Date: 05 Aug 2016 9:08 PM Title: Epilogue
Your stories are so good. I enjoy each and every one of them. Thank you.
Henrietta
Date: 03 Jun 2016 11:31 AM Title: Epilogue
I love this story.
Date: 19 Apr 2015 6:50 PM Title: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper
Love this story! Keep on writing!
Date: 26 Mar 2015 6:05 AM Title: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper
Dead at the walkman and plowed disclaimer at the end. lol
Date: 05 Mar 2015 5:16 PM Title: End of the Day
Lol!!! Loved this "I gulped, all happy suddenly, like I wanted to shout and let everyone in the 'hood know that my girl loves me."
Date: 12 Nov 2014 8:44 PM Title: Epilogue
i loved this awesome story!!! ;) thanks so much for completing and posting it here it's the 1st time i've read it ;) when i 1st saw the banner i wasn't sure if this story would go forward to 9/11 but i'm glad it didn't and that everyone should be ok then and not be in the building well except maybe emmett ;D
Date: 18 Sep 2014 7:31 PM Title: Epilogue
Awwwww, this was such a great story. Thank you for your words.
Date: 27 Apr 2014 5:57 PM Title: Epilogue
Thanks for this lovely story. It was nice to go back to 1994. I had a blast being reminded of walkmen, pagers and modems.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:40 PM Title: Epilogue
Beautiful. Excellent dialogue throughout. Thank you,
Susan
Date: 12 Nov 2013 4:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story. I do love the ending, the little glimpse of what happens next. Their perfectly happy, ordinary life (no more drug dealing). Though I am still a bit upset about Bella's hospital visit, you set that up perfectly by the way, but she was over everything really fast. She just got out of the hospital and Edward gives her a ring and a house and suddenly everything is fine. Seems a bit weird to me. Then again, Edward and Bella do love each other to the point of studipity, so it kind of makes sense. Anyway, really good writing, as always (every story of yours that I have read, I simply love) and I did really like the characters. Especially Bella and Edward. But also Emmett, as a complete asshole playboy, and Rose as a bitch whithout a good heart. Basically she was just evil. Truly great writing, and thank you for sharing this!
Date: 14 Oct 2013 4:42 PM Title: Epilogue
So sad to see this come to their happy ending.
Date: 25 Jun 2013 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue
Awesome! As usual, another epic story from you!!! I'm glad Edward never got caught. That was my fear in Riders as well as here! I read this in one sitting! Sooooo good! Thx!
:)
Date: 18 Jun 2013 8:04 PM Title: Epilogue
This was an amazing little story, I loved every chapter to pieces;-)
I started as it was already too late in, so I decided to review as it's completed...
but I really hope you got a lot of happy reviews, because it deserves so many
Date: 17 Jun 2013 5:51 AM Title: Dial Up
Damn... You're takin it back with some of these words and fashioned etc. ahhhh, the memories. Quit bitin!!!! Lol... Good times, good times!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2013 3:03 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved how you ended it... Thank you
Date: 15 Jun 2013 9:35 PM Title: Epilogue
Ya just had to bring me to tears again, haha. Loved your closing on this story, so sweet, and him snoring right thru it, made me laugh too.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:30 PM Title: Epilogue
Ssee that was such a sweet epi!
Date: 15 Jun 2013 5:18 PM Title: Epilogue
I think that was the perfect epi! It fit the story perfectly. What they fell into was epic and amazing. But what it all lead to was a happy life together. Great ending.
Date: 15 Jun 2013 4:52 PM Title: Epilogue
ordinary people, ordinary lives. just like most of us. thanks once more, Lexi, for giving us your self through the writing. i, for one, fucking love it.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 3:07 AM Title: Day Six
lmfao had me weak!!!! love this story right now!
"Bella…are you at least being safe?" she asked.
"Yeah, I swallow—"
Date: 01 Jun 2013 6:06 PM Title: The Journey
I so enjoyed this little slice of Brooklyn from back in the day. I feel like I just read a little bit of history. It's funny, that I lived during this time but didn't know about this culture because I was older and up past my eyeballs in school having kids and working. It reminds me of people who were around during 60's or 70's but not really aware of the hippie culture or events during that period because they weren't a part of it.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 01 Jun 2013 5:29 PM Title: Honest Mistake
Damn his stubborn ass, arghh
Date: 31 May 2013 2:44 AM Title: The Journey
Awww! No more junk punches from me. Though a slap to Renne might happen. Loved it.
Date: 31 May 2013 2:36 AM Title: Charcoal
Now I wanna junk punch them both!!!! Logically I cant junk punch Bella, but I can coochie punch her! Damn this one was intense! Made me to through another box of tissues!!!!
Date: 31 May 2013 2:28 AM Title: Steps Ahead
Ok, truth? I wanna junk punch Edward right now. F-ing hell man!!!!
Date: 31 May 2013 1:57 AM Title: The Journey
well, well, well.....I can't say this is my favorite of your stories, but I did enjoy reading it. You write some very interestingly flawed characters, and in it's own way, that is a rare talent. This Edward scared me a bit and this Bella is scary in her own way. The match perfectly, then, don't they. Thanks for the ride.
Date: 31 May 2013 1:48 AM Title: Charcoal
these 2 are a mess.....they fit so well together....I hope he's done and I hope she knows he loves her...
Date: 31 May 2013 1:43 AM Title: Steps Ahead
he's living a pipe dream....once he's used to that kind of money, it will be difficult to stop dealing....maybe not....i hope not. what happened to bella??
Date: 31 May 2013 1:37 AM Title: Honest Mistake
oh no. i don't like the sound of this....i hope he doesn't get himself in too deep. i don't like the way he's treating her. just my opinion.....she's a bit immature and dramatic, but she has a point....j/s.
Date: 31 May 2013 12:46 AM Title: Steps Ahead
hope she didn't od
Date: 30 May 2013 11:24 PM Title: The Journey
Totally loved it!!!
Date: 30 May 2013 8:37 PM Title: Honest Mistake
What? That was way to short! More more please. What is he up to?
Date: 30 May 2013 2:45 AM Title: Numb
Lexi now you are scaring me! Is this a HEA????
Date: 29 May 2013 12:19 AM Title: Numb
Oh, Bella....you are as stubborn as he is! what will become of these 2 in just 5 more chapters....??
Date: 28 May 2013 11:14 PM Title: Numb
I just cannot say anything....He needs to grow up. I don't care who you are, how do you think she feels knowing that that kid got killed because he flirted with her. I trust you tough. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 28 May 2013 9:13 PM Title: Numb
Wow that was so much more than I expected. I don't blaim Bella for leaving. I would too. I can't wait for more.
Date: 28 May 2013 7:08 PM Title: Numb
Edward is going to freak out when Bella doesn't show up at his dad's house and she won't be able to answer the phone at her mothers because she's knocked out from the valium. What are we going to do with these two crazy kids both thinking they know what's best for the other good intentions or not. Thank you for the update, sad that its almost over.
Date: 28 May 2013 6:04 PM Title: Numb
WHAT?!?!?!? My heart is racing over here!!!!
Date: 28 May 2013 5:30 PM Title: Numb
If there are only a few chapters left things are going to have to resolve quickly! Hopefully they do!
Date: 28 May 2013 3:21 PM Title: Too Much
I feel sad for Bella that she puts up with almost being choked, the lets him fuck her. It's even sadder that I understand why.....Such a passionate man, Edward is. Passionate and volatile! This is like a train wreck that I can't help watching. I'm like Bella, reading a story with emotions that feel so familiar.....the attraction to that bad boy.....the thrill of his touch....makes everything else blurry......I really love reading this, but maybe you wouldn't know by what I just said. Like I said, the emotions here seem very familiar to me....
Date: 28 May 2013 4:36 AM Title: Too Much
Very gritty. Loved it!
Date: 28 May 2013 3:45 AM Title: Too Much
Yikes! That was scary. Edward freaked me out a but, not gonna lie. Insane!!!! I can't wait to see where this goes.
Date: 28 May 2013 3:31 AM Title: Wait
Damn! That was insane. I was on edge the whole way through. Will this start beef with Irina now?
Date: 28 May 2013 3:05 AM Title: Too Much
yikes - he went a bit nutso
Date: 28 May 2013 2:58 AM Title: Wait
If she gets her shit together enough to stitch him up it will surprise me
Date: 28 May 2013 2:49 AM Title: Too Much
She's right in a lot of ways. He's doing this stuff for and because of her, but he was messing with the drugs anyway. Why he doesn't learn is a good question and her leaving may be the only way to get thru to him.. He would probably interpret it wrong though.
Great chapter and updates;-)
Date: 28 May 2013 1:47 AM Title: Too Much
Anxious. I feel anxious. As always with your B&E, Edward is a hard-headed dumbass!! Great story by the way.
Date: 28 May 2013 12:53 AM Title: Too Much
I hope she doesn't plan on leaving him! But something needs to happen so he doesn't get mixed up further. More please!
Date: 27 May 2013 10:11 PM Title: Wait
I live in L.A., where there are Bloods and Crips too, but have never experienced them up close. Someday Edward's possessiveness and hair trigger temper will get him killed....j/s
Date: 27 May 2013 5:14 PM Title: Red
so Edward rolls with the boys in blue, huh? is Nes gonna get clipped? all because of a stupid part time job that Bella was coming home alone from.....you did call him Thugward, didn't you...
Date: 27 May 2013 4:04 PM Title: Red
Uh oh!! A nail Biter and I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 27 May 2013 10:13 AM Title: Red
Aghh...
ok, I have faith. But dressed head to toe in red, get a clue girlfriend, poor B, so naive.
Date: 26 May 2013 5:45 AM Title: Future
The Friday reference was hysterical! RIP Yvette Wilson! While a sequel would be greatly appreciated, I really love trip down memory lane! Psst... Could please put Edward in some Karl Kani, FuBu, or CrossColors pleasssee?!
Date: 26 May 2013 4:13 AM Title: Future
Aww, so sweet!
Date: 26 May 2013 3:40 AM Title: Future
TOO BAD!!!!! BECAUSE YOU !!! ARE THE BEST AT SEQUELS
Date: 26 May 2013 2:45 AM Title: Future
Wow, the impulse to get the tatoo, ok, I'm glad he didn't give in to that impulse at the bar & propose.
I think Edward has sound advice and see's things clearly about everyone but himself. I get what his Dad says about feeling responsible for Edward's wayward ways, I feel like he is too, but I also believe he did the best he could at the time. That he shared that he was nearly suicidal after his wife's death, explains some of what happened to Edward. The thing is kids make poor choices all the time and you can't blame the parent, nor do I. You can't give someone credit for only good results.
It's nice that Edward and his Dad were truly sharing and bonding. It's would kill Carlisle when he finds out E is still dealing.
This is a ingesting read with this slice of life and 90's era.
Date: 26 May 2013 12:59 AM Title: Cake
Love these kid
and this story;-)
And all the updates:-D
Date: 26 May 2013 12:28 AM Title: The Past
I'm glad he's not taking his Dad to Tunnel.
I can't believe he broke up with Esme, for her own good. Where have I heard this theme before?
Date: 25 May 2013 11:32 PM Title: Misconception
Awe, they are so cute and young and ...
I hate the way Edward's thinking is going with the big time dealing.
Date: 25 May 2013 6:51 PM Title: Future
Bella's so cute. She missed her own birthday cake....LOL! I like Carlisle's advice to Emmett but doubt he'll take it. I like the story. It's nothing deep, just a look into some interesting characters....Your thugward has a good heart, and I like that!
Date: 25 May 2013 3:50 AM Title: Cake
Funny what getting a tattoo can do....happy birthday, Bella! Carlisle is cute, and a bit slick! He did good for Bella's birthday....but so did Edward. I love the slice-of-life style of this story, the sort of stream of consciousness writing style. I'm sure it's not as easy as you make it look...
Date: 25 May 2013 2:54 AM Title: Cake
Finally, Bella sensed trouble with Kate, so maybe she will heed Edward's warning in the future. I was worried Edward was going to a dark place again for a minute, but I think it was great that he wanted to go to his father. I loved that they finally opened up to one another, and Carlisle's revelations proved he knows his son well. However, Edward knows his father too, and I thought it was neat that Edward is onboard with Esme's desires. Sounds like he needs to find Esme and give her the encouragment to push his father. And then, this chapter was just perfect! Carlisle may guard his own heart, but he's even more protective of his son's. I'm curious what Carlisle put in Bella's card, and he admitted to Edward that he was wrong. They're so nervous with each other, it's sweet.
Date: 24 May 2013 11:11 PM Title: Cake
give her the ring, lol
Date: 24 May 2013 6:58 AM Title: Misconception
Aw. He got her hopes up. But I'm glad he didn't ask during sex.
Date: 23 May 2013 3:03 AM Title: Misconception
I loved this chapter! I love that they had an intense conversation with having sex! Loved it!!!!
Date: 23 May 2013 2:02 AM Title: Misconception
Loved it as always. They are so cute together.
Date: 23 May 2013 2:01 AM Title: Misconception
She's so young! She reacts like a very young woman does. She's all over the place, emotionally....she needs him to feel whole. I know those feelings. I get that. It's a place woman are taught is their right place to be....not necessarily with any spoken words, but maybe just expectations....It doesn't make the feelings any less real or strong. I hope she learns to have that within herself one day and gets to hang on to Edward. He's messed up in his own way. Those years in prison kind of stunted his emotional growth in a way, which makes them matched in their roller coaster emotions. I do love reading about all the fucking they do....
Date: 23 May 2013 12:08 AM Title: Misconception
Well, that was a roller coaster of a chapter! Funny...serious...angry...funny...serious...happy! The name of the chapter, really fits the ring! She's funny when she tipsy! Thanks for the update! Love it.
Date: 23 May 2013 12:03 AM Title: A New Day
Actually Good move Lexi. She was getting on my nerves. Lets see where this takes us though. LOL
Date: 21 May 2013 6:07 AM Title: Chill
poor e and his insecurities
Date: 21 May 2013 12:18 AM Title: X-Man
well, well....looks like our boy is headed toward full gangsterhood....or jail, or death. You said 40 chapters and a HEA. I believe you. Getting from here to there should be entertaining and interesting....I'm glad I'm along for the ride! Thugward, indeed!!
Date: 20 May 2013 10:37 PM Title: X-Man
Uh oh. I hope he knows what he's doing.
Date: 20 May 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chill
oo no i hope they can get threw this !
Date: 20 May 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chill
Wow a other great one! Edward better be careful or he's going to push her away
Date: 20 May 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chill
Oh shit, he's geekin'!
Date: 20 May 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chill
Oh man....his insecure little boy is showing! All that bravado and his insides are just mush....Poor boy....I don't like that he controls her with sex, but it's all part of that lack of love that he feels inside....He's right, though, that she is pretty naive about things that go on in the neighborhood.....I wonder if she will try to leave....
Date: 20 May 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chill
Edward is starting to get physco.
Date: 17 May 2013 2:12 PM Title: BBQ
Awe, sweet chapter.
Date: 17 May 2013 1:03 PM Title: Perfect
What was he going to say? It seems he doesn't hold anything back, so that was kinda unusual of him....
Bold move by Tanya to just walk in his room, when Edward has specifically never had her at his place and crapy of Emmett.
I wanna beat Edward for thinking he can have Demetri come by his Dad's and deal drugs there & imagine his Dad won't see & be heartbroken or worse. The money sounds great but he's got to much to risk now that he has Bella, IMO.
Thanks for the update! Great chapter.
Date: 17 May 2013 1:02 PM Title: BBQ
I agree with Carlise. Bella is too young. What is going to happen when she goes off to school. Loved it