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Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 26

I really don't like this Bella!  She is such a bitch. I think she is playing Edward for a fool. I really hope this is a HEA. It would be ashame if this is all Edwards gets out of her

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 25

Crying. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

Aww weepy.  I can identify with some of those feelings, about her dad.

 

apart from that amazing as always, and this applyes  to the last 4chapters. Took me a little longer than usual to catch up.  

Thank you for wrighting. X



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Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 25

U truely are such an amazing writer!! I have looked forwared to each & every update & truely enjoy reading this mini series. I really hope that u plan on continuing this series to include a Part 4 please, please!! If u do please let me know beacause I will most definatly will favorie it as well!!! This story is truely very captivating & intriging!!



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Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 24

No, not Charlie!  Please, I love Charlie...crying here. please.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 21

Still loving it, even if I only catch up a couple of chapters at a time. Xx



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THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hope this means that B and Alice find this as a way to get closer again. Always love Alice.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

I really want to know why Bella is called their mother?  Did she really adopt the girls?  This is really weird.  Why didn't Edward and Bella adopt them instead of just Bella. It just seems wrong to me

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

U FORGOT TO UPDATE CH. 20 HERE BUT U UPDATE IT FF.NET ALREADY LIKE 5 DAYS AGO PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE 2 CH. 20 HERE AT TWCS!!!

I have love reading his series very much so!! I only hope that u will keep this a 4 four part series & not 3 part series pleaseeeeeeee!!! I will love this series no matter what u decide on but hope u go for contiuning to make this into a 4 part series would have me leapping 4 joy!!



Author's Response:

Sorry about that! You have no idea how hard it has been to update on this website since my computer refuses to allow Google Chrome. And unfortunatly that is the only way I can post on this website. So here is the next chapter and I will try and update tonight with Chapter 21 as well. Thank you for reading!!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with all of us!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh boy, what has she done now???? Or maybe I should ask what she is signing up for next???  Love this story you always keep me on my toes!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2013 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ok this is what you get for being away, and then having to play catch up. I seem to have missed a bit. ( Peter and Charlotte ) wondering now wether I'm gonna have to start from the beginning again now, or wait till the end and then read them all again.  Because for sure these set of stories are going in my re read file.  Wonderful as usual :) . Thank you

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

Glad she is taking a breather, was exhauted with her schedule and I was just reading about it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 16

Not sure what the fallout is going to be, but proud of Bella for sticking up for her friends.  Don't understand why people have to be so narrow minded.  As always, love this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh boy,can't wait to read the disaster!XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am really enjoying this. Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2013 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

Sorry, but as far as I am concerned this story could last forever. Just my opinion so take it with a grain of salt and all the love that I have for your writing. XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

As always loving it, :). Don't know why it's not showing on the updates page :c only know a new chap is out because of e mail alerts. Might be worth mailing an admin. As you deserve so many more reviews. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will check with the website. Thanks for the review I truly appreciate it!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2013 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 12

Still loving it :) TY

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

Grinning like a fool! Love this story.XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

Could u Please,Please UPDATE this story here U forgot to because this is only Updated to CH 11 INSTEAD OF 12  But UPADTED IT OVER AT FF.net But not at TWCS Please update this truely breataking beautifuuly well written story here please!!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long. Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

Sorry for not reviewing. Life is a little hectic at the mo, so I'm catching up with a couple at a time. But thank you for wrighting. This is all going on my repeat read list. Xx

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

OK, so can we all agree that Bella took on way too much.  With that said I will take on all of that and more if I can get an Edward massage...  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think she is going to want the big assed needle! Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

WOW! Is truely all I can say beause this story is truly so beautifully well written u truly are such an amzing talented writer!!! I truly am captivated by the words flowing on these pages with each & eveyone of ur updates!!! I can't believe this is the last part of this sereies. I would absolutely love for u to contiue on with this series please consider doing so!!! I most definately am giving this story a 10 star rating without any hesitation what so ever!! Will u start a new series like this one or any new stories following the completion lof this one???????? I truely hope u do please let me know of ur plans pleassssssse!!!



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you soo much for all your kind words. I havent made up my mind on continuing further. I have thought about this story for the past thirteen years and I am sure I could find more to write about but this story has burnt me out with trying to keep up with my posting schedule so I may take a break. Thank you again for reading!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Not sure how this girl even has enough time to even breathe let alone sleep, sing, love And plan a wedding. Me, I would never leave Edward's bed! XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Found your wrighting not long ago, and had to read it all through. Loving it completely and eagerly awaiting each new instalment. Ty



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THANK YOU!!! 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love your sense of humor in this story and Bella's 'snarkyness' (ok not a real word but for her it works).  Love the more confident Bella, but can't help but drool when Domedward makes his wishes known.  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wonderful ending to that chapter!!  XOXO, Cheri



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THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS READING AND REVIEWING!

Reviewer: Squishypurc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love love loved it! Yay they are finally back to long each other:-)

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THANK YOU! I AM HAPPY THAT YOU ARE ENJOYING IT!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

God I love this story. Little surprised she forgave Edward or G75 so fast, but I am worried about poor Jake G79. That boy is going to have to do a lot of groveling!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4

Holy Parcae Batman!!! Can't wait to hit 'next'!!!!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hell yeah Bella!!!  Its hard to believe that Edward is okay with jacob telling Bella that he's in love with her... Bella/Edward needs to keep Jacob away from her!

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Gah cliffhanger!!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh boy things are going to get interesting now!  Love this story! XOXO,Cheri

 

Reviewer: Reeder10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think you are doing a great job with this story. You really made me feel the hurt your characters were feeling.When she cried, i cried. This story has really captivated me and i hope you update soon. i don't usually review, but this story is different. keep up the good work.. 



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Reviewer: Squishypurc Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story, but was horrified when I got to the third part, and realized it wasn't completely up yet. I can't wait!

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope Rosalie punched Edward heh.

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

So good love where you are taking this story. So glad she acknowledged the abuse and is not going to just run back to him.

Reviewer: justginger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh my god - this chapter is amazing!

Reviewer: ellabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was really happy to see you posted Part Three! 

I hope Bella holds strong and makes Edward wait awhile to resolve his abusive behavior.   Bella certainly did give him something to think about.....(you sure did! I loved it.)

Looking forward to your next chapter....it can go so many ways.  I kind of  hope Bella has another good man come into her life and they take mutual interest in each other....so Bella can see other options in her life as she has only had one serious relationship. This could  make Edward see how to treat someone he loves...and not control them so when they get back together they can be on more equal footing.   

Hmmmmm....I wonder what you are up to.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

This chapter made me just as sad as Bella. It was wrong, very wrong I wish it hadn't happened.  That said I trust you to find some way out of this and will try and be patient.  Seems like that is all I am doing these days, trying to be patient and waiting for the world to right itself. Love this story!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: dalejrfan0276 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was awesome, I can't wait for Edward to fight for Bella.  Update soon.

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