Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:30 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
I wasn't going to read because I don't usually start stories I don't think will be finised, based on when it was published and last updated. However, after reading the first chapter my interest was piqued! Read all 14 in a few short hours and I must say I'm hooked! Please update soon...I'm truly enjoying thus story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love your story can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow I love it I just read all 14 chapters and damn they are made for each other and on fire what is nex5 for then
Date: 13 Nov 2014 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Marvelous! I truly love the characterizations in this story and you make your readers WANT to know them. With luck,we'll receive more luscious updates! Thank you so much. For all the trouble you take with them!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my......can't wait to see where this goes!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was beautiful!
Date: 10 Nov 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
This has been one of the best mafia stories since SLC's Quiet Storm. Please update often as I cannot get enough.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Wow! She is in such a bad situation!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 9:28 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
I LIKE IT!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh WOW!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Look forward to more :D
Date: 09 Nov 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm soooo glad she admitted what she wanted!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 13
So he kept her safely hidden until the could dispose of the father. I look forward to hearing the back story on that.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ok! I did not expect that at all!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
E&B Have a lot of talking to do.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another one bites the dust! And another one down and another one down. I have that tune in my head!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
You really are a genius! You bring comic relief with kill them with kindness remark. Too funny!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love that his mother had to get all over him!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
I was thinking she might be the leak. More torture here we come!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
I think the only reason Tanya didn't get her throat cut at dinner was bc his mother was there. He was vicious!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Holy cow he sounds BAD ASS!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:14 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
The lemon was fantastic! Very sad the way he treated her. I'm hoping he only did that bc jerks walked in.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 14
THAT WAS HOT! I THOUGHT YOU HAD LEFT US,THANK YOU FOR FOR COMING BACK! UPDATE SOON PLZ, LOVE YA
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, this was a great chapter Ray! Thank you so much. I love this story.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
This chapter gives me a welcome look at how they got together. Although I am still wondering how the previous chapter ended with her being so callous and cunning about the role Edward played in his fathers accident. Great job. This is a dark story I have enjoyed.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Oh I think Bella is going to live but she will probably have some services to be rendered.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
What a wonderful chapter. I loved that Edward was able to show her that he really cares for her. I LOVED THE PICTURES INSIDE THE CHAPTER. JUST WONDERFUL. THANK YOU.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
Bossy Edward behind bars is yummy!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 3:05 AM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
This picture is goes perfectly with what you ave written!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
i so love this story, i know you were having problems with it but you should be proud. I wish i had a 10th of your writing skills. never doubt your self. cant wait to read more.
Date: 09 Nov 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow that was some hot stuff their, I love this story
Date: 09 Nov 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved the chapter and the update!! :D Thank You!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love this story! Thank you so much for the chapter update!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Finally She gave in to Edward!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
I had to think back to the beginning premise of this story to remember the connection that was hastily made while he was in prison.
Bella has a lot to learn becoming a part of Edward's world.
Will she continue school?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
This Edward is simply amazing. I want one ;) I cannot wait to see what happens next for these two!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad they are coming to a yummy agreement
Date: 08 Nov 2014 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow is all I have to say
Date: 17 Aug 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hello! Hope all is well. Just wanted to know if you will be updating/ finishing Dance with the devil? Love it so far and looking to reading more!! Thanks
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a great story! I started reading it today. What's yous posting schedule?
Have a graet day!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 12
That should get Bella's attention!
I feel sad for Carlisle. He has chosen to be the one to maime their father. Will his mother understand? I think so.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Now his own father is targeting their family by giving false information to the Russian Mafia? Twisted family.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
Why would Edward Sr. push a syringe full of poison into Tanya's IV? Is he trying to get his son into more trouble?
What information was it that Tanya had that caused him to silence her?
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Don't you think Tanya's mother should have been a part of these mind games. After all, she's the one that begged Tanya for information to save her husband.
What does Edward have in store for his wife?
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 8
Momma Elizabeth is just what Edward's frazzeled head needs right now.
How devious........help Tanya incriminate herself along with her lover, Demetri. She can be present as he pays his debt to Edward.
Her father can be felt with in any other mob hit fashion.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Tanya, you have sealed your fate!
What did she hope to gain?
Was Demetri promising her something Edward couldn't provide? Her father and Demetri will be dead soon.
Will Bella figure out she is under Edward's protection?
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
Will Edward actually kill Tanya or just exile her to a place with no money and no connections?
Bella's in for a surprise!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 1:52 AM Title: Chapter Four: Freed.
Carlisle, how could you not find the rat?
What happened to Isabella?
Was her debt to the loan shark taken care of by the Cullen Crime Syndicate?
Sounds like the boss is going to up the level of pressure on the streets.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 1:44 AM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Once Edward had a taste of her perfection, thief or not, she was marked as his property. I hope Edward still has the power outside his cell walls to clean up the mess around Bella's neighborhood.
Why would Emmett bet against his unstable brother?
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2014 7:14 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Your Emmett is one cool cat. He brushed over all the details with just the right amount of flair, leaving Bella with only one thought. She was in way too deep!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
I really like the way the pictures break up the reading. It's a little added bonus to push the mind deeper into the storyline.
Edward is hooked by his lust.
Wonder how Miss Swan will handle being in his presence.
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:52 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Deep!
I'm very intrigued as to how this will all play out in the favor of our heroine!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
Please update dancing with the devil....
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2014 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Whoa... I had to reread this chapter a few times.. the last part threw me in a loop... womdering how Bella became what she was at the end there..... loved it... is it the end or is there more?? Hopefully there is... I am addicted to this story...
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Mama Elizabeth is going to gut Edward Senior.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
I wonder if Edward Senior was in on the ratting out of Edward II.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm confused. Where were Demetri and her father?
Date: 17 Feb 2014 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Geez. What happened to his sweet, little Italian momma? Sounds like Ma Barker now.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Sounds like Edward has some women troubles.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:01 AM Title: Chapter Five: Finders Keepers.
What's Bella been doing all this time?
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:55 PM Title: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice
Edward didn't mean that callous dismissal. Did he?
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter Two: The Untainted
Terrifying.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter One: Diavolo
That initiation ritual was a little disturbing.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 6:24 PM Title: Dancing with the Devil: Prologue
I don't usually do Mafia fics, but I'm gonna give yours a try.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh so he must of married her and that means shes not his goomah like carlisle said
Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ok I love your story but this last chapter has me a little confused. What happened with bella and edward??
Date: 07 Feb 2014 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I confused, what happened after Edward pulled the gun on Bella? Why did Carlisle tell the women that Edward no longer had a goomah?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Where has Bella been hiding and how did she figure out the plot to remove their father from his titled position?
Will Elizabeth learn the truth?
Cant wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loving this story! More please x
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
So I guess, she decided to not only stay but to be with Edward after all. Cool.
Date: 17 Jan 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! Great chapter!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good things are coming together. Bella is in the picture how will the other wemon take to her.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Omg love it so far. Cnt wait 4 more chapters. It's getting more interesting more
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Did Edward marry Bella? Is that why she is no longer his goomah?
Date: 15 Jan 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
hell of a 13 chapters hope there will be more
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
i swear to all thats holy i have read the most ruthless mobward from ruthless people and it sequels to there wil be blood and in none of those legendary was edward this ruthless i swear in this fiction he is the devil himself ''dancing with the devil'' never has been a more fitting title and a not easly impressed haNDS DOWN to you ray ryan
Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome! I can't wait for more ;)
Date: 15 Jan 2014 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
OH SNAP!!! This is wonderful!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was a great chapter I loved it I wonder how Elizabeth is going to react when she meets Bella.
Date: 15 Jan 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH SNAP!!! I really loved this!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
was there a time jump in this chapter?
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
I had to double ck to see if I missed something. When did Bella make her way over to the dark side?
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Woah!!!! We missed major part in the story, I take it his subtle ultimatum made bella think again, well I'm sure having a gun pointed to your head would do that to you please update soon very interested to see what happens
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm confused. Did I miss something? The last I read Edward had a gun to her head.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
This is really something! Love it!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
This was really intriguing. You had no idea if he killed Bella after the previous chapter.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good! Bit what happened when E pointed the gun at B?
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am glad I went to read the other reviews before I wrote one because I am glad to know that I am not the only one baffled by this chapter. Your time jump may make sense in the long run, but right now it sounds like babble. Waiting for more...
Date: 14 Jan 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
So, I guess Edward and Bella came to a meeting of the minds since the end of the last chapter?! I give her credit; the girl knows how to fit a puzzle together! Great work! I'm looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
Mr. Edward suffered an "accident", Edward will be the boss and need to be more cruel and hard.
I do not understand this chapter, in the previous chapter was Edward to take Bella's life, they said that the goomah was no longer in the image , and appears Bella looking happy and accepting the situation of Edward. What happened to Bella have accepted everything. I would like to see more of the relationship of Bella and Edward.
thank you.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm sounds like Bella is somewhat accepting her place now?
Date: 14 Jan 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
WTF ...
You had me in stitches with the Alice part , that was sooo funny ..
What the hell happend with him and Bella to turn her 180 degrees like that ..
I'm gonna review here instead of ffn since they're idiots who cause too much havoc , just know i'll follow you ;)
Author's Response:
There was a time jump. All will make sense in the next update
Date: 14 Jan 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to more
Date: 14 Jan 2014 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
well I am totally blow away in that one