes and a chapter with the beta. Keep up with me here or fanfiction. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:34 AM Title: But Whips and Chains....
I loved how they took the time to be Edward and Bella and learn about one another.... what a sick sadistic B-tard James was.....
Author's Response:
I need to find another antigonist in my stories, but yes he is wouldn't have him any other way.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:20 AM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
well, um... that was very hot!
Author's Response:
Potentially gets hotter as you go...keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 2:08 AM Title: Natural High
well thought out...
Author's Response:
Thank you...I have days that no thoughts come, but other where they are running off the page.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:54 AM Title: I Touch Myself
**yes, Lordy mercy, Fanning self**
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[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:36 AM Title: In The Air Tonight
very interesting backgrounds they both seem to have... Yes, this is very good
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Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:35 AM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
Gah, that was amazing! I think it may have broken the fan on my laptop that keeps it cool! Anyway, inquiring dirty minds want to know...do you have an exact length of Sir/Master Edward? ;)
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Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:35 AM Title: Sticks and Stones Maybe Break My Bones....
That was fuck hot ;)
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Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:16 AM Title: Natural High
a lot of work for but as long as she feels safe that is what counts.
Author's Response:
She'll get there I promise
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 1:15 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
oh, how we love to Hate on the Viral, Disgusting, Pig that gives all good Doms a bad name... and that is the ever so disturbing so called Master James.... poor Bell,a she has definjtely been through the wringer with him....
Author's Response:
Yes, she has and he will be coming back soon!!
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:57 AM Title: Natural High
THAT was amazing :) I loved it! I love her piercings too...wonder if they will come into play during her time with Master Edward? Her tattoo makes me want to cry (especially the scarification, that had to hurt something awful).
Author's Response:
Yes, I now reget that I put such a big tattoo on her hard when thinking of outfits. **sigh** The piercing to come into play later. I bet it did hurt...and with her and blood bad mix.
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:56 AM Title: You Sexy Thing
I love how they seem to be anxious to get to know one another.....I loved the interaction regarding there looks... I was really chuckling when she said something about not wanting a Ugly Dom.... good job.... on to more of the story....
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you huge ego boost here.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:44 AM Title: I Touch Myself
GAH! That was amazing! I love dirty-talking, dominant, and older Edward :D Question, would you mind if I PM'd you on FF.net? I have an account over there and would like to ask you something, privately.
Author's Response:
Sure don't mind...
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:40 AM Title: In The Air Tonight
This was amazing! I loved it! Two small things...here, "Her hormone's get so wired up that it causes this." It should be "hormones". and "Premenstrual Dysphonic Disorder" should be "Premenstural Dysphoric Disorder." Sorry, but the use of an apostrophe as "plural" really annoys me. For instance, you wouldn't say "I have two cat's", you would say, "I have two cats."
Author's Response:
Once again your fine...I need a fine tuner.
Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:33 AM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
That was amazing! Really loved it! I hate to always mention mistakes, but as a beta, and someone who doesn't like mistakes in stories, I feel I must. Here, "I have on a tight black t-shirt, and low hung jean", should be "jeans". You have it correct when talking about Bella, but not Edward. I don't meant to sound mean or rude, I hope it doesn't come off this way. GREAT story! have on a tight black t-shirt, and low hung jean
Author's Response:
You are fine...I am aware that there are mistakes...I have a beta reader she must have missed it. I will fix anything that is wrong let me know. I will be glad to fix, I am only as good as the people who help me. :)
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:28 AM Title: I Touch Myself
The computer age so gooooooood lol
Author's Response:
The things people can do with a web cam these days....
Thanks for the review.
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:27 AM Title: You Sexy Thing
This was great! Medical scenes sound interesting.
Author's Response:
When you hit the chapter that says..."Paging Dr. Love" or "Doctor, Doctor" will be the time. Spoiler Alert here!! I haven't written them yet, but this will be there names.
Thanks for the review
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:26 AM Title: Don't You Want Me?
That was great! Only real complaint? Dominate is not the right word for the person in charge (it is a word describing what they are doing), the correct word is Dominant. Other than that, amazing job :)
Author's Response:
I haven't edited in a while....noticed that when I was looking over some research stuff. Thanks though and will fix.
Thanks for the review
Date: 05 Nov 2012 12:25 AM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
This is amazing! I cannot wait to continue this. I also hope we get to see them working on their soft limits ;)
Author's Response:
In time they start working on a lot of things LOL keep reading...
Thanks for the review
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:56 PM Title: In The Air Tonight
I think she is thinking he is just want she is looking for.
Author's Response:
She needs someone to guide her, help her, and love her...this is what he will do. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:43 PM Title: Don't You Want Me?
well, it does seem that Master Edward will have much to work on to get his submissive to believe in herself... she is such an intelligent girl it seems, however past experiences have brought her to a whole other level of insecurity... this is really a intriguing story....ty for writing and sharing this with all of us to read..... My hopes are in all sincerity, that people are constructive and considerate in there reviews to you..... I definitely appreciate Authors..... :-)
Author's Response:
I appreciate you guys for the reviews and making me feel good about myself. I have waited two long years to get the courage to write something. My sister said I blew her socks off LOL. So, here I am my grammar is a little to be desired, but once again my sister is stepping in to take care of that soon. I had some rough ones on fan fiction, but still over all good. The rough ones are a little hard to take. I have to remember....this is fiction not reality.
Thanks so much for the review and keep reading this one is not over by a long shot....still working.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:30 PM Title: If You Don't Know Me By Now
James needs to be hung up by his balls.
Author's Response:
It's coming...Jasper and Edward might hand him by them and let him swing!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:28 PM Title: Do You Wanna Play?
great start, truthfully this looks really good....
Author's Response:
Thanks appreciate the review.
Date: 04 Nov 2012 11:00 PM Title: You Sexy Thing
i think that went well lol
Author's Response:
I think so too...LOL Thanks for the review.