Date: 17 May 2013 3:20 AM Title: Perfect
It's just so wrong that Em brings Tanya over. But I guess he is just trying to put a thorn between Edward and Bella. Love your story
Date: 17 May 2013 1:23 AM Title: BBQ
ok so maybe that's just how he is....and she loves him the way he is. The BBQ was a good time. I enjoyed it too...love that Carlisle cockblocked them....twice! I got married at 19. I wasn't too young....at least I didn't think so....
Date: 17 May 2013 12:56 AM Title: Perfect
I don't get Edward's temper. He says mean shit to Bella, then regrets it almost immediately. I might not be so quick to forgive anymore after a while, if he keeps this up.....j/s and I'm in a pissy mood....
Date: 17 May 2013 12:02 AM Title: BBQ
I think this was one of my favorite chapters.
Date: 16 May 2013 11:05 PM Title: Perfect
Damn! Bella can throw down. I'm glad Edward owned up to being a dick. Great update.
Date: 16 May 2013 10:06 PM Title: BBQ
So good! I have a smile on my face the whole time I am reading!
Date: 16 May 2013 7:40 PM Title: Perfect
I really hope Emmett heard their conversation.... might make him finally back off
Date: 16 May 2013 7:30 PM Title: Perfect
Please keep writing!!
Date: 16 May 2013 6:43 PM Title: Perfect
Lol they are so funny together! Love them!
Date: 14 May 2013 3:24 AM Title: Poom Pooms
Loved it.
Date: 14 May 2013 3:23 AM Title: Poom Pooms
Poom-pooms, funny, I'd never heard of that before. I'm glad Bella has enough of a clue about Edward, and how he would react, to keep a lid on Emmett and Phil's behavior. I'm scared to think what Edward would do.
There are a few things going that I'm not sure what their about, such as Irina hanging with her and Emmett's behavior. As for her Mom not listening and taking serious what she said about Phil, that's just sad. And yuck. Their behind dors action, definetly not yuck;-)
Date: 14 May 2013 1:31 AM Title: Down
Lordy, rough neighborhood indeed.
love the updates;-D)
Date: 14 May 2013 1:00 AM Title: Poom Pooms
Lexi......your stuff is just to fucking awesome to say anything else about it. I LOVE IT. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 14 May 2013 12:52 AM Title: Sunset
Ugh oh. That was close. I don't think Edward's going to be a fan of B's new friendship.
Date: 13 May 2013 7:45 PM Title: Poom Pooms
I keep forgetting how young Bella is. Great story.
Date: 13 May 2013 6:49 PM Title: Poom Pooms
I love how you write about, talk about, the stuff that real people do while having sex....like squirting, ass licking, stuff like that....I don't read that anywhere else. It makes this more real....more like life. Yeah, I'm crushing on this story, big time....
Date: 13 May 2013 6:46 PM Title: Down
Edward and his temper is going get him put back in jail.
Date: 13 May 2013 6:46 PM Title: Poom Pooms
Another great one. I love this Bella and Edward! They make me smile!
Date: 13 May 2013 4:15 PM Title: Down
I wonder if the look that passed between Edward and Irina meant anything? You'll tell us later if it did, or not, right? That was a brutal beat down that Edward and Emmett gave those 2 guys....just for admiring Bella? Not sure if I understand that guy thing, that need to be so territorial and possessive. I mean, it's flattering in a way, but that was so quick, so violent. Guess an LA girl like me doesn't get it....it must be a NY thing, huh?
Date: 13 May 2013 4:00 PM Title: Sunset
I wonder what Irina's deal is? Does she want to get with Edward? E and B? Maybe she wants Emmett or Jasper......but that doesn't make sense as she's already had Emmett.....Oh well, I enjoyed this chapter even though it was low key and no Edward. Renee, however, has some fucking nerve....not believing her own daughter the asking her to move back in! With the perv who peeped on her? I hate it when that happens....love the story, though...
Date: 13 May 2013 2:51 PM Title: Down
All I can say is wow!
Date: 13 May 2013 1:17 PM Title: Sunset
Another good one. Lets hope iri a is genuine. I so set if Edward put her up to it?
Date: 13 May 2013 1:16 PM Title: Sunset
Loved it. Hope irina isn't playing Bella.
Date: 13 May 2013 12:50 PM Title: Sunset
I hope Irina stays on the cool, I really like her in this chapter. Great update.
Date: 12 May 2013 2:24 PM Title: Conclusion
I love you story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 12 May 2013 1:34 AM Title: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper
Fun to re-live the 90s. :)
Date: 11 May 2013 9:58 PM Title: Conclusion
OMG! Please update...I'm totally hooked on this story!
Date: 11 May 2013 6:41 AM Title: Conclusion
Just found this one and it's already ending :( Loved it though!
Date: 11 May 2013 6:02 AM Title: Conclusion
with no updates, going to go through withdrawls :)
Date: 11 May 2013 5:36 AM Title: End of the Day
You tell 'em B!
Date: 11 May 2013 3:39 AM Title: Dial Up
These two...gotta love 'em! :)
Date: 11 May 2013 2:09 AM Title: Conclusion
Aww! I had faith they would work it out. Great updates!
Date: 11 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Conclusion
I am so glad they are good now! Love your writing.
Date: 11 May 2013 1:43 AM Title: Conclusion
The way you write these characters, it's like you know this world....you fully flesh them out, three dimemsionally. I like Edward. He's flawed as hell....but he's got a giant heart and he loves Bella. I'm drawn in by the genuineness of it all. I care. Great story.
Date: 11 May 2013 1:32 AM Title: Conclusion
I didn't think you would do that to our crazy young hard lovin luv birds. I love the chapter and all the self revelations they are all having, those years in a persons life are so filled with change and hopefully growth, if they for someone like Edward clocking 'em to knock some sense into them (and I'm not in favor of physical agression, except in fiction).
Thanks for writing and the Tribute and Higher updates, what a great Friday!;-)
Date: 11 May 2013 1:21 AM Title: Inevitable
I'm so glad he's making the effort to forgive her. She's young, had some major trauma happening lately, and made a mistake.....
Date: 11 May 2013 1:00 AM Title: Hustle
Yeah....he loves her. I think he just doesn't have any frame of reference for his feelings. C'mon Edward, man up and talk to her! Oh...and one deal a week to make 5 grand? sounds good to me....
Date: 11 May 2013 12:24 AM Title: Inevitable
Wow, Rose is evil. That, blabbing about Edward pushing drugs is going to come back to haunt him. I wonder what he'll do about her? I figured he would do as much to Jasper. He had it coming and hopefully that's the end of Jasper boosting cars.
Thanks for updating;-)
Date: 11 May 2013 12:07 AM Title: Hustle
I am so glad you updated today. Yes, that was quite a cliffy you left us with there yesterday.
So E. is really raking in some dough, and saving some for the lawyer he made need down the road, smart. ?.
Date: 10 May 2013 5:36 PM Title: A New Day
Damn! That was cruel, but I dig ya!!!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 May 2013 10:59 AM Title: Vitamin E
Wow..this is just great. bring back so many memories.....thanks for the awesome writing. Sher
Date: 10 May 2013 9:19 AM Title: A New Day
My heart is racing! That was sooo amazing!
Date: 10 May 2013 5:11 AM Title: A New Day
Yeah, Carlisle knows Edward well, but what the hell else is Edward to think. Her immaturity is very suspect & it makes it hard for him to tell if he truly knows her or not. Does she even know who she is? Yeah, this is a heart breaking chapter. And Edward is a lot wiser than he seems, and so if he is, why the hell is he still doing Demetri's dirty work?
Date: 10 May 2013 5:09 AM Title: End of the Day
amusing how whipped he is
Date: 10 May 2013 4:40 AM Title: A New Day
Ugh, yes you are! Yet, that's one of the reasons I like you, it's not always perfect. They made so much progress last chapter, and then like Edward's... my heart broke. Stupid, little girls! Jazz better run! Edward is going to go back to prison just by association with them. I know it doesn't matter what I say, but please don't let him seek out Tanya. Can't wait.
Date: 10 May 2013 4:35 AM Title: A New Day
Oh no! I hope he really doesn't make her leave. I can't wait for the next chapter! Care to spoil us some more and post it soon?
Date: 10 May 2013 4:10 AM Title: End of the Day
This was an absolutely adorable ghetto love chapter. It makes me chuckle but I think they are cute as heck.
I'm wanting, some how, for Rose to get her some just desserts though. She just keeps stirring shit up, evil girl, just let things go.
Date: 10 May 2013 3:53 AM Title: A New Day
Oh no their first fight, Edward is furious he can't really want her to leave. Please please please update soon.
Date: 10 May 2013 3:50 AM Title: A New Day
I do trust you.....no couple makes it all the way through without a few knock down drag outs.....they are no exception! Fly off the handle much, Edward? Bella's all hormonal, but he has no clue how women get, does he? Yeah, that was one hell of a cliffie!
Date: 10 May 2013 3:48 AM Title: End of the Day
I have to wonder how much Charlie gave Renee over the years, was he still paying something out? Mad, now that he finds Bella's not living there? Edward didn't get to tell him about Bella having to pay the bills, or being left without food.
Date: 10 May 2013 2:30 AM Title: End of the Day
Oh so good from start to finish. I've been waiting for an update for Higher all day, checking my email like a complete psycho when I woke up this morning, in the car on the way to work, at work throughout the day, in the car on the way home from work and then numerous times after I arrived home. Yeah I guess you can say I love this story. Thank you for the fantastic update:)
Date: 10 May 2013 2:08 AM Title: End of the Day
I wondered when Charlie would show up. Man rose is such a poser. Glad we don't see her much. At the beginning I knew she was up to no good when she kept trying to get rid of Bella and then pulling her around.
Date: 10 May 2013 2:08 AM Title: End of the Day
well that was another full chapter! first Charlie and his shit, then Tanya and hers. Bella really should be careful cuz those chicks will hurt her when Edward's not around, like he said! I love that he called her wifey....
Date: 10 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: End of the Day
That was beyond sweet, cute, and and throw back for me all at the same time. Great update!!!! You made me smile when I'm having a crap day.
Date: 09 May 2013 4:34 AM Title: Dinner with Dad
I love your characters Lexi, great job with the new story!
Date: 08 May 2013 2:45 PM Title: Dinner with Dad
Love these guys!! Carlisle is giving some wise advice, but somehow I don't think Edward will take it....he's doing what he wants to do. I see he adores Bella, but this GF thing is new to him....looks like Alice and Jasper are about to make up....good!
Date: 08 May 2013 2:43 PM Title: Dinner with Dad
I am loving Carlisle so far. Great as always!
Date: 08 May 2013 1:45 PM Title: Dinner with Dad
omfg Lexi!!! You really went there w/ the tampon & the teeth???
Jazz is a freak needing to see that tampon blossom in the ghettojuice! was it red too???
I'm LMAO! You nail this generation everytime! Brings back hella good memories for me!
xoxox
ba
Date: 08 May 2013 1:31 PM Title: Dinner with Dad
Love it! Carlisle cracks me up! He is stinkin cute.
Date: 08 May 2013 12:26 PM Title: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper
omg...had to add to faves a'ight?
Date: 08 May 2013 6:33 AM Title: Dinner with Dad
I'm serious, Ed…We all agreed. No babies in the crib…Well, besides Bella and Alice," he laughed, me too. Jasper's funny. Poor Edward, he is insecure but it's sort of appropriate. I feel like Bella is the first truly good thing that's happened to him. Can't wait to read more, this story is a gem.
Date: 08 May 2013 5:53 AM Title: In His Words
Have fun and Thanks so much for the updates!
loved reading Edward's POV. So Bella's moved in and jobless, anod E couldn't be happier. I hope he tells her how lucky & happy that makes him feel. I wish he'd give up the dealing, at least he has the decency to feel guilty about deceiving his Dad about what he's up to with Demetri.
Date: 08 May 2013 5:06 AM Title: In His Words
good. going to miss not getting an update tomorrow
Date: 08 May 2013 5:05 AM Title: Egg Rolls
Wow, that spiraled out of control really quick and in a really big way. That was exciting though.
Date: 08 May 2013 4:32 AM Title: Egg Rolls
wow - glad b got some hits in :)
Date: 08 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: In His Words
Another great chapter! I am ready for more!
Date: 08 May 2013 1:59 AM Title: In His Words
No worries about posting...you're giving us way more chapters in a week than i expected! I like this Edward a lot. He's sort of sweet, but definitely a manipulator behind the scenes. He cares for Bella, I think, but there's still something not quite on the up and up in that respect...I hope he doesn't hurt her. She's really a lost little girl under all that bravado...I like this story a lot. It isn't just a simple story, there's a lot going on underneath....
Date: 08 May 2013 12:56 AM Title: Egg Rolls
Wow. Where do you go there? I'm glad Bella clocked Rose, but I hope they are not playin on her vulnerability. I hope she gets to eat sometime soon too. Food that is. LOL
Date: 08 May 2013 12:05 AM Title: Egg Rolls
What the fuck is with all these people slagging off on Bella? First Emmett, then Rose? I don't for a minute think Edward ever hit on Rose. What a drag to think someone is your friend only to find out she always hated your guts...I'm for E and B. I'm on their side. He better not be playing Bella or I'll come through the page and kick him in the groin! Love the chapter! And wonder why Bella is dizzy....
Date: 07 May 2013 10:40 PM Title: Egg Rolls
can the update be sooner then monday, this story is awesome !
Date: 07 May 2013 9:19 PM Title: Egg Rolls
Love the store Lexi!
Date: 07 May 2013 6:21 PM Title: Egg Rolls
I love this chapter. I am really shocked at Rose. I can't believe it. I am glad Bella and Edward are still getting along though!
Date: 07 May 2013 6:17 PM Title: Egg Rolls
Damn! Nice show down and girl fight!
Date: 07 May 2013 6:15 AM Title: E Bomb
Talk therapy worth all the pills in China;-)
Great chapter, and yeah for E. to educate her about the perils of drug uses and just plain telling her, 'No more.'
love the multiple updates too
Date: 07 May 2013 5:49 AM Title: Six Feet Under
Aghh, poor Bella. She's heading in a bad direction with that sad attitudes e finding comfort in a very dangerous way.
Date: 07 May 2013 5:11 AM Title: E Bomb
good. wonder if what happened with rose is what raaly happened 100% or if there are some slight differences based on epov
Date: 07 May 2013 3:59 AM Title: E Bomb
That was intense and sweet. Creep Emmett is freakin me out though. Great update.
Date: 07 May 2013 3:06 AM Title: E Bomb
Simply perfect and beautiful sigh:) and I love that that Phill got two black eyes out of the deal. You Rock, thank you for the update.
Date: 07 May 2013 3:01 AM Title: Six Feet Under
Love this new story. Characters and dialogue are awesome, per usual. What gets me every time is how perfect you pacing is, especially for fanfic, but really for any fic. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 07 May 2013 2:54 AM Title: E Bomb
So glad they cleared some things up! Thank you for updating quickly! I was going crazy!
Date: 07 May 2013 2:39 AM Title: Bella Swan: Ice Cream Scooper
Date: 07 May 2013 1:47 AM Title: Six Feet Under
Ahhh not a cliff hanger! Please update again tonight! Please!
Date: 07 May 2013 12:59 AM Title: Ceiling Effect
Is Edward playing her? I guess we'll see....
Date: 07 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Vitamin E
He seems to be leading her into a life of crime....well at least for one day.... and she seems to be more than willing to participate.....they're getting thick already and it's very groovy....can't wait to read more....
Date: 06 May 2013 11:22 PM Title: Ceiling Effect
Wow! Wasn't expecting that! You blew my mind on that one. Great update.
Date: 06 May 2013 7:59 PM Title: Ceiling Effect
Wow for being Edwards cousin Emmett is a huge back bitter and cockblocker and Rose is a terrible friend I mean Damn who lies to there friend for money. I think Rose and Em are perfect for one another. Thanks for the update.
Date: 06 May 2013 7:52 PM Title: Ceiling Effect
Well... I didn't see that coming. I hope Edwards in the mafia. I really like mafia Edward. Please post more ASAP. I love your writing.
Date: 06 May 2013 7:32 PM Title: Ceiling Effect
And the plot thickens..... I am really curious about Edwards intentions! More please!