Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
Charlie's helping???
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 21
So Charlie is in on it too who else is involved
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Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
How did I miss that one omg that sucks but good chapter
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[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
Pointy edges and all! Safety first! Haha!
Time to spoon feed the captive.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
I just expand my screen and everything is very readable.
Is Jessica her roommate? Silly girl, thinking they were brewing love potions. Haha
Is Edward so self absorbed that he enjoys listening to himself talk? Or actually frightened?
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
yes well is all I have to say to that health and safety stuff some of it is bloody brilliant some is utter tosh
Hugs xxx
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
The font is fine I am preoccupied by the hottie in fuzzy hand cuff to the bed to notice it.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
Crazy people everywhere!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
LOl and we all know the rude version of that or even several in my case
Hugs xxx
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awww she is falling for him again. He is sweet but still a dick my dick I love that. And yay !!! On the updating.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Why does he keep mentioning his family as if they were a possibility in this mess he finds himself embroiled?
Will the quiet intimacy bring him back to a time in his life before the Hollywood style took over?
Yeah! More to read! Can't wait!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yay! You're awesome! :o) I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ohhhhhhhhh, he's getting afraid!!! Poor Edward
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this story
Hugs xx
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 16
HAHAHA, Bella'll get out of this situation hating Edward, kkkk
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
more please
Hugs xx
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hehe so lovin it.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Seeing your updates is the highlight of my day! I can't wait until Edward finds out who has him.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
will you be doing any epov?
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hehe draw the line at golden showers and he is naughty about the shower. Loving it.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes more! Do u even have to ask? Lol
Date: 30 Apr 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Apparently Edward likes tough love... kkkkk
Date: 30 Apr 2013 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
More please!!!! I love these too they are cracking me up. She knows she wants him!!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hilarious!!!!! Loved it :)
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love his musing of who could could have kidnapped him.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
He knows she is female so will "little Eddie" want to play once she unleashes him???
Laughing myself silly over this!
Date: 30 Apr 2013 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
hahahaha, poor Edward's disgusting, maybe a shower would be a good idea!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
He sounds like he's getting a little nervous.
Why the reference to his mother? Has she previously threatened to remove him from this path of destruction he is currently on?
How long before he begins to bargain with his captor?
Maybe since he hasn't showered in two days she should just strip him naked, throw him under a cold shower and make him pre in there. That will keep her hands clean. Haha
Date: 30 Apr 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
she need to get a wash cloth and wash his junk up lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
your such a tease :-( i need more these two r such a crack up
Date: 30 Apr 2013 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh dear gross peen and a smart ass at that Bella is taking one for the team it seems LOL
Hugs xxx
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
He is lucky she only kicked him in the shin lol.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Dont mess with her lol
Date: 30 Apr 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
hahaha, Edward's a jerk, hahaha, but I think that Bella'll teach him a lesson or two!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Will he recognize a signature scent or her sighs, maybe she has a peculiar sneeze that will give her away.
She is definitely a woman scorned!
To kick him in the shin, wouldn't she need to be facing him?
Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
I don't think so it has been year and all the fake skanks in Hollywood have kept him busy.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hehe I love it.
Date: 30 Apr 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
How am I addicted already?!?! This is funny, and I'm very curious to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing!
~allidel :)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Lol... I don't think he's that smart. Sounds like he's had some LA brain washing done with the Paps and all that fake silicone and liposuction. Go Bella... Kick him in his shins and make him remember his promises!!!! Haha... More more more ;)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
I don't think he has a clue.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
Pleeease update again!!!!! And are you going to continue posting tiny chapters? Or are you going to eventually post longer chapters? Just wondering
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good for her but I would have death griped his cock and hurt his pride lol
Hugs xxx
Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait to see what Edward'll thing about his kidnapper!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yes, may I have some more please!
Will he know her touch?
Date: 29 Apr 2013 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
lol she is prepared gotta love a girl guide
Hugs xxxx
Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wedding day so she's getting married huh.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Is she having delusions or was that his promise from the past? They were fourteen. How can you hold someone to a statement from their teeny bopper years?
Is Esme thinking the same thing?
Date: 29 Apr 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bella, is maybe a little delusional!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
lol already planing the wedding
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
lol so much sarcasm I can't wait for more
Hugs xxx
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
Did Bella actually see her Target before he was kidnapped?
Stumped as to Bella's line of work.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
He sounds like a real piece if work!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Is Bella a bounty hunter or bail bonds man (person)? Why would she take on a job like this?
What could Edward have ever promised Bella?
Date: 29 Apr 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love it update soon
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella needs to stop forgetting him, kkkkk, he'll just be angrier!!!! kkkk
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
lol she better take care of him lol
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Let the boy pee. And then worry what your next move is.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nice description there Edward.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ohhh makes sense now her dad helped her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Guess I can't believe I'm reviewing another drsbnle. Swore zI wouldn't.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am loving this story more please is all I can say
Hugs xxx
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh boy it's about to get good more please
Hugs xxx
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow this is getting good
Hugs xxx
Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
he sounds like a peach lol
Date: 28 Apr 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
She is worried about him
Date: 28 Apr 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Mamma is in on it to lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
D = Charlie, Dad
Just knew that she couldn't pull something this huge off without some insider help.
Why is the rest of the family being kept in the dark?
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ok, so the disappearance begs the question......how did she get a good sized guy out of a very public location without being spotted?
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wild kingdoms sexual deviants.....more in common with humanity than one wished to acknowledge. Yikes!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
IKEA, the store that causes couple to argue so intensely they call it quits! Doesn't matter what language they speak.
The media blitz over Edward's disappearance is so humorously over the top.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the Betty White honorable mention! She is one very funny lady!
Rosalie seems to be our favorite traditional bitchy self. Perfect.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read the sexy movie star's POV. Lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like a fun ride!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I don't know who it could be but I can't wait to find out.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes, yes I want!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
And the plot thickens and mama bear is involved oh boy can't wait for more
hugs xxxx
Date: 27 Apr 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
OMG, crazy people everywhere!!! kkkk
Date: 27 Apr 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
does she have him???
Date: 27 Apr 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
He is a light weight haha. I love all the rumors flying already.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
Al right, good for me, I'm in for the ride.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh the plot thickens
hugs xx