[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Prom night nice :)
Author's Response: I know a little cliche' but I thinks it's totally E/B. thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great intriguing start :)
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Date: 01 Aug 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
:(
Author's Response: Is this a reflection of the events or the story? Thank you got reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Jun 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it update soon please xx
Author's Response: Will have some this week. Thank you reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Jun 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
OMG! LOVE YOUR STORY.CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
Author's Response: Awwww thanks. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Jun 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
well that just talked me into reading on ....wonderful start
Author's Response: Awe. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Enjoying your fic so far. Can't wait for that fucking bitch Renee to get hers though.
Author's Response: Coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad V is being so nice along with Peter and all. Wonder if they'll listen to her.
Author's Response: I wanted to write good Vic. She usually gets a bad rap. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Charlie needs a huge wake up call and soon. How many different people need to tell him Renee is a sleeze before he believes it.
Author's Response: He will get that rude awakening soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Grrr hope Charlie finds out about his sleezy wife soon.
Author's Response: Poor Charlie. What can I say. He is in for a rude awakening. Thank you got reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor E. Glad Irina is there to help though . F'ing Renee.
Author's Response: Yeah poor E. He is soo in the dark. Irina just showed up at the wrong time. But thankfully she is there to help. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
awww poor B. Renee I hope dies soon and painfully. Biatch. Hope V is on the up and up
Author's Response: V is on the up and up. Renee will get hers. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great updates!!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Gah, you leave it there! Who taught you about these cliffhangers???
Author's Response: I learned from the best. :) thank you for reviewing
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad Edward can see through Renee's lies, but I worry about all of them.
Author's Response: He is awfully smart. The only one who needs to worry is Renee. Everyone else should be ok.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
My heart breaks for Charlie. Renee is such a bitch, and he's so caring.
Author's Response: Charlie will get compensated for his goodness. Renee will pay dearly.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Gah, Poor Edward!
Author's Response: Poor baby. He just needs a minute.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Gah, Renee is such a bitch.
Author's Response: Yes she is. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thanks!
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Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Jun 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
This is awesome more please ASAP
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Charlie really needs a wake up call. F'ing Renee. Now where is Paul that no one can find him??? I gotta go back and re-read to see if I missed it.
Author's Response: We find out about Paul in the next chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor sad B
Author's Response: Yeah she is a little sad now but I promise she will get her revenge. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks! I love this story ;)
Author's Response: AWWWW Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
My word. I just caught up on several chapters. Poor Bella!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Bella will get her HEA just stay with me!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great update.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
um, you need to update soon...
Author's Response: your reviews make me so happy. I love your work and the fact that you are enjoying my story inspires me to keep going!!!! Thank you so much.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oy, Victoria makes me nervous.
Author's Response: Don't worry this is a good Victoria!! I usually don't care for her in stories but I promise she is good!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
Gah, you're killing me with this!
Author's Response: I know I know. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, that's about all I can say...
Author's Response: Just saw this review. So sorry I missed it. This means a lot coming from you. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Very iintense chapter!
Author's Response: Can't believe I missed your review. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Update soon please x
Author's Response: I have two chapters ready to go and will update tomorrow. I haven't had internet access other than my phone. Sorry it has taken this long. I promise the next updates wont take so long. Thanks for reading.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks! This is an awesome story, I can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Thanks I am really enjoying posting. I am glad you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hate Renee!
Author's Response: She is evil. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bella :(
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Yes poor Bella. Hopefully she will catch a break soon.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to see what happens when Mama Es gets a hold of Renee. Also, it would be hilarious to see Renee find herself that rich man in California that she's always wanted, only maybe he could be an abusive prick and she could get a taste of her own medicine. Living in a similar hell to what Bella's gone through all of her life might scratch the surface of revenge. So many possibilities. I'm loving this story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad you are loving this story. I like the idea of Renee suffering from the same wrongs she forced on Bella. Thanks for the suggestion. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
The fact that Edward has been calling and Renee lying about it should be a huge ass red flag to Charlie. Kinda oblivious to a cop.
Poor E. He's freaking Im sure.
Author's Response: You know they say love is blind, but I think Charlie is about to see the light. Well he will see it eventually. You know how stubborn he can be. Ha ha
Author's Response: You know they say love is blind, but I think Charlie is about to see the light. Well he will see it eventually. You know how stubborn he can be. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I want Renee dead so bad!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. She needs to suffer before she dies don't ya think.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Bella. Renee needs to die....skanky biatch
Author's Response: Agree Renee is evil. Bella once again is a victim of her cruelty. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07 Apr 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks! I can't wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
Renee felt trapped there. I can get that.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
SO intense!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, what a sad chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Renee is a c*nt!
Author's Response: Agree. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Apr 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Death to f*cking Renee!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Death would be too easy. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Evil f'ing Biatch. Wonder what made her pick Isabella though? That was nice of Charlie to pick Esme's middle name.
Author's Response: Agree and we will see why Isabella soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
grr Ya killin me. Hating Renee so much. Poor B and E.
Author's Response: just wait it gets better ha ha
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great insight into Charlie's mind. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh, wow, Renee....
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well it certainly seems as if Renee did just that. Hopefully she'll get her 'comeuppance'!!
Author's Response: Yes she will. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
She's an evil bitch.
Author's Response: Yes she is. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 31 Mar 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can Renee get hit by a truck, please? Actually, that's too good. We need something drawn out and painful.
Author's Response: I agree. Let's just say she gets her's in the end.
Date: 31 Mar 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm a little insight to charlie. Lemme guess Bella found out she was prego, renee threatened abortion, and Bella ran? WOuldnt surprised me. Cant wait for more.
Author's Response: We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 31 Mar 2013 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
can renee get run over by a truck please. Biatch.
Author's Response: Truck would be too easy. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hope they get their hea tho
Author's Response: They will!! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Renee says no but what about Charlie he should stand up for Bella.
Author's Response: Stay with me. We will get there.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Noooo, poor ExB.
Author's Response: Missed it agaiThank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
Beautiful chapter, moving to the next one to find out what news they received.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is so sad
Author's Response: So sorry I missed your review. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
So many secrets. Great job so far, sweetie!
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Edward and Bella :(
Author's Response: I am a horrible author. I missed more reviews than I've read it seems. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
So hard...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh
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Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great build up
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I want him to do that to me...
Author's Response: Thank you reading and reviewing. I do toooo!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lovely
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love the tension in the words. Great job
Author's Response: Your words are such an inspiration. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Your words are such an inspiration. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great job
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Didn't realize I didn't respond to these review. Sorry!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 25 Mar 2013 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
well.. here we are or where are we?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Teenage angst. What is going to keep them apart?
Author's Response: One word Renee. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow Guess Charlie is oblivious to how Renee is then?
Author's Response: Head in the ground oblivious. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Rènee.
You know from the Twilight books I always thought Rènee was not a decent parent. Yeah the "love" is there. But having a child take care of house at the age of 10.
But looking forward to more update. Especially the missing time before they met again!
Author's Response: Thank you. Renee is a piece work.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9
yea wonder what Renee's motives really are.
Author's Response: What ever they are they are not good. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Why is Renee refusing for Bella to stay when she was so happy for Edward to propose?
Author's Response: Answers are coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Bad parents for hiding it. Stupid Renee.
Author's Response: They had reasons and yes Renee is stupid. Thanks for all you help last night. Hubby thought i was dying.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh boy.....this doesnt look good.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
Woo Hoo!!! Go Kids!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Best laid plans.....
Author's Response: Yeah sometimes they bite you in the ass. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Go E
Author's Response: He's the man. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
they are too cute together
Author's Response: Like two pieces of a puzzle. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Prom.....that brings back memories.
Author's Response: Ikr. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I didn't realize that I didn't respond to these reviews
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
oooh so he didnt know she got prego huh?
Author's Response: We shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this, I've been following on FB. I've received alerts fir Chpt. 9 but TWCS keep showing the message that it didn't recognise/verify the story.
Author's Response: Its back. Thank you for reading and being patient.